” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff”…..
Before going ahead with the episode… I want to request u all one thing..
Guy’s I know now a days it’s a trend to comment on ff for not supporting the ff writers but to bash them….
Many of ff writers r constantly facing the bills hit from many egg headed nd dumb ppl….
They say that we don’t know how to write a story… We come here to eat their heads…. What a joke yrr ???
Only these Basher’s have mind nd a very brainy.. Then what about the hundred of supporters who r praising nd supporting us…
Problem is not in our writing… Problem is in ur mindset.. When u ppl don’t have respect of anyone’s feelings ; then who the hell to told u to waste ur time on reading our ff’s…
Specially u BHAVIKA…. I had never in my life meet such a person who is so emotionless that for you no one’s feelings matter…
I don’t know dear what problem u have with me nd my religion… But let me tell u I’m educated one… My manners taught me to respect everyone even a heart less person like u…
I still regard u as my frnd as u made me aware that In today’s world their r many persons like u… That day also I told u that if u respect ur religion so from next time u won’t be commenting nd bad mouthing about my religion.. But still u did so… U proved that u don’t respect ur own religion.. Then how can I think that u will respect mine…
Whatever bad language’s u used for me.. Though I can use the same for u but If I do so then what will the difference between u nd me…. I will not say anything to u but I will keep patience nd my patience will be awarded in front of God…..whether it’s my Allah or ur God… Nd no one can challenge the justice done by God… Nd I don’t need to prove u how much beautiful is my religion as it is million times far better from ur thinking..
Thanks for making me believe all this…I know u will surely comment again…
Nd forever fan of Twinj…. U called me Di nd the very next moment u said so bad… U made fun of the relations…. I agree I’m the worst writer but still many ppl r their to love me….my strength is my Allah nd till the time he is with me no one can harm me.. Thanks to u too….
Now finally my readers… U guys know yesterday I made my mood not to continue with my ff further…. But then I realised that coz of some ppl who don’t have any other work in life rather to bash other’s ; I can’t break hearts nd hope of my readers who loves me nd always support me …..
But guys I just want to request u all from today we all get united nd don’t pay any heed to such comments…. Coz these ppl only want attention… If they really feel that we write bad then why the hell they don’t start writing nd prove themselves…
If from next time if we find their comment on any ff then let’s just not reply back… Plz guys do support me…….
Thanks to TU for helping me out….
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LET’S START WITH THE EPISODE…
NEXT DAY…. TWINJ MARRIAGE DAY…
Twinkle is in her room nd thinking about the yesterday’s incident nd Kunj’s behaviour…
TWINKLE’S POV….
” Since yesterday I’m feeling as if I did blunder by not trusting kunj… Why my heart is carrying the guilt that whatever I did with him at the time of Chinki’s case was wrong… Again nd again my instinct is telling me that he is innocent… That day when he was begging me to believe him was right.. Now I’m thinking he was right… The way he hugged me yesterday made me realise his pain …. Why I feel an unknown bond with him… Till now whatever he did with me didn’t happened with his permission but he did all that under some pressure… Why I’m not able to hate him today….my heart is screaming at the top of its voice to trust him….
What should I do…. Hope one or the other day I get my all questions… My confusions answered.. “……
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NIGHT…. TWINJ MARRIAGE…
Twinj is present at the altar for exchanging vows….
Twinkle is constantly gazing kunj but he is not making any sort of eye contact with her….
Twinkle thinks..” Till yesterday I was not ready to be called as ur wife but now I promise u that I will fulfill my duties being ur wife… I promise to kill the beast inside u…. “…. She smiles…
Seeing her smiling kunj is baffled…he thinks” What the hell is wrong with her…. Her face is having a bright smile on it…. How can she be happy knowing that she is getting married to a beast like me ; a person who always tortured her…. May be she is in shock nd don’t know how to react or she is trying to befool me.. Or she is planning some thing big to take revenge from me… ”
Finally priest declare them as husband nd wife…
Twinkle’s biddai takes place… But Leela nd Rt didn’t blessed her nd kunj… She was very hurt seeing the rude side of her parents..
Leela -” Now finally we got freedom from a inauspicious daughter like u… From now we r dead for u nd u r dead for us… Throughout ur whole life u will crave for true love Twinkle nd till ur last breathe u won’t be able to get it.. “..
Twinkle started to sob harder but kunj holds her hand nd entwined their fingers…
K-” U don’t worry aunty…. From today she is my responsibility…. She will surely get true love in the form of her husband’s love… My love for her will heal her sadness… She will never miss u both as I will always be beside her side to support her… To care for her… ”
Twinkle is touched by his sympathetic word’s..
