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Bz I loved her..Sanskar’s love story (Episode 18)

When he reached home lights were off
“Mom..swara, uttara.where are u…? i think the elecricity has gone “.
he tries to switch on the lights by mobile’s flash light
but suddenly lights turned on with a scream…kids gathered around him.
“Sanskar bhayaa yeee…?????”
Mitti shouted.she is 5 year old,
Sanskar rolled his eyes.
“What…shethanoom, are u all here to tortue me…??”.
“yepee”…kittu and golu intertwined their hands

Akkad bakkad bambe bo
assi nabbe ya poore sau
Raat ke baje gaye paune doo
Jo hota hai hone do ..

“Sanskar their exams are over and vaccation has started .U know that they wont stay at home for more than a sec now.
they persuaded me to bring them here, otherwise they might eat away my brain.
You pamper them a lot and they have become so naughty that I cant’t handle them alone nowadays.”Sujatha said
Sanskar:. chachi when did u come..?”.He became so happy on seeing her.
Sujatha:”Today afternoon .i got lot of work in our farm ,so i cant stay for more than one week here, other wise
our cultivation will get spoiled,i dont know when these kids will return.”
“Mom u go ,no need to stay here we will meet after one month, shall I help u to pack ur bags”..golu said with excitement
Sanskar: “chachi…one month with this badmashoom…its better if a disaster would have come??”
Sujatha:”shethanoo…u r going to pack up ur own mum’s bag…Hey Ramji 9 months carry them on my womb, now see this what I got in return.? ”
Golu:”what mom u start again… 9 months huff”. He rubbed his head walked away from there briskly and came with a basket and placed it on the floor.
Golu:”Mom pls get into this basket I will carry u 12 months on my head. Is this oky with u ??”.
Everyone burst out laughing.Sujatha become more angry.
Sujatha: “See jiji what he said..this boy have no respect to elders..Suniye ji golu ke pappa..u have left me alone with these shethanoom and
gone to bhagvanji and u r watching and enjoying this
whole thamasha there?? “.
Golu:”Ha pappa why did u go..??” He looked up.
At that time all became very silent and a bit emotional,Seeing the situation swara changed the topic.
Swara:”chachi what all he said is good na..how many mother’s would get this opportunity..haha..u should be proud of ur son”.
AP:”haha swara is right u r very lucky..to have a son like him. Suji they are kids na if they are not naughty then how can we call them as kids”.
Sujatha: “Kids huff..jiji..fed up with thier mischief..u know one thing the whole village came along with us to railway station for bidding bye to them?”.
Uttara: “wow chachi whole village love them so much..??”.
Sujatha: “Na re uttara.. They came there bz for at least one month they will get rid of these monsters.
Now they might have started to curse themselves for praying to god to bless me and ur chahu with a baby?”
“Mami…what I did…am the younger one “.Mitti made a pout face
“Mitti ki bachi, she is their leader…if u and ur cousins play some prank on others, if something happen… ohh God then what shall i tell ur mom and dad..
be a good girl here”.
Mitti:”Mami I can’t carry u like golu bhayaa…bz u r so fat”.
Sujatha: “what me ..i look fat?? “.Suji widened her mouth.
AP:”suju haha..leave it”,Then kittu start crying.
Everyone one looked at her.
Sanskar: “what happened kittu ..why r u crying..?”.
Kittu: “No one giving me a chance to speak??”. She is slurring .
AP:”Ohh mera bachha come here ..lets talk a lot..haa”.she kissed her cheek.
Kittu:”Woo I have equal rights to carry my mom bz we r twins na?”.
Sujatha placed her hand on head “yeh bhagvan”
Golu and kittu(Gopal and kritika) are twins of Ram prasad and sujatha.They r in 7 th class.Mitti is their cousin’s daughter.
Uttara: “Thank god u all r here lets make a blast from today onwards.. Uttara give them HiFi”.
Swara is standing there with a smile..enjoying their convo..still her intense gaze on sanskar..

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ho… Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Ho
Let the mistakes done by these eyes be forgiven
Ek Tuk Tumhein Dekhti Hai
They look at Your for a moment
Jo Baat Kehna Chaahe Zubaan
What my mouth wants to say to You
Tumse Ye Woh Kehti Hai
They speak that to You.

Kittu:”Sanskar bhayya see what we have brought for u..”.
They handed him a huge box .He opened the box. It contained ripe mangoes
.”Bachho attack..”.Mangoes are his favourite.
They started eating mangoes and click a mango selfe.But swara’s concentration was full on sanskar rather than eating mangoes.
Uttara started to tease her.”Bhabhi mangoes r in ur hand not in Bhai’s face.” Just then everyone noticed her .She felt embarrassed.
Sanskar: “swara what happened don’t u like mangoes”. She fumbled ,doesn’t know what to say.
Uttara: “Bhai u r a tube light.. why u asking ,feed her na”.
He smiled and placed a piece of mango on her mouth.when he turned 3 small mouths were already opened.
He also fed them with mangoes.After finishing the mangoes they went back to thier rooms.
After taking bath Sanskar came back to his room,He found swara standing near the window in a mango yellow saree.”
He couldn’t take off his eyes from her.
“Saree ..? Shona r u planning to go outside”,
“No .. it was gifted by u,so i just tried wearing it”.
He was wearing a leaf green T-shirt.
“u r looking beautiful shona”.Saying this he moved closed to her.Their eyes met..

