THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE – FEW SHOTS BY DEESH ( SHOT 1 )
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Dr. Mathews – Sachin Tyagi
Sherley – Daljeet Kaur
Sasha – Nikita Sharma
Anu – Kanchi Singh
Rahul – Parth Samthaan
“Mattttyyyyy!!!” I shouted at the top of my lungs. Finally. I have reached my home. Here, I am, in the doorstep of my home, with my eyes closed. “Gini!! Why are u shouting like this?” Mom’s voice reached my ears. I stood there with my eyes closed. “Where is matty?” I asked her with my closed. “Gini” Hearing this calm, soothing voice, I opened my eyes immediately. There he was. Matty. I wrapped my arms around him in the excitement of meeting him after a year. “Gini ! How are u?” he asked me as he caressed my hair. “Absolutely fine, Matty!” I replied. “I have told u many times Mathews, don’t let her call like that. why are u letting her call u matty?” Mom complained. “Sherley, she can call whatever she likes. I don’t mind.” He told her. “But you are her..” mom was interrupted by him.
“I know I am her dad” he said with a smile as he looked at me. I smiled back. Yes. Matty@ Dr. Mathews is my dad. He is a doctor and is respected a lot by the people here. I wanted to become a doctor like him. He is my inspiration, motivation, best friend, big brother, my first mom and a great DAD. I hopped inside happily, leaving my bags at the doorstep. “This girl! She should have been a boy! God!” I heard mom grumbling as she lifted my bags and headed inside. “She hasn’t changed. She always wants to see u first!” mom complained to matty. “Don’t be jealous, Mrs. Sherley Mathews!” I and matty chorused together. She glared at us. We laughed. “What’s for lunch today?” I asked her as I opened the lids of the vessels which were laid on the table. “Biryani?” I asked in joy as I saw it. “Wah! What an aroma! You are the best, Sherley mathews!” I chirped. “Enough! Stop buttering me!” she told me. I gave a sheepish smile to her. “Wash your hands and then eat” she told me as I was about to plunge in. “Mom! I am hungry!” I told her. “Wash. Then eat” She said as she snatched the bowl from me. “Not fair!” I told her. “Everything is fair, lazy monkey!” she told me. I giggled hearing that. I missed both of them a lot. I am their only daughter and hence I am pampered a lot by both of them. After a sumptuous lunch, I headed to my room to change. As I entered, the cool breeze from the windows welcomed me. It feels so good to be here. I wore a jeans and a checked shirt and headed downstairs. “Mom! I am going to meet anu. See u soon!” I told her. “Be back soon. Today is Jessie’s engagement. U remember? So don’t be late” she told me. I nodded as I left. Jessie is my cousin. She is getting married to an NRI in January. Today is her engagement. I walked along the lane to the bus stop to catch the bus to meet anu at her home. I, Sasha and Anu have been the 3 idiots, always hanging out together. I and Sasha study in chennai now and Anu is studying here. We both miss her a lot. So, we always make it a point to spend our Christmas vacation with her. While Sasha is a big flirt and manages to get 2 or 3 boyfriends at a time, Anu is a big foodie and manages to gobble 2 or 3 pizza’s at a time. Though, we 3 are different, we share a very good, beautiful friendship. To describe me in short, I am a tomboy. Well, that’s what the society calls me. All thanks to my boyish attire and look. I always wear shorts and jeans and had my hair short till I was in tenth. Mom made me grow long hair . I hate that. But she won finally and now I have a not so long or not so short hair. The whole town thinks that I should have been a boy. Even I do think. I have never shown interest towards love.
It is not like I despise that. It is that I don’t or I can’t understand it. “Hey Gini!” I heard a voice behind me. I turned. There he was, smiling at me. Rahul. The most sought after boy in this town. We studied together in the same school here till tenth before I moved to chennai. He is called “Mr. Handsome” by the girls here. Whatever. I don’t know what’s there in him that everyone is impressed by him. He is my friend. To be frank, his father is also a doctor like Matty and they both were best friends. So I was forced to make friendship with him. Well, he is a nice boy. I mean, he behaves like a typical gentleman. But he failed to impress me as he does with all girls. “Hi rahul” I waved at him, plastering a smile on my face. “How are u? It has been a long time since we met.” he told me. “Yeah” I told him.