Kunj makes her sit in the car nd they both leave for Kunj’s house…. While the whole way long kunj didn’t utter a word to Twinkle…
KUNJ’S HOUSE… TWINJ ROOM..
( Guy’s Kunj’s parents died in plane crash nd he only have his sister Mahi in his life… She don’t stays with him as she is working at Mumbai..)
Twinj enters the room…
K-” Twinkle u freshen up nd after that sleep peacefully in this room… Good night.. ”
He starts to move out of the room when Twinkle calls him…
T-” Kunj…. Where r u going?”…
K-” Twinkle I’m going to sleep in other room.. If u want anything then call me… “..
Twinkle thinks….” Today I will get a clue that r u really a beast or u r just pretending to be it “…
She moves closer to him nd ask him…” Today is our first night.. R we not going to celebrate it.. “..
He looks at her with a questioning look…
T-” Why r u so surprised…. Till now u were always tried to come close to me… In fact u called me as ur s*xy chick..
When I was not having any relation with u ; u kissed me… U touched me but now I’m ur wife.. U a full right on me so why r u hesitating to come close to me… “…
Kunj moves back nd speaks…” See I’m tired right now.. Nd I’m not in a mood to reply u…U better sleep… We will celebrate night afterwards…. “…
He is about to turn when Twinkle holds his hand… She throws her chunni away… Now she is only in her blouse nd skirt… Her belly is visible…
Kunj is shocked to see her doing so…while Twinkle cries nd shouts…
” Come kunj… Come… Get yourself satisfied today… Till now u were dying to seduce me to fulfill ur revenge… So come I allow u to touch me… Today u take our all ur anger nd frustration u have with me…. Why r u standing their… Come na… Do whatever u feel like.. Today I want to see how much cruelty u have inside u… How much a bigger Beast u r… “….
Kunj moves to her… He picks her chunni nd covers her body with it…. Nd clears her tears from her face… He speaks..
” I’m sorry for all the tortures I did with u… I know it’s hard for u to forgive me nd to forget all the deeds of mine … But I promise that from today I will never come close to u…. I will never force myself upon u… U will live a very calm life with me… I will try to keep u happy….
I know it will be hard for u to believe my words…. But very soon u will see a new kunj in front of u…. “…. He is having tears nd guilt in his eyes
He leaves from the room… While Twinkle smiles…
T-” I knew it kunj… I knew it that u won’t touch me.. I can see the pain in ur eyes… I don’t know what all made u to do this but now I’m confirm that u r a good person… “..
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LEAP OF 3 MONTHS….
TWINKLE’S POV…
” It’s been three months I’m living with u kunj… U never tried to come close to me… The way u cared for me till now shows how much u love me… how much I mean to u… Ur care nd affection for me made me to realise that I love u…. Though earlier I was in love with Yuvi but the way u treat u… The way u adore me made me to love u…
I can’t believe that a person whom I hate the most will become so important to me…. Though every one thinks that u harassed me but I know u can never do so… Nd how much hard u try to prove u as a culprit but I will make u confess that u r innocent…. Very soon u will say those 3 magical words to me..
I LOVE U KUNJ… I LOVE U.. ”
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TO BE CONTINUED…
One last thing I want to say to all Ff writer’s nd my readers ;that I will not be active on TU page for some days.. As now a days I’m very disturbed so I need some time to recover back from it…
So plz pardon me if I don’t comment on the ff’s… I can’t stay far away from u all for long time… I promise I will be back soon but after some days only…nd till then I won’t be posting any of my ff also…
Nd sorry to all writer’s on whose ff I didn’t commented today
Bye guys…
LOVE U ALL…..
49 Comments
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Nd mujhe ek baat kehni hai jo bhi aap logon jaise ache ff writers ko bash karta hai woh pagal hai….. They r just insecure nd u know wat u r an amazing writer and a soul tooooo…. Never feel bad bcz of those bashers bcz we r der eid u Alwaysssss specially me to irritate u then say srry ?….. I know I disturb u a lot abhi bhi kiya thain… Sooooo srry ??
sayeeda di don’t feel just bcoz of other..
ur ff is best and your’e very well..
and plz never stop writing as long as ALLAH is your strength..
i love your ff sooo much…
and today’s epi was amazing :* :*..
try to post soon..luv ya :*
don’t feel BAD just bcoz of others
U r awesome writer… I know u r disturb… Bt plz just calm down u know der r many people who can’t see anyone happy… Thats y dey r Barmouthing about u nd Allah… Dey r silly people or I can say narrow minded idiots
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Diii I’m speechless
Was tooooooooooooooooo goood di !!!!!!!
Dont worry di we’ll support any desicion of yours as long as it’s not quitting tu
But come back quick na
sayu u r so sweet really n i respect u from my heart n ur ff made my day…so lovely wow kunj is so caring n twi is getting 2 know true side of k…i’ll miss ur ffs n plz post nxt after u get time…i’ll b w8in 4 it…love u….
