“Caught in love embrace of a wild beast ” …
Hey Guys …Sayeeda here with a intro of her new ff …..but this one would be a few slots story …may be of 5-6 episodes….
I don’t know whether it is good or worst but I was having this idea revolving in my mind so I thought to write it….
I hope u all like it ….
I won’t be giving description about the characters ….as I dont want to reveal the suspense….
So here the intro beings…
Twinkle shouts nd cry …..” U rapist …u ravager ..I hate u ….why ; why did u do this to me …just for ur revenge u spoiled my life …I was going to be married soon but u made my life hell….”..
Kunj laugh devilishly ….” Why I did this to u …coz u deserve it …even more than this ….But one thing is confirm u r so hot yrrr….just wait nd watch now the real game begins ….”
So …this was just a small idea for the further story. ..I know u all must be thinking how cruel Kunj’s character is …in starting u all will hate him ..but as story will extend u will find a great reason behind his behavior …..
Tell me …whether I should continue with it or not ….If u all find it bad then I’m sorry …
If I get response it ….I will try to post first episode soon….after posting my previous ff ” I Can’t stop loving u ” marriage episode…
Love u all….keep supporting..
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Its interesting Sayeeda…. eagerly waiting for d 1 episode…. post soon…. nd i wanna say dat tu bohut acha likhti h yrr…. ye to tujhe pta hi hoga…. to ese hi likhti rhna…. love u….
Aww…
Shona ..thank u sooo much for ur comment ..
I write well…..umm…..but not better than u …
love u
Sayooo what questions you had asked should continue it or not of course you have to continue…and you do know what in night I was very eager to read your ff….but mom and started to shout go to sleep…bcoz yesterday I was very late to bcoz tei…my mom phone from me…so was not able to read…I was praying to be morning…morning I went to class…at last I got Time thank god nah…I’m already your fan….now I have crush on you…but to do I’m girl nah…insha Allah in next nah pakka walla promise I’ll be boy..okay Afllal…how is my name…wo kya hai nah after reading your new ff I’m flat on you on your thoughts..New storyline…hate to love wooooow…and sorry for being late .I’m always late nah sorry…its very interested…for head…All the very walla best…and hah all the best for your competition…okay bye get you later…love you my sweetheart…Haa I forgot sorry not reply for your comments Woo I’m phone don’t know what happened…Thank you sooo for supporting me…loving me..Thank you dea…sayoooo your only one in million…million mai ek my sayooo love you sooo much…
Afffoooo…oopsss..sorry Afllaloooo……yrr seriously after reading comment I was smiling so much that my cheeks are paining ..
Nd yah Allah my cheeks r turned to red as I was blushing so badly …
love u ……love u …..love u millions ..trillions ……
U know na how much u mean to my life and when u say sorry I feel hurt as I can’t see u saying it to me …so next time no sorry ….
Muuuaahhh..
nice intro…. u should continie soon
Thanks Ariya….
Sry di fr commentin late… u gave a awsm strt….
Lukin forward fr d nxt part….
Hey Maggi don’t say sorry dear..
Infact I’m happy that u liked it…
awesome….ff ka naam dek kar hi lag raha tha ki ye ff bohot achha roking hone wala hai.. lekin jab isme tumhara naam dekha naa tho mai tho uchal hi padi…story line toh bohot bohot interesting hai…plz jaldi post karna
Hey Tamanna I’m soooooo happy t see ur comment ….
I’m so glad that u liked it…
Yes I will try to post next one soon
Sayeeda Api…Such a JHAKAAS storyline, although I don’t use the word JHAKAAS but your FF! Ya Allah! It is purely AMZING! And such a silly question, CONTINUE OR NOT? Aap ke saamne hoti toh…maar hi dalti?? No..no really toh nahi marti but friendly sweet slap deti? Read your OS and loved it! (If u remember I commented as well!) I am just in love with your FF! Well never read any TEI FF except Fatarajos and Yashus but thinking to read some more, and this one is a master piece! I replied u at my post and I am quite angry on you, just check my reply ??
And how was your speech competition?
love you!
-Zuha
Hey Zuha ….I remember u that u commented on my OS …” U can’t deny what’s between us …nd I complimented u that u r so pretty …
Nd u r angry on me …..oooppsss….I did mistake ..Now if I sorry then u will become more angry so I prefer to say love u …
Thank u soooo much for reading my ff it’s a pleasure for me that so good writer is reading my ff
Dear ur OS acted as my lucky charm I stood first in the competition …thank u soooo..much….
love u
Ohhhh godddddddd…y is it everyone is writing new ff’s and I’m the last to know about it? Sayeeda I’m late on commenting. I’m so sorry.
Anyway, I love the teaser you’ve given and I cnt wait to read further but wait, please don’t make kunj too bad cz lately his character has been so terrible tht I’m getting dizzy with it na.
Hey RiaA ….don’t say sorry plzzz ur comment always matter for me …
I was praying to Allah that make RiaA read my ff ….I’m soooooo happy that u read it nd liked it ..
Don’t worry u will like kunj but in starting u will hate him ….but plzzz bear wid it…
love u
Sayeeda….lovely story… Dying to read it further….