“Actually Gini, I want to tell u something” he told me. I could sense nervousness in his voice. What the hell?? My mind was engulfed in a sea of negative thoughts. But, my brain told me that how could a much sought after boy like Rahul can fall for a mere tomboy. Right. “Tell me” I told him. As he was about to take my hand and place it upon his, I gave a dangerous look to him that he took his hand back. “Gini, I love u” he said it in a go. As he uttered these, my anger knew no bounds. More than anger, shock. How could this happen? I can’t believe my ears. I looked at him straight into his eyes. He lowered his gaze. I sensed that he was blushing. Duh! “Gini, u can take your own time. I am not forcing u to tell u today. U can tell me next week” he told hastily and ran away before I could reply.
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“What!!??” Anu and Sasha shrieked. “U mean the same rahul, Mr. Handsome!” Sasha opened her mouth in shock. “There is only one rahul” I told them bluntly. “No, even the milkman’s name is rahul” Anu said as she munched the last sandwich. I glared at her. “Wasn’t his name Raman?” sasha asked anu. “Yeah, but he wanted his name to be modern. That’s the reason” she said. “So, I thought that whether the milkman rahul had proposed our gini” she added and they both burst into laughter. I immediately snatched the samosa from Anu’s plate. “Gini! Give it back!!” she shouted. “U were enjoying laughing, now laugh!” I told her. Sasha’s phone rang. I grabbed it from the table and saw the screen. It was her new boyfriend. What’s his name? Ha, Shravan.
I picked the phone without paying heed to her screams and yells and turned on the speaker. “Hello? Who’s this?” I managed to speak that in a male voice. Anu giggled silently. “Is this sasha??” he asked nervously. “Sasha! How do u know my wife?” I asked him in a rude voice. Sasha covered her mouth with her hands. Anu was trying hard not to laugh loudly. I heard him gasping in shock. I bit my lips to prevent laughing. “Wife??”he yelled loudly. “But is she young?? How could u marry her? This is illegal.” he shouted. “Who the hell are u to interferre in my life?” I continued talking in a male’s voice. “Her boy…” he was about to tell before he realised and ended the call. I threw her phone on the bed as that coward ended the call in fear. “You and your so called love! Stingy crap!” I told her. Anu was clutching her stomach and laughing hard. “Gini Mathews, Don’t be over confident. One day you yourself will fall a prey to this stingy crap.” Sasha told me. “Never ever!” I told her determinedly. That would never happen. I am damn sure. But, little did I know that Sasha’s words would become true.
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“What are u going to say him?” Sasha’s question echoed in my mind again and again. I am waiting at the bus stop waiting for the bus. I always wanted to own a bike of mine. If I had one, there’s no need of going by bus everytime. But Matty told me that he would get me one after I finish schooling. “Love marriages are bliss. You know why? Because u choose your own partner and can be happy for lifetime. In arranged marriages, u have to learn to love a stranger who u are forced to marry. May be, the guy I chose is wrong. But not love.” These words of Sasha are confusing me. Does that mean that I should say yes to Rahul? Jesus! Do help me! The situation is making me mad. Initially, I was clear that I would refuse his proposal. But Sasha’s words are making me confused. Because, I am a girl who cares about my happiness. I am not that typical Indian selfless girl as they show in films and soaps. I can do anything for my happiness. My phone flashed. It was mom. “Where are u?? Come soon! It’s getting late” She told. “I am on the way mom” I replied.
“Hey green salwar! you are beautiful!” I looked at the direction from where the noise came. I saw a gang of boys who were flirting with Swati sis , who was waiting for the bus. She is like my elder sister and is very sweet. She gave a disgusting look to them. But they continued troubling her.”Mom, I will call u back” I ended the call. This scene made me furious. Before I could do something, I heard a loud noise of a speeding bike which came to a halt. “Oh no! He is here!!” The gang of boys yelled in shock. I turned to see who it was.
