Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
Try to find out the colour of this chappy.
Colour 21
Day after tomorrow is Om’s birthday.There has been no information about gouri till now; her phone is switched off.But Om didn’t want to make his mom said; he told her that Gouri had gone to visit her friend & will come on his birthday.He told the truth only to bhabhi.
He was sure that she is not in bareilly.She had only one friend archisha in Mumbai; but she wasn’t there too.He searched maximum locations; but suddenly it striked him that someone might have harmed her.She hadn’t taken her dresses , do she planned for a casual trip.Also the securities had seen her going on foot; she didn’t want anyone to accompany her.
He was sure that svet might have done something as she was planning an attack in OM.He didn’t have any way to find her.He could feel the same fear as he felt when kali had trapped her.He was mentally cursing him on talking nonsense to her.Suddely he felt a touch on his shoulder; he thought it was gouri but it was bhabhi….
One day has passed.Om was very much disturbed.He didn’t want all these celebrations without gouri.He tried all means to reach her but was of no use. The whole day he spent in his gallery, reminiscing his old moments with gouri; he was very much broken.He had apologized a 100 times to gouri in his mind.
It was 7 pm, he came back to home.He saw jhanvi, she asked for gouri.He had to lie that she would come the next day.He wanted to take off all decorations; he felt all these useless.
He freshened & went to the balcony.It was beautifully lit up with dim lights. As he watched around he saw something covered ; it was a canvas.As he opened it, he was amazed.It was his portrait; with open hair, glowing eyes & a wide yet soft smile.He wondered who could do this; there was no one other than him who could do portraits like this.Some spark suddenly passed through his head.
He ran from the balcony & just below the stairs he saw something which his eyes had been longing for; Gouri.Yes, he thought it was a dream; yes it was a dream.A dream which could give real happiness for him; a dream which could make his heart run fast & lose his senses.
He ran to her.She had a blank face.
O: gouri, where were u? ha..tell me? tell me gouri.
She was staring angrily @ Om’s eyes & turned to go.
He caught her by wrist; he can’t afford to lose her again.He feared that situation.He turned her towards him.
He took hold of her waist; she gasped.He had never done this to her after marriage.
O: Answer me gouri…come on!!!!
But she wasn’t least feared by his order; because she was dabbang gouri!!!
Waiting for ur comments, don’t know how the story is going!!!!
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Totally unexpected …. Can’t wait for next update….my heart is beating fast and on top of that you didn’t give precap Di
yayy,Dabangg Gauri Returns
luved the episode
update soon
Nice dear
@shraddha chappy 21 itna chota …. not done yrr…. Tumne toh suspense mein he chod diya hume….
Wherever the story is going is just perfect.. so don’t worry about that…
Loved Omkara being tensed for Gauri and Gauri is not ready to forgive him easily….
NOW I really want some Sweet moments between Gaurikara and it should be started by Omkara… ( Samjh rahi ho na mein kya kahena chahti hu)…
Today’s chappy 20 colour is:-
Orange – for regret of hurting someone special…
Chapter 21. Colour is:-
Silver – 1. For spark in eyes for someone u are longing to see for long time….
2. Spark in Gaurikara’s relation of being in love….
Plz post next double dhamaka sooonnnn…. jaldi se post karo…. can’t wait for next….
Also plz try to make ur chapter (any one atlaest… for me) bit long … I really love to read ur FF and never miss it…..
Nice
Are titan chota epi I didn’t expect this from you yaar and u r giving a lots of suspenses day by day
I have read all your chappies and loved your idea,your description…waiting for your next chappy…
Very nice. Waiting for next
Soo good. Please update soon and make it slightly longer
AWESOME NICE???
Om should get a punishment like this. Always scold our gauri. Api is awesome. I really really loved it. Waiting for next one.
Only question in my mind: where did Gauri go? Great update ? (Plz tell where Gauri went in the next update. It’s killing me.)
This was very short….
waiting for the next update……update soon ..
Awsome update….thank u☺☺
OMG…. such caring hubby Om and his restlessness for losing her is awesome.. I just.want him to learn how to manage time for his business and wife.. and really excited for next part dr
Di….. Awesome episode. Can’t wait for next. So plz update soon
U always do this wd us… not fair yaar….bich main atka diya….now post nxt part soon….
Awesomw dii… superb..waiting for d nxt update…my colour s Dark blue for dis serious Om
Ahahannnn.. Finallyyyyyy Gauri is back
Yippee
Superbbbbb episode
Awesome…interesting waiting for next update soon
Awesome episode.Keep writing dear.I wanna give Om apricot green for new beggining ,missing his loveand fear of losing Gauri
Y u didn’t give precape nd itna chota epi not fair shraddha.. but i like the way om questioned gouri.. how despo he is u nailed it.. Don’t worry about the track it is very nice.
Interesting…
Again an amazing update sissy!!! But a short on too.. But loved om’s restlessness…. N I think the portrait is made by gauri only. .. But where she was?? Pls update the next part soon… Can’t wait to read more…. Take care!!! ? ?
Unexpected!! Gauri mil gyi!! But wat next!! Update soon
Wow..its awesome dearr
Love thisss..cant wait for nextt one
Love ya!
It is awesome dear…
Nice update
Awesome n interesting too… Excited for the next part… post it soon
shradha di pls post next color as soo nas posibblie . iam dying to read it . dabang gouri hehe. ps post fast. todays color dark red for gouri s anger and pink for om’s love and green for om’s tension
Hi Aliza, please do check next 2 updates