Episode begins.
( Sayaam leads Krishna into the hall. Its dark. )
Krishna: Sayaam, what happened to the lights?
( All the family and some guests shout surprise and the lights turn on. The hall is decorated and there is a banner that says Congrats Sayaam and Krishna! Krishna smiles. )
Krishna: So this was a surprise for me?
( Sayaam nods. Krishna hugs him and kisses his cheek. Everyone hug and greet Krishna. )
Yuvani: Krishna, how did you like our surprise baby shower?
Krishna: I love it! I cant believe you did this for me!
Suhani: We would do anything for you Krishna.
( Baby stands at the side, bored. )
( The mysterious figure is shown messing with the electrics. )
Bhavna: Krishna, Sayaam come sit.
( Sayaam and Krishna sit together and open gifts from everyone. They smile and laugh togeher. Suhani smiles and thinks: Please keep my children happy like this always. )
( Krishna and Sayaam go to cut the cake together. Everyone claps. They feed eachother lovingly and Sayaam kisses Krishna’s forehead. )
Yuvani: So cute yah!
( They feed the elders and smile. )
( The guests are all chatting. )
Krishna: Sayaam i left something on the terrace i will just go and get it.
Sayaam: Its okay, i will get it.
( She holds his hand. )
Krishna: Thank you.
( Sayaam goes to the terrace. He gets what Krishna needed and is about to leave but sees a note. He reads it aloud to himself. )
Sayaam: You thought you had got rid of me forever. Well you were wrong. Im coming for you. All of you.
( Sayaam is shocked. He leaves. The mysterious figure was hiding on the terrace. )
( Sayaam returns to the hall and hides the note in his pocket. Krishna smiles as he puts his arm round her waist and sits with her. )
Yuvani: Look i bought sweets for everyone.
( Yuvani feeds Krishna and Sayaam. She hugs them both. )
Karan: Wifey, feed me too!
( Everyone laugh as Yuvani feeds Karan. Slow music starts to play. Sharad and Bhavna, Baby and Yuvaan and Karan and Yuvani dance together. )
Krishna: Sayaam will you dance too?
Sayaam: Of course.
( Sayaam helps Krishna get up. He puts his arms round her waist and she puts her hands round his neck. They slow dance together. )
( Sayaam whispers in Krishna’s ear. )
Sayaam: I love you Krishna and i will be with you always.
( He burys his head in her neck and breathes in her scent. She kisses his cheek. )
( All of a sudden it goes dark. )
Yuvani: What happened? Are there more surprises i didnt know about?
( Sayaam pulls Krishna close to him as he is scared something is going to happen to her. )
Sayaam: Are you ok?
Krishna: Yes im fine.
Suhani: I will go and see what happened with the lights.
( Suhani leaves. Meanwhile Sayaam takes Krishna to sit down. )
( Everyone is talking as normal. All of a sudden Suhani screams. )
Sayaam: Maa!
( Sayaam runs to suhani. She has been electrocuted. Her head is bleeding minorly. )
Yuvaan: I will call the doctor!
( All are gathered in Suhani’s room. She is awake. )
Suhani: What happened to me?
( Yuvani is beside her. )
Yuvani: Actually ma, the doctor said you had an electric shock.
Sayaam: I think someone messed with the electric system.
( Sayaam is pacing the room looking distressed. )
Suhani: No problem beta. Im ok now. Wait where is Krishna?
( Krishna is sitting in a chair. )
Krishna: Im here aunty. Actually, Sayaam and Yuvani wont let me stand so.
( Suhani is relieved. )
Suhani: Ok you all leave im okay now.
( Everyone start to leave slowly. )
Sayaam: Yuvani, can you take Krishna to our room. I will be there in a moment.
( They leave. Sayaam talks to Suhani. )
Sayaam: Ma, i went to the terrace and found this note just before you fell unconcious.
( Suhani reads the note. )
Suhani: Im sure he did this!
Sayaam: For now ma you just take care. We will see what to do tomorrow. At the moment no one in this family is safe.
Suhani: Ok beta dont worry.
( Sayaam hugs Suhani and goes to the electricity room. )
( He finds another note and reads it. )
Sayaam: I have already started my doings. And slowly i will snatch every bit of happiness away from your family. You just wait and watch….
( Sayaam looks on. )
Episode ends.
16 Comments
So good ❤❤❤
Thank you x
That was really gud..mystery gona start…update soon dear…
Thanks xx
so wonderful write
Thank you
Nice episode …….
Thanks
So horrible…..nothing to do with Kriyyam…
Thats really rude of you to say. If you dont like it, dont read it ok? No one asked you to read my fanfic that I work really hard on.
Don’t worry fanficwriter ur episode and fanfic are awesome.Don’t worry abt the feelings of others who don’t like it.Care for the feelings of ur fans.I was an awesome work.please post the next epi asap
Thanks A.tejwasi. So glad you like it x
Don’t worry fanficwriter! You have a lot of fans including me and always try to welcome critics..That shows your real success?
U don’t have anything nice to say Sonia then don’t day anything . Bc I wrote the sweet world of Kriyam and ik how hard it is
Thanks for standing up for me xx i know its hard and we use our own time and effort to do it aswell. Love your fanfic btw x
Superb