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Break up Patch up(swasan ts)
SHOT 2(part 1)
Mumbai University
Swara entered inside after parking her car.She saw kavita, her friend and went to her.While going she saw sanskar standing with his friends.He also looked at her and came forward and hugged her and said
Sanskar: looking beautiful.
Swara(smiles): thank you.
Then his friends called him.
Sanskar (peck her lips): will meet in class.
Swara: ok bye.
Swara went to kavita.
Whole day passed.Some lectures swasan attended unwillingly while other skipped.
After college:
Swara is going to parking area when sanskar called her
Sanskar: Swara wait.
Swara turned and saw him coming so waited.
Sanskar: what u r doing tonight.
Swara: assignment which we have to submit tomorrow.
Sanskar: even I have to do let’s do together. I don’t know anything about it.
Swara: ok but where we will do.Dad will be at home.
Sanskar: okay u come to my house. Mom dad went to London so only few servants will be there.
Swara: done then. May I call kavita also?
Sanskar(instantly): why??
Swara: actually she also asked that if we can do together.
Sanskar: no way u deny her.
Swara: why??
Sanskar (pull her closer): bcoz in her presence we will not be able to do other things(winks)
Swara(come out of his grip): always ur mind remain stuck there only idiot
Sanskar (kiss her cheeks): yup and come soon.
Swara: hmm I have to make accuse also to papa.
Sanskar: tell him truth we are going to study only.
Swara: and he will agree immediately as he likes u alot.
Sanskar: why your father don’t like me?
Swara: how would I know.Now bye. Wait for me at 9.
Sanskar: byye.
Swasan went to their respective houses.
Night(8:30 pm)
Gododia house:
Swara came down with hand bag wearing casuals.She asked servant
Swara: kaka papa came?
Servant: no beti he didn’t came till now.
Swara: okay plzz tell him that I went to my friends house for studying.
Servant: okay.
Swara took her car keys and left for Sanskar’s house.
Maheshwari house:
Swara came after parking car inside and tap on door bell.Soon the servant opened the door and smiles seeing swara as she has came there many times.
Swara: namaste uncle.
Servant: namaste beta come inside.
Swara(entering): where is Sanskar?
Servant: he is in his room only.
Swara: ok then I will go there only.
Servant: ok.
Swara went upstairs to his room.
Sanskar’s room:
As the door was not locked Swara slightly push it and entered inside.
She saw sanskar lying on his bed playing vedio game.He is wearing only half pant.Swara looked around the room and signed as it was very messy. Sanskar didn’t get to know about her as he was too much indulge in playing.
Swara went close to bed and clear her throat. Sanskar looked at her and got up and sits.
Sanskar:(clear clothes from bed) hey swara u came.
Swara(put her bag on bed): I think so.
Sanskar: come sit
Swara: why can’t u keep your room clean.
Sanskar (carelessly): let it be.
Sanskar sit in front of her.
Sanskar: u had your dinner.
Swara: yes and u?
Sanskar: even I had taken so let’s start.
Swara (look at him): firstly wear some clothes.
Sanskar: leave it afterwards also I have to remove only(winks)
Swara (blushes): shameless.
Sanskar chuckles.
Then they start completing their assignment.
Swara: Sanskar your handwriting is horrible
Sanskar: ok then u write.
Swara: no sir will get to know.
In middle they drink juice to get fresh for ten mins.
Again continue with doing their work.
Finally after hours they complete their assignments.
Swara looked at time and said
Swara:ok sanskar it’s 11:30 then I should leave.
Sanskar:u r going?
Swara:yes work is done.
Sanskar (pull her closer):u r not going anywhere bcoz still my work is left.
Swara:Sanskar no way.
Sanskar roll her on bed beneath him and said.
Sanskar: yes way.
He kissed on her lips and even she started responding.They shared hungry and passionate kiss.Soon both got busy in making out with their clothes scattered on floor.
Later, Sanskar was kissing swara’s neck and she was pulling him closer and mourning. Then only swara’s phone rings.
Swara: Sanskar my phone is ringing.
Sanskar(huskily):ignore it.
Again they got busy in their very important work.But again got disturbed with phone.
Swara:Sanskar plzz let me see it once
Sanskar:ok but quickly.
Swara took her phone and see the caller I’d
Swara:don’t speak anything its papa
Sanskar: hmm
Swara received the call
Swara: hello papa
Shekar: Swara where are u?
Swara: wo papa I m at my friends house.
Shekar: which friend and why?
Swara: actually she is kavita my classmate. We are doing assignment together.
Shekar: okay now when u will come?
Swara: in the morning.
Sanskar was not able to control so started kissing her cheeks.Swara glare him but no effect.
Shekar: okay fine.
Swara: bye papa
She cut the call and hit on Sanskar’s head.
Sanskar: what?
Swara: can’t u wait for sometimes.
Sanskar: no.
Again they started their making out session and at last slept.
In the morning
Swara opened her eyes and saw sanskar lying on her
She slightly moved him and got up from bed and wore her clothes.After collecting her belongings she moved to Sanskar
Swara(jerk him): Sanskar I m going.
Sanskar(saw him with half closed eyes): hmm ok bye.
He pull her and peck her lips and then she left.
After one week:
Today swasan are going out for dinner date and swara is waiting for him in restaurant.She keeps on waiting for one hour but he didn’t came.she was getting frustrated. She called him several times but he didn’t received the call.Finally she thought to go back to house.She was going out when she heard Sanskar’s voice. She turned and got shocked to see him coming out from other side of restaurant with his friends laughing and enjoying. Now her anger reached at the peak.She went to him fuming.She held his hand and take him out from his friends circle.
Sanskar looked at swara confusedly.
Swara: wow Sanskar after calling me here u r enjoying with your friends.
