“I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love “!!
CHAPTER – 10 ….
Soooooo sorry guys …sorry for the late update but what to do I didn’t got time to write the next one …I don’t know whether I will be able it to continue or not as now a days it’s very difficult for me to post it nd making u ppl wait for it ; is not worthful…
Enough of my talks …let’s continue with the episode …
RECAP – Kunj’s realization happiness nd Twinkle’s makes her mind to accept the marriage proposal …
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Continued …
KUNJ’S ROOM..
” I will agree for the proposal …I will agree ” …these words of Twinkle were piercing Kunj’s heart badly as if a spear is rendered in his heart ..He was trying hard to overlook nd not to think of what he heard minutes a go but her words were haunting him …
Kunj speaks to himself ” Calm down kunj ; calm down …nothing will happen ; everything will be fine . She will never leave u ; never ….Babaji knows how much u love her ; how much she matters to u ….don’t worry she just said that she will accept but till now she haven’t accepted it nd I’m sure that she will not get ready for it …
I know Babaji I always made fun of girls nd this pious feeling love …when some says to me that he is in love ; I used to make fun of him ; when any girl expressed her feelings to me I always rejected the acceptance not only this I never paid heed to anyone’s emotions…
But now I realized how much it hurts when the person u love the most ; whom u want to embrace for lifelong do not reciprocate the same feelings for u …
I’m sorry ; I promise Babaji that I will apologize to each nd every girl whom I unknowingly made to suffer pain ; I will kneel before them to seek forgiveness but plzzz don’t make Twinkle to go from my life…I can’t live without her …”
He was weeping inconsolably ….
Yaariyan ve… Yaariyan
Yaariyan ve… yaariyan ve..
Yaariyaan… yaa….
Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa
Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah
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NEXT SCENE ….MORNING..
TWINKLE’S ROOM ….
L- “Twinkle puttar I nd ur papa wants to know what u have thought for the Mrs. Singh proposal …”
Rt-” Puttar I inquired about his son ..nd their family also nd I had received a good response for them …They r having a good reputation in Mumbai nd U know my princess for every parents it is the dream to see her daughter getting married …starting her new life nd so we have for u also …”
T-” Maa ; papa ; r u ppl happy with the proposal ? R u ppl ready to accept it ?
L-” Yes …we r ready for it but if u r not ready we will not pressurize u …we will say no to them . U just say whatever u have in ur heart ; don’t worry we both r their to support u in ur decision”
T-” I’m ready ….I’m ready for the marriage ..say yes for it ”
Both Leela nd Rt were happy that she agreed for it ….They both hug her …nd kissed her forehead …
L- ” Chaliye ji ye khushkhabri sabko bata dete hai ( come let’s give this good news to everyone ) …
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NEXT SCENE …KUNJ’S ROOM …
Ta- ” kunj open the door of ur room ….see it’s 10 AM nd still u r sleeping ….Come out ”
B-” I don’t know why I feel something wrong …nd see kunj he is also not answering us ..I’m very worried for him”
While they were knocking Kunj came out of his room ..
His eyes were swollen badly ; blo*dy red ; his hairs not combed ; his face was depicting the pain nd misery he is suffering with ….as he cried whole night long …
Ta- ” Kunj what happened to u ? R u fine ? My God just look at ur condition once …it seems that u haven’t slept for the whole night nd ur eye’s they r so swollen …did u cried?
Kunj was standing their all numb ….while Tanya nd Bebe were in tears seeing him ..They were not able to perceive the reason of his such state..
Ta -” For God sake kunj speak up ; I’m asking u something …don’t behave like a jerk …u stupid ass what u think u will not say anything nd we will worry …I beg u speak ..” ..she was crying badly holding Kunj’s shoulder ….
Hearing Tanya’s sobbing he came back to his senses ….
K-” Di !! Don’t cry I’m fine …nothing has happened …I’m fine ..Some dust particle went in my eyes nd rubbed it ; just bcoz of that my eyes r swelled ..”
He cleared the tears from her face …
Tanya was about to speak when Leela called them from the back ….
L-” Bebe ; Tanya ; kunj ….it’s good that u all r present over here ; actually I want to tell u all one good news ”
B-” Leela ji ; what good news ? ”
L-” Good news ….infact the best news …
Nd the news is that Twinkle said yes for the proposal …she is ready for marriage ”
Listening this all the three were hell shocked ….nd looked at eo
Both Bebe nd Tanya speaks ” What ? Ready for marriage ? How come ? This is not possible …”
L-” Why ? Why not possible ? R u both not happy with this news ?”
B-” No Leela ji ; we r extremely happy ..wo we didn’t expected Twinkle to get ready so soon ; it’s like a surprise for us ”
L-” Yes I was also very surprised by her sudden acceptance but she is ready nd today we will call Mrs Singh nd say yes nd will ask her to decide the day for engagement ..”
Kunj was thunderstrucked …he felt as if the ground will collapsed nd he will be buried in it ….he was trying hard to control his emotions …his tears but was unable to control them nd without uttering any word he left the place nd proceeded to his room …
While Leela nd Rt were confused seeing him while Bebe nd Tanya were having hint regarding his sudden outburst of his weird behavior …
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After sometime he comes out from his room nd sees everyone busy in congratulating Twinkle ..He moves towards her ..
K-” Congrats Twinkle ” …his voice was trembling nd words were choked in his mouth but still he tried nd spoke those two words to her
T-” Finally my best frnd urff Kunj got time to wish me …I thought u will not do so .
I don’t know since yesterday u r behaving weird ; u r not talking with me nd now also the way u r wishing me is so plain …no happiness …no smile on ur face . At least wish me with a jolly face not with ur Saadu face …..kunj I think u want to say something to me ; if their is something then do tell me ”
Kunj’s POV …..
