Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back
Special thanks to aliza, who started loving ib and dbo by reading my ff.
I don’t know if u will like the current plot.Im just trying to give a new shade to rikara.If u guys seriously didn’t like this, please please do tell me.
Colour suggestions
Mahi: yellow- shining
Nikita: light pink – sweet moments
rasika: red – love
Colour 18
Gouri was slowly recovering.She was being engaged in her studies & art classes; but it wasn’t Om who took the classes as he was way too busy with business & artworks.In fact Om was actually beginning to b indulged in business; he had actually entered into business to prove himself in front of Tej & to deal with Svetlana’s 100 core challenge.But he soon found out his taste in business with the help of shivay & have dedicated himself totally into this field.
But gouri was really missing him; she was alone in all her free time.As anika was also busy with Anshika,sahil and her event management company gouri couldn’t spend more time with her.In fact even Jhanvi,pinky & dadi couldn’t fill the void of Om in her life.Most of the days he would reach home in the evening, just have his dinner, finish his works & sleep very late.Morning, gouri wakes up early but do not disturb him.He will have food and go straight away.Gouri never complained but still her heart has been yearning for his attention; she never told this to him as even now as she kept a small distance from him.T hey weren’t even seeing or sha
He never took her for art exhibitions like earlier & she didn’t ask him too.But one fine day she had gone for Om’s exhibition alone .She saw Om there & was about to walk up to him but was only stopped by a huge crowd of his fans.She was happy initially seeing him surrounded by this much popularity but was also disturbed due to the approach of some hash bush lady fans.She wasn’t jealous but was very much irritated.She just went back without saying anything…
Today was a special day. Om was taking gouri for a dinner.She was so excited; this was their very first outing after marriage.She had already selected the suit for Om & she herself was getting ready.She saw Om looking at the outfit selected by her; she expected some sort of comments from him.But Om was busy in his call so he just took the suit and wore it.Gouri was in a beautiful designer sari which she wore when Om came to see her in the hotel; she thought he would remember it but he didn’t.
They were going by car.Om was all the more very silent through out the journey; she thought that he might b in work stress.She didn’t know how to ask him or comfort him.
As they reached the restaurant, they were led to a beautifully arranged table.Gouri was so happy; it’s first time experience for her.Om was waiting for someone; they were having starters.Gouri was about to ask him about whom he is waiting.At that time few guests approached Om.It was some of the business partners & their family.All of them moved into the big table.
Gouri was sad; she thought of having some nice time with him & here there is a group of 10.Bith were sitting at 2 different corners; gouri was surrounded by the wives & daughters of Om’s business partners.Gouri could interact with them quite well.
All the guests already had their dinner b4 so all of them were having wine.She wasn’t interested in all this.Gouri didn’t order anything but she saw that Om was having dinner.She was uncomfortable in this ambience.She excused herself from the group & sat on the couch alone close to the table.
She could hear faint talks of the women group that Oberois DIL was way too traditional; not up to their fashion or style.Gouri couldn’t tolerate all this but she couldn’t react.
They continued all these talks.Gouri finally snapped back at that lady.
” madamji, whether I’m traditional or not I know that I’m a good wife and DIL in all respects.Wearing short and fashionable clothes like your daughter is not the identity of womanhood.Being a good woman means she should behave politely and wisely in a society.Fashion is just beautification of outer form, only if u r traditional in mind u can beautify ur inner soul.In fact beauty of a woman lies in beauty of her soul.”
All were flabbergasted, even Om.What she told her was true. But the lady was super annoyed. She asked Om back
” Ur wife’s theory is good.But it was your dad itself who had illegal relation with another lady , isn’t it? What about that?How can u justify that?
Om was hell shocked.These were all chapters which he was trying to forget.He couldn’t bear all this; he couldn’t speak harshly to her.All the guests began discussing about this.Om was embarrassed, his frustration was increasing.Gouri was frightened to see Om like this; the same Om who had slapped her.To change the topic ,he diverted their attention back to business discussion.
After all the guests had gone back, Om took his car and went for a drive leaving gouri behind in the restaurant.She was desp; she felt that all this happened becoz of her.But she couldn’t bear anyone insulting her.
It was almost 9:30 & Om had not come back till now.Gouri was waiting for him in a couch with teary eyes; she wanted to call bhaiyya and didi but then they would b tensed.The restaurant staff was now and then asking gouri when he would come back as it was closing time.His phone was also off.She feared something bad.She was praying to Sankarji suddenly she heard the screeching sound of car….
