New Beginnings
“Crunch, crunch, crunch” The sound of leaves under Karan’s feet was the only sound Sarab heard as he waited with bated breath for Karan’s reaction. “Yayyyyyyy” Karan yelled happily. Hearing Karan’s joyful glee Sarab opened his eyes which he closed instinctively while praying to God, only to be met with Karan jumping at Sarab happily. Grabbing Karan the impact had Sarab fall on his back with Karan hugging him happily yelling. “Yayyy Papa, I’m the only Koyal, this is just like my fairytales, I always wanted to have a special event like this in my life. It’s just like how it happens in my books Papa, I can’t wait to go home and tell Param and Seher. Wait, will they be sad to hear this Papa, I don’t want them to think their not special too” asked Karan suddenly quiet? Sarab held Karan close and closed his eyes to thank God, tears fell from his eyes and he could finally breath again. Sarab was grateful that the truth he just revealed to Karan didnt deviate him from the family. Sarab believed his and Meher’s upbringing but he was still nervous of a small child’s reaction to this matter. And thankfully Karan had not been any different now than he was before, he still ran to Sarab hugging him tight and he still thought of his siblings getting hurt instead of being hurt himself. Many people had told Sarab that Karan is a reflection of him and it was times like these that Sarab saw that and was prouder than ever. “They won’t be sad” said Sarab kissing Karan, “just like how your happy in their happiness, they will be more happier than you. You, Param, and Seher are all very special for Meher mama and me, never forget that Karan, Mama and Papa love you three very very much, more than themselves”. Karan nodded as Sarab stood up and held his hand to continue walking. As Sarab and Karan walked through the woods, Sarab explained to Karan slowly about Manav and their relationship. Sarab explained to Karan that Manav was who Meher mama had first met and both of them had moved on in their lives. Sarab wanted Karan to know that’s some relationships don’t work out the first time and that’s okay. He didnt want Karan to have any sort of bitterness towards anyone and as he grows up Sarab wanted Karan to embrace different relationships. As Sarab was explaining Karan slowly lost interest, Sarab was his father and that’s all that mattered to him, bored from Sarab’s talks Karan was now more intrigued by the small candy shop at the corner of the street and pointed at it as he pulled Sarab towards the shop. They had walked out past the woods and now walked in the sun as it shined down on the father and son.
Meher glanced at her watch and waited for Sarabjeetji and Karan. Param and Seher ran around the farm happily picking fruit and running to Meher to place in the basket she held. “Meher mama look we got such red strawberries” Param smiled as he showed Meher proudly. “Good job puttarji” Meher replied half lost. “Now when Papa and Karan come we can go pick the apples” said Param. “Karan will pick the apples, that too sitting on Papa’s shoulder. Right mama” asked Seher as she and Param laughed. “Right” said Meher. Meher smiled as she remembered Karan sitting on Sarab’s shoulder. Karan really was Sarab’s bandru, while Sarab held Param and Seher, Karan always liked sitting on Sarab’s shoulder Karan claimed he could see the world from up there and Sarab also enjoyed it. Meher had asked Sarab to not keep Karan there because he was getting older and heavier and the weight on Sarab’s shoulder could hurt him only to be told “Meherji, this Jatt can always carry his kids no matter how old or heavy they get. They will never be too old or too heavy for me, and Karan is my Bandru, where else is a Bandru suppose to sit. In fact Bandriji, I will always be happy to carry you too” hearing Param and Seher laughing brought Meher out of her thoughts. “Mama” yelled Karan as he and Sarab ran towards them. Meher turned around and was relieved to see the two. Karan was clearly happy as he ran to Meher first then to Param and Seher. Hugging the two he excitedly shared what Sarab had told him. Meher smiled as she heard Karan happily telling his siblings without being the slightest affected. Meher thanked God and hugged Sarab. Both Meher and Sarab could breath a sigh of relief, now there was nothing that could affect their family or their bond. The family spent the rest of the morning picking fruit and eating breakfast at the farm before they headed into town.
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My apologies to the loyal readers for this short abrupt chapter however I just had no inspiration for the future story as all I can see is the current actress in all her childish and selfish glory. Now my vision of Meher and her great character (which I really loved at one point) has been tainted by the ongoing actress and her antics. I didn’t know how to proceed and this was how far I had written till last week, which is also why it took me so long to write. Normally I have a story in my mind and then writing it is long and hard nonetheless it flows along. However this time I just didn’t know what to write. Since I had no vision for the story ahead I decided to end this chapter here. Ironically I may have also ended this chapter as abruptly as the original writers but that was never my intent. I apologize to every single reader, I am sorry 🙏🏽
@dropofthought its okay.. an abrupt good ending is way better than a bad one.. Thank you so much fo this update.. loved it.. atleast we have a memory what karans reaction would be had the makers not decided to favour their actress.. And yeah the actress is really annoying and getting on everyone’s nerves I think including Avinesh sir😡
@Radhika..Thats not a new thing..Roz ka dhanda h didi ka😂
@Dropofthought absolutely no issues..Your writing were a great remedy during tough episodes and it was nice reading to your articles!!..Do make a comeback later on!!Best wishes!!
