Hello ppl…I have decided that i will post twice a week…coz d upcoming chapters will be short…so it would be unfair..to post late as well as short chps…keep commenting…luv u all…
CHAPTER 3
Suman is getting ready for her lectures…. She has worn a plain peach top nd blue jeans….her hair is as usual tied in a pony…..nd her face is reflecting d same glow…..she keeps her books in her bag…. She is thinking about Aditya…..” I hope that ur mood is better today….I don’t like to c u like that.” Then suddenly she remembers that her dad’s friend’s son was coming today…she thinks to meet him after d lectures…..she leaves for d lectures….
Suman comes out of her class after d last lecture of d day..she is actually having a free lecture after this..she sees her group…all of them standing nd laughing together..there r four girls including herself and three boys in their group…something is different….she thinks….Then she spots it….not it…it is actually ‘him’…. there is a fourth guy…
A tall guy is standing there..wearing black shirt nd blue jeans…she can’t c his face…..she moves towards them….
” Oh hey Suman.. We were waiting for u only” Aditya shouts for everyone to hear…as he sees her approaching them…..Shravan sees her…he notices that she has brown wavy hair…nd deep brown eyes….which seem black some times….her lips are curled into a beautiful smile…..her features r not that perfect…but she is beautiful….beautiful in her own way….her simplicity looks most striking to him…nd d thing is he doesn’t hve to look down to her…as he has to wid other girls…coz she is tall enough…to look into his eyes…
Meanwhile….Suman is relieved…’ All well’ she thinks….nd sighs…she mentally thanks d new guy… Bcoz of him… Aditya looks so excited.. Nd he must hve forgotten yesterday’s incident….
Suman reaches there…nd Aditya quips… ” Suman…meet Shravan….nd Shravan meet Suman… ” ..then it clicks Suman that he is his dad’s friend’s son…she forwards her hand….nd Shravan ‘s long fingers wrap around her gentle skin…
“Shravan…Shravan Malhotra.. Nice to meet u.” He smiles at her….nd suddenly Suman notices how perfect his features were….he had light brown eyes….she notices his eyes first..as she loves searching people’s eyes…his hair was sandy brown….which shined in d sunlight…his hair was a striking feature of his….his smile moved way up..till his cheekbones….overall…he looked smart…his eyes reflected confidence….he is one of d few boys..who matches her height…Suman realises…that she has been thinking for a quiet while….nd she is still holding his hand…nd Shravan is looking at her quizzically…
” Suman Kashyap… Pleasure ” she says…nd gives his hand a light but firm shake….
” Oh Ok Suman..I m having my last lecture…so u be wid him….help him out…he is new over here…he had some prblms..due to which he couldn’t join earlier..” Aditya says in a hurry and leaves from there….and all of d other gang members also disperse….leaving only Shravan nd Suman standing there…..
” Everybody wants me to help him…is he a kid or wat” Suman murmurs to herself…..
” Sorry..did u say something” Shravan asks….
“Umm…no actually I was saying that….dad called me yesterday…to tell that u would be joining nd I should help u out…” Suman replies….
” Oh..so u r Kabir uncle’s daughter ” Shravan says…
” Yes…so where should we start with…I mean wid helping u out? ” Suman asks….nd puts her hands on her hips….
Shravan is a bit amazed at this ‘ no nonsense…all work’ attitude of hers…..so he thinks for a while….nd then says….” Ur subjects nd mine r different…so that means..u can’t help me wid that part….so what else…maybe giving me a tour of d college?”
“Oh yeah… I can show u d whole campus….” Suman says excitedly…
They move around d whole college….nd by d time they r done wid it…its almost evening….that means its Suman’s ‘ me time’….she thinks that where is Aditya…..nd mentally curses him for leaving her wid this new guy…nd ruining her plan….
When Shravan notices her restless…..he says…” Hey Suman…I m so sorry… I just took so much time of urs….I know u want to be free from me…..u go..I will manage….”