Om was not in his senses .He bang opened his room’s door.He thought , his past would never stop haunting him.Gouri was silent all this time now she couldn’t b silent anymore.
G: what have u done omkaraji?
O: what ???
G: y r u so angry?
O: don’t u know the reason?
G: I have been noticing u for few days. What happened to u?
O: I don’t have any problem. U r creating problems
G: ( shocked) so am I ur biggest problem?
O: gouri , I didn’t mean that.
G: I know what u mean. Today itself u ignored me to the core.I thought only we were going for dinner and there was a big group. U could have told me it was a business meeting. Then I wouldn’t have come to create problems.
O: what rubbish r u saying?
G: not rubbish.Did u even ask me whether I ate or not?No. Fine. U left me just like that alone and went somewhere.U could have at least told me.I was sitting there alone for hours.
U have been ignoring me for many days.I can’t bear this anymore.
O: hey..dont behave like typical wives saying husband is ignoring,not showing love etc.
G: yes, I’m traditional.Thats the problem now.U could have got some other better modern wife who would go for night parties na, like that anty told.
O: gouri just shut up. U have replied back to her na, then what.Thats y she asked me about my father’s deeds.
G: so what u could have told her the truth na?
O: cone on gouri, I can’t back answer like u.They were our guests.
G: fine , then u could have supported me when she told all this rubbish about me?
O: oh come on gouri dont expect me like romantic husbands who r Always pampering their wives and sitting at home.I have many jobs and cannot always sit with u.
G: see I’m ur wife so it is ur right to care for her, what is so much big deal in that?
O: shut up gouri.Dont try to show off ur rights on me as a wife.After all what relation do we have like a husband and wife? nothing.We had just married on our parent’s insistence right, not on our wish.
Gouri was shocked to hear this.After all these days,this is what he have found out.So all the past incidents are just nothing for him?She wanted to spit out many questions to him but she chose to remain silent? In fact, what right does she have?She immediately took all her clothes and quietly went to guest room.
Om didn’t see her going as he was turning back to her.He turned to see her already gone.He was so angry that he couldn’t process what all he has said; only Tejlana’s picture was rounding off in his mind. He had immense hatred for these 2 as they had destroyed his life even made him to reach drugs.He was just closing his eyes & trying to swipe off all those happened just now.He knew he had told something really bad, but now, he want in a mood to rewind all those..
Precap:- what?? Gouri moving back to bareilly?
I don’t know if I will b able to update next today.
Waiting for all ur comments
27 Comments
Hey guys, next part is also updated.
Please do check out?
It might come by 12:00 am
Sure.. Om should understand that what ever happened the past we cant able to change but has to face it with courage…u explained gourikara situations very well dear
Excellent
OMG.. this one is full of fights and misunderstanding again.. pls unite them and give happy life for them.. and colour is anger, misunderstanding and fight
Hey Verna, these fights r really gonna make their rishta stronger?
Ohhh gosh..wat a change in track… loving it
Thank you Sairan,hope u r liking this change?
It was amazing diii.. .but plz make them confess their feelings ….i can’t wait anymore?
Of course, we r heading on to that?
Om s so rude….. Waiting for the next part… post it soon
AWESOME NICE
RiKara ko aise nahi dekh paa rahi hai.please unki beech sab kuch jaldhi teekh karna.
Too interesting. What? Gauri going BACK TO BAREILLY? Noooo ?. Crossing fingers that Om realizes his mistake before it’s to late.
It was an awesome update di. Gauri spoke her heart out finally
Awsm
Hi di..(I wouldlike to call u dii). I am a silent reader till now..but.. after reading dis color.. I would like to give you a salute..you vision about their realationship s superb….Yeah I think you are really giving a new shade to rikara.. Luv u dii…my color would be green for Om’s committment towards work nd grey for his dumb heart… white for Gouri’s patience nd tolerance…
Hi bubblu, thanks a lot for giving a bubbly comment dear sissy.
Do keep following ok??
It was amazing..but u always give wierd n confusing precap..y so??
I love suspenses yaar, did u feel my precap as weird???
I want to ask something…have you updated colour 17??
Superb
Awesome.
Amazing epi…
Good one dear
Tnk u di. Pls post 20 soon
Superb update
Heyy..Superb and Greatt
Loved itt
Love ya!
Superrrrrrrrrrr….