PLEASE TAKE NOTE THIS IS A FAN FICTION NOT THE UPDATE OF THE ACTUAL EPISODE.
Hey all. I am back with the second part of the five shots. I am really overwhelmed with the response I received and it really means a lot to me. I am happy and surprised that you all still remember me. Yes, you all are right Shravan’s character is inspired from Siddhart Malhotra’s character in Ek Villain, but the story will be different from Ek Villain, but yes I got inspired from Ek Villain to the write this five shots.
By any chance if you didn’t read the first part, here is the link.
Part 1/
Here is part 2.
He sat down and got thinking. He still couldn’t forget her. His angel. She is so beautiful, her eyes, her smile he just can’s stop thinking about her. The flash of her face was almost about to bring a smile on his face, just then the gun catches his eyes. Now he was back to his previous avatar. What just happened to him? No. He can’t melt towards her. If she gets to know about all his deeds, will she ever love him? No. It’s an impossible love story. And also when he will see her again there is no surety and also no guarantee. He got up and became determined. Now he will forget about her and continue with his job. He will forget as if he never saw her. It may not be as easy as he thinks and he knows that but he have to do so. For his so called benefit and her benefit.
The next day, Shravan as usual carried out his usual job that is to hurt people and destroy their family with the strike from his gun and bullets. Slowly, he started to forget about his Angel and again fully focused back into his work. The little emotion that his angel brought in him, even that was also missing in him again.
One day, he got an deal and he was assured and confident of it. He didn’t care about the consequences at all. He went into the orphanage with his gang, and started the attack . Their cruel Mission was to empty the orphanage and to rule over the place over some bad deeds and also allow it to happen.
The orphanage was full of innocent kids and the caretakers and the owner. This time they didn’t use the power of their gun at all, as they all were so delicate and afraid at the first place. The glance of the goons was enough to scare those little innocent kids out and also their caretakers couldn’t take any action. They were helpless, after all there was someone needed to take care of those innocent orphan kids after the place gets empty too. And they knew saying something or doing something was worth of putting their life at risk. They had to stay mum. They continued to ransacked the orphanage and even mercilessly pushed those kids out.
Those caretakers could only see those scene and cry. But there was someone who needed to take the responsibility and stop all these ruthless people. Finally someone entered the orphanage and stood up for those kids. She stopped the goons and with the power of her self-defence she was brave enough to face them and also overpower them. Those goons were surprised and before they could use their weapon she quickly eloped and went in. There on the other hand,the devil was finding and flipping through papers. Once he got the paper the orphanage was under the control of his boss and company. One could say that Shravan was the best and leader in his gang. So that’s why he got the biggest responsibility. On the other hand, the brave girl went in and stopped him from doing this.
Shravan got angry and he knew that this time he had to use his gun. He directly pinned her to the wall, and took out the gun to kill her. As he was about to use it, he was surprised. Suddenly he was shaking in from inside. It is because the girl resembled like his angel. And she spoke,
“How dare you even think of harming Suman Tiwari’s friends?” She fired on him.
Shravan was stunned as he realised that she didn’t only resemble to his angel, infact they shared the same name. Now he got it. It was his angel itself.
He was trying hard to focus on his work. He just had to shoot her once and finish everything off. But he couldn’t. He was still lost in her sight and again his angel awakened the emotions in him.
“Shoot me if you can!” Suman fired him off. She was so angry on him that even she didn’t know what she will do in anger.
How can someone be so cruel? Suman just couldn’t understand. Suman knew it was the end of her but she wanted her sacrifice to be worth. So that she can at least save the orphanage and her little friends.
Shravan again tried his utmost best to do so. But he was so nervous and confused that the gun just slipped from his hand and fall down. He didn’t even had a second thought at all. He didn’t even bother to pick it up. He was just thinking about her angel. Not because she was super angry on him, just that how opposite she was to him. There was nothing similar between them. Not a single thing. She is a girl, he is a boy. She is good, he is bad. She is angel, he is devil. The only similar thing they had was they both are humans. That’s all.
Shravan was fully aware of his so called failure. It was actually a success as for the first time he failed to kill someone. This showed that there was something called emotion in him. Shravan couldn’t believe he failed to kill someone. But from deep bottom of his heart, he succeeded as the life of his angel was spared. Shravan didn’t know why he cared so much for her despite she foiled all his plans due to which his work suffered. She was his angel. But only to him. But for her he was a devil, and that was not surprising at all. Shravan just took steps back, left those papers and went back.
Suman was surprised that how was it possible that her life got so easily spared even when the most dangerous man of the gang was in front of her moments ago, and she was foiling his so called plans even in his presence. And he also had a gun in his hand.
Shravan went back with his gang. And his gang were Super surprised over Shravan’s so called failure. The orphanage got so easily spared and also it was one of the easiest to obtain especially when Shravan was with them. It was something brand new to them. They had no other option but to go back to their boss along with Shravan. The other goons tried to figure out what was wrong with Shravan. Why he failed so easily? They knew that maybe they were also responsible as they were overconfident. Maybe it was once in a blue moon their failure. Due to which they didn’t take much action, but all were still shocked. Shravan wanted to leave the place as soon as possible as that haunted him as it was his so called failure memories.