@Dropofthought can u plz tell why the comments section are closed on other fan fiction of yours??
Hey Pixels I think we may have exceeded the number of comments or maybe the site had blocked us, hopefully this won’t happen this time. Maybe next time I will post a different page so we can discuss future ideas. Thank you so much for your understanding Pixelss and Radhikaji 🙏🏽
So sweet of you @Dropofthought
@dropofthought thank you for this wonderful story and also for thinking about a discussion page.. lots of love😍😍😍
Actually after a period of time, all comments sections close.
Open any old article or news…. u will see
Yes older comments are no longer available to readers, but hers ff isn’t old.
@Dropofthought, first of all thank you for your efforts on bringing karan and Sarab relationship to posetive ending! I felt your struggle in it. I think it is save to say, we all know and understands you how it was difficult for you to get in to stories when the on going story of CS and fl are busy at destroying the memories of the original story. So you did your best and I can’t thank you enough for that.
And as if using the kids weren’t enough.. now they use the last scene of mehrab again to attract audience.. such pathetic people.. they very well know that without showing sarabs face they cannot sustain on TV!!!
Yaa and they are even copying mehrab 1st anniversary song on that dance @Radhika😭😭..Now i want to ask one thing apart from this..where is nimrit’s body double now..no use of it anymore..is she completely fine to shoot all the scenes!!
@pixelss.. she loves shooting now🤷♀️
But what happened earlier 😂 @Radhika
@pixelss… earlier she was uncomfortable with the entire cast!!!
@Radhika even with bittu rana?? Just saw her story with param and karan and copying that scene from 2019.. thinking that it would be another success in her life😂..And she even promoted that dance of her and over acting mahir.. Seriously has she even done for mehnav..Mehrab toh bohot durr ki baat hogayi..Has she joined CS for intimacy??Always she was uncomfortable with Avi even in dancing..no expression nothing..but here she was just enjoying with a big smile..Such a turnaround🙄
@dropofthought thank you SO much for all the writing you have done thus far. It has been such a wonderful outlet that I think we all needed given all the has happened with this show!! Although I will truly miss your CS stories, you truly are such a talented write and I would read any and all of your work, should you decide to continue with this incredible hobby!
Disgusting makers . No words to say.
Still fans demand meharab / Avi sir
Many fan pages trend meharab. Just read Rajesh Ram Singh’s Ig post and comments.
There is no chance at all for Avinesh, Anita etc to return back. History. What I am surprised about is that the parents of the 3 kid’s have agreed to allow them to carry on acting – do they live next to the drama hall? Surely that cannot carry on much longer.
@Dropofthought – nice to see you back in action!
Finding the promotion so over the top. Lead actress never promoted anyone else until the last two weeks? Whether that was her brothers, kids or Sarab. Sorry too much for me had to unfollow her!
Not even the last 2 weeks but only for last 2 days..Wished if she had cooperated earlier with everyone with even 10% of what she is doing now..we wouldn’t have seen this leap in our lives
Hey guys thanks so much for the positive response. Also not sure if its a mistake Ayniji but I’m a guy lol!! You might have been confused as most fan fiction writers are girls but I told you guys that this was my first time and so honestly not sure about my future writing pieces, pehle apni toh kahani tekh se like du, need to focus on work and studies and then we’ll see. Also talking about Nimrit and her promotions while I’m sure she probably enjoys working with the new cast more as she’s surrounded by childish, immature people like herself but she also most likely enjoys being the only one from the old cast. She probably feels a sense of superiority in that way, and the other reason for her promotions are probably just to try to retain as many viewers as she can which is really just children at this point because no adult in their right mind would tolerate her nonsense anymore. She needs to prove that she was able to take the show on ahead as the “responsibility is on her sole shoulders” as she stated in her interview. As little her understanding is, the bigger her ego gets.
@Dropofthought, did I said something to offend you? That wasn’t my intention at all. I never mentioned any gender. When I said we understand, I meant it as a fan of CS. And good to know. As English is not my native language and I have to learn how to use it, I applogize🙏.