Suman looks at him for a moment….nd then says suddenly…
” You can join me” she herself…doesn’t know that y she said this…she never likes anyone except adi…being wid her at this time….so y him?….pity?…sympathy?… No it wasn’t any of these…..it was something else….she is interrupted in her thoughts…..by Shravan…
” Join u…for what?” He says….looking perplexed….
” You will know that soon…there’s still one place…left to show u….very few people know about it..come let’s go..”
Suman says nd holds his hand unconsciously…just like she does wid Aditya….d touch sends some vibes..through both of them….d contact….of their warm skins….makes them think that do they know d touch?…do they hve a connection wid it?….they both r staring at their hands…held together….by something more than fingers….’ Maybe destiny’ they think…..
Suman comes out of d thoughts….nd leaves his hand…..
” I m so sorry….I hve a habit holding adi’s hand… Nd dragging him along wid me…” Suman says…feeling a bit awkward….
” Its fine….let’s go” Shravan says…..
After some time they reach d place….Shravan is just lost in its beauty…..though he is not a peaceful kinda person…but d view mesmerises him….he looks at Suman… Whose face is reflecting shades of orange….” This girl has something in her…” He thinks….
Suman finds him staring at her…nd so she raises her eyebrows….
Shravan comes out of his imagination…nd says..” I was thinking…how did u find such a beautiful place…?”
Suman replies looking at d water ” I like peace….so I find peace….wherever I go…I found this place in d first few days of d college…nd from that day.. I come here everyday..sometimes..wid adi…but usually alone…”
” How can u even manage loneliness…I can never manage staying alone..?” Shravan asks….surprised…coz he is not a person who likes to be in peace away from d noise nd fun…
” Loneliness nd staying alone r not d same things….there is a difference- of choice…I love to be alone but I fear loneliness..” Suman says…still not taking her eyes of d water…she thinks about…how without a moment’s hesitation she told him..her fears…she hasn’t even told Aditya…or her bestie Ananya….in fact no one….so why him…..d water is still…..nd so is she…..she told him without him asking about it….she was so transparent wid him…..y ?
Meanwhile Shravan thinks….” Yeah… Those r what make our lives worth living it…- Our choices…..”
For quiet sometime they don’t speak anything…they just c d sunset..nd sky going dark…..both have d same question occupying their minds….”Is this dusk… D dawn of their story? “
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Wow
I think i have told uh many times k i literally imagine ur story
I mean its aweaome yr
The way uh write is just speechless
N the epi was so adorable
I cant stop smiling…
Post the next part asap eagerly waiting
Thankyou anamika…!!
Luv u!!
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So…where do I start from? uk wht, I’m not organized so lemme just blabber out (type out logically) something. The epi….ummm…it was…….awesomeness x infinity. Just the introduction of Shravan is soooooooooooo wonderful I wonder how will this ff go. I guess I’ll die for every wednesday. Uk u r a brilliant writer. Ur skills….the description of simple things just went through my heart. Uhhhhhhh!! Too much of good things at once. I better eat some lime to balance my smile. If u think I’m buttering u then let me inform u I suck at cooking.So no buttering, it’s all from my brain (my heart is too useless)
Stay blessed and take care
LOVE u
-Ariana
Oh Thank you so much Ariana….
For such a lovely comment…u made me so happy…
Luvvv uuu soooo muchhh…!!???
Kya baat hai sis
Thnx shramansangel…!?
Oh..so nice..and thanks u decided to write twice a week…that means will we get one more in thus week??
Thnx sona..
Nd yaah u will get one more chp to read this week…!??
Wowwww what an awesome ep .. just luv it .. u r awesome .. seriously !!!! U r awesome .. ?? .. hats off ??β ..
Post soon ..
Take care ..
Thank you Fatima…
Luv u !!?
Oh di,
Be prepared for a damn long comment..
Firstly, beautifully you described Shravan… Good to know that Shravan has someone heighted now..no looking down.. Perfect eyelocks <3 hehe..
And I am absolutely fine with your descision of posting..
Di its just incredible how you describe everything " d transparency she showed towards Shravan" this gave me pheels.. Di I absolutely love you !!
The way you decribed about ShraMan's feeling was absolutely perfect !!
