Again Nivethaa with a story without a story as usual… !! hope this will entertain u.. !! looking forward to ur comments my dear sisieees & lovely frnds..!!
In Amristar express(delhi to mumbai):
Abhi placed his luggage & sat on his seat in the sleeper coach..there pragya came & sits opposite to abhi.. along with pragya akash came..
Akash: di..! I don’t how I will manage without u.. stay here na?..
Pragya: akku..! u know na.. ! ma is not well.. I have to tak care na..
Akash: ya di.. but ur chachi will dance on my head.. u can handle her well..hw much questions she will ask at a tym..!
Pragya: how many times I told u .. not to tease my chachi.. (patted his head slightly.)
Aksah :tat much ur chachi is torturing me by her useless questions..
Pragya: akku..! don’t forget tat she is ur mom..
Akash: okay di.. I don’t want to make u mood out.. tak care of ma.. u should return early as possible..miss u dii.. bye..
Pragya: bye akku.. tak care..
Pragya waved bye to his cute bro & take a look around her.. she is in window seat.. opposite to her a man with his black tee shirt sat.. he is looking at pragya for some strange reasons.. pragya saw him &turned to look at window side view.. train started to move.. its night & time is around 9:30..
Abhi took his mobile & started to msg his sweety..
Msg convo b/n abhi & sweety..
Abhi: hey.!! Chuweeety … wat’s up?… where r u ?.. wat r u doing?.
Sweety: how many questions u will ask in a same time..
Abhi: okay tell me where r u?..
Sweety: where I will be??
Abhi: home…??
Sweety: mmm.. y r u asking this now?.
Abhi: I’m in train now..
Sweety: so..
Abhi: a girl is just opposite to me..
Sweety: & u r flirt with her ..& trying to make me jealous?..
Abhi: smart gal.. but,tat is not my motto..
Sweety: then wat?.
Abhi: wen I saw her , she reminds me u.. tat’s y am asking..
Sweety: come on ET.. u r telling like this for about 5 times..
Abhi: this time I’m sure.. look.. this gal also typing something in her mobile.. & she also wore specs..
Sweety: ET.. u think whoever wore specs will be me?.. & nowadays a gal with out mobile is hardly to find.. so don’t think too much okay..
Abhi: okay.. I will call u now.. & speak with me for some time..
Sweety: so tat u can clear ur doubts!!! Isn’t it?..
Abhi: yes..
Sweety: am sooo sry abhi.. ma is here with me.. & see the time.. if I will talk to u this time.. sure she will get me out of my home.. will call u tomorrow.. okay!!
Abhi: please naa sweety..!! pretty please..
Sweety: noo ET.. no way.. tell me about tat gal na?..
Abhi: I won’t tell u anything..
Sweety: plz na.. u like her?.
Abhi:not really..! but she is cute though..
Sweety: then, sure u will flirt with her..
Abhi: no.. no.. u know about me na.. how can I flirt with another gal.. wen I’m in this condition..?.
Sweety: hoo.. u r again started to talk like a sadist.. nothing happened in ur life.. she is just a passing cloud.. don’t struck on ur past ET..
Abhi: hmm.. okay.. am going to sleep chuweeetyy..
Sweety: hey Eiffel Tower.. I’m talking to u .. & u r going to sleep.. then sleep.. I will come to ur dream & will make u frightened..
Abhi: plz.. if u come in my dream.. plz show ur face..
Sweety: y u r eager to see my face?.. without looking we can be maintain this relation na?..
Abhi: u r telling this as if u had not seen my face..!! cheater cock.. u knew me well.. am the one ! who didn’t know u.. don’t know how u look.. even u didn’t told me ur so called name..
Sweety: U do know me.. u saw me.. u knew my name.. but… wen u knew me u don’t know my name & my face .. wen u knew my name, u didn’t saw me & don’t know about me.. wen u saw me, u didn’t not know my name.. am I making it clear..
Abhi: even the Hindu paper crossword is easy than ur puzzling sentence.. shut ur eyes & mouth.. & go to ur bed.. am really very tired..
Sweety: 😉
Abhi: don’t smile.. go.. gud nyt..
Sweety: I know.. u will flirt with tat gal..
Abhi: yes.. I’m.. wat will u do..
Sweety: nothing.. gud nyt.. sweet dreams..
