The Captives – Five Shots
Chapter 5: Last Update
A/N: Thank you to everyone who commented previously on this story. You people have always managed to make me smile and make this journey although a really small one memorable yet again. Well, I do feel a bit nostalgic thinking about no FFs right at the moment, but I assure you all to come back if I’ve an idea.
In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here’s the link below:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/captives-five-shots-ria-chapter-4/
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Two weeks had passed away since the incident at godown. Mahi and Kunj had been admitted to a hospital immediately and were treated for about a week. The families rejoiced upon knowing that their two children, Mahi and Kunj had been alive since the past two years. They rushed to the hospital when Twinkle let them know everything that had been happening since the last two years.
Yuvraj was admitted in the hospital as well for taking out the bullet. He was left within a day as the injuries caused were minor and it could be treated with unprofessional aid as well. Yuvraj had asked for forgiveness from both the families who had been considering him to be the mastermind of all the plans. The families forgave him on learning about everything that he had done for Twinkle, Kunj and especially Mahi. They were happy upon the fact that Mahi had chosen him as her better half because they couldn’t have expected anyone else to be better.
Anita Luthra had been sentenced to life imprisonment. She had been proven guilty of making an attempt of two murders, kidnapping, bribing the hospital staff, shifting a patient out of the hospital and changing the medical reports. Tanejas and Sarnas were happy upon learning the legal action taken by the court.
Yuvraj did feel bad for his mother, Anita Luthra, but he admitted that his mother was the one who was at fault and she deserved the actions that had been taken against her. He broke all the ties with his mother and told her not to face him ever again. Anita Luthra pleaded him to listen to her for once telling him that she could justify herself, but Yuvraj was least interested in her explanations and asked the police constables to take her away from the front of his eyes before he would lose his control and end up doing something which might lead to a worse death. Anita Luthra being disowned by her only son painfully walked away from there with the police constables and got into the police jeep.
Kunj and Mahi had been grandly welcomed to Sarna and Taneja mansion respectively. Yuvraj stood behind witnessing their welcoming ceremonies and later walked towards the Lauthra mansion to provide himself a shelter. The Sarnas immediately stopped him and asked him to stay with them. They apologised for the mistakes they had committed in the last two years and seeked a chance to rectify them. Yuvraj smiled and asked them not to let their past affect the present which had the hopes of living a peaceful and happy life.
Amidst all this excitement and happiness, everyone had completely forgotten to tell Kunj about his daughter, Kaira. Kunj rejoiced upon learning about his daughter and couldn’t bear his excitement to meet her little daughter being in hospital. Everyone calmed him down and told him that her daughter would be happier if she saw her father fit and fine.
Kunj’s happiness knew no boundaries when he took his little daughter in his arms. He looked at her tiny hands and toes and couldn’t believe the fact that he had turned a father now. He promised Kaira that he would never let anything happen to her or affect her even if it was at the cost of his life. Twinkle who had been silently observing and enjoying the current scene quickly shut Kunj and asked him not to speak like this ever again. Kunj smiled and engulfed her into a tight hug with their daughter in his arms. He promised never to speak like this ever again making Twinkle smile.
A month later, Yuvraj and Mahi got married following all the rituals and legally too. The couple was very happy thinking that their dream which had seemed next to impossible had finally come true. They were married on their parents’ will and nothing could’ve been better than this. The elders showered their blessings on the couple for a happy, married life and wished them luck for the this new phase of their life. Mahi and Yuvraj thanked all their elders and Yuvraj promised Leela, Mahi and Twinkle’s mother to always keep Mahi safe and happy. What better could’ve a mother asked for her own child!
The day after Mahi and Yuvraj’s marriage, the day of their reception, Twinkle had been trying out different suits to see which fits her the best. She asked Kunj who had been busy in the laptop the entire morning to help her out in selecting the outfit that she could probably wear in the evening. Kunj told her to select a dress which ever she likes as her choice was the best. Twinkle smiled at the beginning, but soon she realised that Kunj had just told her so because he wanted to concentrate and complete his work.
Twinkle stood beside Kunj and complained about his casual behaviour towards her. She complained that he hadn’t been giving her the attention she deserved and told that it would’ve been better if she had married someone else in the last two years when all the family members tried forcing her. Kunj immediately closed his laptop and pulled her on to his lap. He told her that she could be either his or no one else’s. Twinkle smiled to herself seeing him jealous and told him that he better not try convincing her because it wouldn’t work. She told him to stay away from her and pushing him she got up.
She walked away, but before she could continue with the rest of her works he cornered her to the wall and asked her what had she been complaining about all this time. Twinkle frowned and told him that’s she was really serious and should’ve married someone else. Kunj kissed her cheeks and before she could speak anything he kissed her. Twinkle responded back with equal passion and the two of them pulled back after a while. Kunj pulled her closer to himself making her smile and the two of them intently looked at each other. ‘You’re the captive of my heart’, was everything he expressed which made her blush and both of them hugged each other tightly to never let the other one go.
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Regards,
Ria
67 Comments
Hi Ria, sorry yaar jyada late ho gayi….. well what to say about this ss… it was superhit blockbuster epi…. loved each n every scene of this…. uv’s changed behaviour n his love confession for mahi n twinj scene n the dialoges everything was perfect n heart touching…. but I’m sad it ended… kaash ye ss na hokar ff hota…. well I hope you’ll come back with new ff….
Love you…. take care
“Shalini/Neha”
Hey Neha di,
Thank you so much! I’m really glad that you liked this story and all the scenes. I couldn’t wished for anything else! Well, I’ll try coming back with a FF soon because I already have an urge to write something pretty soon so, let’s see.
Love you back?
ohhhhhhhhhhhh god ria………………..
wat u know dis is excitment yr……..
i mean speechless ohhhh god yr it was beautiful damn goodness
it was amazing story one could imagine like i am stunned loved d story soooooooo much
i wis it would hv been d continuing stry if tei had to go off air……
loved it 2 core awesome fabulous dear… 😀
a bit sad it ended bt srsly sooo beautifully portrayed dat it seemed to me i was watching tei aftr months aftr my kunj’s death.. 😀
lov u lods♥♥♥
Hey Baby,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this story. Well, frankly, this story was actually a thought how I’d wished TEI could’ve ended, bhmut the idea struck my mind a bit late. Anyway, I’m happy that you enjoyed the story.
Love you back?
Riaaaaa
I’m sorry.
I’m late.
Really, u ended these shots without me.
Never mind.
U know the reason for me being late, Right?
Whatever.
Come back with something soon.
I’ll be waiting.
Loves..
Hey Meeta,
Darling, please don’t be so sorry. I know why you’re late and I completely understand your part. I hope you enjoyed this story?
I’ll try coming back with something soon because I already feel like writing something and presenting it before you all so, let’s see.
Love you back?
Hey guys,
Thank you so much for your constant support and love throughout! I couldn’t have asked for anymore. Moreover, the fact that you all enjoyed this story makes me feel glad. This story was merely thought of how I thought Tashan-E-Ishq could’ve ended. Even though the idea struck me pretty late, but I’m happy you all liked and enjoyed the idea.
Also, I might end up coming back with another story soon whether an SS or FF and all the credit goes to you all. I couldn’t help thinking about another story seeing your encouraging support guys. Thank you so much for love guys!
Loads of love,
Ria