Oh no Ayniji, not all please don’t be sorry, I found it funny actually and it gave me a new idea. When someone said comments are deleted because the post is old you said her ff is not so old. It might have been a typo but I just laughed it off loll! Wonder how many others think I’m a girl?!
Ohoo yes I did say that, yes it was typo. And glad you laughed about it. 😄😁
@dropofthought I also thought you were a lady 😜
@dropofthought even i thought you were a lady! Sorry!😉
Her ego will one day be the reason of her own downfall.. Then she might still all her rubbish acts which is continuing with.
Earlier fans used to work hard with their edits and even one mention would have made their day.. Now it’s like roz ka dhandha😂.. Fans want attention without any hardwork and she is giving them..There she gets her supporters backing her..But the main ques lies here is till how long?? Her cheap tactics wouldn’t work after some time and she would have nothing to repent..Now she says log kya bolte h fadak nhi parts..Who knows this Seher character make her one day lose even the recognition of Meher..But whatever she says or does,one thing is definitely evident in everyone’s perspective that she never liked the original cast and was completely uncomfortable with them for the past 2 years..This can’t be denied now!!
Loll after clearing that confusion, I’m honestly interested, how many more guys are here? I know daily soaps are mostly a girl thing and I will confess my first interest in a show is mostly based on who the female lead is unless its honestly a good show or a comedy one but I want to know how many other guys are here?!
Ha Ha Ha. Yes, I’ll admit I thought you were a lady. Not sure why though, maybe, as you said, most of the writers seem to be. I am a guy too!!
Hahaha nice to know I’m not alone, lol!!
Hey @dropofthought it would be much better if you remain frequent here..Acchi jugalbandi machegi😂
Hahah for sure! Looking forward to such light fun moments!
Hey everyone @Radhika @AJ @Ayni @MD @Dropofthought have u seen the post by riya sharma from pkk..Such a beautifully penned note for the cast, her character as well as for the couple mayukar..The writing was so elegant and beautiful that it touched my heart.. Wished if nimrit could have done that but🤐🤐..
@pixelss.. that actress loved and valued her role!! Thats the difference
Even her show wasn’t that successful as CS “was” but still..its so beautifully penned down.. Being of fan..i also wanted to see this from her side but u know what sometimes dreams remain as a dream and now as a bad memory 😞😞
Has anyone read this: https://www.tellyupdates.com/review-of-choti-sarrdaarni-episodes-post-the-leap/
😡😡😡😡 is the person who did the review delusional?
Yeah @MD
More than delusional its paid promotion @MD..
@MD – you would have noticed most of us here have already been commenting in that article of Meera,
Reviewers should be independent and unbiased, not paid up members of the promotion team.
I’m just so shocked as to how low these people are willing to go and how many lies they tell others and themselves for the sake of a show that anyone can see has become so awful post leap. How long can this delusion go on for??!! At some point the poor quality of the show will be reflective in the trp…it just has to!
And guys can you believe this even the director of CS it’s busy showing the bts, the hard-working they are doing post leap🙄 And one thing i can’t understand of nimrit.. Half the time she irritated fans through her ig feeds and half the time with her stories and sometimes with both..I mean why can’t she chose a single way.. Daily same thing she reposts, Romance,romance,romance of the couple… It is irritating me to another level.. How i wished had she never been able to recover her ig account when she forget her password last month🤐
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Aree Megha kahan thi tum?!! You stopped commenting on my posts toh maine likhna hi chod diya. I thought agar The Megha Desai The Other MD nahin pad rahi to kya faida likhne ka, chodo. Tumhare bina maza nahin ara tha, ab jake sukoon mila! 🙏🏽
@Dropofthought 🤣😂🙌👏 you have such an incredible sense of humour yar
@Dropofthought what an amazing reply 🤣🤣🤣
And glad that her comment is deleted 😉
Ye mast tha @Dropofthought😂
Saw that comment from Megha Desai (before it was deleted) and I thought ‘Well, well, well, we have all types’.
@AJ.. now you are making me feel bad that I missed it 🤣🤣🤣
@Radhika snowflake is targeting you badly in that post leap review page
@pomel.. thank you for letting me know.. I will reply her
Guys did someone see cs director’s comments in his Ig post. Actually I can’t understand his language. Today he has replyed for a fan.
Which director @Cs?? Rajeev, jaladh or prabhat??
