Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back with dhamakedar double chappies?
This ff have reached 20 chappies & I’m so excited about this.I never thought that this ff would be a great success like this.Thanks to each & every buddies for commenting, supporting & suggesting ideas for this.
For previous chappies All Parts here or check profile
Few things b4 moving on:-
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Thanks to all quite readers? & so so sorry if I have left anyone?
I’ve updated 17 chappy anusuya, please check in given link.
Colour suggestions
Verna: red for anger ,fights
Bubblu: green – om’s dedication
grey- om’s dumb heart
white- gouri’s patience
Sanyu: rainbow of colours
Nikita: bright orange – surprise
So now moving on.If u r not liking this part, then please do comment on it.
Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.Gouri was going to bareilly, but Om brought aayi to OM.
Colour 20
A: damadji was with me all the way.He had also taken food for me.We had a very nice trip beta.And then he went back to office & and I came back.
Gouri couldn’t believe this.Y did he do this? Does that mean he didn’t want her to go?
A: where r u going beta?
G: woh ..I was coming to u aayi.
A: ha..ha.so he really surprised u.
Jhanika, dadi, bua came to the hall.They were surprised to see mom & daughter.
B: putter, what is this? U were going to bareilly na?
A: woh…Omkara brought me here.
B:( teasing) oh…so omkie didn’t want to miss his patni for few days,na..
Jhanika hadn’t expected such a move from Om; now they were sure that he is affected by gouri.They gave a silent hi-fi to each other.
Gouri had spend some quality time with her mom.She was so happy to have slept on aayi’s lap for a long time; even anika was enjoying with both of them.
It was night. Gouri had arranged her bed & couch.She saw Om coming to the room.But she continued to do her job.As she looked up he was not to be seen.She went downstairs.As she looked Om was talking to her aayi; she adored the saas- damadji duo for some time.He made her eat all the medicines & sat with her for some time.He had also asked her to stay for Diwali celebrations too.Gouri went back to her room.
Om entered the room.He straight away went to the couch and layed down on it.Gouri wanted to thank him for bringing her aayi; but she didn’t know how he would take this.Ever since that night fight she was hesitant to talk to him.Om expected some good words from het; in fact he had done this because he couldn’t bear her absence in his life. But then he thought that she is still upset with his sharp words.Both slept very late that night, as they were surrounded by many thoughts.
Rikara cold war was still going on; it wasn’t a war really.Both were giving enough time to each other to accept each other’s feelings.They weren’t totally aware of the other person’s view because they never discussed about those past incidents; they didn’t want to break the already damaged relation.
It was Diwali .Oberois had a big puja conducted on that day.Moreover it was gouri’s first Diwali as oberoi bahu.She was very excited and joined anika in all arrangements;she was busy all the time.Om’s birthday was after 2 days of Diwali so it was double celebration for OM.
Om too had many works in gallery as it was Diwali.He had to reach the mansion at correct time for puja; he wanted to buy a gift for gouri.He was about to take his car when he received a call.This was one of the officials from jail.
“Omkara sir, we have got an information.Svetlana is planning to harm the oberois on Diwali day, today.We don’t know what the plan is, but it is something serious.Wechad questioned her brutally, but she is not admitting it.”
He was shocked, how to find what she has planned.He worried for gouri because svet had challenged her b4 going to jail. Om became nervous.
As soon as he reached OM, he saw his happy family having a nice time.He didn’t have more time to think.He immediately informed shivay about this.The security was made strict and the checking was strict too.
Om was restless, he was making the security check every nook and corner of the mansion, but failed to find anything harmful.He was so worried.
Om was called for puja downstairs; he came down reluctantly.He was so disturbed & thinking of all possibilities.He was very much lost in thoughts.The while family was seated in the hall.
Gouri came to him with box full of sweets , to feed him.
G: omkaraji eat this na.Diwali wishes.
Om was silent.
G: ka hua, u like sweets now right, then y, please have some.
He didn’t respond.He was sitting blankly.