Hiii!
I hope your last statement changed now. And, you know na if you continue to do so then what will me and Laddoo do? We’ve practical reasons okay?
Back to the episode, it was marvellous. I really loved. Finally, love is in the air. Do post soon otherwise….
Love you loads.?
Wow! It was just so amazing! How do you manage to write so well? I am so so damn impressed. And seriously .. Let the haters hate cuz they know nothing except hate okay? I am with you Infact all are with you. And never think you write bad cuz honestly ,i find your writing even better than mine ? so please let them do whatever they want and you don’t give a f**k to them. Anyway, continue soon and love you x
Kya api . Pagalo ki batoon ka bura mante ho ? I ws planning to send them to mental hospital . Do u know there is a proverb in bangla . I m giving u the English translation . “What A Mad Speaks , And What A Goat Eats , It Cant Be Imagined . If U Listen To What A Psyco Says , Then U Will Be Confused “. Dont pay heed to their words . Coming back to the epi , It ws amazing . Love u .
Why are you even listening to those psychos? They are people with low mind set. So don’t feel bad. Please. And trust me you are one of the best writers I have come across. 😀
Update the next part soon. I will be eagerly waiting for it. :-*
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nooo sayu noo…. plzzzz u cant do this to me… I know u r hurt.. even I know u want ur space.. I also want u to hve ur space.. bt widout ff how will I stay… ok u want time.. u take.. par zyada nhi dungi.. jaldi aana padega.. warna baar baar comment kr k pareshan kr dungi.. yaad rakhna…
ok now abt d episode.. it was.. umm.. kya bolu.. u know how it was.. accha u wanna listen it frm me.. ok then.. it was awesome.. amazing.. fantabulous.. superrr dupeerrrr hittt… ab aur words dhoondne padenge.. par khatam nhi honge.. to mai time waste nhi krti.. tu samaj jaa ab.. ok.. love u sayu.. aur jaldi post krna else I will call u DI….???
Sayu di I dont know what has happened but frm whatever I read I can derive that ur very hurt…plz di its a humble request frm ur choti sista ..don’t take such wordsnon heart….if there r is 1 to bash there r 100s to support…all religion r equal….di ur wonderful writer….osum epi…take u r time…b back soon
Luv u di and ur writing frm bottom of my heart…one smile plz…
It was awesome sayeeda
And donot worry we all are with you
I know u are a strng girl….
In life also u will find ppl who will degrade you but you have to a strong and pass all the hurdles…
This is like a test for you
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Amazing just loved it
Yeah one imposter commented on my golden jubilee also
I didnt know what they will get by discouraging us but promise from today we will not pay any attention to them
Love u sayu come back soon
Sayu appi don’t feel sad.. U r a amazing writer.. U r very talented nd u respect u’r religion very much… I’m also Muslim so i can understand how it feels… It’s our identity, our pride… I know u r hurt.. But don’t be sad by thinking about those people who doesn’t know to respect a religion, how to talk with people… Nd I’m with u, we all r with u always… Btw nice epi.. Love u.. Take care..
Sayeeda episode was just so lovely….awesome…..hope u recover fast…
I knw …….. di u dnt knw me but…….. iam one.. of… your …silent reader’s…….This is da first time iam commenting on smone’s ff… I knw tht u r really hurt bcuz of smpeople but do think abut yur silent readers as we dnt shw ourselves n our feelings …through da… comments.. but.. we still read yur ff …. n… I must say tht… u r really gud in writing .. n.. very less peole r gifted with such talent …. I knw u must b thinkin …from where did this person suddenly came from ….. SORRI for not commenting b4 as iam… not gud in expressing…myy.. feelings so..whn I felt tht smone really.. hurt u thn I felt … tht its better 2 tell u how important … u really r 4 da ones who r your silent readers … after this I may never comment again …but… still ..I must say this.. di… tht I lve yur ff … a lot.. Sorri for writing so much .. I hope tht I didn’t hurt u …n…sori if my any word hurts u ……….. Just want 2 say tht yur ff’s this fan is there 4 u n if u get sad thn ..wht will happen …to us… LOADS OF… LOVE ….FROM YUR LITTLE….. SIS ….. hope u didn’t mind my words…….
