Only You Can Give Me That Feeling Of Love
Swasan TS By Shreeyu
Shot 1
A girl was running while talking to her self
Girl: Oh God Swara, today again u became late, all the seats would be occupied by now only last row would be left… Urghh
Who asked them to keep this coaching center on 3rd floor of this building … This idiot lift is also not working… Run Swara run
She increased her speed and soon reached her classroom
She entered and saw that the students were already seated and waiting for the teacher to come
She scanned the whole room and saw 1seat left empty in the second last row… She went there and started taking out her study material…
Soon the class started
In between the class she was getting disturbed by some whisipering sounds, she sensed it was coming from her back and she turned only to find two boys sitting there and talking
They stopped talking seeing her
Swara: You too can’t keep quite na, and u Sanskar why are u always talking…!!(said in low tone but angry too )
Sanskar: Woh we were discussing something Swara
Swara: Oh is it? Then Mr maheshwari pls do it later… For now keep quite
Sanskar gave her a sheepish grin and acted as if locking his lips with a key and extended his hand towards Swara, as if passing the key to her, Swara who was annoyed till now could not help but give a smile to him
She took the key and said:Now don’t talk
She again started concentrating on the class but was unable to do so, she was smiling thinking how silly they both act …. This is Sanskar’s habit to give her the key after locking his mouth since last ten years…
She started remembering how she use to scold him because of excess chattering as their every class teacher made her sit with him so that he would not talk but little did they(teachers) know that Swara who was one of the most disciplined student use to become a chatter box with him… Actually she was always a chatter box but she had a habit to stay silent while the teacher is teaching… How much they enjoyed then, making others fool, doing mischievous things in free periods etc… Truly school days were awesome
Yes , they were classmates , they studied together in one class from nursery to twelfth ,
fourteen years… And now they are again together in this coaching, preparing for NEET….
Soon she concentrated on the class
Someone from back tapped her shoulder
Swara:Han
(Sanskar was the one who called her,he started asking her abt some topic, Swara tried to explain but the idiot sitting beside him was again n again saying that you’re explaining wrong, Sanskar who was initially finding Swara correct became confuse between the duo)
Sanskar: M not able to understand anything now
Swara: M saying correct, but your partner seems extraordinarily intelligent that he’s ready to change every thing that is already proved… Why don’t u ask Sir abt this…?
Sanskar nodded but before he could ask the boy(let’s name him Mr idiot) asked the teacher
Their sir also explained to him same as what Swara was saying while she was giving – ‘I told u look to Sanskar’
The boy sat down and said
Mr Idiot:No sir is saying wrong, how is this possible…!!
(And he started doing his work)
Swara moved her head a little back and whispered: Gadhe ke saath baithoge na gadhe hi ban jaoge
(If you would sit with a donkey you would also become a donkey?)
Sanskar narrowed his eyes and said:Is it?
Swara:Yes Mr donkey…. U don’t know but in school he was in my tuition and I can’t explain how illogical and idiotic questions he ask… So better avoid his company
Sanskar was abt to answer when there teacher shouted: Silence
And they both got back to studies…
Soon a month passed and now only few days were left for their exam…
Swasan did not talk much with each other during this tym… As there were so many students that their encounter with each other was nearly negligible
Both got busy in the studies and the only medium of conversation was their WhatsApp group where all their classmates were present… And they only did Hi – Hello there
They worked hard for the exam, and finally the day arrived
Both did their papers well but still tension was still their as it’s not an small school examination but exam which can make their future
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The days flew and today was the day when NEET results (say 2016) were to be declared
Swara was moving to and fro in her room biting her nails in tension, just then her mother (name-Shweta Sharma; a teacher by profession)entered
Shweta:Oh God Swara I thought that you left this habit years back but I was wrong…
Swara immediately lowered her hands and said :Maa u r worried abt my habits and here I’m dying out of tension…
Went and sat on the bed
Shweta: So u want me to take tension like you!!
