The Captives – Five Shots
Introduction
This story begins four years after Kunj was shot dead by Anita in Goa. The plot revolves around two people who are held captive in a secretive place which no one knows about. These two people have been held captive for the past two years and all this while their families have only grieved about their death.
Everyone suggests you to move on after a person’s death but, is it really so easy? Not everything changes with time and similarly, even the families of the captives couldn’t move ahead in life. Nothing has changed for these families since the past two years except for the absence of these captives and the miseries which have come upon them.
So, who are the captives and why are they held captive? Is there any motive of captivating them? If yes, then what is the reason behind all this which separates these two captives from their families?
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Hello, everyone! Okay, firstly don’t think how many articles am I writing at a time.? Frankly, I’ve too many short stories coming up in my mind and I’m picking up the best one that I feel is this.
Anyways, I’d be completing this story and “I Love You” (Comeback) by the end of this month and then, I won’t have anything to write as I don’t have any ideas for another fan fiction.??
Well, let me know your views on this idea. I’ll surely continue if you all want me to but, ofcourse not if you all don’t like the plot. So, drop down your views and suggestions below to help me know about your opinions. Suggestions and criticisms are always welcome as they’ll help me improve but, no abusive language.
Best regards,
Ria
56 Comments
Hello, everyone!
Sorry for the error. At the beginning, instead of four years it’ll be two years. Hope you all understand.?
Another surprise Ria. I keep on getting surprise after surprise from u and im loving it ? This seems really interesting and I cant wait to read it. Please cont it soon!
Hey Sara,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this surprise and the plot. I’d be continuing with this first and “I Love You” (Comeback) later as I feel there are more votes for this.
The first would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Wow o wow ria…..so interesting yaar…pls pls pls….post soooooon
Ritz I.
Can u please upload your FF Soon?
Hey Ritzi…!!…kaisi hai?
Chal I have something important to spread..
Check the msg below from crazy di and agar time ho then spread it out? on Tei TU page…
I have a Message for TEI Twinj and Twiraj fans….
Hai all crazy here with something interesting
All u need to do is nominate urself
But for what and all i ll tell you all later but i need 2more people help in it
So who wanna help me ? Just let me know
N now here it cms
This section z for awards on the ff os ss written on TEI?
ALL U need to do is register urself for the award ceremony
Now question comes how will u do it hai na?
Well v shall do it for you
But but u shd all do is
Either msg me r mail me your name and ur ff os ss name
Or message Lovely
Last date for registering yourself is the Wednesday
And by Thursday r Friday ll post d final nominees
Categories are given below
?FANFRICTIONS -FF ?
1)Emotional
2)Horror
3)Comedy
4)Action
5)Romance
6)Family Drama
7)Friendship
8)Revenge
?SHORT STORIES -SS?
2)Romantic
3)Friendship
4)General
?ONE SHOT -OS?
1)Inspiring Stories
2)Friendship
3)Emotional
D best of all category z
?ALL ROUNDER ?
SO GUYS HERE ARE D CATEGORY
No bashing
Stay positive
And these are for both Twinj n Twiraj Fans
#CrazyNTeam
shreya can u send ur e-mail Id through tu private message as I m nt able to message through tu private message…
Shreya, ask Crazy to check Zai’s ff where she had commented. I’ve told her the names.
Ff titled as – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
OS titled as – A lie that helped your lust take over your love.
Also, thank you for reading this.?
Hey Ritzi,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this. I’ll be continuing this soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
riu darlo…do write..good start..wonderful
Hey Arundhati,
Thank you so much, darling! I’m glad you liked it.
I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Wow its an amazing concept.. its fabulous.. i guess one of the captive is Kunj.. not sure.. I’ve got no idea abt the othet captive.. looking forward to read the first part ❤❤
Hey Sidvee,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the concept. Let’s see who are the captives. As said before, my mind is a nasty one and idk when it’ll cook up things.??
Anyway, I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Hello ria awesome plot I think who are in they are yuvi and twinkle and who had captive them is kunj to the motive wit revenge from both
Hey Sohi,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the plot. Well, let’s see who are the captives and whether there’s a motive behind it or not.
I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Unique plot yaar…
Cnt soon
Hey Maggi di,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the plot. I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Riaaaaa
Yayay.
I told u are a bag of surprises.
But, why end I love you so Soon?
I hope you extend it Somehow?
Loads of love ♥♥
Hey Meeta,
Thank you so much, darling! I’m glad you liked this.
Well, I told before starting itself that “I Love You” (Comeback) is a series of six chapters. I’m so sorry baby but, I won’t be continuing it any further.
Anyway, the first chapter of this shall soon be updated. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
awesome interesting…eagerly waiting for next part
Hey Purnima,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you found this interesting.
Well, I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Wowwwwww it’s awesome ??
Lovely. Ria i am waiting for it. Post soon??
Love u?
Hey Chiku,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this.
I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Hey ria di,
That’s how u greet ri8 !!!!!!well was jst copying u…
Wooowwww …..well before I tell about plot …first u tell me how will u complete ur all the articles.. . ???
Well whatever be it , awesome plst.. completely different… waiting for it..nd post ur ff even PLSSSS…I’m waiting..
Love u
Hey Adya,
Badmaash, Mera copy kar rahi hai? Chal nikal yahan se..
Bola tha na maine ki nahi sochna how many stories am I writing at the same time?? Chal, never mind. Nahi likhti hoon ye phir..?
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the introduction but, you’re telling not to continue this so, no updates of this.??