Rajeev
Wo sasta nasha karke baithe Hain..bekar mai fans ko poke kar rahe..Ignore maro!!🥱
Can you please tell in english . I can’t understand hindi .🙏🙏🙏🙏
Dear @Cs i said that the person is high on some cheap weed and is without any reason poking the fans because he suddenly came after 2 week to chat there..so its just better to ignore such people..no fan would literally give a f*** to him
@Cs.. just ignore that guy too.. as @pixelss said he is probably high on something or he may have some serious mental issues..
Among all the director prabhat sir is the most humble and fun loving person..he too was very sad when avi left..and as per sources it was rajeev srivas and pia bajpie(production) and the channel who were eager for leap..
Guys just heard that even molkki is about to go for a leap and only the fl would be retained and no one else..new ml lead ankit gera(who married sandhya) roped in!!🤐
Sorry wrong news..ml is also retained and ankit would be another ml and that would create a love triangle.. Why colours tv is so much interested in love triangles.. Now the show’s title itself will have no meaning🙄
Atleast they retain ml. But cs
It is the most disgusting show now. They ended everything which we used to love immensely . Specially Sarab
Guys I think that the show would be renamed as CS2 as i have seen that written in the script of actors.. through a glimpse
Not cs 2 . It should be overacting cs 😅😅😅
Rajveer = overacting
I saw a Ig video clip, his crying sceans are so horrible .
Actually I don’t want to critisize anyone but he needs to practise emotion expression. Before get the big responsibility as a male lead he should learn acting through cameo roles.
Yaa..@Cs other i didn’t find any fault that much but they can never match avi’s charm.. But mahir as rajveer is just disgusting.. He looks so bad and that is not acting..i think people watch show now to just look at rajveer and laugh..he doesn’t knows only how to act.. His expression through igtv videos makes me laugh😂😂
I don’t no why but I feel that Avinesh sir will come again to the cs.
Just a dream @qer.. that’s never gonna happen again!!
Silence here🤭🤭
Zero chance of any of the original actors coming back.
So guys I came across a scene from I don’t know which episode but it shows Seher doing the nazar ritual with Param and Karan and I swear it just looks like it’s Meher with her kids. I chuckled because I was thinking how in the world are people watching this pretending that the actress is now her daughter while she stands in front of her mother, which is her?!! The fact that the pic of Meher and Sarab is in the background doesn’t help. I haven’t seen the episode but I don’t understand why they still need to use that as a backdrop, they couldn’t have done this anywhere else in the house?!
@Dropofthought: Exactly. Interestingly, the two actors playing grown up Param and Karan are not a bad likeness of the kid’s, or at least how they would look like grown up. At least the makers did some homework. The problem is with the actress (Nimrit) playing the grown up Seher – feature wise and personality wise, there is very little resemblance between Nimrit and Kevina. All the makers have done is changed Nimrit’s hairstyle and nothing else and try and convince people she is Seher. Nimrit can change neither her face nor, for sure, her voice, and therefore lack’s serious credibility playing Seher. Just as you say, “Seher” is busy staring at her own photo in the background with her husband Sarab. The other somewhat ridiculous thing is scene’s being shot in “Canada” unconvincingly. At least before Serbia was Serbia! Here “Canada” is Mumbai or wherever. Too much artificiality now.
I didn’t realize they were trying to shoot in Canada because from the pics it literally looks like the same house with different colors. And exactly the makers have barely changed anything about the actress except given her colored contacts. Most actors when portraying a different character in the same show or movie also change their style, voice, manner of speaking along with overall mannerisms but not in this case. This may be why it’s so hard for some people to accept this show. It’s like they’ve asked Nimrit that from now on your not Meher just play yourself on the show. The young Seher had an innocent and touch of mischief which Kevina portrayed so brilliantly with such ease, Nimrit is almost a joke in front of her. Children are mirrors of their parents taking in parts of both, in this case I see absolute no Sarab or Meher, wait she is Meher?! 🤦🏽♂️
True that @dropofthought..The person who at present is going good is the one playing the grown up param but the prob with him is that he is just a bad copy of sarab and nothing more and has no Identity of his own.Karan is the only character in the show which like has literally no character of his own.. Seriously,he has traits of no one not even Manav😂..And as you said Nimrit cannot match the Kevina’s way of portraying seher..i seriously loved seher only during the kashmir track..but later for the leap they made her mahantha ki murat🥱🥱.i still remember that during the last week of mehrab that little 5year kid had asked i also need a husband like my father 🤐..And seher is but Nimrit herself that’s the only main issue.. They should have gone for a new actress!! And the leads..Tbh i haven’t seen acting of varun in insta clips that much so no conclusions but that rajveer aka Mahir Pandhi doesn’t know how to act!Period. He is just a modern day nibba in the show!
