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Ashi: what?
Keerthi: actually.. before one year she had problems with her in laws and when she went to meet her husband for convincing..she..she met with accident and slipped to coma.
Ashi gets shocked and she gets teary..
Ashi:naira..
Naksh: she was critical till now but from yesterday she had slight improvements.. please kindly pray for her recovery.
Ashi:will surely pray for my friend..i..i never thought..i..i will meet her like this. Hope i..i meet her completely fine when..when i come next time.
Keerthi: you will surely meet as god won’t hurt good peoples.
Ashi:ok..iam going as time is up for my flight. Please do inform me if she recovers.
Naksh:sure..
Ashi gives her number and goes and she walks on the road stumbling..
Ashi in mind: poor naira..she is living as dead. They told that she met with accident when she went to convince kartik..that means she have met with the accident on the same day of shubham’s death. Ohh gosh..kartik is already broken and now..now if i tell this…how..how will he..but i have to tell.. atleast his anger for naira will fly away. I hope she gets fine and kartik and naira reunites..
A speeding car comes towards her and suddenly karan pulls her aside shocking her..
Ashi:karan?
Karan: what’s wrong with you ashi? Can’t you walk carefully on road? Where was your mind while walking?
Ashi:iam sorry karan..woh..
Karan cries and hugs Ashi..
Karan:if anything happens to you then what about me? I can’t live without you Ashi..
Ashi:iam sorry karan. Even i can’t live without you..i promise i will walk carefully next time.
Karan:ok..but why was you walking as if you lost your mind?
Ashi tells the happenings and karan gets shocked..
Karan:poor naira..i hope she recovers and gets United with your friend kartik. You are great in joining relationships..so unite the family.
Ashi:i will do it for sure. And meet me often okay because i mainly came udaipur only for meeting you oftenly that’s why i accepted suwarna aunty’s offer in working in kartik’s office.
Karan:stupid..even when you was far i came to meet you weekly once though it was difficult for me. So won’t i meet regularly when you are there near me?
Ashi:i know..but still i told..
Karan:ok..come i will drop you.
Karan drops Ashi in Goenka house and goes..
PARALLEL SCENE
Keerthi stands lost while naksh jerks her..
Keerthi:naksh..
Naksh:where are you lost?
Keerthi:woh..iam..iam thinking about that girl ashi..
Naksh: what’s there to think about her? She told na..she is naira’s friend then what?
Keerthi: actually..i feel i saw her somewhere and even her name is familiar to me..
Naksh:ohh that’s your problem huh? Common na..it’s something usual thoughts which occur in humans but it’s just hallucination infact. Even i felt like this seeing many people’s but then i realised it’s just humans hallucination’s.
Keerthi:hmm..you maybe right.
Naksh:ok..come i will give you your healthy juice which doctor predicted.
Keerthi: yuck..
Naksh laughs at her facial reaction..
Naksh:why yuck? You have to drink for sure..
Keerthi:but..
Naksh:no buts..iam your responsible husband and father..so i should take care of you and child..no excuses.
Keerthi under her breath: Hitler..
Naksh:what?
Keerthi: nothing..
Naksh takes Keerthi to the room and feeds her and makes her to sleep on his chest and caresses her head smiling..
Naksh:iam sorry Keerthi..i have to go against your favourites for your and our child’s safety. Please forgive me..
PARALLEL SCENE:
Ashi enters the house and she goes to kartik’s room and she takes the album of kaira and looks the pictures..
Ashi in mind:wow..such an amazing couple. Such a wonderful love..
She gets sad seeing a picture where kartik and naira expressing their their tattoos..
Ashi in mind:they even tattooed their names..tht much deep love.Hope naira recovers and kartik ends his anger and recovers.
Suddenly kartik wakes up and gets shocked seeing ashi seeing his album..
Kartik:Ashi..
Ashi gets shocked and scared hearing his voice and drops the album and turns back to him..
Kartik: what are you doing with my album?
Ashi: woh..kartik..i..i just thought to see..see your life.. that’s why. Iam sorry..
Kartik: what’s the use of seeing a useless life story?
Ashi gets shocked..
Ashi:stop it kartik. I know why are you telling this.. suwarna aunty told everything about your love story and till shubham’s death. How can you hate naira for this kartik? She may have some reason to hide then how can you..
Kartik: Ashi please stop it. Iam not hating Naira for hiding shubham’s drug case but for insulting my love..
Ashi: insulting your love?
Kartik:yes..on shubham’s death..i asked her to get out of the house to not create trouble as my mother was so much angry on naira. I can’t see my mother blaming naira as i love her. Though iam equally angry for hiding the matter but i can’t bear anyone blaming naira.. that’s why i asked her to get out for her good.
Ashi: then what’s the problem?
Kartik: she dint turn up again after i asked her to get out..she..she permanently went out of my life..if she have trusted my love then she would have understood me and came back and apologised or convinced me or tell the reason for hiding the matter but she had never trusted my love..
Kartik cries while ashi gets shocked..
Kartik: and it’s okay if she has misunderstood my love but why dint she console or pacify or come back to me if she had loved me? She used to please me till i give up my anger but now she never turned up.. what does this mean?
Kartik cries more and.
Kartik:then she called me once at evening but i couldn’t take it as i went for an important work but when i called her again she never picked.. and i tried calling her everyday but she never picked.
