Hi all, enjoy the next chappy.
I’m sorry if this is long & boring??
COLOUR 17
Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
It was gouri’s peheli rasoi. She entered the kitchen to see anika & jhanvi there.Anika ran & came to gouri.
A: chutki, y did u come?
G: didi, kyu, peheli rasam hai na?
J: lekin gouri , ab tumhari galat
G: I’m fine maaji, I dont have any problem.Waise shall I make Puri today?
J: Of course beta, Om too likes it.
Om entered the kitchen and saw gouri working.He was angry; she should have thought about her condition.
O: what r u doing gouri? U know u needs rest right now…isnt it??
G: par omkaraji, ye rasam hai na
O: U can do rasam next day also right? U will b here na?
G: it’s ok , I am fine now.
O: how can u decide alone? abhi abhi u need rest. Come come with me.
He took her by her wrist.
Anika and jhanvi were enjoying this cute conversation.
A: ahem..ahem.Mr.patiji, now u stop caring for ur wife alone?v r also there here to look after her?( smiling)
Rikara were embarrassed, specially Om.
J: oh, come on anika, y do u tease him? In fact it is he who has to care her the most na?
O: no bhabhi…wo…it’s ok let her do it.But please look after her, ask her to eat medicines too.
A: where r u going?
O: I’ve important work in office and gallery.
J: wait for breakfast na Om.
O: fine mom.
Gouri wanted to ask him something.She followed Om & stopped him.
G: woh omkaraji, y did u drink that chai?
O: woh… actually…I …I didn’t have time to wait & felt thirsty too( he was lieing )
Gouri was sad , she thought he liked the tea and so drank it.
It was breakfast time & the table was set.But Om was about to go to office. He didn’t stay back even when jhanvi told him;she asked gouri to stop him.
Gouri was arranging the table and saw Om passing by.
G: rukiye na, Omkaraji.Please have breakfast & then go, else u will b tired.Please , just have it na.
Om agreed and sat for Breakfast smiling.Rudy was seeing all this.
R: chulbul bhabhi, didn’t u see, O is obeying all ur instructions.He is becoming a very obedient pati.OMG!!u r awesome bhabhi!!
O: duffer, just shut up
R: I’m saying the fact na, then y r u calling me duffer? y mummy?
A: are rudra, sach hai.Even Billiuji is not so obedient.What is ur trick gouri? Teach ur didi too na?
Sh: anika!! what r u saying? I’m a problem maker? haan?
A: haan Billiuji, tum hamesha tadi rahi hon .
Sh: oh, om u r lucky yaar. Kam se kam gouri doesn’t irritate u na?
A: Billiuji!!?
The family had a very good time
All rasams were done.In ring ceremony, both om& gouri found the ring together.Om won in finding his name in her mehendi too.
In the evening there was a grand party.Rikara were the centre of attraction.Both glowed in black and gold.Om was in a swag mode with suite; he was stunned to see gouri in an off shoulder gown in total Western style.He didn’t forget to compliment her in this attire.
All the gathered guests were adoring the couple; they looked divine.Both were perfect match for each other; match made in heaven.
Rikara were secretly adoring each other; both were secretly seeing whether the other person was nice.Later both bumped into each other with food plate.
G: ka hua omkaraji, r u hungry?
O: no..woh..I was taking food for u, u seemed to b tired.And by the way for whom did u take this?
G: I was taking food for u omkaraji!!!
Both had a hearty laugh.Gouris family was about to go back to the palace.Both aniri were emotional; they could stay with family only for a short time but still was being very much lived by all.Shivom were there to console and comfort them.
It has been one week since rikara marriage.This whole week was tough for Om , as he had to manage both business and his art works; he was also caring gouri like a kid.She was not even allowed to go out of OM, without total recovery.Gouri was being cozy in his care.
Rikara’s bond was a beautiful and unique one.It was true that they had not confessed their love but both knew that they were always there for each other.
It was night.Om was working madly in front of laptop.He had to prepare a project as well as an idol the next day.Jhanvi was sad that Om didn’t come down to have dinner; but gouri told her that she will make him have it.She took the plate and saw Om staring in front of laptop.
G: omkaraji, just have this & continue.
O:oh not now gouri.
G: just 5 min only.
O: no way gouri, this all pending work since I was there in Jodhpur.
Gouri kept the plate and was arranging bed for her & couch for Om.As she turned , she saw Om had already started working on idol.He was wearing his big specs.The idol was almost complete except some finishing.
G: omkaraji, can u have this now.
