CHAAHAT PE KOI ZOR NEHI (Episode – 2)
Failure keeps you Humble, Success keeps you glowing, But only Faith & Determination keeps you going?……Hello friends……sorry, phir se late ho gayi post karne mein………ok ok……..gaali mat dena…….lo, kaan phi pakad li……sorry………so, without starting my blabbering?, lets get started….. but before that, thanku soooooooooooooo much for all ur love, I didn’t expect that, main aap sabke pyaar ke laayak bhi hoon ya nehi……..I literally had tears welled up in my eyes, by seeing so much love……..luv u a lot guys……….so, a big thanks for being my supporting pillars alwz to… Amnaa, Dhruvi, Ruwani, Aafiya, Niyaa, Swethaa, Ishi, Ziya, Srishti, Priyanshi, Sanyukta, Anee, Anu, Dhruti, Shreyaby commenting regularly & a special thanks to my new readers friends…Vanu, Yogitafan, Srija, Cherry, Jiya……..& never to forget, thanku so much to all the silent readers who liked my previous post……….
So, to get an idea of what happened in the prev epi, here’s the link….
One brief description regarding which character is related to whom…….
Malhotra family ?Anand…….his wife Gayatri…….his mother Savitri…….his daughter Sanchi(elder)…..his son Veer(younger) ?
Kapoor family ?Kabir……his mother Kusum……his little sis Pragya?
Mishra family ?Jaya(sister of Anand Malhotra?)……her twin daughters Isha & Ria?
Let’s have a quick recap : Sanchi, Veer, Isha, Ria’s entry at SDCH………Kabir’s entry in the plot in his khadoos avatar(KKK?)
So friends, fasten ur seat belt, aapki sawaari udaan bharne ke liye taiyaar?……..haha
Present time:
Location : SDCH
Sanchi(to Veer, Isha, Ria) : All the best for today….& Veer, no pranks for today, understood….. Isha & Ria were giggling….Veer glares at them making them laugh even more…..haha
Sanchi: Veer, I’m talking to u……did u get what I said, no pranks for today….Veer nods his head
Veer: Jee matey…..Do I’ve the permission to leave, else if I get late, Hitler won’t spare me…..Sanchi glares……Ok Ok…..Dad…….Now can I go??……Sanchi nods her head in affirmation & Veer leaves
Sanchi: Ishu, Ri…..I can’t trust this Veer……u both take care that he doesn’t do any weird things landing up himself in trouble……
Isha & Ria: Ok boss(both in a saluting pose?)…..(trio laugh?)……..Have a good day
Sanchi: You too………& they all head towards their duties
Timeskip
Location : London
A big mansion is shown…….with a nameplate……..”THE KAPOOR MANSION”
As we enter it, we find two ladies r arguing on some topic…just like the 3rd World War?
Lady 1: I said no naa….u’ll not go……….no means no
Lady 2: Whatever……I’ll go at any cost(while she stood there crossing her hands)
Lady 1: So u will not listen to me
Lady 2: No…………she said with a lot of attitude?
Lady 1: Ok……let him come……..then he’ll decide
Lady 2: Off course………&u’ll see he will support only me……..
Lady 1: Achha………let’s see
Lady 2: Shouk se dekh lena……….& they glare at each other
A man enters the scene…….he’s trying to pacify both of them, but no one is ready to be quiet……. Shut uppppp……….said the man in a loud tone……..The man is revealed to be Kabir?haha(so, now u might have already guessed who the two ladies might be……….yes, u r right……..it’s Kusum & Pragya…haha………Lady 1, Kusum & Lady 2, Pragya……..haha
Kusum(Lady 1): See Golu…….this girl is not at all ready to listen to me….now u handle ur sister……..I’m done
Kabir: Ok……..maa first u…….(he’s interrupted in the middle)
Pragya: Like really……..bhai, u listen to me……..tell ur mother that u’ll support only me
Kabir gave a confused look to both, but having no other option, he went & sat on the sofa, & haan, this wasn’t noticed by Pragya or Kusum since they were busy in their arguments?
Kusum: No, he’ll listen only to me…….Afterall I’m his mother
Pragya: Toh main kya kisi Mandir se uthaake iss ghar mein laayi gayi hoon ……….even I’m his sister….he’ll listen to me
Kusum: He’ll support me…….right Goooooluuu…….& both started searching for Kabir & were shocked on seeing him……
Kabir: What???? U guys continue…….afterall, this isn’t a house, rather a battlefield right……..u carry on
Pragya: Bhai………I…….(she was interrupted by Kusum)
Kusum: Shut up Mishti…….let me say…….(guys, I felt of giving a nickname to Pragya………afterall, big bro has got one, so little sis should also get one……..right guys?)
Kusum: Golu, Mishti wants to go to India for her internship at SDCH…….now u tell me, what is the need………she could pursue her career staying here also right? What’s the need to go there when we have settled here leaving behind all our belongings, all our memories in India?
Kabir: Mishtu, maa is right…….when we have so much facilities here, why u want to go to India……..that too SDCH?