Then realization hits Sanskar that today he has to come with swara on date.
Sanskar: oh shit swara I m sorry I totally forgot.
Swara:what sorry.
Sanskar’s friends were looking at them like what happened.
Sanskar: ok guys thanks for the party. Bye.
Sanskar held Swara’s wrist and took her to side.
Sanskar: see swara I m really sorry.One of my friend’s birthday was there so he invited me for party and in all that I forgot about our date
Swara:do you think I m stupid Sanskar that I was waiting out for hours and inside u were doing party.
Sanskar: try to understand Swara.
Swara:I don’t want to understand anything. My biggest mistake was to agree for the date no no I m idiot to be in relationship with u.
That was it for sanskar.He pull her closer
Sanskar:all the time saying all this about our relationship then why u did patch up with me.
Swara(jerk him): oh hello it was u who came to me
Sanskar:yes it was my stupidity to come to u.
Swara:ok fine from next time don’t u dare to come to me it’s over.
Sanskar:yes get lost who want to bear such stubborn girl.
Swara:just shut up
Sanskar: why should I it’s my mouth my wish I will speak
Swara:then keep on barking.
She sit in her car and went from there.
Sanskar also went to his car carelessly.
Night club:
Swara stopped her car outside the club and went inside. She went and sit on the chair near bar.Then only he saw Sanskar already sitting beside him smirking.
Sanskar: finally u came back to me.
Swara:I had not come to u.
Sanskar:ohh then to this(pointed to bear bottle)
Swara ignored him.
Sanskar:okay let’s see who will drink more shots. What’s say??
Swara(narrow her eyes):challenge??
Sanskar: yup.
Swara: okay accepted.
Both sit face to face and ask the waiter to serve shots.
They drink 1 2 3 4….9 10 shots.
Now it was not possible for swara to drink. Sanskar saw her and smirk
Sanskar: ufff its over for swara gododia.
Swara(angrily): shut your blo*dy mouth.
Swara went out.Sanskar laughs seeing her.
Later, Sanskar also came out stumbling.He saw swara kicking her car and abusing it as it got puncher.
Sanskar (taunting): now madam’s car also betrayed her.
Swara just ignored him.
He went closer to her and said
Sanskar:think once how u will go at this time in cab or rickshaw.Wow it will be amazing that the great Swara gododia travelled through low standard cab tch tch.
Swara:will u keep your mouth shut.
Sanskar:I have a offer for u if u want.
Swara:what?
Sanskar:I can drop u at your house.
Swara:and why?
Sanskar:not free there is one condition.
Swara:what condition?
Sanskar: patch up
Both were drunk but still little in senses.
Swara: not again.
Sanskar: okay then good bye.
Sanskar moved towards his car.Swara thought I should take lift otherwise how will she go.
Swara:(shouts)okay fine patch up.
Sanskar: good girl. come
Sanskar sit on driver while swara hop inside the car beside him.
Sanskar start the car and said
Sanskar: I think we should go to my house.
Swara: no I m not in the mood. And its your punishment for spoiling my date.
Sanskar(pout): okay
When they were going on highway police stops them.
To be continued…
Precap: swasan in jail. Shekar send swara to USA and swasan permanent break up.
Its getting lengthy so I will give 2 parts of each shot.
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80 Comments
Amazing……but permanent breakup????????????????????????
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon
Precap ????????? permanent break up ???????????
Again Shekhar became villian??????????
I love chappy… Both of the careless. But can’t stay away from each other, as if they love each other but not understanding…
Keep writing??? live u
*love u?
Loveee uuuu toooo and I will post next part soon
Thank you dear and don’t they will realize their feelings.
soooooooooooo cute part
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Haww precio is dangerous
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Awesome..tc..
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nyc dear
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Omg it’s rocking and I’m just superbbb one post soon as I can’t wait to read more
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Awesome…
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nice episode…
waiting for next .
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Permanent Barack up ???? SwaSan separation.. But plz us cavity ko Sanskar se dur rakhna… I hope SwaSan dur rehkar apni feelings realised kare for each other ???awesome episode ? ? ?
Thank you dear and cavity won’t come between swasan.
awesome update next part soon
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It’s just amazing, and you just nailed it…. but permanent break up??? post the next one as soon as possible
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Superb episode. Yeh dono baat baat be break up-patch up kar rahe hain. Ye log kab ek doosre ki importance samjhenge? The precap is too shocking? Jaldi next epi post karo sisooo. Waitingggg. Love you siso?
Thank you sissso will post next part soon and love uuu
Mard this was awesome and I m eagerly waiting for naughty billo
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Wow!!! Sooper dr….. Permanent break up oh god!!! No worries u will unite them soon i know…. Post next part soon
Thank you shan di and yup I will unite swasan for sure.
Superb
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Awesome dear
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It was awesome..but permanent break up??? But I hope they will realize their feelings soon. Post next part soon..waiting
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awesome marsuu . permanenet break up is necessary so that they realize their feeling and update soon pls
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Amazing dear
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superb
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interesting but swasan permanent break up but ya it’s needed so that they can realise their true feelings…..
post the next one soon dear….
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Nice
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Ok so this was best… Loved this part…
Bt precap.. Permanent breakup…. Bt I think it’s best coz they will realize their feelings….
Update soon dear…. Waiting.. ❤❤❤❤
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very very very very very very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
post next one soon..
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Awesome update please update soon and please don’t separate swasan please
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon and don’t worry about swasan separation.
Superb… Loved his condition to patch up again ur are one among the best writers I found in TU good job and continue ur work
Thank you so much dear your words really means alot to me.
It was superb yaar. But permanent break up.? May be this will give some sense to them. Plss make them realize that they love to each other.
Thank you dear and swasan will realize their feelings soon
Awesome…
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Nice
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