O: gouri, u had dinner now just go to sleep.
G: who told I had?
O: (shocked) what ,didn’t u have dinner? Y
G: because u didn’t eat?
O: what shall I do to u gouri? U r impossible
G: u should have the food now, then I will also have.
O: hmm…u r becoming like bhabhi.
G: no like bade bhaiyya.
O: fine then, I will complete this, u just feed me.
G: fine .
There followed a very beautiful dinner session.Omkara was keenly working and gouri was feeding him in correct intervals; she did everything as needed. She gave him food & water in correct intervals.
He was also talking in between about the techniques of sculpting.Finally he finished the work.
O: finally….
G: yes you finished the food. yay….
Om was adoring her antics.
Om stopped her by holding her wrist.
O: u didn’t have food na.Come I’ll give u.
Now Om started feeding her.Later
G: bas omkaraji.
O: just 2 parathas and u stopped,no.
Suddenly they heard a knock.The door opened it was Rudy and Anshika.
R: oho, love in air, O feeding chulbul bhabhi!!!
O: what is it now? did u make any problem with her.
G: come on cherry, ka hua ?
O: kya hua sweety , did chachu make any problem?
R: this is not fair O, am I the international problem maker here?
Shivay came to the room.
S: woh Om, anika is having fever na, so let cherry sleep here.
Ch: haan today I will sleep with omkie & chulbul chachi , yipee…..
G: haan chachi’s cherry come let’s sleep na?
Ch: no, I want to play video game with rudy chachu.
R: yes come on cherry.
Sh: no no, cherry it’s already 11 . U should sleep now.
R: pls bhaiyya just half an hour .
O: what is this, u r her chachu, elder to her. It’s already late. She has to sleep now. Just go rudra.
R:(pouting) fine good night all of u…
Sh: this boy na… bye gud night cherry…don’t disturb chachu & chachi, b a good girl, ok?
G: cherry acchi baccha hai bhaiyya, isn’t it?
Ch: bye daddy, gud night( kissed shivay)
Gouri arranged the bed and cherry was jumping on the bed. Gouri layed down cherry.Om was gonna sleep on couch.
Ch: chachu, come & sleep here. I want to sleep near both of u.
Om was worried.Till now they both have never been in same bed.But cherry was insisting.
” Omkaraji, please…”
It was a beautiful sight. Cherry in between rikara; cherry had both om’s and gouri’s hand together on her with her hand on top of it. She was cuddling on to both of them and slept with a smile on her face.
Precap:-
Om: gouri don’t behave like typical wives.
G: yes omkaraji, I will behave like a patni only.
O: don’t try to show the rights of a wife on me, did u get it???
Gouri was crying on Anika’s lap….
I know this precap is weird.Im trying for a small twist. U will see it in next chappy.
Hope u will like this. waiting for all ur responses??
43 Comments
yes the precap is hell weird
plz update soon
thanx for the cute episode
Hi aashi, thanks for commenting yaar.
Next chappy coming soon
Awsm… Red for romance
Thanks rasi, for colour suggestion.
Superrrrrrrrrrr…. Just fabulous….
Superb update…?
Excellent
Kya ho Gya om ko ???
Wait dear……
Keep following…
Hiiii @shraddha….
1. CONGO on ur Hatrick for DOUBLE DHAMAKA EPISODES…..
2.SORRY I couldn’t comment on ur previous episode as I was travelling with low phone battery.
3. All ur episodes are just WOW , awesome , fantastic and mind blowing….
4. I just love the way u present the love story …. LOVE U DEAR….
5. I HAVE COMPLAIN…..
Yesterday why did u post ur episode so late??… I was just constantly checking my phone for ur FF even in late night hours with low phone battery…. After that I HARHARIYE KE got KHIDKITOD SCOLDING (not scolding exactly but a kind of warning….) from my father for using the phone with low battery that to while travelling long distance… doing GANGARAM OF MY BRAIN… .. (MAAHI’S PUPPY FACE AFTER GETTING SCOLDING)….. ( don’t laugh so muchlaugh
@SHRADDHA)…
6. Any way I always love ur FF… (U know this very well and I have also written a POEM for u …hope u remember)…
7.For CHAPPY 16 & 17 the colour is YELLOW and Red- Symbolizing Shining with feeling of love…
8.Waise Did u waited for my comment on ur yesterday’s episode… ( wink wink wink)..
1. thanks , not hatrick I have given double dhamaka for 4th time!!!