Pragya: Bhai, that’s the only reason I want to go to India………Papa used to work at SDCH(Note….another addition…….Kabir & Pragya’s father used to work in SDCH, & unfortunately died coz he was suffering from brain tumour…….this was the reason which made Kabir choose the field of Neurology)………(All were emotional……..sorry guys, but had to add this)
Pragya: He had also dreamt that we would complete our education & work in SDCH……..but fate had something else for us……….Papa left & we had to leave our home & come & settle here in London…But Bhai, I’ve decided, I would fulfil Papa’s wish
Kabir: I didn’t know that my choti si Mishtu has become sooooo big that she’s talking like this…..
Kusum was in tears…..Pragya rushed to her & hugged her……..both were in tears
Kusum(wiping tears of Pragya): Don’t cry Mishti……..I’m so sorry bachchha…….I didn’t realize ur intension behind going there & was going on scolding u…….so sorry beta
Pragya(wiping Kusum’s tears): No maa…..it’s not ur fault…….u don’t need to say sorry…….now smile…..Kusum doesn’t smile……..smile or else
Kusum: Else??………..Pragya starts tickling Kusum?haha………finally everyone laugh…?
Timeskip(Dinner time)
Kusum: wo sab toh theek hai, but where will Mishti stay…….Kabir now starts thinking
Pragya: Offo Mother India, ur daughter is very smart?………I’ve already decided where to stay
Kusum: When??
Kabir: Where??
Kusum: With whom?? Don’t say that u’ve made a boyfriend in India &u’re going to stay with him….Hey Bhagwaan, ab iss umar mein, ye ladki mujhe itni badi shock na de de mujhe……… Pragya & Kabir gave a what was that kind of look to Kusum?
Kusum: What? Don’t look at me like this………I just wanted to know……..she was interrupted in the middle by Kabir
Kabir: Maa, plz…….before u jump into any conclusion, let Mishtu speak….(Kusum nods her head) Mishtu……u were saying something regarding accommodation………what is it
Pragya: Maa, Isha & Ria……..how can u forget them?
Kusum(sudden smile came on her face?): Oh yes……..how can I forget Isha & Ria…
Kabir: Maa……who r they………do we know them?
Kusum: Offo Golu…….Jaya…….u remember……….my best friend…….ur Jaya Aunty (hehe……..guys…….don’t glare at me………treat this as another shock?…….haha) Kabir nods his head
Kabir: omg yes………now I remember…….Isha & Ria……Jaya Aunty’s daughter……our Mishtu’s childhood buddies
Pragya: Yes Bhai, Isha & Ria…..we left India, but still, I didn’t end my friendship with them……….Maa couldn’t make contact with Jaya Aunty coz she got busy in work……for us…….but Jaya Aunty used to talk with me regarding our well being & now, when she came to know that I was looking for accommodation in SDCH hostel, she said that I should stay with them
Kusum: Jaya………how’s my Jaya…….she’s fine naa…….she’s still the same…….always ready to help others during their need
Pragya: Yes maa…….Aunty’s absolutely fine………& yes, initially I was hesitant but since she wasn’t ready to listen, finally I gave up & agreed to stay with them
Kabir: Keep all things aside Mishtu……..tell me one thing………R u sure, u want to go to India?
Pragya: Yes Bhai……she said smiling
Kabir: When is ur joining date?
Pragya: After 3 days…….
Kusum(shocked): What!!!!………just 3 days……..Kusum made a sad face
Pragya: Offo Mother India…….I’m going to our home, India…….not going to any sort of battle field……..so, don’t even dare to bring out ur Ganga Yamuna from ur eyes……..& whenever u’ll miss me, u can come near me………saying this she gives a back hug to Kusum, while Kusum was caressing her face……….(guys, such cute scene of mother & child, I’m falling short of words to describe this, u need to imagine this……)
Kabir(taking a deep breath): Ok……….I’ll make all the arrangements……..u start packing ur luggage……& he became emotional & turned his face to the other side
Pragya: Bhai…….she came &gave a back hug to Kabir………I’ll miss both of u……..a lot………..Kabir gave a peck on her head………
(Bg. Music: Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta pooraana hai)
All the 3 were having a family hug?so emotional……..so cute?
Precap: Pragya’s entry in SDCH?
So friends, I end this episode here itself……..&, I need one suggestion from u all, u can choose one from 3 &on basis of that I would proceed writing…….first, should I continue this fs & write my other ff “Dil Ke Rishtey” later, or second, should I complete my ff then start writing this current plot or third(which I really don’t want, but it’s upto u)…I would discontinue writing “Dil Ke Rishtey”……….now u all decide what I should do……..
So friends, I just hope it was worth reading. I’m really thankful to those who read my story, thanks a lot friends. Plz do share your views regarding this plot through your comments & of course, once again, if you didn’t like it, or found any flaws in this, plz let me know through your comments, so that I could rectify it….&&&………A MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL MY FRIENDS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE…………
With lots & lots of LOVE,
Priyanka?
