Hi all, back with double bonanza..
I had a music program in evening so couldn’t submit it earlier.
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Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri. Their families planned for rikara re wedding, but they have not yet confessed their feelings.They had some romantic moments.
The mehendi function and sangeeth were total celebration as it was in typical royal way. On the insistence of the elders rikara were not allowed to see and talk to each other. But they were truly missing each other wondering y they had this sort of feeling. During sangeeth everyone asled rikara for a dance, but they didn’t because Om’s hand was sprained and moreover both were so shy to do a performance in front of everyone. But the lovely shivika Jodi had a romantic performance. They were dancing like in a different world on the song “tumhe apna banane ka junoon, sir pe he kabse he”. Even Tejvi and shinky couples danced. Om was actually restless to spend sometime with gouri as he heard this song. But first of all they were not allowed to & moreover he thought gouri wouldn’t like it. But he at times felt that she had feelings for him; but he wasn’t sure. He didn’t want to pressurize her.He decided to give away every decisions to her.
He just wanted a break away from all this voices so he decided to go to balcony as there was a good view of moon from there.
As he approached there he saw that all lights in balcony were off.Only the full moon’s silky light was there. As he moved forward, he heard the sound of anklets; he wondered whom it could b.As he walked forward, he was stunned to see that view; it was gouri.Her face was lit up by soft moonlight & she was literally glowing like an angel. She was wearing a netted lehenga of white & blue combination. The seeping moonlight into her lehenga gave her a divine look. Om’s poetic mind was slowly coming up.He just wanted to see her like that for the whole night.
His thoughts were disturbed by gouri’s address.
” ka hua omkaraji?”
Om couldn’t speak. He wondered y she was making this sort of effect on him.He os still confused with his feelings.
” kuch nahi gouri. I ..I just wanted to enjoy this sight.
“what sight omkaraji?”
Suddenly he realized his mistake.
” this…this night sky gouri.” he tensedly replied.
G: tumhe dekha meri mehendi.
She asked excitedly.
But Om was just seeing her face. How perfectly this moonlight was highlighting her features!!!
G: did u see how much this mehendi has darkened. Even Didi’s mehendi has not darkened this much.
Do u know, as the darkening of mehendi increases, it means the ladki would be loved very much by her sasural…. specially by her pati!!!
Gouri thought about what she told only after a moment. She was same time tensed and blushing. She was tensed as to what Om would b thinking. But instead she saw that his eyes were having a special glow; may b because of moonlight she thought.
She simply smiled at him vaguely and moved away; she felt so heavy to face him. Om was anxious, he was feeling a warmth in his heart. He stood there for some more time adoring the moon and gouri’s face…
As all the rasams were over, both the families were now getting ready to move to Mumbai for the marriage. There was one day gap for the marriage. All reached OM safely and have settled. The mahurat for the marriage was the next day, in the evening.Both the families were having their own time. Media was not allowed for one day as so many preparations were left. The public attention was high because it was the marriage of oberois and the Jodhpur royal family. Kalyani dadi was very excited because it is the first time oberois were being bonded with a royal family. There were a whole lot of guests approaching; on the whole OM was very crowded.
Gouri was getting ready in her room. She was preparing to visit the mata ki temple where she had first visited when she came to Mumbai for the first time.She decided to go alone as all were busy. Moreover she wanted to spend some time alone.
She had asked permission from dadi and didi. She wanted to ask Om , but she saw that he was enjoying with his brothers; so thought not to disturb him.
It was almost 7 pm. Om was going to meet Gouri to show her the photos of their pre marriage wedding shoot. She was very reluctant and uncomfortable at first but then both were amazing in the whole session; the photographers told. Om remembered, she was so shy in some close postures but he had made her comfortable. But those pics turned out to b so romantic. He was again and again seeing those photos and adoring them. But as he entered her room, he saw her missing. He began searching for her in the whole mansion. All gave the same answer that she had gone to temple but no one saw her coming back.
Om’s heart was beating like hell, his hands were cold and shivering. Her phone was in busy mode all the time.
It was almost 9 and there was no information of her.Alk the guests were gone but the families were tensed. Anika was continuously crying. Shivru were frantically searching for her whereas Om was sitting blank. He was nearly having a chest pain . He was feeling a. heavy head. He was not able to bear the tension.
For the first time , he went to Mandir . He was folding hands and crying . He didn’t pray but only cried. This was becoming unbearable.He went to his room and opened his draw of some leftover drugs & syringes. But gouri’s slapped face came to his memory and he threw away all bottles.
He went to shiv parvathi idol in his room. This was her favorite idol when she was his student & so he had brought it to home.He was asking Sankarji to give her back to him.
Suddenly his phone rang. He nearly jumped on it and saw her name in it. He took the phone and cried out her name.
” Omkaraji…. please save me…or he will…he …..”
Om’s mind was engulfed by fear.
” Gouri… I will…I will..where r u ….just tell me…”
” woh….mein…mein … bareilly….”
Suddenly someone snatched the phone away and Om heard another voice….a voice which made his blood boil…
” Sehri babu!!!!”