Gouri took a piece and brought it close to his mouth.He was irritated and he shook the sweet off from her hand.H e bursted out his frustration.
O: I don’t want it gouri.If I need it I will have .Just don’t force me.Just take this away, please!!!!
All were shocked; they hadn’t seen this avatar of him for many days.Gouri was shocked; she has been getting all these bad vibes from him again.She wanted to cry hard but she controlled it & went back to kitchen.Om went back to room too.Jhanika were shocked.
Priyanka went to see gouri.Gouri was standing there with a heavy heart.She smiled as she saw prinku.She took a sweet and fed prinku.Prinku consoled gouri.But after few minutes, she started to cough; the cough became harder that prinku began spitting blood.Gouri was tensed, she called anika to kitchen.All were shocked seeing unconscious prinku….
Shivom found out from CCTV that someone had exchanged the sweet boxes who had come as delivery boy.They were sure that it was svetu’s plan.
Om was really tired that day with all the stress.He arranged tge couch and just laywd down; he didn’t switch off the lights as he was waiting for gouri.He felt disgusted as he had again misbehaved with gouri.He didn’t know y this was happening again & again.He thought this is y people find it hard to manage a married life because here the partner should not only think about his situation & his problems but also b concerned about the other person.
He couldn’t sleep without seeing gouri .So he went in search of her.He saw gouri was in aayi’s room crying; he understood that he was the reason for all these problems.He thought, for the last few days he have become short tempered; he is venting out his frustration on Gouri.He decided to find a solution to all this.
He decided to sort all issues with her because it was unable for him to see her crying; that too because of him.He didn’t know how to sort all these but he resolved to do it ASAP.He went back to his room…
Om woke up late the next day.As usual, gouri was not there.Nowadays he had been missing gouri’s puja in the room; she had shifted her puja to Mandir.Today was strange that she didn’t even give him his morning tea.
As he came down ready for breakfast, he saw jhanvi coming to him.
J: what happened Om, gouri is late today.Is he fine.
O: mom, she is not in room( shocked)
she was with aayi yesterday.
Aa: nahi Omkara, she went from the room morning itself.
O: but mom, I didn’t see her today morning.
J: she didn’t come downstairs too.I didn’t see her anywhere today.Oh God, where did this ladki go???
Precap:-. where did gouri go, leaving Om??
My friend aarti told that I’m giving strange precap, but I love to do so.Sorry guys.
I hope u will like this.Is it boring.
next chappy coming today itself.
waiting for ur comments??
24 Comments
Didi actually I am only Mallutty. Mallu is my pet name. Btw, it was a really good update
Wonderful episode
Gauri ?
again a cliffhanger
nice episode
update soon
I’m waiting for this update till now….nice going..I liked it
Ur frnd told it as strange becoz u r giving so much of suspense in precap and we can’t wait for next episodes…
And today’s epi is so good ..
It was superb. Waiting for next
I Loved Your Fan Fiction Episode. Waiting for Next Episode.
AWESOME INTERESTING NICE SUPERB???
Nice epi. U r so sweet. U gives us two chappies forba day. I want to give u a diary milk chocolate for it. Hehehehehe its my favourite.? so, take this this is for u?
Nice episode. Interesting. Keep on going di….. All the best. I am going to hostel tmrw. So l can’t read this for a month. Really miss u guyyz….. ?????
Fabulous episode.keep writing dear.
Awesome epi…
Awesome se bhi zyada awesome.
Your strange precaps are making us more exciting for nxt epi’s darling.. I just love it
Interesting episode..end mein it’s suspense..aaj ja precap phir bhi normal tha ??
*aaj ka
Nice one dear…
Congrats ..for 20th of this superb series
This one and next one are totally…Fantastic
Amazing
Wonderful update
Superb… Congrats for ur 20th episode… excited for the next part
u left me dear!!!!anyway i love ur updates….as usual im a very silent reader…
Hi raksha, I’m so so sorry to have forgot you.
Please do follow the next episodes too
sure will always do it dear….
Superrrrrrrrrrr…