And u know what @dropofthought..in that clip seher didn’t have a look at sarab and meher’s picture because if she sees..it would be so cringe that even i can’t believe it..
@dropofthought @AJ
Nimrit doesnt know to act is the root cause of all problems.. she was supported earlier by a wonderful cast .. so her lack of acting was overlooked and there was no problem for anyone to watch the show .. but now with she being the most senior one apparently the whole show looks worst.. Nimrit doesn’t look great because in per personal pictures too she doesn’t look great.. she wasnt that pretty in her personal pictures… but the character of meher gave a her a pretty look.. and that’s gone in seher..
And our young little seher was so chirpy and bubbly in the Kashmir track when the original story was going on and the actress had not played the dirty politics.. Seher was a reflection of sarab.. she was so cute.. only her short temper matched that of meher rest everything was sarab..
Btw guys as @MD said earlier.. please do visit the Instagram page of @german_chotisarrdaarni_fans.. the page posts daily reviews of the old episodes.. and yesterday the page posted a story that their review holds a statement and I visit back the reviews and yes they are really eyeopeners for everyone to see why nimrit cannot play seher.. and how nimrit changed in the past 2 years..
https://www.instagram.com/p/CSI4IZqCb_8/?utm_medium=copy_link see this
Yaa @Radhika Meher looked more younger than seher… Her innocence, her beauty, her charmness was so beautifully presented but Seher is just so cheap!! Sometimes the question arises that if she is the daughter of Mehrab😳??And this isn’t a fresh story at all, literally everything is copied from original but in a pathetic way!!🥱
Yes this fan page is very realistic . It is very boring to log Ig because of Rajveer . Every where his bad acting . 😂😂😂 Worst thing is makers are trying to convert him to Sarab . Such a foolish act. If he wants to become a actor he should start his carrer from new show. Then no one will critisize him. But now makers use him as a puppet to show a qualities of Sarab. But no one can’t replace Avinesh and his acting . What a joke and according to Nimrith what a fresh story ……….
Oh great!! Avinesh and Nimrits music video coming up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Sorry but I cannot stop laughing… The woman didnt want to shoot the last episodes with Avinesh because she was too proud of her new show.. but looks like this music video is an old commitment and she cannot refuse it now 🤣🤣🤣 End result now she is forced to shoot for the video… well looks like karma is already hitting back.. now this song having the popular onscreen pair will become all the more popular and get more success than her show.. even the new viewers of the show will realize she looks like a mother or sister to the current cast 💃💃💃 I am happy now 💃💃
@Radhika..i think its a strategy coz nimrit is now the only face in CS..And its sure that this music video is gonna be a super hit provided its concept and singer are up the mark! Nimrit might get more famous and that may boost her daily soap in which she is working.. Isn’t it a political strategy to boost trp coz it’s hard to believe that the leads who had a patch up after almost 9 months and had so many issues in 2020 would suddenly agree for a music video. But for whose sake and why??That remains a question!!
Sometimes it may not a boost to cs. Because fans already upset with Avinesh ‘s exit. Otherthing is present male lead’s acting is horible . I think this video is negatively affected to the trp.
@pixelss.. no I think this music video was in planning since a long time.. due to busy shoots and covid it was postponed… it is to highlight Avinesh sir and nimrit as an onscreen pair.. Right now nimrit cannot refuse it because it will prove everyones accusation against her right with proof.. so she is forced to be a part of the video..
And no this will not boost trp because she is paired with Avinesh sir and this pair as in mehrab will be promoted . Their sejraj or whatever will have a down fall.. which is the downfall of the show..
Trp will decrease because of this video..
But @Radhika amidst the controversies going on the social media,fans pin pointing nimrit over her actions,her behaviour towards the old cast especially Avinesh,was it the perfect moment for this news rather the collaboration for a music video!!Again there might be such happenings that again the leads aren’t promoting even their music video..Their chemistry looked bleak as compared to the show and god knows what many more!!I just wanted to convey that i personally think that it’s a good idea but it shouldn’t happen so fast..Such happenings should take time especially when the conditions online aren’t that good with respect to the actress and her show!🤔
@pixelss.. online comments keep going on one side.. but even bleak chemistry between Avinesh sir and nimrit will look much better onscreen than the current couple in CS..
And Avinesh sir cannot keep waiting till everything settles down in CS.. and once he starts his next project he cannot make this video.. so its now or never.. And if CS could become the No 1 show without any OTT promotion then this music video also will be hit irrespective of nimrits promotion online..
So relax.. it is good that they do it now.. see Instagram..many of the CS pages instead of posting their sehraj edits are back to promoting music video of mehrab..