Hey Guys.. its Monday again, the first working day of the week ☹ it know its boring after the weekend, but hopefully my post will make it brighter for you.. enjoy some romance today, please comment and vote
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“Would you like come in for a coffee” Ishqi asked Ahaan when he dropped her home
He smiled and they both walked in
“Coffee powder and sugar is at the 2nd left cupboard, and milk in the fridge, make 2 cups I will be back” she winked and left to get freshen up
He heard footsteps and turned
“Coffee is … ” he saw her and got mesmerised.
She wore a simple tshirt and pyjama, water still dripping from her hair, and that glow on her face, she looked beautiful
“Ahaan.. Ahaan.. “
“Ya . yes.. no.. I mean coffee is ready, come”
“This coffeee is hazelnut” he says sipping it
“Yes, it’s the first and best flavor of my company” Ishqi said proudly
He kept looking at her, “What!!” she asked tensed, he had understood
“Do you rememeber that once I had wished someone made a coffe with my favourite hazelnut”
“I.. I don’t remember” she said stammering
“Ishqi and stammering, and not meeting my eyes” he teased
He came near her, took the mug from her hand and kept it on the table, he held her chin and she slowly lifted his eyes
“Did you make it for me Ishqi, did you miss me so much”? he asked softly
The tone with which he asked and his nearness made single drop of tear flow from her eye. She had missed him a lot and that’s the reason she made that flavor. It was very close to her heart.Ahaan held her face in his palms, and slowly bought his face down towards her.He very softly kissed the tear on her cheeks, and Isqhi closed her eyes relishing the feeling. Her heart was beating so fast like ran a marathon.He kissed her other cheek too, and looked at her beautiful lips. He so badly wanted to kiss her on the lips, but they still needed to work on their relation, and this was a weak moment for Ishqi, she was just emotional and might not like it later on. He moved back and waited.
She slowly opened her eyes and realised what had happened and her face turned red. She picked her mug and hid her face in it, pretending to drink.
“Thanks Isqhi, for keeping me in your memories,and this is the best gift you could give me” he smiles
She smiles back.
“You rest, I will come tomorrow” he says and leaves.
Isqhi recalls and blsuhes somemore and thinks how initially everyone had said that this flavor wont work, but it was this flavor that had made her coffee a hit. Indirectly she owned her success to Ahaan, because she made that flavor just because he liked it.
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Isqhi walked into her office next day, and saw an invitation to a party on her table. She had been waiting for this opportunity, the host Mr.Singh was a very renowned bussinessman and this was the time to strike a deal with him. She was thinking if she should go with Rohan when there was a knock at her door and there stood rohan
“I know, you were just thinking of me, right Ms.beautiful” he winks
“Of course I was thinking of you only Mr.Handsome” she smiled the way they had this easy friendship between them.
“Did you get the invistation to Mr.Singh party, I was thinking we could go togther”
“Isqhi you need to know something before we go there, Mr.Singh is not what her looks like. You have to be careful” Rohan warned
“Rohan, I have been following Mr.Singh works, and he has achieved in the bussiness world. If I work with him, my bussiness will surely reach heights”
“Ishqi please understand..”
“I will take care Rohan, anyways what he does in his person life is not our concern”she said to end the conversation
Rohan sighed, “ok lets go togther I will pick you up tomorrow evening”
She smiled and hugged him
“But you cant leave my side even for a moment” he tells her possesively and hugs her back.
He gets a call and looks at it nervosuly, why the hell was Riya calling him, he had asked her not to call him and that he would call her.
Ishqi saw that Rohan got tensed, and asked him the matter. He just brushed it off saying business problems and then left. Ishqi found it fishy, usually Rohan shared evrything with her. May be he just didn’t want her worried.
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“Why do you keep calling me, I was in front of Ishqi, what if she had seen” Rohan scolded Riya
“It was something important, we need to make our move soon” Riya said deviously.
“What is the plan” Rohan asked and she smirked.
“Give this saree to her for tomorrow evening party”
Rohan was surprised as how she knew about it.
“I have my contacts Mr.Rohan” Just wait till Ahaan sees you in this Ishqi, Riya thinks and smiles
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Next day evening Ishqi was ready and waiting for Rohan. She heard the bell and went to open it. Rohan stood there in a black tux, and when he saw her he just kept looking at her. She wore a beautiful red saree, with long earrings and a simple pearl necklace
“Rohan, close your mouth, warna machhar chala jayega” she laughed
“You look gorgeous” he said and hugged her
She felt a little uncomfotable, but she hugged back.”lets go” they both say and start driving to the party.
Ahaan was at the party and waiting for Isqhi, he knew she had the invitation to the party, and got one from his mentor for him too. He smiled remmebering their moments today morning.
Just then he heard some laughter and turned to see Rohan and Ishqi entering. He got angry seeing them together, but his anger dissiapted the moment he saw Ishqi. She looked gorgeous in her red saree, but it was a litlle transparent showing her beautiful waist. She turned when someone called her, and he fumed. Her blouse was so deep from behind, what the hell was she thinking wearing something like this to a party
He came to her and pulled her away.