” I wanted to convey many things to u …my love for u …my carve for u …my feelings for u ..my emotions for u ….my feelings nd pain to lose u …
But I’m so feeble to tell u all this . See when I was not having such emotions for u I used to blabber so much in front of u but today see how my destiny is making fun of me ; today I want to pour out myself but I’m not able to do so …”
Kunj was lost in his thoughts while Twinkle snapped her fingers before him ..
T-” See again u r lost in ur own world …I’m asking u something nd u r not replying to it …U r my frnd so u have to do something to make me feel special as very soon I’m going to start my new life …”
K-” U want me to do something for u …OK I will ; just wait nd watch …This Kunj Sarna can do anything for u ..”
He takes guitar in his hand nd announced …” Pay attention everyone ….I’m going to sing song for my bestie Mr Twinkle Taneja as a token of congrats for my side …
While Twinkle was extremely delighted to see Kunj like this …..
Kunj thinks..” I hope that the song I’m going to sing will make u understand my feelings indirectly as once u only said that if in future I want to propose a girl I should try out this one to express myself …”
He closed his eyes nd remembered his beautiful moments with her nd starts to sing song …” Bol do an Zara”…
Throughout the whole song he was eyeing Twinkle lovingly …but our Siyappa queen didn’t understand the hidden feelings of him behind the song ….
Song ends ….nd everyone claps …
After sometime Twinkle ; Leela nd Rt got ready to leave for airport as they were having flight for Amritsar …
They were bidding adieu to everyone …
T- ” Kunj it was nice meeting u ….I’m happy that I got a frnd like u …see u soon …I hope u will come for my engagement to Amritsar.”
K-” No I will not ….I will not come as I can’t see u going far from me ”
Twinkle was confused with his reply …while Leela told her to sit in the car as they were running short of time..
T-” What he was trying to say ? He will not come as he will can’t see me going far from him ….but why …?”
Car started to speed up while Kunj feels that with every seconds his heartbeat was increasing ..he feels like as if his breath is going away from him …
Kunj murmurs ” Plzzz stop …plzzz don’t go …don’t leave my hand …If my love for u is genuine then one day u will surely realize my love for u …I LOVE U ….I LOVE U MORE THAN MY LIFE ..”…..tears were gushing from his eyes…
Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha
Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa
Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah
After sometime kunj also left for airport to go back to Bangalore…
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NEXT SCENE …BANGALORE AIRPORT.
Uvi – ” Yrr where is this kunj …his flight has came half nd hour back only then where he is? ”
He enquired to help center at airport nd got to know that he left his luggage at the airport nd went away nd told them that he will come tomorrow to take his luggage ..
Uvi -” Yrr had he gone mad …where did he went away leaving his luggage behind here nd he didn’t wait for me to receive him …I told him that I will come ..
It’s raining so heavily outside …I have to find him soon …something went wrong with him as I able to judge in his voice at mobile ”
On the other side kunj was wandering around the road ….nd was crying so badly nd the way rain was pouring down looks as if heaven is also crying along with him …
Tu jo mila
Toh zindagi hai badli
Main poora naya ho gaya
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa
Milne ko tujhse, bahaane karun
Tu muskuraaye, wajah main banun
Roz bitaana saath mein tere, saara din mera
Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah
Finally Uvi finds him kneeling down on the road nd crying …He runs to him ..
U-” kunj u here ? What r u doing here ? U r crying but why ?”
He hugs him …nd consoled him
Kunj hugs him back very tightly …
” Uvi everything is finished …nothing is left ..
The day I realized my feelings the very same day I felt the pain of heartbreak …Why Uvi …why with me ?
She was going away from me nd I was so helpless to stop her …very soon she …my love …will be called as wife of some other person …U cheated me ..u told me the positive sides of love but u didn’t told me about the negative one …U didn’t told me how much it hurts …How will I be able to live without her ….”
Uvi cries along with him ….
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To be continued….
PRECAP – Twinkle’s engagement…
So tell me was I able to portray Kunj’s breakdown properly or not ?
Whether I’m able to compensate my gaps woth long episode ?
RiaA MendezZ tell me r u able to connect urself with Hindi lyrics of song ; if not then tell me I will try to convert them to English one …
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68 Comments
Sorry Shona Mona tumhe rulane ke liye ….
I’m soooo happy that u were able to connect urself to Kunj’s emotion…
Nd yes tumhari request plus dhamki accepted…. lollzzz…
Love u sooo much …keep supporting ..
hey sayeeda its awesome dear nice episode i liked it a lot
Thanks Fatarajo for ur comment…
I’m happy that u liked it…
Keep supporting dear…
Soorrryyyy for making u wait for so long par next wala kal pakka post hoga….promise..
Zikrrooo tumhare comment Inna cute hota hai ke main padhte time smile krti rehti hoon r wo bhi badi wali smile….
I’m so blessed to have u in my life nd happy that u liked the episode… plzzz jaldi se registered karwalo apne aapko I want to chat with u …
Love u tooooooo my sis….love u 100000000000000000……..
Romaisah I’m happy that u were able to sense his pain…
Nd I will never disappoint u ppl…I know now it’s hard time for kunj but trust me that dark clouds will remove soon..
Yes dear whatever is the case I will always find time for u ppl ….
Love u ….keep supporting
kunj breakdown scenes were described well
and i am ok with gaps dear
epi was emotional one
Thanks Apoorwa…..I’m glad that u liked the breakdown scenes..
Keep supporting….. love u
osm sayeeda sry fr cmnting sooo late bt sidmin seprated i hp dey ll soon meet n unite in ur ff