Abhi once again re read their convo & his lips curved to a smile without his knowledge.. pragya nodded her head in disbelief.. & resumed her chatting with her frnds.. abhi settled to sleep & due to tired he slept quickly.. lights off.. & pragya came to abhi & sit infront of him.. tat moon light showed his calm face.. she kissed his forehead & smiled at him.. & back to her seat to lay down.. she is admiring abhi & her remembering her past life .. a drop of tear escaped from her eyes…
So tell me how is tat.. u might guess who is tat gal..basically I’m kind of weak in giving twist & all.. we will see how the story will go.. & drop ur comment.. I’l give my next update a bit longer.. than q for reading.. forgive me for mistakes & keep reading.. keep smiling.. tak care all…
34 Comments
Sweety is pragya I am wright. Today episode was awesome… U are a such a wonderful writer…
than q maha sis..!! 🙂 🙂 & yes! u r ryt..! let’s see their past..!!
nice dear
thanq diiii 🙂 🙂
Awesome start dr and i am also think the same that sweety is pragya and its really a great twisting part and hope u will clear it soon sweety…
waiting for your next update
thanq dear!! 🙂 i told u na..! am weak in giving twist .. u guessed it correct.. & their past is the story.. i’l update the next shot soon..:) 🙂
Superb start nivi sis…eager to know about their life…waiting for your next update sis…..pls post the other ff also…
than q da!!! 🙂 🙂 i’l try to update “u for me ” da.. ! but not sure.. next epi will be their past.. i hope so.. will see.. tak care da..
Superb start.waiting for your update
than q dear… will update next part sooon..:)
Super … Interesting dear…..
than q sugan !!:) 🙂
Awww! Its Interestingggggggggg sissy!
than qqqq reshu sis..!!! 🙂 🙂
How it can be Pragya I meant she is the one sitting in front of Abhi na then how!?
than q for ur comment dear!! ya..she is sitting infront of abhi & abhi said to sweety tat gal also texting na.. & wore specs.. !! i’ll clear all ur confusions in my next shot .. keep reading.. u will get ur confusions clear.. !!
Nice start pls keep going
than q dear..:) 🙂
hey omg
u gave a nice twist and ur saying that u don’t know to??
how dare u
i will never spare
please akka post soon
is the flash back of both abhi and pragya are linked??
then how???
why abhi did not know???
hey please say me akka..
than q da:) 🙂
he he.. i thought u people will guess it easily.. that’;s y da..!
i’l try to post it soon.. if late don’t anger on me..
ya..i will reveal their past in forthcoming shots..
u will get ur answers in my next shot dear..
tak care da.. study well..
As usual rocking update akka… sweety ndra name ah pathone athu pragya va tha irukkum nu kandupudichiten… interesting akka… eagerly waiting for next part akka… porumaiyave update pannunga.. but lengthy chappy ah irukkanum… apdiye me for you nxt part um update pannunga akka… exam eluthittu vanthu unka story padikire.. tension poyi happy ah irukku.. keep smiling akka… stay blessed.. love you sooooo much????
Happy holi akka
thanq da..!! 🙂 🙂 ha ha!! 🙂 sweety suits her well!! 🙂 okay da!! next epi lengthy ah update panren!!! but konjam tym edukrean.. “me for u” vaiyum update panna try panrean da..!! super.. !! xams nall pannu.. nalla padinga madam.. tension illama relaxed ah padinga.. nalla score pannunga..!! keep smiling da!! love u toooo 🙂 🙂 stay blessed!!happpieee holiiiiii 🙂
Nice episode…. happy holi sissy……
thanq dear!!! happieee holiii..:) 🙂
its cute
than q dear!!! 🙂 🙂
Nice I love it
than q lucky..!! glad u loved it!!! 🙂
Hiiiiii akka startingeeeee super and waiting for next……….
And I want to tell u one don’t mistaken me.
My bestieeeee Yoda name kuda nivetha dhan so adhanala kekuren.
March 15 yennoda birthday so adhanala aanaiku ungala oru os update panna mudiyuma based on abhi and Pragya.
Pls……………… sorry and don’t mistaken me…….
hiiiiiiiiiiii sreeeeee 🙂 🙂 than q da!!! i will update next shot soon!! 🙂 nee enna venumnaalum sollalaam!! onnum ninaika maten.. 🙂 🙂 sure da.. i’l try to update an os based on abhigya.. pls sry la venaam da!!! i’l try to update.. bday gal kettu pannamaa irukalaamaa!! advance apppieee birthday dear.. !! enna panra nee?.. i mean studies??
Naan eleventh STD padikiren akka.thanks a lot…………….
So sweet of uuuuuuuu??
Neenga yenna panreenga????????
completed my B.E da.. !! 🙂 🙂
Neenga yendha ooru akka.B.E muduchuteengala………..neenga clg padikureenga nu ninachen