Swara sighed and said: Yes and No
Shweta: how your exam went?
Swara: May be good or may be not
Shweta:See beta, your papers would be checked by now so y r u worried, neither you can go and change your answers nor you can change the result… Result would come according to your answers only, so this tension would not help in anyway… And don’t worry we would not throw you out of the house if u fail. ( said with a smile)
Swara smiled and hugged her
Swara: Maa m hungry
Shweta:I knew, but thought to leave you with your new food only (pointing towards her nails)
Swara gave her a glare
Shweta: come I’ll give you breakfast (while moving out of the room)
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Sanskar’s side
Sanskar was in his room sitting and reading a book… It’s his habit to divert his mind when there is some tension
He was just killing time anyhow waiting for results
Sanskar’s POV
M reading this book since last two hours… Trying to pass time, m tensed… And tension is obvious… Because this exam is really hard to crack… And no doubt it was very tough… I just hope that I would get admission in some good college… This is the only motive of my life at present…
( He closed his eyes and rested his head back on headrest
His phone buzzed indicating a message is received
He picked it and saw messages on their school group giving best wishes to him and Swara for their result just then it came in his mind that Swara’s result would also come today
He immediately typed a message for her saying ‘best of luck for results’ , unknowingly he waited for her answer as it showed it was delivered on her phone
He was abt to keep the phone back when he got a message from her saying ‘wish you the same Sanskar, don’t worry u will get a good result’
He smiled and wrote ‘u too’ he wanted to talk more but there was nothing to say so he waited for her to say something but she also felt the same and Alas the conversation met its end)
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The result came and both Swara and Sanskar got good marks, Swara got 520 and Sanskar 525… They were unaware abt each other’s marks
for now they were happy with the result as it is difficult to score this much even…
According to their result both got admission in same college but they didn’t know about it
Days passed and the college was going to start in a week…
Swasan were very excited for their new journey… their hard work borne fruit
Swasan’s classmates had planned a get-together today
Swara and her dad were on the way… Her dad had some work nearby so he was going to drop Swara, and would pick when his work would finish
Swara reached the venue while others were already there , Swara hugged her best friend and joined others when her eyes fell on Sanskar, Sanskar also looked at her and both gave a smile… Ignoring his gaze Swara continued talking to others… They were reliving the memories… All were discussing abt the school days… Their masti, jokes, tension for exams…
In between Swasan were stealing glances of each other
There was not any kind of attraction or any other feeling brewing for each other but they were unknowingly thinking abt each other…
*Sometimes our actions don’t sink in pace with our mind and heart*
Same was happening here
While talking they (everyone) discussed abt their respective plans for future where they got to know that both Swasan had cleared the entrance exam…
Swara:Congratulations Sanskar… (Forwarded her hand )
Sanskar: Congratulations to you too Swara (he too extended his hand and shook it with her hand )
An unknown current passed down their spine with this, it is not they r shaking hand for the first time, in so many years of school it happened quite often but don’t know why everything was so different today
They immediately departed their hands
And gave a fake smile while a storm of several unknown feelings was hovering in their minds
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Two and a half hours passed and now every one was set to take a leave, Swara was trying to call her dad but the call was not being received…
Everyone left only Swara and her best friend and Sanskar and his friend were left… They were standing outside the restaurant
At one side Swara was standing with her best friend and a few meters away from her was sanskar
Swara was waiting for her dad when he called and told he is stuck in a meeting and it would at least take half an hour for him to reach there..
Her dad insisted to call her mother from home to pick her but Swara convinced him that she would manage
Cutting the call Swara told this to her friend
She said she would drop her but swara somehow convinced her too that she would manage as her house is in the opposite direction
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Ten minutes passed Sanskar friend had also left by now he moved towards his bike
When he noticed Swara trying to hire an auto rickshaw but they were not ready to go in that direction
Sanskar moved towards her
Sanskar:What happened Swara?
