This FS is inspired from the tamil movie Raja Rani with some twists.The story of this FS is different from the movie.I dedicate this to Shameena who is my friend’s friend.I dedicate this to Shiza who requested me to write on this plot for her friend.
Thank you so much my dearest friend Sydell for this lovely cover page.
An engagement ceremony….
The couple stared at each other.
The boy took the ring to put it on her finger.But she did not show her finger to him.Everyone got confused.
The girl’s father Ashish gave her a pleading look.She nodded emotionally.
She extended her hand towards him.Ashish was relieved.The boy put ring on her finger.
Some flashes of someone putting ring on her finger came into her mind.Her eyes became wet.
She put ring on the boy’s finger too.
They were Omkara and Avni.
Another day…
Omkara and Avni were at the restaurant.
They were looking at each other with irritation.
Omkara:I am not interested in date and all.It’s my parents who forced me to come here.
Avni:Don’t think that I am interested in this date.I came here only because my dad requested me.
Omkara:So our parents planned this date together.
Avni:Exactly.Because they think that we a date will bring us closer.
Omkara:It will never happen.
Avni:I know that.Because we are not meant for each other.
Omkara:When I came to see you in your house itself I noticed that you were not even smiling.
Avni:As if you smiled.
Omkara:Why should I smile when I am not interested in this marriage?
Avni:Even I am not interested.That’s why I did’nt smile.
Omkara:This marriage is only a compromise for me.
Avni:For me too.
Omkara:Glad that you have my thoughts about marriage.So you will not expect anything from me or from our marriage.
Avni:I am also happy that you are not interested in marrying me.So don’t expect anything from me.
Omkara:Done Alina.
Avni:Alina?My name is Avni.
Omkara:Oh!Whatever!Your name starts with A.
Avni:But my name is Avni.Don’t forget it Kara Om.
Omkara:Kara Om?My name is Omkara.
Avni:I said both Om and Kara.Just the position of the words got changed.
Omkara:But still my name is Omkara.
Avni:Ok Fine.It’s so strange that we are engaged,still we don’t even know each other’s name.
Omkara:Ya…right.Because only for others we are each other’s fiance/Fiancee.
Avni:Ya.
Both Avni and Omkara’s parents were sad that they were not getting closer to each other.So they arranged an excursion for Avni and Omkara hoping that it will bring them closer to each other.Omkara and Avni could’nt refuse it as they did’nt want to hurt their parents.But they did not want to go for the picnic alone.So they called their friends to join them.
Avni’s best friend Ali:What is this Avni?How can I come for the excursion which is meant for you and Omkara?It’s like coming between you and Omkara.
Avni:What nonsense!We are not a couple and we will never be a couple.Then why can’t you come with us?I will be alone if you don’t come with me.
Ali became dull.
Ali:I thought you will try to work out this relationship.But you are still in your past.You are not even trying to move on.
Avni said painfully:I can never move on Ali.I prefer to live in my past.
Ali became upset.
Ali:But Omkara…
Avni:He does’nt mind it as he is also not interested in marrying me.
Ali was shocked.
Ali thought:What a strange relationship!Where will this relationship go?Will this excursion close the distance between them?
Omkara’s best friend Agni too came to the picnic spot.
Her foot slipped and she was going to fall down.Suddenly Ali caught her.She caught him tight fir balance.They looked at each other.
Ali:Are you ok?
Agni:Yes.Thank you for saving me.If you had not saved me,the whole excursion would have been ruined.
Ali smiled.
Ali:By the way,I am Ali.Avni’s best friend.
Agni:I am Agni;Omkara’s best friend.
They smiled.Suddenly Ali realized that he was still holding her.He released her.
They smiled slightly.
Gauri and Omkara came.
Ali:Omkara?
Omkara:Yes,I am Omkara.
Ali:Hi..I am Avni’s best friend Ali.
Omkara:Hi.
Agni:Hi Avni,I am Omkara’s best friend Agni.
Avni:Hi Agni.
Agni:You are prettier than I expected.Omkara is lucky.
Omkara and Avni looked at each other with irritation.
Omkara whispered:Don’t think that you will enjoy this excursion.I can’t enjoy with you.
Avni whispered:Even I can’t enjoy with a person like you.So go from my way.
Both turned off their faces and walked away.
They took 2 rooms in a resort.In one room,Avni and Agni planned to stay and the other room was for Omkara and Ali.
They were getting bored.So they gathered together.
Omkara:It’s so boring yaar.
Avni:There is a medicine to get rid of boredom.Ali can sing well.
Omkara:Really?
Agni:That’s cool.Then you sing Ali.
Ali started singing.All of them enjoyed his magical voice.
Agni:You sang so beautifully Ali..better than I expected.
Ali smiled.
Omkara:Really you are fantastic Ali.
Avni:He is the best singer since his childhood days.
Agni:You both are childhood friends too?
Ali:Yes.We studied together in school and college.
Agni:That’s cool.
Omkara was not interested in their talk.
They all went out for a walk.
It started raining.Ali opened the umbrella and kept it above Agni too.
She smiled.
Agni:Thank you so much for being so caring Ali.
Ali smiled.