Suman on the other hand came out, and kids and caretakers enjoyed over their victory. They regarded their Suman didi as their Super heroine, who saved their shelter and also them. All were treating Suman like the princess of the moment. Suman remained clueless of what just happened. How did he spare her so easily? How did the devil spare her so easily? She stared at Shravan who left and looked on.
Part 2 ends.
Precap:- Shravan sees something and gets shocked. Suman is walking on the street, and someone holds her hand and takes her away. Shravan bursts out on Suman why she did so. Suman tries to explain. Shravan angrily takes the gun and shoots and kills her.
I will publish the next part tomorrow.
Please do feel free to express your opinions 🙂
25 Comments
Good going Fattu! I really enjoyed it 🙂 Keep it up! Wanna know more about that devil 🙂 Cute Sumo Angel 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂
-Zuha
Hey Chuha thanks for commenting happy u liked it
This is scary Joyee Aapi..!
I am shocked to death!
Post soon…
Hey laddoo thanks for commenting
Areh sorry for scaring u 😛
And will post the next part tomorrow 🙂
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Wt was that in the precap..????episode was nice…
Aawwww…
Our Ruth less..hero turned smooth for our sumo..?????
So nice..??
Hey sona thanks for commenting
Well what is in the precap u will know as soon as i update next part
And ya Shravan gal gaya 😛
Did u just say kills her ‘SUMAN’ in d precap?
Oh my god…I m just amazed..
Shocked..
Surprised…
Traumatised…
Astonished..
Nd in some other world…after reading this…
Plz post very very soon ……!!
Eagerly waiting…
Love ya…!!
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Hey weirdsister thanks for commenting
Happy u liked it
Well Omg itna Sara words ?
And will post the next part tomorrow 🙂
And love u too 🙂
r u kidding…..
what does KILLS HER mean……….
I’m totally in shock so plz post as soon as possible
plz…
Hey aishana
Thanks for commenting
Well u will get to know more in the next part
And will post the next part tomorrow 🙂
This part was truly fantastic. Loved it. But the precap ?? Can’t wait now. Post soonnnnnnn.
Take care ?
Hey zainab thanks for commenting
Happy u liked this part 🙂
And well will post the next part tomorrow
Thank u 🙂
Wait wait wait
Did the precap say that Shravan kills Suman? Nooooooooo
Anyways, before I die due to that, let me tell you, the episode was aammmazzinnggg
Loved itt!!
But postt sooonnn..
Cantt waiit!
Love you,
Nikita..:)
Hey Nikita thanks for commenting
Yes the precap says so
And happy u liked the episode
And will post the next part tomorrow
And love u too 🙂
I really really really loved it yr its awesome plz plz plz post sooonnnn na i m waiting.
Hey mishte thanks for commenting
Happy u liked it
And will post the next part tomorrow 🙂
Very good episode !!! And precap….OMG…killed her….but how…oh no !!!!! This unique luv story…what will happen !!! Lets hope for best and wait for the next episode !!!
Hey sonai thanks for commenting
Well u will get to know more in the next part
And will post the next part tomorrow 🙂
Hmmmm..
Not acceptable
How can you?How can you write such an amaaaaazzzzziiiiiinnnnggg ff.
Seriously,I am just so loving it,
Post the next ep asap plzzz
Lot of love?
Leelly(Nikita also,but not the one you know?)
Hey leelly thanks for commenting
OMG i got scared for a moment
Happy u liked this ff 🙂
And the next part i will post tomorrow
And there are so many nikitas i know
Here Nikita, you, my Friend Nikita, my mom’s Friend also Nikita and how can i forget Nikita Dutta aka sumo ?
Wow shot was master piece
I just don’t have words to say
I love your andaz
Request for you
I can’t handle on thing that is suspense
So can you post soon
Thanks a lot
Hey dhira thanks for commenting
Happy u liked it
And well i love suspense 😛
Will post the next part tomorrow
And thanks for supporting me 🙂
Woooooooooooooooooow! I’m nearly speechless!! I can’t really type much at this state but just knw it was awesome. I loved it from the core of my heart. I’m going off words now so all i want is the next shot real soon. I’m waiting
loads of love
-ariana
Hey Ariana thanks for commenting happy u liked it a lot dear and i already submitted the next part depends when they will publish it 🙂
hey jo just read this part… how can any1 be so cruel, so ruthless… god orphanage no…ppl hav lost their humanity these days n innocent kids … 🙁
sumo…really only love can change ppl… can make devil to man, an angel…
how shravu dropped gun..god i was imagining everything…
n sumo super heroine n shravu super hero awsm jodi…
god precap ???
going to read 3rd part…no i wish he wdnt kill her …no