Kaajal Ka Ek Til Tumhare Labon Pe Laga Loon
Let me apply a small dot of kajal on Your lips

He continuously stared at her beautiful eyes and tugged her hair strand behind her ear.She lowered her head

Haan Chanda Aur Suraj Ki Nazron Se Tumko Bacha Loon
Let me protect You from the evil eye of the Moon and the Sun
Palkon Ki Chilman Mein Aao Main Tumko Chhupa Loon

He touched her chin with one hand raised slowly and softly touched her cheek .
She leaned forward to inhale his fragrance and closed her eyes.
A blow of mild wind touched her hair.Moon now hide his face on clouds to leave them alone.
stars r start blushing and glittered more and more to add glow on her face.

Let me hide You behind the curtains of these eyelashes
Khayaalon Ki Ye Shokhiyaan Maaf Ho
Let the sauciness (vividness) of these thoughts be forgiven
Har Dam Tumhein Sochti Hai
They think of You all the time
Jab Hosh Mein Hota Hai Jahaan Madhosh Ye Karti Hai
While the world around me is in their senses, it makes me intoxicated

Aankhon Ki Sharm-o-Haya Maaf Ho
Let the modesty and transgress done by these eyes be forgive

He carefully took a fallen eyelash from below the eyes and smiles victoriously “yes I got it,forward ur hand shona”.
But she is standing closed eyes.He shaked her shoulder “shona u r sleeping here in this state, come lay on beb”.
She suddenly came in to sense.same time they hear a bang on the door.
when he opened the door bachaa party entered the room with full force.
Mitti climbed on the bed and start to jump,and shouted I will sleep here.
Hearing this a thunder fall on her heart.
“Come sit Bhai we will talk late night and full masti” Kittu invited them.
Golu:”Hey will arrange a DJ party here”.
“Badmashoom u all here let them sleep”. Uttara came there by following them.
“But we r always used to sleep here na uttara Di”.
“Ha now swara bhabi also sleeping here..look she is tired. So no masti get up”
“Ha I will make her sleep I know many songs..Di come sit on my lap”. Mitti find a solution.
“Mitti ki bachi come here”. Uttara took her hand .
“No leave me ..leave my hand…” She started to scream. Uttara put her hand on her mouth but she bite
Uttara jumped with pain.Mitti start to run on the bed and uttara run behind her stumbled and fell on floor.But she didn’t open her eyes. Everyone one feared.. Called her name”uttara.. “.But she didn’t wake up.Her eyes are closed. Swara splashed water on her face.
“Miiti killed uttara Di..?” Golu said in fearful voice.Mitti’s face changed she scared start sobbing.
“I didn’t do anything ?”. Said in a pleading sound.
Sanskar: “shut up golu she didn’t do anything”.
Kittu:”I think she goes to bhagvanji’s lap like pappa ?”.
Mitti: “uttara Di..don’t go to bhagvanji’s home ..we will miss u..pls come back.I will give u golu bhayya’s chocolates from his pocket pakka..voo I already ate my chocolates na ?” . She again start crying.Then trio start weeping.
.suddenly uttara opened her eyes “na bachaa nothing happened to me I was just kidding ??”
sanskar give her a angry glare? .But Mitti didn’t stop crying.swara put her on shoulder pated her head.
“Mitti look at me..nothing happened to ur Di..see her”.
Uttara feels guilty on her prank.
Some how she managed her to make sleep and laid in bed.
Sanskar:”uttara , kittu, golu u all go ..she will sleep here”.They go back to their room.
Swara leaned near to her and Sanskar on other side.Mitti’s thumb is on her mouth while sleeping.
“Sanskar ..I really miss Bobby..”.
“Yes am too..we will call Bidya aunty tomorrow.” They fell on asleep.
After sometime swara wake up and look into Sanskar who is in deep sleep.she came near to him rubbed her hand on his hairs.Then she walk towards the balcony stand there by staring moon.She is disturbed.. What’s happening to me..why this moon and stars looking different .. I want to count all these stars why..? I don’t know.Till now this feeling is unknown to me.I know him from years do I feel anything like this before I don’t know,but now am carving for his touch and want his presence around me. Yes I always miss him when he was not with me. I can’t bear anyone getting close to him more than me, may be all this bz of my friendship..may be..hmm. But this time more than a friendship I have a feeling that he is only mine and i have full rights on him,as a wife..?.Now I got to knew why marriage is very special thing to everyone. She hold her mangalsuthra and kissed on it.Goes near to the dressing table and looked into the mirror. she touched her forehead and filled sindoor there with ecstasy a tear escaped from her eye corner.
She came near to bed miiti is now sleeping edge of the bed , she try to turn her but she is again rolled to other side then swara placed a pillow on there.she came to Sanskar side there is a little space for her.She remember the morning after their wedding and rubbed her fore head on him .He became reddish due to her sindoor….look more cute on that red mark.A curvey smile appeared on her face. someone said love makes a person mad..its true that’s y am doing such crazy things.
Its 5am her phone rang continuously.. She wakeup it was uttara..
“Uttara what happened why r u calling”
“Bhabhi pls come outside the room am here.”
*******************************Hi guy’s ..sorry for the late update due to some personal reasons I was bcy…
Anji finally I updated .Thanku my friends for reading Ff and my silent readers love u all
Sree harini..read ur comments dear, they r valuble for me…
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