32 Comments
prinku i choose option 1….rest on you………but this fs was superb and the bonding of kabir, kusum and pragya and otherside sanchi, isha, ria and veer bonding were mind blowing………..post next one asap…………………..tc…………love you…………..Mery Christmas prinku……………..
Merry Christmas??to you too dear…I’m glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya…& haan ye episode mostly kabir oriented tha coz nxt waale mein kabir ka thoda kam role hoga…luv u meri pyaari werewolf ??
Merry christmas priyuuu……& thank god tune update kr diya vrna mje lga tha ki ye ff bhi eid ka chand h????..zyada chapad chapad nhi krungi kyuki mje neend aa rhi h isliye formality k liye bol deti hu it was awsmm…aur apni language m bolu toh 1 dum 1no tha, dimaag thikane laa diya mra??…ab gn & merry christmas mri brahmarakshas & luvv uhhh aur agr jldi update nhi kiya toh ye luvv gusse m bdal jyega.. Tata
Oye Daayan,Eid ke chaand pe sirf vs ka copyright hai?& rahi baat ff ki, try karoongi jaldi se post karne ki…baaki baatein ig pe…luv u meri pyaari Daayan????
amazing update
i will go with option one
Thank you so much for commenting…I’m glad that you liked the episode…thanks again for choosing coz I was really confused what to do??…luv u sweetie…bye…tc?
I dont want u to discontinue any of ur ffs…. I choose option 1….. And coming to the story…. Its amazing
Jo hukum mere aakaa?haha???& Amnaa dear, I’m glad that u liked this episode…luv u a lot sweetie…bye…tc??
Superb..
Thank you so much Aafiya dear for liking & commenting…luv u a lot sweetie ???
i choose option 1 …and awesome amazing wah pragya itni mature way mai baat kar rahi hai haha and love u dear ..waiting for next part
Thanks yaar choose karne ke liye…I was so much confused what to do…thnx for the help…& I was on 9th cloud after reading your comments…luv u a lot sweetie ??bye…tc
nice and cute
awww…thnx for your sweet words…I’m glad that you liked this epi…luv u a lot sweetie…bye…tc??
Amazing update? and I choose option 1
Thank u sooooooooo much Aku dear for liking this as well as sharing ur views… I’m glad to get comments from a new silent reader…luv u a lot sweetie…bye…tc
OMG thank god ……Priyanka dii ko yaad aa hi gaya ki woh ek author hain aur woh Kaanchi par ek ff likh rahi hain ???Dii where were u from last few days.Missed ur writings a lot.??????Par derr aaye durust aaye.
This part is awesome…..just loved it to the bottom of my heart.??????
Keep writing nd eagerly waiting for next part.
Haye meri Nautanki ki dukaan?dekhle mein toh phir bhi aa jaati hoon but tera kya?tu toh Eid ke chaand ko bhi peeche chod degi???luv u meri pyaari Durgeshwari….& ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u…bye…tc??
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thanku soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Anee…….haha…….mujhe hamesha tere comment ka intezaar rehta hai, & yakeen bhi hoti hai ki koi kare na kare but tu zaroor cmmnt karegi………luv u Shona
Just like me?? Mita
??haan….ek dum sahi pakde hain ???
Sorry yaar for late commenting darling……..so so awesome and amazing episode yaar………..pragya or kusum to superb tha yaar………Kabir or pragya kbrother-sister ka bonding i love it so so much yaar……..app jalse kanchi ko 1st meeting kara de yaar……..love u dear……..
Sorry?Teri toh??doobaara ye mat kehna…oye kudiye itna laalach bhi theek nhi…apna kabir toh hero hai…aise thodi na bina reason ke tapkega?haha??yaar I just hope ki tum sab ki ummeedon pe khadi utroon & don’t disappoint u all…luv u a lot sweetie ??
Amazing sissy…I just love the way you present any relationship & don’t discontinue any ff of yours& I would choose option 2 as I want to know why kaveer were turned into con their past rest upto you can’t wait to see your next episode.have a nice day
thnx dear for cmmnting………..abt my plot, I’m really sorry dear, but as everyone wants this ff to be completed first, so I’ve to go as per their choice……..hope u don’t mind………..luv u a lot dear……….bye………tc
Nice episode I would choose option 1
thnku soooooooooooo much kanchi dear………..I’m glad u liked this epi……….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee
Riya………..! I have absolutely no idea how I missed this reading ??? hit me if you want to, I won’t give any complaints!!! And the story is as always fab!! Just like you!! Loved all family moments were so ?????? loved it so much and love you too ???
Ru…….galti ki hai, toh sazaa paane ke liye taiyyar ho jaao………..ek cute si kanchi os…………haha………ab kya karein, frndship ki hai, itna kameenapanti toh banta hi hai boss…..right……..hehe………..luv u sweety pie……..& ek badiiiiiiiiiiiiii waali jaadu ki jhappi for u dear……….& no bye………..milte hain ig pe……….haha
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