“What the hell are you wearing” he asked her angrily
“Whats wrong Ahaan, I am just wearing a saree”
“yes, where most of your skin is seen”
Ishqi was angry now” look around Mr Ahaan, women are wearing the same kind of clothes, infact shorther and more exposure than mine” She removes her hand from his “Your thoughts will never change Ahaan, its my body and I have the right to wear what I like. What I feel good in. And moreover my finacee has gifted me this.” she says angrily.
Ahaan throws a look at Rohan and goes from there.
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What do you think will happen during the party?
Is Isqhi attire wrong to be worn to a party? What are your views.
35 Comments
Way of clothing is ones personal choice. Ishqi wore the dress to keep the respect of Rohan’s gift. Ahaan on the other hand is right too, Possiveness is common in love, he would never want anyone else to look at ishqi like that. According to Rhea’s plan if problem is created becoz of ishqi dressing, she should handle the situation herself instead of waiting for a man to take her side. This time Ahaan should see a rebel ishqi who can fight n save her dignity gratefully. AVM should realise the girl he loves is special, very special and he still have so much to know about her…
Keep writing n entertaing us with ur writing, I Really enjoy it…
hi Sam.. u totally echoed my thoughts, my next chapter is already written in these lines.. Isqhi will defend herself.. the scenario will be like that… u wil get to see both ishqi fierceness and Ahaan love..
Thanks for ur feedback… its good to see someone analysing and giving suggestions..
Wow you have a really creative mind
hi Meher.. thanks a lot
Ahaan is wrong in thus saree matter bcz everyone has the right to choose their own clothes. It’s Ishki’s life she can do whatever she wants. Ahaan should realize his mistake.
HI Ruhi.. absolutely, he will realise his mistake and also go to new heights.. stay tuned
Archiya, I love your writing and all I can say is please forward it to the IPZN writers… they need a reality check!!🤣🤣🥵😛
After reading that Ishki is required to marry a TREE to remove a curse from her birth certificate?? I honestly couldn’t understand that.
I asked my Mom as she’s Indian if that’s possible. Do people in India marry trees? We just laughed sooo much. OMG.. I can’t wait to watch tomorrow’s episode..
But I loved your post above.. the jealousy part, was sooo Danielle Steele.
Keep them coming Archiya.. 😘😘🥰
hey dear…
lol.. frankly speaking m not liking the track at all.. i had high expectations from them, but they are stuck in only one sonu track..
But honestly speaking that trend is there in India.. and sometimes its either the parents pressure or love pressure girls even follow it.. they do get married to the tree
Thanks dear for ur feedback.. loads of love
Mind-blowing writing
I love your writing 😍😍🥰🥰🥰
hi Pratibha,
thank u so much .. keep reading n commenting
Wow!! Loved your ff. Can’t wait for the next one..
And can u show a dance of Ishqi and Ahaan. Please.
And can u show a dance of Ishqi and Ahaan. Please. I need it
And I’m a big fan of ur ff. Been reading since the start…Myra
hi Myra,
thank u so much dear.. i will surely consider the dance
I would be great if you can add karthik and his love interest, it will be super Exciteing to see both the couples being in love.
hi Anushiii
i will consider ur request.. karthik love story is good idea.. it will b super sweet as him
Nice update….ishqaan scenes were amazing…..keep going.
Thanks Aldy 🙂
This was sooo awesome! Very interesting! I just can’t wait for next part ….where is our kartik 😅
Thanks MJ.. Karthik will enter soon
Ok Thanks archiya. Can you show something in which Ahaan’s point is also not completely wrong. And Ishqi gets angry on rohan. Just a suggestion.
Hi Myra.. suggestion taken.. part 8 will have isqhi angry on Rohan..
And I am desparately waiting for your next ff. The new track is soo senseless and upsetting. I don’t like it at all. Thank god you are here to make a better version. Never knew people married trees…
I m not liking it too 🙂 people do marry trees..
Brilliant.
When will the next part come .
Can’t wait for reading it .
Thanks Nihaar.. next part is out.. please read and comment
Its not out yet .
Hope it gets out soon .
Please tell the time the you update the next part
Can someone tell if Ahaan is marrying ishqi or rhea bcoz in precap it was ahaan and rhea marraige. Hope not rhea. Myra…
I hope the track goes well coz this is my fav serial and don’t want to stop watchin it. Hope ishqi stays the same bindass girl. And 2. hope archiya’s fan fiction goes on forever!!!
Awww.. thank u so much
in the serial for sure Ishqaan are gng to wed.. bus drama dikha raha hai
I hope the track goes well coz this is my fav serial and don’t want to stop watchin it. Hope ishqi stays the same bindass girl. And 2. hope archiya’s fan fiction goes on forever!!!
Hey sorry for sending in late but I love your ff. When will the next one be uploaded? And can you pls add our favorite kartik. All the best and all my wishes…Am dying to read the next one.
The next part is out.. karthikk will enter in the nxt epsiode
Oops did my name come as Mishti?