Swara: Woh dad is busy in some work so m trying to hire an auto but none is ready to go
Sanskar:Ohh
(He wanted to ask to drop her but was hesitant to do so)
Sanskar: Ummm shall I drop you
Swara who was looking in other direction for some auto looked towards him
Swara: it’s oky Sanskar I would manage…(said with a smile)
Sanskar :Arey your house is not far from mine… So don’t worry I would not face any problem… And I know you’re thinking this only
Swara: Chalo phir u drop me….(thinking something) but I owe u a favor (said with a smile. )
Sanskar:Yes madam … Don’t worry I’ll ask u something in return someday… Now let’s move fornow
Swara nodded
Sanskar took out his bike from parking
And drove towards Swara, she stared at him for few seconds., thinking how to sit
Sanskar: Swara sit fast, (raised his head and looked towards the sky) see the clouds, it seems it would rain… So we should reach before we get drenched in rain
Swara nodded and leaving her hesitation sat on the bike
Sanskar: Chalein?
Swara:Han, but drive slowly I would fall otherwise
(He started the bike)
Sanskar:I don’t drive at high speed swara, I know speed thrills but kills so don’t worry…!!
Swara:But still!
Sanskar:ummm(hesitates) You do one thing, keep your hand on my shoulder
Swara: You sure..?
Sanskar:Yes I’m
Yeh lamha jo thehra hai
Mera hai ye tera hai
Yeh lamha main jee loon zara
The environment was so cool and shady due to cloud cover…
The breeze was blowing making Swara’s (open) hair to flow and cover her face, she’s was again n again putting them behind her ear but no use …
Tujh mein khoya rahoon main
Mujh mein khoyi rahe tu
Khudko dhoondh lenge phir kabhi
Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haa.. phir kabhi
A smile could been seen on her face, the air was so fresh that it gave a soothing feeling…
While Swara was busy in admiring the nature , Sanskar was enjoying riding the bike in this awesome weather as well stealing glances of Swara
Kyun bewajah gungunaaye
Kyun bewajah muskuraaye
Palkein chamakne lagi hai
Ab khwaab kaise chupaaye
Behki si baatein kar lein
Hans hans ke aankhen bhar lein
Ye behoshiyan phir kahan
The warm hold of her hand on his shoulder arose so many unknown feelings in his heart…he was feeling happy but the reason he himself didn’t know
Swara was also feeling an unknown happiness deep down in her heart…
Initially it was so strange for her to hold him like that but gradually she started feeling good
Both were feeling happy and blissful
Tujhme khoya rahoon main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoondh lenge phir kabhi
Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haa.. phir kabhi
To Be Continued….
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Heya people m here with a new story… It is dedicated to my best friend (no superlative degree of best too) Divyu (Divyanshri)
You’re one of the most special person to me ♥
Love You
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Thank You so much for the response on my OS… I never expected to get such a warm response(especially on Telly Updates)…. It really means a lot♥
Thnk u for reading and do give your feedback here too..!!
Note-M working on LHLH it would be posted soon
70 Comments
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Thnkew dear?
Meeee.Meeeeee.Meeeeeee! Huraaah! Me 1st today! Waaaah, m always ready for this kind of surprise Cutieeeee!! It was so awesome! I remembered my school days! Beautiful!
Loved it sooo much! Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*
Haha Di you’re not first…???
Thnkew so much Kaku Di, really glad to know you liked it ???
Ammmaaaazzzziiinnngggg shreeyuuu just loved it. U made me remembere my school days.I was totally drowned into the story.U had described it very well.
Beautifully written.
Can’t wait to see how swasan love story will initiate.
Plzzzzz post soon.
Thanks take care dear.
Thnkew so much diiii….!!?
Really glad to know you liked it…!!
I’ll post soon..ty
By the way I forgot your name Di, pls tell one again ?
Awww my baby
Soooo cuteee start
All the best
Thnkew so much Simin Di…!!??
Awsm Dr
Thnkew dear…!!???