Om growled….”KALI!!!!!!! How dare you.”
“Slowly Omkara sirji, tumhari hone wali patni…nah….meri hone wali patni Gouri is safe here.”
” don’t tell her name with ur filthy tongue I will chop it off!!!!”
” oh sirji, I thought of marrying secretly. But she became over smart.Its ok , I’m in bareilly. Any way u won’t b able to rescue her nor u will escape. So see our marriage and u can go to heaven peacefully.My people will come to your gallery in 15 mind. U have to come with them. Don’t take ur idiot brothers with y. Don’t even tell them the location, then u will not see her ashes.
” Fine…fine …I…I. will come but don’t even dare to touch my gouri.Now just give the phone to her…fast!!”
He heard her crying.
“Gouri… please dear don’t worry.I will come…for sure my dear… please don’t cry.”
“mujhe pata Omkaraji that u will come.Sankarji will save us…but please please b careful.
” I will gouri…. I won’t give u to him…I want u… I can’t live without u….” both rikara didn’t realize what they were telling, because of their tension and anxiety…..
Om was in a Jeep surrounded by kali’s people. It was surrounded by many other jeeps filled with kali’s people; all were armed with swords.
He was led to a dark room blind folded. As his fold was removed the saw a dishevelled gouri tied on to the chair. She was smiling thru her tears seeing him; her attire was terrific. He couldn’t see her like this . As he moved forward, a hand caught his neck tightly, it was kali.
He was smirking. Gouri was tired but she started screaming.She felt that her heart would collapse now. Kali asked his men to catch Om.
He went to gouri and untied her. He was holding her sideways. Rikara were very much disturbed by their position. They were led outside were there was a small temple. Mandap arrangements were done.
” b4 our marriage sirji, we have to do a bali; to sacrifice a human life. U r perfect for this isn’t it sirji.”
Gouri was so tensed. She began praying Sankarji to show some way.
Om was very angry. He fought almost all the men who were catching him. A raged kali took a sword and attacked Om lashing it on his chest.
Gouri screamed. Om managed to balance and not fall; it was paining.Not by that wound on his chest but by gouri’s screams.
Om was taking few steps backward, but kali was moving forward to lash the sword. As he raised his sword Om closed his eyes and turned his head but he heard gouri’s screams instead.
As he opened his eyes he saw that most terrview. Gouri had come in between him and Kali and….Kali had stabbed gouri…..
Om couldn’t bear this as a heavily bleeding gouri fell on Om’s hand….His hands were wet with her blood.
Om screamed to the top of his voice. KALI!!!!!!!?
Precap: – the wedding?????
Please read the next one too as it is also updated.
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????????? omg shraddha dear…. Wht did u do????? Huh… I hate this kali…. hope gauri will b fine n om will teach that bastard a lesson……. Finally they r realising their feelings……. Pls update sooner….
Hey Richa, do check out the next dear?
I have no words to describe ur ff.It’s 2 gud.
OMG last part was so emotional.keep writing dear.
Omkara saw two moon in the solitude night away from hustle bustle of normal dance sangeet function..one above the dark sky to illuminate it with its light and the other in the jodhpur palace to light his dark life to fill it with numerous colours, his personal moon, his Gouri.
Both enjoyed each others presence. Gouri’s simple word make his eyes twinkle in happiness and the same love is reflected on her tomato red canvas of identity ..her face. The colour of his glory,his love for her.
Gouri’s every thing starts and ends with her Shankarji. She trust her Shankarji, believes in him and he believes in her and this made him believe in her Shankarji as he prayed to Lord Shiv- Parvathi to return his fiance- love safe back to him . Omkara Singh Oberoi who makes idol of Gods, the perfect creator who creates the creator of the whole universe prayed for his fiance, his unconfessed love. This love virus spread this good disease in him that he realised , his drugs are unable to cure any more, that only Gouri is the treatment for this and he took silent vow to rescue her to make her him, promised the same to Gouri, assured both of them, consoled.. transfer some strength to her and reach her finally alone like a fighter surrounded by enemies to save his princess from the clutch of Kaali kidnapper.
Every drop of his blood for her and her tears for him underwent the test of Love and they both passed after this examination of ishqbaazi to reach a different level in their unconfessed love for each other. Hope to see their more deep colour of Love, passion and desire for each other, more red then the Mehendi on her palm and his blood at the point of sword to paint their life and love canvas.
Wow yaar… Today also thr s double bonus or not… waiting for the next part
Fabulous marvelous it’s so good. Waiting for next
Wonderful… superbbbbb… finally they will realize their feelings…fight sequence ???
Phrases ??????
AMAZING BEAUTIFULL CUTE FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB?????????
Hi uf, thanks for the comment yaar?
Omg !! This was an epic . I have no words to describe your way of writings.
Hey bhagwan!! Ye Kali thakur Kyu wapas aaya?? ye kya ho gya!!
Superb update
No words to express dear.. what a suspense i really like it.. I like this om who is now understanding his feelings towards gouri
Nice epi. U know di i always admire dushman because when they try to harm us. Instead of damage our life get colourful.
Kali is also like that character .