So good…
It’s a wonderful episode and penned beautifully
Plz post the next one soon
You are right.. Don’t give heeds to these people…
They are just a waste of time…
New shade pf kunj…….loving it
Amazing epi…..and that pov of twinkle was so lovely
Gonna miss u for few days…..hoping to see u back soon
Love u ❤❤❤❤
Sayu,
I was waiting 4 ur ff… n u thought to stop writing…????… how can you think of that…
Don’t get hurt by such people…u correctly said that they just need our attention… better we don’t give what they want.. ignore them…nd if someone is using bad words against u give her a reply same to you dear… that’s it…
Take it in this way.. this person who hates u and consider u as the worst writer, has taken this much time to read ur ff and comment on it…kuch to baat hai na…tum me… that means u r impossible to ignore…
I wrote a long comment this time…
By the way nice episode… awesome… we are always with you…
Amazing epi.. loved it.. and plz dont feel bad abt that Imposter’s words.. you guys are very good writers and i love your piece of writing and that imposter is just jealous and is trying to demotivate you ppl.. BT don’t feel demotivated cuz there are many pple loving u n ur ffs.. hope u cm bck soon
Love u di….u r awesome writer …..amazing episode …..and plzz dont Feel sad ……for us plzzz be happy and be our awesome di ????love u di
Superb epi…
F*ck off sayu yaar srsly uh thought to end huh uh know why these ppl don’t have any other wrk that’s y every tym they bash writers lyk uh and me we know everyone is nt perfect in this world right ……. But if our passion is to write we try our bst to entertain every one maybe uh entire gud as Saby or Misha or shatakshi or anyone I m also nt gud as uh or anyone bt still I write even I got a cmmnted from hater …… Crazy also got a cmmnt from that hater but we didn’t stop we din even think to stop uh know wht if we continue further it gives a kick on their a** so jst don’t pay heed on their words n continue further will wait till uh post ur next episode love uh dear ?????????
U r an awesum writer di. Just dont care abt them. They r just jealous of u. Never mind them at all. We can understand u need space nd we will surely give tht. Nd i am not calling u di just for the sake of respect I REALLY MEAN IT. Not only for u all my di s i call them di cuz i feel bond of sisterhood wid them. Thank u di for being my di for all these days nd i hope u will be continuing to be my di. Nd i will always be continuing to be ur younger sis. Nd I will always respect ur decision. Take care nd come back soon
sayeeda…don’t feel bad for thier talks…n as u said they just need attention n its better that we don’t give it to them…I know …we know hw much good u are.. I think they don’t have brain to say like that to u…let them say whatever they want we would just keep smiling bcz u know na that smile confuses our enimies…n ur episode tho I was just waiting fr it..it was so so good…n dont feel bad fr thier cmmnts bcz u think that there are 2 like that cmmnters there are several 200 readers who read ur ff who like u…n love u…take ur time…
Inshallah Sayu di … ❤
Allah (SWA) will take care of everything
If he’s by his believers’ side then nothing can go wrong inshallah..
Please don’t stay away from TU and us too long ok?
I respect every decision of hours since you are elder to me … Love you dii … And im glad to have come across you in my life ..
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Episode was fab yaar!! I didn’t expect Kunj to change so quickly..but its good i like it .. Twinkle’s POV was worth reading… Hope I’ll get to continue reading soon post soon 🙂 .. Bye love u to the moon and further ? ???????
Okay. So, who are you?
Do i know you?
Hell yes! I do! Who doesn’t know such a great writer! Maine kaha tha PA bana lo…abhi tak nhi banaya…m telling u again…if I find another boss then dnt blame me! Ye kya tha Sayu di! This was epic! Stupendous piece of work! Kunj ko kaise jhat se badal diya! I loved it! And diii….active na hone ke baare mei to sochna bhi mat, if u remember what happened yesterday. My mail is still written, all I need to do is to cut copy paste. So, look before u leap, and tata bye bye.
Love u❤
Sayoooooooo Api …… I am seriously in the mood to do dishum dishum with u …. How dare u thought to end such a lovely FF! I love ur FF soooooooooooooooooooo much that u can’t even imagine 🙂 You are just amazing, blessed with a beautiful talent of writing and you deserve to be loved 🙂 And for that Bhavika… I feel like slapping her! Okay fine she doesn’t like your beautiful and stupendous FF but the way she talks about our religion is totally not OKAY! But at the end of the day, Our religion tell us to be patient 🙂 And we are proud to be MUSLIMS!! 🙂 !! And have faith in Almighty 🙂 He will help u!
So just keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Love u loadsssssssss
-Zuha
Pehli baat di aap likh kar rakh lo..yaaa for main Jo likh rahi hoon use copy paste karlo??..but Superstars me hi bashers note hai naa..and aap mujhe batao..ek bhavika kya itni influential ..itni important hai ki uska ek commentcomment can disturb you??..
Tell me..Kya uska ..you are a stupid writer him sab me u are an amazing writer se zyaada effective hai??
Chalk je shab cholo..Glad to know the feelings of twinkle for Kunj..loved the epi di..
And if u need time..then take as much as you wish..and be back soon..
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