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Thnkew dear?
Amazingggg ggggg start Doll….
Ummahhh. ..
Loved it…
Vaise.. u r writing it fr VERYYYYYY SPECIAL PERSON, no?
Toh ts toh superhit hona hi hai… kyun? ??
Thnkew Sammy…!!???
Yes, correct Sammy ?
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Thnkew Rimsha Dii…!!?
Awesome dear…
Loved it…
Please post soon…
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I would be posting soon?
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Thnkew dear?
Wow superb sweeto!!!! Loved this ts a lot…. Its very nice…. And u r continuing ur stories well its really nice to hear that!!! Sooper sweeto…. Waiting eagerly….
Thnkew so much Didoo??… Yes Didoo thinking not to discontinue but I really don’t know whether I would be able to give timely updates or not…!!
maateeeee…… love you tooooo yaar….. Such a beautiful surprise without any occasion….. it’s awesome….. thanks alottttttttt…… I am blessed to get you as my best friend yaar…. sacchi…..
coming to the story…… love it….. mind blowing…… continue soon
Haha Divyu, u said thnks not fair, u r yourself breaking the rule… Even m blessed to get you idiot???
Now I will also say thnk u… Thnkewww so much Divyu…!!???
The main purpose was to make you happy and I feel it is accomplished… Love u
amazing..continue soon..tc..
Thnkew Kumu dear?
Loved it dear
Thnkew Dear…!!?
Beautiful I went back to my school days while reading thank u so much for this wonderful ff
Thnkew so much dear… !!! Glad you liked it…!!???
shreeyu I loved it… it was awesome…
Thnkew Adiii…!!???
nice..
Thnkew dear?
achcha hai. romantic hai.
Thnkew dear??
Shreeyu it’s amazing dear loved it post nxt part soon waiting for swasan love story ????
Thnkew so much Alku Di…!!???
Amazing one shreeyu…?
Ur wrtng style chngd lil bit na or its jus me whuz thinkin lyk dis….(*thinkin emoji)
U hve improved alot… na improved is not d exct word… u were good writer bt now it chnged to better or u can say amazing wrtr…?
I loved it…
Simple cute sweet…
Wud love to read fthr so post nxt part ASAP…
Thnkewww so much Diiii…!!! ?
Your words really mean a lot to me…!! I’m very happy to know you liked it!!
I’ll try my best to post soon?
Awesome Shreeyu..!!
Loved it..!!?
Thnkew Mana… Glad to know you liked it??
Amazing…loved it … waiting for next part….!!!
Thnkew dear??? I would post soon 🙂
awesome
Thnkew dear?
Amazing shreeyu!!!!!post soon!!!
Thnkew Yaz Di…!!? I’ll post soon di?
Awesome bacha…loved it. Glad that u r writing this
Thnkew Vyshu Didi???
Glad to know you liked it?
Awesome kiddo…it’s just superb..loved it..
Thnkew MD…!!?
I’m so glad to know you liked it..!!?
Awesome dear
Thnkew Simi dear…!!?
Amazing start Shreeyu… Liked it.
Thnkew dear? glad to know you liked it…!!
Sorry for commenting late???
It was awesome shreeyu??? especially classroom talks btwn swasan and dat idiot?? post nxt part soon dr ?
Arey no need to say sorry Navi Di…!
Thnkew Dii?, haha that was based on real incident actually ???
Glad to know you liked it
I was thinking that classroom incifent as ur story,dat neet preaparations tutions all.. Since u were telling na ur busy… So is it ur experience??? u blurted it?
Lol… No Di..!! I’m not preparing for NEET … Let me complete my school first them I would prepare for it…!!??? But yes that incident is of my computer coaching class… That was really funny so thought y not to add it..!!
Haha okieww ???
Very sweet story shreeyuuu…
Can’t wait for the next!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Thnkew Anjali Di.?.. Really happy to now you liked it…!! I’ll post soon