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I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 1

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Hello friends this is Rhimjhim here. I have been writing the ff for Mastaangi recently and today I am going to start an all-new ff of Krishnadasi which is my must to watch serial. So without wasting much time let’s start the story.

The clouds have covered the sky. There is thunder and lightning in the sky. A lady is seen running on the road holding a baby in her arm accompanied by another lady who is elder than the first one. They are followed by a group of villagers with torch in their hands. They are shouting at them like dacoits.
Villagers: dare not u come back to this village ever… we don’t have place for sinners like u…….
The two ladies are seen running and running. They are getting short of breath but they are running. Suddenly the older one trips and falls.
Old lady: auuch…
First lady: aayi….. careful… get up run…..
Old lady: u run Tulsi…. I am coming …. Don’t stop… if they get u they will kill u…. run….
And the lady again starts running. The old lady gets up and follows her daughter. Rain starts pouring into the village as they are running. It seemed as if the Gods themselves were crying at the sight of inhumane nature. And then suddenly everything turned dark. There was no trace of the two ladies and that baby. The villagers lost their track and returned back tired of the inhumane chasing.

21 years later:-
Pune:
A beautiful girl is seen doing aarti of Krishna and chanting ‘Krishnaye Govindaye Namo Namaha ’. She turns and her face is revealed. It seemed as if the winds are playing with her hair as it flew in rhythm with the wind.
Girl: Aayi….. aarti done….
The lady comes out who was seen running with a baby 21 years ago. Her name is Tulsi.
Tulsi: Aaroo… have u seen ur Aaji…
A lady comes chanting ‘Krishnaye Govindaye Namo Namaha’. She is Tulsi’s aayi and Aaroo i.e. Aaradhya’s aaji, Kumudini.
Kumudini: Aaroo… good morning…
Aaroo: good morning aaji…. Where were u???
Kumudini: I went to Mrs. Mishra’s house….
Tulsi: so early…
Kumudini: they had puja in their hose Tulsi….
Tulsi: oh….
Aaroo: ok Aayi… I am getting late for college… I will come late today… we friends are going out for one of my friend’s birthday party…
Tulsi: ok take care…. Bye…
Aaroo: bye….

College:
Aaradhya comes to the college and waves to someone. A girl comes and hugs her.
Girl: hi Aaroo…
Aaroo: hi Shivani… how r u???
Shivani: I am fine…
Aaroo: and ur Varun…
Shivani [shyly]: he is also fine….
Aaroo: aaa… blushing haaaa….
Shivani: Aaroo….
Aaroo: ok leave… we need to attend our classes…. Come…
As Aradhya hastily walks she collides with a boy and the boy falls down.
Aaroo: I’m so sorry… r u ok….
Boy: don’t u have eyes… can’t u see… blind girl….
Aaroo: oh hello… I am saying sorry na….
Boy: this is nice… first make mistakes then say sorry…. Nice system….
Aaroo: forget it… I don’t have much time to argue with u…..
Boy : me too…
They part their way only to meet in future. After Aradhya leaves another boy comes running.
Boy2: Aryan r u ok…..
Aryan: yes… mad girl….
Boy2: who????
Aryan: that girl with ur girlfriend…. Varun forget it….
Varun: u mean Aaradhya….
Aryan: oh….so her name is Aradhya….
Varun: yes she is Shivani’s best friend….
Aryan: what sort of friends Shivani has yaar… dinosaur type….
Varun: what???
Aryan: nothing… lets go… or we will missing our classes…
Varun: yaaa…..
And the two goes to attend their classes which are same as Aaradhya and Shivani’s.

Hope u guys liked the story. Plzz let me know….. and plzzz drop ur valuable comments.

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5 Comments

  1. Tanu on May 9, 2016 1:29 am

    its nice Rimjhim keep going. ??

  2. Meena on May 9, 2016 11:13 am

    the title itself attracting..continue yar

  3. gopika on May 9, 2016 1:13 pm

    nice ff please continue Rhimjhim

  4. Twinkle on May 10, 2016 12:27 am

    Nice very nice

  5. Roma on May 12, 2016 10:14 pm

    Awesome start…just loved it rimjhim….very interesting story plz continue dear. ..love you loads

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