Hey All, hope you are all are doing good. So here is the next episode.
This episode is dedicated to dearest Sam. Thanks a lot Sam for your encouragement and support on my story. Your comments make me think more on the concept, character and the script.
Thanks for your suggestions on the casting for Shefali.I got four votes for casting Taniya Sharma as Shefali, so its going to be Taniya Sharma as Shefali.
I hope you enjoy the episode, please leave your comments.
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“Yes, I am Mr. Singh’s daughter, and I came to apologize to Ishqi for whatever happened. How unfortunate that my dad did that to her” Shefali says with disgust.
“You don’t have to apologize Shefali, you are not at fault” Ishqi tries not to make her guilty.
“I need to talk to you” saying this Ahaan pulls Ishqi from there.
“So rude he is” Shefali comments again
“hey, don’t say anything about my bhai ” Karthik says sternly “its ok you can say, after all he is going to be your Jethji ” Karthik winks at her
“What the fudge” she says and Karthik’s eyes widen “You are already same as your Jeth I see” he smiles broadly.
But she looks at him angrily “I know, I know I am a little fast, but I feel you are the one for me” Karthik says blushing
“Are you nuts, who proposes the girl on the first meet, and that too directly for marriage” she sings with her forefinger rolling near forehead” You don’t know anything about me, expect that I am Mr. Singh’s daughter” she says but thinks that even after knowing what her father has done to Ishqi, this guy still wants her. It warms her heart a little.
“You came to apologize to Ishqi, that explains what kind of a girl you are” Karthik says seriously for the first time and Shefali just keeps seeing him
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“That was rude, I have guests” Ishqi says removing his hand from her arm.
“I don’t trust that girl; she must be plotting something” Ahaan says trying to figure out what Shefali must be planning.
“Why will she do that, she is a good friend of mine. Not someone like Riya” Ishqi taunts him” Leave her, tell me what happened to Riya”
Ahaan gets tensed and does not meet her eye, Ishqi gets to know he is hiding something. “What happened to Riya, I hope you have her arrested” she prompts
Ahaan is worried that once she listens to this, she will go away from him “I had her arrested, but had to free her due to something”
“Why did you release her” he can feel her controlling her anger
“I had to do it, but can’t tell you the reason” he says tensed
“You better leave now Ahaan” she says sadly” Wait, do you still have feelings for her” she asks while he was about to leave
“I have feelings only for one person and that is you Ishqi” Ahaan comes near her “please believe me there was a valid reason”
Ishqi moves away from him “tell me that valid reason then”
He just leaves from there.
“Karthik, let’s go” Ahaan says and moves outside. Karthik looks at Shefali and Ahaan, and runs after him
“What happened Bhai, mujhe apni setting bhi nahi karne dete” Karthik grumbled. But seen Ahaan silent he gets tensed too
“What happened” he asks again slowly
“I couldn’t tell her why I freed Riya” Ahaan says sadly
“But why, her love will increase for you knowing what you saved in return for freeing Riya” Karthik tried to convince him to tell Ishqi
“She is a very independent girl Karthik, she handles all her problems alone. If she comes to know I did this for her she might not like it” Ahaan says
“Or she might like it Bhai, remember she has always been grateful when you helped her in the past. Also, she will be glad that you considered her work so important”
Ahaan realizes it to be true. Ishqi business means a lot to her, and he saved it.
He goes back to Ishqi and see that eyes are wet. And Shefali had already left from there. His heart pains seeing her like that. He just hugs her, and she unable to bear the pain in her heart hugs him back. For a moment they just forget all the reasons and are just happy to be with each other
“I did it because Riya’s father threatened me with your business. He has got major shares of your company and he would have acquired it. I couldn’t let you heard work go waste just because of someone like Riya” he finishes and hears her cry more” hey hey.. stop crying, everything is fine” he tries to move away from her, but she hugs him more tightly, he smiles and just returns the hug
“Thank you Ahaan, for considering and giving my work so much importance” She says slowly, her heart bubbling with joy that Ahaan considered it important.
“You are very important to me, so everything related to you is also very important. And don’t worry I will still try to find a way to put Riya behind bars” He says wiping her tears and slowly kisses her cheek, testing the waters. He kisses her other cheek too, then her forehead, he was nearing her lips…
“Ahem Ahem” Karthik coughs feeling awkward
Ishqi goes red and hides behind Ahaan
“Ab chupne se kya fayda, jab kiss kar rahe thi tab toh nahi chup rahi thi” he teases
“Tu chup kar Kathik’ Ahaan scolds him still holding Isqhi’s hand.
“Bhai am sorry to say this now, but dadi is not keeping much well, we will have to return back to Mumbai. I wanted to tell you yesterday only, but so many things happened I couldn’t tell you” Karthik says feeling sorry
Ahaan immediately let’s go of Ishqi hand “What happened to Dadi, why didn’t you tell me earlier”
“She is ok, just a little of high bp, but she misses you a lot and its worsening her condition” Karthik explains.
Ahaan turns to Ishqi” I will have to go to dadi, please tell me your decision before I leave tomorrow. I don’t want to pressurize you as there are still 4 more days left for the month to end. But the situation is like that, I hope you understand” he says, and they leave from there. Ishqi keeps watching them her heart thudding, what if he leaves and she never sees him ever again.
“Listen to your heart Ishqi, it never lies” Karthik gives her his advice as always and smiles “haan and listen to my heart also, send me Shefali’s number” he salutes her bye and leaves.
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So, guys do you think Ahaan proved himself enough?? He had given her work due importance plus re-considered her thoughts on the attire of women.