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Guys, deesh here. Thank u for your lovely support. Namish is leading guys. So, the male lead is Namish. I am so sorry Naimi, ragz, pinky and others who had opted Vidyut. But trust me, Vidyut is there in this too. Vidyut is playing an important role. His role is completely different from the previous one. I hope that u’ll like it. And Sally sisso, I am having a very big shock for u. But it will be after 3 to 4 shots. Keep supporting. Thanks for reading. Loads of love to u guys.
71 Comments
superb dear… so it will be raglak oh my god i lov to read ur ff… but vidyut pair ah irndrklam becoz raglak ff irk niraya…ana vidyt ragini stry edvm ila… never mind… take care dear..
Sorry rafee na ungala hurt panadhuku. Kavali vendam rafee ungalukkaga aduthu na edhavadhu ezhudhnena adhula nama gym boy dha hero. Pakka. But indha ff LA vidyut oda role ungaluku pudikum. Don’t worry rafee dear. Thanks a lotttt!! ?
Awesome epi deesh
.no problem I like raglak too.thanks for giving an important role to vidyut in ur ff.parth is looking cute when he is blushing. I am studying 12th and U??
Update soon
Thanks for understanding pinky. Yes parth is cute indeed ? Same pinch!! I am in 12 the too. Thanks a lot my dear pinky. ?
Where do you live? Which school?myself madurai , ceoa school.
Oh r u tamilian?? I am from chennai. St.Joseph’s
Ya I am tamilian. Born in chennai and living in madurai.hats off to you even in 12th pressure ur writing ff , great.my real name is swetha and urs ????
Good morn swethu. I am deeshna. Thanks a lot dear. I love writing and when great friends like u guys encourage me, it makes me write more and more.
Superb
Thanks a lot lovely ?
Om Shanti oshanna wowwwww my raginii? I am a silent reader
Lolly. Your name is so cute. I love lolly pops. Thanks for commenting. Yes, it is OSO. But my plot will be little different from the original one. I hope u all will like this. Thank u so much. ?
Awesome deesh chlo
Thanks a lot vk dear.. 🙂
Yippee parth is in update great yaar raglak make great pair when u import Ragini as a tom boy it makes me see a famous Malayalam film Ohm Shanthi Oshaana ? keep going
Yes it is OSO. It is my fav film and I love it way too much. But, I assure u that it will be little different from the original. Thank u so much dear. And yes Parth’s role is a cameo, but a cute one. Thanks again. 🙂
Nice.. Raglak pair ??it going to be awesome
Thank u so much mintu yaar. Glad that u liked it! Keep supporting. 🙂
omg u know i thought it would be namish and yeyyyyyy he is the one and superbbb part dear and a shock for sally ?????? loving it
Why do I feel you two have planned something against me. Warning you people like last time you both will cry very badly mere se panga liya tho
Hry kharbardarrr agar kuch essa vessa kiya muskil se toh tumne kuch light likhna surru kiya ha now i m warning u hehehhehe
And let me guess the shock okkk can i okkk i think sally is going to be paired opposite vidyut in this fff just say deesh i m right say na
Sally di, this time it is solo planning only. But your idea is great one. So, next time I’ll join hands with jazzy after all she is my partner in crime. So, jazzy be ready.. we have to plan something dhamakedaar for our sally sisso.
No sisso. As I said this will be a few shots and I will end it on or before new year. So u don’t have to wait long. Keep waiting till then.
Didu!! Ur dp is just awesome ? u know what till now I was waiting when will I go home. Today there was an exam for us in the afternoon followed by special class. ?? I was literally imagining urs and James bond’s comments. And I am laughing now ??. Yayy!! I am making u wait na? This is what I want ? jagga jasoos ????? gosh it is superb. Well for that, u just need to wait for the next epi. That’s it. So simple na?? But about your shock, u have to wait sisso. You know what I could not sleep after telling u about the shock. I am so damn excited. You know sisso, thanks a lot. Because of u I am experiencing the bliss of pulling the leg of an elder sis. I had one elder cousin of mine but I lost her 2 years ago. I know I am becoming emotional, but that is habituated from u only. It may seem like exaggeration but I am serious. I am so glad that I am having lots of sissos here. But frankly speaking, u, Sindhi di and asru sissy and malika sissy make me feel like as I am ur own sis. Well I am going on blabbering something. OK forgive me for that sisso. And u have to wait for ur surprise ??