Loads of love.❤
Arrrreeele u cook up ur own things ri8 ?
Bhul gyi !!!!! Arre cont Krne ke liye bolna…
Bt what does that mean hnn ????…huh…bacho se glti nhi hoti Kya ??
Bahut smart reply tha …lekin cont to Krna padega….u know…. THAT’S MY ORDER. …..Kyuki in San matters me Mai request nhi krti ???
CONTINUE SOON….
ab kroge n ap…ya Aur order Dena padega ???
Hope so no !!
Jldi se post kr do….ORDER yaad h n..
Loads of love from me too
Jo hukum aakaar!! I’ll be continuing this soon. Do stay tuned.
Oyeeee hoeee again a new surprise
Baby doll tu to jhatke pe jhatka dete jaa rahi h??
But i love ur jhatkas
???
Jaldi jaldi post karna ok
Love u loads
???❤❤
Heya Baby doll,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this.
Acha laga kya? Chal, I’ll be back with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Hey ria Awesome intro loved it n seems to be very intresting really can’t wait pldsss asap Loved it N love u
Hey Ramya,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this and found it interesting.
Well, I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Wowwwww!!! Mar gyi!!! This is sooo interesting!!! Who are the captives?????
Kunj…aur??? Cont soon! I want to know?
Hey Ayu,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this and found it interesting. Let’s see who the captives are.
I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Oh my God…Matlab…Jaan nikalne wali jaan mili hai mujhe 😉 No yaar seriously 🙂 You are always back with a bang 🙂 And you always rock and this concept is like WOW! Just can’t wait to read the next part…I guess one of the captive is Kunj and the other one…………………………
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Love ya!
Heya Zuha,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this concept. Aiyyo. This was a lot!! Itna bhi acha nahi hote hain mere stories. But, thank you!!
Let’s see who are tha captives. You can’t tell me everything here..come on!!??
Anyway, I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Ria, have u read my FFs?? I guess not .. No worries u may be busy 🙂 But please do read them 🙂 Also your stories are always rocking 🙂 Yeah I will be tuned for ur update 😉
Hey Zuha,
I’m done reading Tashan E Shaadi. Wait a bit for the season 2 ff as I missed out a bit in the middle so, I’m left to catch up with it. Hope you’d understand.
Loads of love.❤
Yeah that is perfectly fine also I caught up with you KRPKAB FF and also commented. Also while reading your that FF I was counting the number of FFs you write and was this girl is matlab … You rock girl!! MUUUUAAAAAHHHH ?????? And look I am your friend right? So I can understand dear 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
~Jaan
Loved it 🙂 Please start soon sorry for not commenting on the 2nd episode of your comeback But Khya karu was going to leave TU but I guess I am addicted to it 🙂 Post soon 🙂
Hey SidMin,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this. Okay, please don’t leave TU. We can’t afford to lose everyone out here.
I’ll be continuing with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
IDIOT,
Man, that was really the first thing that striked my mind. How many articles can you write man? But this was extremely great! Like dayum gurl, this was just so good! I am so excited for the next shot! Hope you write it soon and don’t keep me waiting.
Lots and lots of love ❣️
Heya Stupid,
I miss you, baby! Like, legit! I can’t imagine we didn’t talk much today.
Anyway, pata tha tere dimag mein aayega isiliye likha.? Anyway, thank you so much, baby! I’m glad you liked the concept.
Now, when you say that you’re waiting for the next and I shall not keep you waiting then, surely I should.?? I shall keep you waiting till the end of times.?
Just kidding. I’ll be back with the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
I miss you too ?
Hey ria I told you na that you will surely get new ideas and see here you are with a unique and interesting plot…damn excited for the first episode…try posting soon…
Love you ???
Hey di,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the concept.
Well, as told before, this is just a series of five chapters and not a ff. Hope the confusion is cleared.
By the way, I’d be updating the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Awesome
Thank you so much, Paavu!?
wwwwoooowwww… ria yaar…hw do manage to write so well… the idea is so unique… I guess the captives are kunj and uv… it’s just a guess… so plz do post soon
Heya Tamanna,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the idea. Well, let’s see who are the captives. You all can’t be guessing everything so soon. Come on!! What will I do then??? Just kidding.
I’ll be updating the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
luv the intro.Too gud.awesom plus fab epi.N sorry for not commenting on ur ff I love u.Forgive me.
Lots of luv,
twinj/aakriti
Hey Akriti,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked the plot. Well, it’s alright. I do understand that you were busy elsewhere. You don’t need to be sorry.
Loads of love.❤
Wow yarrrr Ria tu to ideas ki dukan nikli…. matlab itne idias… aur wo bhi ek saath….. salute u yarrrr…… well its interesting, awesome n uniq plot….. I really loved it…… pls do continue soon…. I’m eagerly waiting for it….. post ur ff too….
♥Lots of love ♥
“Shalini/Neha”
Hey Neha di,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this. Acha, ab aap bhi meri itni tareef mat karo. Itne bhi ache nahi hote mere stories aur ideas.
Anyway, I’ll be updating the first chapter soon. Do stay tuned.
“I Love You” (Comeback) would be continued in a matter of time as I’m first going to continue with the first chapter of this. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤
Wow…..ria lovely ….would to read it…..sorry for late comment
Heya Rashi,
Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this. You don’t need to be sorry for commenting late. As said, late comments are completely welcome.
Well, the first chapter of this would be updated soon. Do stay tuned.
Loads of love.❤