Should Ishqi confess her love to him now?
27 Comments
Really nice of u to give ur readers view notability. I like karthik way of proposing, jeth ji touch is commendable.
We realise the importance of something only in 2 states, first when we don’t have it, other is when we loose it. May be a little separation from each other can make them understand the each others necessity in their lives. Ishqi trust is broken once, to trust again, should take a bit. Love is significant pillar of relationship but trust is a base. The base must be strong this time so that no strom can uproot it. Ahaan efforts are appreciating but khete hai na intezaar aur duriyaoo ke askh aksar moti ban jaate hai, intehaan ke lamho ke baad khushiyon ke naye saugat aate hai…
thanks Sam.. i will surely consider ur opinion,
Wow… awesome poetry
Hi archiya I read all your ff on ishq par zor nahi and they were amazing.
I think Shefali and karthik should make a pair but the name is somewhat different which doesn’t for karthik i think.
and I hope dadi doesn’t come in between of ishqaan’s union.
Maha.. thanks, naam main kya rakha.. dil milne chaiye bus…
Dadi has to enter now, but lets see how Isqhaan face her
Hi Archiya…Once again i loved this ff. too good for words…f you ever publish a novel, plzzz tell me and i’ll surely buy..Was reading this to my 9 yr old neice and she loved it
Myra.. thanks dear, ur the 2nd person to say that to me abt the novel.
Oh how sweet.. m glad she liked it
Wc Archiya. My niece, Sonali, loves IPZN a lot too, and now with all that rhea drama my di doesn’t let her watch it ofc. there’s too much adult content, so I let her go through the ff’s. She said she couldn’t stop reading and she’s a really good critic, better than me, so I thought of conveying it to you. She’s totally like Ishqi and the reason I started watching the serial was bcoz of her. One more msg from her – “Maasi, aap Archiya didi ko pataoygi kya ki mujhe aisa lagta hai ki Ishqi didi ko abhi apna pyaar confess nahi karna chahiye, please?” So this time Sonali is the suggestion giver not me. Btw, is your age 25?
A big hi and hugs from me to Sonali, an thanks a lot ❤️❤️❤️❤️
And about Ishqaan, I wil surely consider her suggestion.. I haven’t yet thought about how my story should proceed…
Karthik and shefali conversation was hilarious, I read it 3-4 times. If u don’t mind, I want to what’s your age, you write so good
same here. If you’re below 20 i’ll be stunned
Thank you Nisha, m trying to form good comedy, m a lil weak in that
Hmm abt my age.. i m neither too young, nor too old
But if you are old enough.. here is a simple cyrpto message for you
4215191811552533119
Decode this and you have the answer 🙂
If I offended you by any means I’m sorry, I don’t know I’m smart enough or not but i like to keep things simple as there are more complications to handle, yeah age don’t define talent, you are good writer that’s enough. I won’t bother you with any personal questions.
Nisha,
I didnt realise my post sounded offensive. I am sorry if my post offended you, i didn’t mean it that way. I thought it would be fun with some crypto, and u would take it as a challenge
I agree things should be simple, and i actually put my age in that number.. so come on and try to solve it.. its simple code
Hey Archiya,I am reading your writings since a long while now and I am here just to appreciate ur hardwork,ur imagination,ur thought process to write everything down well planned and considered,I just love reading your stories and wait for them to come,I really enjoy thinking what happened if something didn’t happen as shown in the show and u have read our minds and got courage to put your thoughts out and express if something didn’t happen as planned in show what would we think, thankyou for writing and keep writing,also the storyline u made is just amazing,the plot,the emotions, feelings everything. I hope for ishqaan reunion soon and dadi to not interfere. Waiting for next part eagerly 🥰
Adwika
thanks a lot, ur words mean a lot. M glad an happy you have commented.
Dadi toh has to interfere right, but m yet to think of “how”
I post on fridays and mondays, no next part will b on fri
I really liked the fact that ahaan gave importance to ishqi and his work , I consensus that our ahaan is changing, but still they both are different personalities and relationships doesn’t stand only on love . I hope ishqi takes the right decision. It was fun reading, thank u so much 💗 and as always our charming kartik nailed it
MJ
Thanks a lot.. ur right, they are still different personalities, and relationships stand on a lot of things. lets see if our Ishqaan can conquer all
M glad you all r liking Karthik in my story.. its diff to form dialogues for him
Wow…so ahaan was considering ishqis job…he changed a lot…Karthik and Shefali scenes were nice….. waiting for next chapter
Hey Aldy.. thanks dear
I’m really in awe of your writing Archiya. Tbh, I was feeling a little low, but cheered up a little after reading this chapter. I like how you keep things simple, realistic yet beautiful.
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Ahaan is changing, yes, but I also understand that he hasn’t changed completely because that is something which will take time. And that can happen only if he and Ishqi spend enough time with each other, where she’ll be able to influence her even more.
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Another question – are you on wattpad?
Nia,
oh my so so glad my writing could cheer you up Nia, i think that’s the best thing a writer could hear. thanks a lot.
Absolutely both need to adjust on some things, and that will surely take time.
Wattpad id archiya_love.
I love this soapie a lot.Especially because of Param 💗💝
I like it coz of akshita.. love the character, though they butchered it in between
gal pls upload part 11 super quick. Btw, tomorrow is akshita’s b’day!!!
oh is it.. great
Work is sooo stressful only ur ff’s r helpful @archiya
Same here 🙂 writing helps me too.. its like another world altogether 🙂