I missed sowmya sissy aka my sweety ? sorry sweety. U are all my super 5 sisters
James bond jazzy! Aap apne dhimaag ko aise tez mat chalaiye.. Shaant hojao. And jazzu babu, I think your guess is wrong. So thoda intezaar karo. Kyunki intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai :p
This is not fair as per your speed it will take 3 to 4 weeks for my surprise. I have to be in this state till then?
one more thing jazzy, please do forgive me if my hindi is wrong
oh no! I forgot the main thing! Stupid me. Thanks a loootttt james bond! Glad that u liked it. 🙂
yes deesh next time we will plan something together sally will be shocked and okkk i thought kuch haddd se jyaada hi sooo may be sally in a cameo role or shaleen in ur ff hahahha ok ok i will stop my horses here only and i cant wait to know shock i m more excited than sally ?????
and forget to say heheheheh i have got one more name james bond i have soo many names that even i forget
Lolzzz ?? jazzy, I think u have to remember this too coz, I am gonna call u James bond only ?. Don’t worry there is someone gonna give u company for this name soon.
Whose gonna company to Jagga Jasoos. And I already read her comments but your reply to her confusing me. I’m very very very bad in guessing but most confused person. Okay so it can be my new year surprise? Yaar yeh new year kab ayega. I have never ever waited or got excited for new year in my life. This is the first time.
Yeyyyyyy sally is waiting for ur surprise deesh just postpone it hahahhh
Dare you postpone it. I’m seriously gonna kill Jazzy, so if you want your partner to be alive think about it
My dear James bond, even I like ur idea of postponing but what to do. Exams are strangulating me and somehow I am managing. So I plan to wind it up soon. But no worries. We’ll plan some other thing for sally sisso ??
Awesome dear
Thank u so much sweety. Glad that u liked it. 🙂
i am good…sorry foe the late reply…..MIND BLOWING update …..whenever i see your update i start to smile like a mad …i just love the name sasha i dont know why but i really do n the u named a character with “sasha” , i am overwhelmed by this name as soon as i saw the characters ….3 idiots is the other one to which i am connected …..coming to story amazing yaar …father-daughter duo cool!!!!…..gini’s convo with sasha’s BF is too funny , rahul , blushed aww…cute one n finally hero entry , nice …..it’s okay even i like namish so no probs …..the interesting thing is how gonna gym boy aka vidyut makes an entry …will be waiting eeshu….thanks a lot for spending your time on writing ff n replying for comments on everyone’s behalf ……hoping to see you soon…MERRY CHRISTMAS in advance ……..love you….tata…bye bye….;-)
Naimi, now don’t say sorry yaar. I am so happy that I make my friend smile through my updates. U also? Well, even I liked the name for no reason and hence I chose it. Yeah, parth looks cute when he blushes. Glad that u liked the 3 idiots convo. Thank u so much for understanding me. Yes, even I am interested after all it is my gym boy’s entry ;p Gosh! u start the comment with sorry and end with thanks! This is not done dearest naimi. U are breaking the rules of friendship. And yes I’ll be back tomorrow. Merry Christmas to u and ur family too. Love u more. Take care. 🙂
no need to be sorry dear… even I love namish so much… and now a days raglak ff’s are very less so I am glad to read it… and chappy was amazing as usual….
