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When she coloured my canvas – IB& DBO – Colour 19

Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.

Colour 19

Anika was hearing their convo outside the room.She followed gouri; gouri was arranging to sleep there when anika entered.

G: didi , tum yahan?
A: y r u here?
G: kuch nahi didi, I thought of sleeping here today.
A: fine then I will take cherry & come.We will sleep together.Shivay will come from the trip tomorrow only.

Anika took an already slept cherry & layed her on the bed.She saw Gouri still sitting on couch.

A: tell me what happened, u r mood off from few days.
G: woh..darsal didi.
A: I’ve heard your convo.What happened gouri? what’s going on between u both.

Gouri lost her control & began crying on Anika’s arms. Anika made gouri to rest on her lap; she was patting on her hair.Gouri released alk her tension .She told everything, the loneliness she was facing all these days, her insecure feelings, the incidents back in restaurants.Anika was shocked.
A: y didn’t u tell all these to me?
G: thought not to disturb u.
A: mistake is there in both sides, u know he is not ignoring u purposefully.Then y did u talk to him like that? U know he’s very sensitive na, he was upset with that Svetlana’s problem that’s y he behaved like that.U should have politely asked him.
G: so what about things he told me?
A: yes he is also wrong.He should haven’t left u and went out like that.
G: he said that there is no rishtha between us.
A: y is it true?
G: didi, we actually did this on all of yours insistence.This is true.But, I know we both do care for each other; we do love each other.I know it, even though we have never said this.After all I think where there is love clearly seen , we don’t need to say it always; we will feel it through each other’s action.I wasn’t sure about this during our marriage time but now I know it; he loves me.

But then when I suddenly heard those words from him, I was shattered.I felt that I was wrong.May b…may b he still doesn’t have any feelings for me.I was mistaken, other wise he wouldn’t have said like that.I feel this marriage is a burden for him.I should free him fro this didi.

A: chup chutki.Y r u speaking 2 rs wali cheap daily soap dialogues like this.U r wrong, I feel Om loves u as his wife & cares for u too.May b his anger made him talk like that.Dont worry chutki, u have ur didi with u.Then don’t b sad, we will make everything fine.

She wiped gouri’s tears and hugged her and took her to sleep…

Rikara were almost ignoring each other; specially gouri.Not because she hated him but she thought that Om would b disturbed if he see her face, after all he hadn’t given her any right of a wife.Whereas Om was really upset with her attitude; he was so guilty of those nonsense talks.He didn’t know how to face gouri; he didn’t think that it would hurt gouri this much.He ignored her becoz he thought that he was the sinner & his presence would make gouri more upset.

Anika didn’t share this with shivay; she didn’t want to worry him.But she had discussed this with janvi.They decided to solve this.

Jhanika( jhanvi + anika) came to gouri.They asked her to go and see her aayi in bareilly.Even she thought to do this as she was Missing aayi ever since she went to Jodhpur.She was excited.

Same time both went & told Om that gouri was going back to bareilly as she was very much upset with him.Om stood with a blank face but jhanika knew that he was undergoing an emotional turmoil; they had did this purposefully to see whether he would leave her or not.

After the evening chai, gouri started packing her things.She had brought many things to give her aayi.Om entered the room & was shocked to see her packing things; it hurt him that she was ready to go away from him.

O: r u going to..to bareilly?
G: hmm…
O: how many days
G: may b few weeks?
O: weeks??
G: yes, what is ur problem? Even if I’m here.or not it doesn’t make any difference for u
Om was restless.How can she think like that? How can he afford to miss her for these many days.

But how can he stop her? If it was few days b4 then it was fine.But now? He was in a dilemma, he couldn’t say anything to her.

O: is ur mom’s health bad? is that y u r going
G: no…I want a change from all these…all this negative environment

Om’s heart was bleeding; he was giving her negative environment.He felt guilty he hadn’t purposefully wanted to hurt her by his actions.It all happened like that, but he didn’t know how to express his pain to her.He just went off from the room.Gouri thought that he must have been happy by her departure…

They didn’t speak about this for the whole day; for gouri it seemed that this didn’t affect him.Even jhanika were shocked; they thought that Om would stop her and solve all the problems with her. Both were disappointed.

Next day morning, Gouri had her breakfast and was ready to go.She bid farewell to all but Om was not to b seen.She decided not to ask him again.She was supposed to b dropped by the driver but he was not to be seen.

She was waiting at the doorstep for the car, when she saw the car coming to OM.As she looked on, she saw her aayi coming out with a big bag; gouri was surprised.

Aayi reached the doorstep, gouri was still amazed.
G: aayi how did u come here? what happened?
Aa: I know beta this was a surprise.I came with Om damadji; he came today morning to pick me up.We thought to surprise u beta.R u happy?

Precap:- Diwali & Om’s birthday celebration coming up!!!
But someone’s evil shadow is gonna cover OM.

I don’t know whether u r liking this plot.I know some negativity is entering rikara’s life.But love will become more intense only if there is the ones of pain surrounding it( philosophy??)After all life is not always a bed if flowers, right?

Waiting for all and every comments of urs

Shraddha-DBO

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