Ashi in mind: your hatred is totally mistaken kartik. Your anger for hiding maybe right but hatred is absolutely wrong. Naira came to meet you but unfortunately she met with accident and slipped to coma.. that’s why she couldn’t pick calls but..you.. without even finding her you are blaming her love.
Kartik:if she had truly loved me then she would have trusted and came back to me but what did she did with me? Tell me ashi..is this called a love?
Ashi gets teary remembering naira’s state and slaps kartik..
Ashi:kartik..why do you blame her rather than you. If she is to be blamed then you are also equally did same like her then you are shouting like this?
Kartik:ashi..
Ashi:if you find that it’s her fault in love for not coming back then even it is your fault of love for not going to her and getting her back. It’s you who shouted to get out so it’s your duty to bring her back but what did you do?
Kartik:but she is the one who did wrong by hiding the matter..so it’s her who should come and apologise or console me but what did she do? She never returned as she proved that she dint love me..
Ashi gets angry..
Ashi shouts:shut up kartik..you just end up with conclusions yourself without knowing what’s the true reason. I.. i just went to naira’s house in sake of uniting your family but i really got shocked when i saw naira..
Kartik gets shocked..
Kartik:what? You went to naira’s house huh?
Ashi:yes..dadi gave me her address as she also wants you and naira to be united. She is also angry on naira for hiding shubham’s drug matter but she doesn’t hate her…so..
Kartik: why did you do this? Can’t you ask my permission? I don’t want to force and bring her as there will be no happiness if we force someone who doesn’t love at all..
Ashi:i told you to shut up kartik. If you have seen her condition you would have not done this mistake..if you have searched of why she dint come back then you wouldn’t have hated her or you wouldn’t have misunderstood her..
Kartik gets shocked..
Kartik:what are you telling?
Ashi gets teary and..
Ashi:kartik..you..your wi.. wife nai..naira is in coma. She..she came to meet you on the evening of shubham’s death..but..but before that she met with accident and slipped to coma…
Kartik gets shocked and he feels as if the world has turned upside down and he stumbles..
Kartik:wh..what?
Ashi:yes..kartik. she is in coma for one year..from the day of shubham’s death. Till now she was critical it seems..now only..she..she got some improvements and this was told by her bhai and bhabhi.
Kartik gets shocked and he takes his steps back and he recalls their moments of their happy life..
Suddenly he holds his head and falls on the ground crying and he cries his heart out while ashi feels bad..
Kartik:what did you do kartik? I.?i misunderstood her for no reason..she..she is suffering..but..but you…chi..how cheap you are?
Kartik starts slapping himself while ashi gets shocked and holds his hands to stop it..
Ashi:kartik.. please don’t hurt yourself. It may your mistake of misunderstanding her but what’s the use of punishing ourselves later? The mistake happened.. we can’t do anything to clear it but we can try to rectify it.
Kartik cries:how? How can i rectify it ashi? I..I’ve done a sin then how can i rectify it? Till.. till now i was blaming her love but the truth is..iam ashamed to tell that i loved naira truly.. because.. because of me..she..she is suffering.
Ashi:it’s not like that kartik..
Kartik:it’s like that only ashi. If i have not asked her to get out.this..this…wouldnt have occurred…
Kartik burst out crying like hell while ashi tries to console him..
Ashi: Kartik..common na be strong. Feeling guilty is after is no use. Now you have to do something for naira..where she can recover. I heared coma patients can recover if they make her feel comfortable..so try to do that as she loves you more. Give her the strength to fight her battle..be a pillar for her..
Kartik wipes his tears amd get up..
Kartik:you are right. I should be strong for my naira..i will give her my full strength and energy for her recovery..this is my promise. Once she recovers.. I’ll get whatever punishment which i desreve..
Ashi: that’s good spirit.
Kartik:but how will i meet naira? Her family would be angry on me..
Ashi:you know which time her family would be busy in works..so use that time and aneek into naira’s room.
Kartik smiles..
Kartik:you are great yaar..iam so proud to have a friend like you..
They both hug..
THE SCENE FREEZES.
It’s noght 11:30 pm..
Kartik slowly peeps out of his house like a mouse while someone catches him..
Kartik:ashi?
Ashi:got scared? Don’t worry..you go..i will handle the situation if anything comes.
Kartik:ok..thank you so much.
Kartik goes towards singhnia house..
Kartik in mind:thank god..i was scared…it was just Ashi.Krishnaji..thank you so much for sending ashi at right time. If she haven’t came..i would have not known my naira’s suffering. You can punish me once naira recovers..until that please give me strength to give her my support. Please make her fine..i can do anything for her recovery so please make her fine..if you want you can take my life also but don’t make her suffer please..
Kartik gets teary and he walks..
Kabir comes before Goenka house and smiles seeing naira’s room..
Kabir in mind:see..what i do naira? You did wrong by ditching and getting me punished..so it’s time to show who Kabir is..
Kabir slowly climbs through the pipe and enter’s kartik’s room and gets shocked seeing naira and kartik missing..
Kabir in mind: ohh.. what the hell? Where are these two idiots? I thought to kill naira tonight but she is missing..shit. this two idiots have no sense.. always enjoying even in untime. Today you may have escaped naira..but not tomorrow. I will come and strangle you soon..
Kabir jumps outand goes..
THE SCENE FREEZES.
precap:- kartik pours his feelings to naira..