Thank u so much ragz for understanding. Am glad that u love namish too. Thank u so much! Take care. 🙂
Awesome
thank u so much di. take care 🙂
Awesome episode and thanks a lot for Raglak
No need of thanks ammu. Thanks a lot buddy. Yes it is inspired from OSO. Thanks again. Keep supporting! 🙂
It’s like Malayalam movie OM SHANTHI OSHANA story
Amazing update
Thank u so much for making it as raglak
Thanks a lot arohi. No need of thanks buddy. Glad that u liked it. 🙂
Anu sasha and gini convo was hillarious. Gosh how could she do this with Sasha. And that phone call haay allah I’m still laughing hard. Ufff. So RagLak pair. I’m so damn excited. Shock for me? really? Are you gonna make me cry oh what? Do tell me before starting that shocking chappy so that I can read it at home and only my mom can see my idiotic excitement. Because only she can handle me
Saly sisso! Have u seen james bond’s comment? Gosh! Do see soon. Eagerly waiting for your reaction. He he.. And that shock could be surprise too. Don’t worry sisso, I don’t want to make my sis cry. But u are gonna be shocked for sure. Poor auntyji. I think she must be prepared from now itself :p Glad that u liked their convo. And I liked that phone call part too. Thank u so much my dear sisso for your love and support which motivates me more and more. That shock wala epi will be the last one of this. So, u have to wait dear sisso. Lub u sho much!!
It is simply outstanding
Totally loved it
Ragini is confused about rahul’s proposal
Thank you so much for making it raglak
Is it hero’s entry???
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Yes yaar, she is confused. It is new for her, u see. And about hero’s entry, I think so :p Yes it is inspired from OSO. But I assure u that it will be little different from the original. Thanks a lot. And yes, I am posting it tonight. Thanks again. Take care. 🙂
Nd yeah if u don’t mind is it like malayalam movie on shanti oshaana
This reminded me of a malayalam movie om shanthi oshana..one of my fav movie..
Its a bliss to read ur stories my dear… absolutely loved it…….
Yes sree. Actually I told na that this is inspired from a movie.. OSO is that movie. Same pinch! I just love that movie more than vidyut ( sorry vidyut :p) Am very very very happy seeing the line of yours * bliss to read your stories* I am so happy that u are happy reading my work. Thanks a lot dear sree. Take care. 🙂
More dan vidyut? Smeone pinch me pls..vidyut wil b upset…lol
He he.. ??
Jst awsm Deesh..Seriously u rocked it yaar..Mind blowing..Gini n her friends convo was jst outstanding..Stay blessed..
Thank u so much my dear shruti. Am glad that u liked their convo. Thanks again and take care friend. 🙂
interesting nd is it similar to om shanti osana
Thanks arjuna. Yes it is inspired from that. Thanks again. Keep supporting! 🙂
Deeshuuuuuuuu!!!!!!! You are very bad yaar…How could you end this episode in the interesting time?? How could you?? Very thing is this…I am very angry on you????…OK now coming to the episode…It’s really very good and amazing…Gini and her friend’s conversation specially when Gini told Sasha’s boyfriend about Sasha that too in a male voice made me laugh???…But then also I am angry on you for the end…Anyways keep smiling always and stay happy…
Oh no! Riyu! My sweet choti sorry queen! Don’t be angry on me dear sisso. It is just to make the epi interesting. I am posting the next part tonight. I just hope that will cool down your anger. Please don’t be angry on me. Poor me 😛 Thanks a lot riyu. Glad u liked their convo. Love u. Take care. 🙂
Hey rly loved it…u jst write awesome Dan anything..???
Thank u so much sanswa. I am so happy reading your comment. Thanks a lot buddy. Take care. 🙂
Ohhh deesh sweety sry for late comment…fabulous update dear…loved it alot…..oh my god our ragu s tom boy…..Rahul proposal semma sweety….sasha and gini conversation semma…..omg omg namish s male lead…Our raglak story….oh my cute deeshu loved it…vartha yeadhuvum varala dear….waiting for ur next update sweety…tkcr sweety…
asru siso, don’t say sorry. Romba romba thanks sisso. Yes nama ragu tom boy. Am glad u loved it my dear sisso. Next epi post paniten sissy. Naalaiku update aagumnu ninakren. Therila. Unga exams epdi paneenga? Inum irukka? Nalla panirupeenganu ninakren sissy. Love u so much!! 🙂
amazing
Thanks a lot anju 🙂