I love how you describe the simplet things, and make it absolutely elegant.. This was brilliant !! You're a great writer !!
Loads and loads of love <33
Nikita ..
Do post soon !
Take care !!
Awww…thank you sweetheart….luv u loads nd loads…nd yaah I will definetly post soon…!!??
Diiiiiiiii…
See m not late!!!
Di di di di di….!!!!
What a supa dupa fantastic episode! I loved the chapter to the core!!! What didn’t it have? Emotions, humour, sparks, juss everything! There isn’t a place which I don’t find interesting!
And di which is the other day when you would post ur ff? U kno m soooo in loveeee with it!
And with u too?????
Love uh diβ€
Oh..thankyou laddoo…luv u dear…
Not decided.. Saturday..probably…
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Hey WS i really really loved d ep…!! It wazz just awesome….!! the way that u describe things ,emtions is phenomenal……!!!!! Thank u so much fr posting it today…!!
Love u so much
Take care
Hey maria…HAPPIEST BIRTHDAY DEAR….LUV U LOTS ND ND LOTS..KEEP SMILING.. STAY HAPPY…
thankyou…
Luv u??
Thank u do much fr wishes niyati…! π π
Love u so much !!
Take care…!
Hey Maria dear !!!! A very Happy Happy Birthday to u dear ???????????β¨?????????β¨???β¨β¨???????????β¨β¨?????β¨???β¨??β¨β¨????
Thank u soooo much Fatima……dear…….love u….!!! π π π
Happy B’day Maria di!!!
Hey laddo OMG thank u so much yr…..!!!!! Love u…!
Really WS it was nice as always it was so good I can’t tell
Shravo kya kaho
No words loved it
Post soon
I am waiting
Loved it
Infinity
Take care
Thankyou so much preeti…
Luv u!!??
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i,m blank i,m not getting a single word to appreciate u…. Seriously!!!! Today i,ll just say that u r my fv8 writer… Neither writing nor reading is my hobby so i rarely read stories but this…give me the feel as if i,m reading a novel.. And now if any body ask me abt my fv8 writer i,ll take the name ”NIYATI”
it was superb se be opper loved it………
Yippeeeee twice a week thanku sooooo much
Oh my god…thank you so much angel…that’s a really big compliment….!!!???
Luv u so so much dear…??????
Wow this was really wonderful ….I loved the way u introduced shravan ….dying fr next..
Thankyou you Sneha..next will be on Saturday…hope to c ur comment…!!???luv u…
BTW …happy birthday Marie dii….god bless us
This was so amazing ? ?
Really loved it. Your descriptions were awesome. ?
Post soon. xoxo
Thank you zainab..next on Saturday…I really wish to c ur comment..hope u will fulfil this wish of mine…!!
Luv u??
Hey WS..
How r u dear..?
Epi was amazing..
loved every bit of it…
wow yr.. u described everything so beautifully..
take care…
Lots of Love..
Ruchi.. π
Thank you ruchi…
Luv u..
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Oh…..so nice…and lovely update…..it was really very interesting…… loved it…….you wrote it so beautifully……you are an awesome,perfect and a mind blowing writer
I just love reading your updates…you make me wait eagerly for the next update of your ff.
Please please… please please please please please please please post soon…
Oh thank you kaya…next epi on Saturday…plz read…luv u too…???
Amazing epi loved itβ€οΈ
Thnx SR…hope to c ur comment on next chp too…!??
Ohhhh what was this niyati what was this…I mean u r so damn talented the things u come up with r just out of the world I can never dream of those things but u r the one who make dreams into reality
This was just fab I just loved the cosmic chemistry between shraman u r just too phenomenal for words
Superb yr and m thanking God that the browser is ok now coz agar itna acha chappy padh ke bhi main comment nhi karti toh mujhe Bahut guilt hota
Love u dear keep writing such good episodes
Oh wow u r going to post twice a week that’s great will be waiting
Love u a lot
And yes happy janamshtmi
Oh khushiii…..finally…!????
Thank you so muchhhh….!!???
M so glad to c ur comment… After weeks…?
Love u….?
Happy janmashtami…to u too….!??