2. its fine, no need of sorry
3,4. Thanks for that compliment
5. sorry I had a music prog and was tired. i HAD ALREADY TYPED THEM BUT DIDNT GET TIME TO POST.
Happy to know that u were gangaramed my dadi….he…he…
6. Of course, I do remembert ur poem.
7. Thanks for colour suggestion.
8. waise no, I didnt really miss ur comments( he…he…)
Awesome yaar…. Excited for the next twist…. Waiting for the next double bonus…
Amazing. The updates are always quick which I love.
Hi dear, i will try to maintain this pace yaar.
Awesome yaar shraddha… Loved their cute moments… But precap?? ? wht happened?? Pls post soon.. Can’t wait to read more e…
Thanks richa, dont worry, Next chappy coming soon
Awesome epi….loved it
Thanks dear, keep following
I Like Your Fan Fiction Episode. You Have Done a Good Job. Waiting For Next Episode.
Thank u, nitish
Fabulous
Fantastic episode dear, but precap ufffff a cliffhanger, plzz post the next update ASAP
Hi dhar, Next chappy coming soon
OMG It’s like a sweet dream 4 me.It’s more than awesome.I loved it.
I am loving ur double dhamaakas.
Keep writing dear.
Precap seems to be horrible.
Eagerly waiting for next dhamaaka.
It’s not borong.It is absolutely ????mindboggling.
Hey shraddha it’s as always amazing. Waiting for next update
Thanks radhika?
AMAZING CUTE FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING SWEET SUPERB?????????
It is awesome dear…
Hey Shraddha.. Such a wonderful parts and loved all their cute moments and they have come closer now..
Also Om’s care for Gauri is fantastic and love this caring Omi.. want next soon..
But don’t forget our FF too
Hi Verna,thanks dear.
Of course not??
Hey forgot about colour.. Pure white for love and colour for caring
Hi dear.. it is nice to maintain some suspence.. why dont u try to write an ff about shivika bcoz now the track is not good in the serials..and also its just a suggestion.. ur ffs about goruikara are more beautiful than the original one
Thanks a lot deepu.
I’m big big fan of shivika and yes I want to write one but I can manage only one @ a time.
But definitely I’m gonna try one
That’s good…as of now u manage gourikara only.. its just amazing dear.. ur pov is just awesome
I ever watched a single episode of ib or dbo but when i was reading a ff i saw ur ff in rwcent posts so i started to read and ur ff is aweso.e . U have chose a different way like this colour idea etc. I dont know much on these serials but by reading ur ff i really want to see dbo and gauri and i too miss rumya just from ur comments i saw rumys pics and i juz too miss her eve though i sont see dbo i know hiw much rumya fans are here . I cant understand this chulbul thing but i loved it iam reading ti in a flow .0 ls update next episode soon . Iam eagerly waiting .
Hi Aliza, so happy to know that u have started to watch DBO & ib becoz of my ff. A big thanks for commenting.
Please please do support me further.Please do pm me if u want to know full story of chulbul?
And I am cent percent sure u will love shivika and rikara and of course rumya if u start watching both shows, u will become addicted to both for sure?
BTW, IM A BIG FAN OF VITHARV .
I am really sad that jndsd is gonna end.
I would love to write on VITHARV too
Pls write on vitharv soon . Only way for our jndsd family to contact are ff and os so s write a nw unique ff on vitharv iam waiting for it and di pls read my ff made for each other jndsd its only 7 episodes. I will post next soon .and pls pm me about chulbul
Cherry is a vector to carry the love story of Rikara to a new level by making them sleep on the same bed as husband and wife.
Romance can never be uninterrupted inside of Oberoi Mansion as Shivaay- Annika- Rudra keep pulling their legs always.
Care and wife duty is making Gouri a perfect wife ,concern, love and all the feelings is taking place to rule her heart and this is all new to Omkara to get love unconditionally except from brotherly love of Shivaay, Rudra and then Annika. This may be making him awkward in his married life so, the rest and his irritation may come as its result to follow the rest outburst,its normal for a man like Omkara to react that way………
Thanks astha di, yes this married life is new to him, so it’s natural for him to feel irritation due to new found duties or responsibilities to not only care for him alone but also for his wife.
Finally.. I did it.. I completed ur all parts.. Its amazing.. And now the most important thing is colour.. Yes I want to give this Red the colour of love & mine favorite too… Actually not only love red can express many more feelings like fear, anger, trust & Love..
Asum update
Wow..yaar Shraddha..you never leave to charm your readers
Awesome
Amazing…Its totally bind of many emotionss