Ali:Don’t thank me.As a friend,I have to do this for you.
Agni looked at him in disbelief.
Ali:I mean you are my best friend’s fiance’s best friend.So that way we are also friends.Right?
Agni smiled.
They had a sweet walk in the rain under the umbrella.
Omkara imagined romancing a girl in the rain.
Male : Chillena oru mazhai thuli
Ennai nenaikudhae pennae
Siragugal yaar koduthadhu
Nenjam parakudhae munnae
Un vizhigalilae oh ho
Naan vazhgiren pennae
Un kanavugalaah ho
Naan maarinen kannae
Male : Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo
Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo
Female : Ada karupatiyae en cheeni kilangae
Sirichi kavukaadha
En kannukuttiyae kamma karayae
Nee kappal ottaadha
Kannaala paakaama kannaalam pannalaama..
Kai korthu pogalaama ..
Male : Konjam paarthu vidu
Konjam pesi vidu endru
En vizhigal haiyayo ennai thitta
Kodai kaala mazhai
Vandhu pona pinnum
Salaiyoram maram thanaalae neer sotta
Avni imagined romancing a boy in the rain.
Male : Ennai thaakum puyalae
Iravodu kaayum veyilae
Unnaalae unnaalae.. noolilaa
Kaatraadi aanenae
Adi pennae .. adi kannae
Naan vilundhaaal unpadham servenae
Un vizhigalilae oh ho
Naan vazhgiren pennae
Un kanavugalaah ho
Naan maarinen kannae
Male : Kadhal vandhavudan kaichal vandhadhadi
Meendum naan pilaikka
Muthangal tharuvaaya
Kobam kolgailum
Kiranga vaikudhadi meendum orumurai
Nee kobathil paarpayaa
Male : Aalai kollum azhagae
Nizhal kooda aazhagin nagalae
Oru naalummmmm .. mmmmm..
Kuraiyaadhaa ohooo…
Pudhu bodhai kannoram
Thandhaayae
Anaithalum mmm anaiaadha
Oru theyaai nenjoram
Vandhaayae..
Adi idam valamaa
Naan aadinen pennae
Oru idi mazhayaai
Ennai thaakinaai munnae
Male : Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo
Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo(Raja Rani).
They both became emotional.
They ignored each other and walked separately.
13 Comments
Nice Jasmine…Raja Rani is one of my fvrt movie, but I always feels sad when nazriya died. Here please make it a happy movie for everyone. Nice jodies. Agni and Ali are also nice. Did they act together? Avni mistaking omkaras name was funny.
Thanks a lot.Here Nazriya’s character will get a happy ending.Infact all the characters will be happy.I am glad that you liked Ali and Agni too.They acted together in AgniVayu.
Raja Rani movie – I have watched it once and it was so beautiful. Glad that you selected that movie. I haven’t heard about Agnivayu serial. But you are writing , so certainly will read this one. Avni and Omkara are like two poles apart. Even though they can’t love each other I wish they should become good friends. Ali and Agni bonding was so cute and nice. The songs were so matching to situation. Waiting to see what happened to Rikara and Avneil.
Thanks a lot.I have not seen Agni Vayu.But I liked the jodi seeing some clips.They play a supporting pair in this fs.
Hiii … nice my friend .. your ff are the best …
Thank you.
Hiii.. iam Shameena!!!.
Shiza told me that you have accepted to write this story..and thank you soooo much for accepting my request 😊😊. I have read some of your FFS but i was silent reader..😅 and that’s why i dint comment yet..😅. Iam also having interest to write story but i dont have time as of now so i thought to register in telly updates after March and thank you so much for writing this story..☺️
This episode was fantastic..i have no words to say. Actually i have only seen kaira serial and now only i started to see naamkaran and ishqbaaz in hotstar as shiza told that these both serial will be nice and now i became fan of omkara gauri and Avni Niel and thanks for writing on them..🙂🙂.
Even your new entry Agni and Ali scenes were beautiful especially in the rain scene.
Omkara and Avni telling their names wrongly was really funny..😅😅. I liked that part so much..
Both of them recalling their past was emotional 😟.
Omkara and avni’s ignorance towards each other was sad..
Nice episode and thank you so much 😊. You are really an amazing writer..
Thank you very much.
Awesome and very lovely 💖. Omkara and Avni being tough towards each other was sad and i felt bad seeing their condition. Their naming wrongly each other was funny..😂😂. Ali and agni was cute and they entry was really suprising and amazing too.. ali’s dialogue to agni in rain was nice and cute..❤️. Omkara and Avni recalling their love was emotional 🥺. Song was superbb.. pictures were so nice. Waiting eagerly for next episode.. amazing part..
thanks a lot.
Amazing episode! I’ve seen raja rani movie thrice as i really like that movie and Rikara and Avneil are two of my favourite couples…so this really is a treat. Loved Avni’s attitude towards Om but i really hope that they become good friends soon. Actually, when I saw the cover I thought you would pair Gauri and Neil as they were together in sarvagun sampan but I was surprised to see Avni and Om. Loved Agni and Ali’s bonding..Looking forward for the next episode
Thank you so much.Another reader also told me that she thought that the leads were Neil and Gauri.