Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back with back 2 back double chappies?
I’m extremely sorry to all who commented as I couldn’t reply back.Thanks a ton for ur support.I will definitely come back to u after these 2 chappies?
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Colour suggestions
Mahi: Orange – for regret of hurting someone special…
Silver – For spark in eyes for someone u are longing to see for long time….
Bubblu: dark blue- serious Om
Sanyu :apricot green- new beginning
Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.She goes missing & came back to OM after one day.Om questions her.
Hope u will like this part.
Sorry for typo errors.
Colour 22
O: where were u gouri, I had searched the whole world for u
G: when ever I come near u, u shout at me ,so y r u angry if I’m not there.
O: when did I say that I’m angry on u?
G:I could see it in ur face .
O: omg, that was because I was tensed that day, thinking of svetu’s plans.I was worried about her attacking our family.
G: now also u r angry!!! u r talking angrily to me.
O: come on gouri , can u see only anger on my face? can’t u see my love & care for u??
Both were shocked by this; they were seeing each other intensely.Om was embarrassed on his confession.He didn’t know how she would take this.But he thought he couldn’t hide his feelings any more.
G: so u care for me? but u told that there is no rishtha between us …
Om kept a finger on her lip & pulled her closer.
O: dont say this anymore, Varna…( soft voice)
G: Varna? ( rolling eyes)
O: ek jhaap de diwar pe sat jaayebe!!!
Gouri slightly smiled.
O: u don’t know how much pain I had experienced without knowing ur details.The same fear I had on that day when kali had kidnapped u.I was living on fire; y don’t u understand that rather than thinking of useless things?
G: kyun , y did u feel pain( teary eyes)
O: should I say y? haan…U told bhabhi right, when clearly shown, IT need not b expressed in words? should I say more, hmmm???
Gouri smiled thru her tears; she knew what was IT.She was filled with joy.She didn’t want to hear it from him but just see it in his eyes.She wanted to give him a tight hug; but no he was not to be left unpunished.She quickly jerked herself.S he decided to play with him
G: leave me, don’t touch me .
O: y gouri, don’t u like my presence?
G: I won’t forgive u because u Have hurt me.( controlling her smile)
O: no gouri, please…don’t be ziddy… please…
G: no way nandi!!!
O: should I say sorry?
G: of course
O: no way chiraiyya…OSO is not gonna say sorry. After I have told u this much, u can’t do this to me.U r showing taddi.
G: fine, then I’m going back.
Gouri climbed the stairs, took his portrait & her travel bag .She began walking downstairs without looking back.She expected him to call back her; but he didn’t.
” man me sanka lag gayi Lanka, I was just kidding him.Did he take it seriously?What if he doesn’t call me back? Oho…”
She ran back to room.There she saw a playful Om talking to someone over phone.
” oh thank you dear , ya will u come for party tomorrow.Oh fine, what dinner?”
It was one of his college friend who had called him for a dinner; he thought to refuse it .But as he saw gouri, an evil plan came up in his mind.
“hey jiya, of course dear I will come for dinner tomorrow.Is it candle light? fantastic.No …I will come alone
My wife is not interested. she is a typical traditional Indian wife, so she doesn’t like this.Ya..fine I will pick u up.Bye, buddy”
He could smell something burning; it was gouri.Her eyes were red.
G: who was that?
O: hmmm…my college sweetheart.
G: oh so u r going for dinner, right?
without wife?
O: ya..
G: hey you, u r a shadi shuda aadmi.How can u go like that?
O: u r going back right? then what? moreover u don’t like all these modern things..
G: oho… so I’m not modern right?
She began taking pillows & throw it to Om.Thet were running around like kids, by chasing & throwing.Om opened the big window & jumped through it; gouri did the same but her dupatta git stuck in between and she was caught hold by Om.She was in his arms.
Both got aware of their proximity; but this time both were enjoying.They were comfortable in this closeness; in fact they were yearning for this moment for a long time.The sweet breeze blew up both their hairs creating a romantic ambience.Their faces were glowing not only due to moonlight but also due to the new found comfort in each other’s presence.They were not hesitant any more.
Om was holding her by her waist; she was looking down & then her eyes shifted to moon.Om was adoring her; he closely moved to her ear & asked her, ” how could u draw me?”
She was startled, she didn’t have any answer to say to him; but he got his reply from her eyes.She was smiling.
O: don’t u want to go back now??
G: oh, so that u can have dinner with her?
O: of course, I had many plans gouri,( pouting)
G: chi…besharam aadmi( she bet him on his arm)
O: not with jiya, but with u.
Her eyes widened.She got herself loose from his grip.She was looking at the moon, holding the railing.Om went inside ,took his portrait & came back.He was enjoying it;he never thought that she had observed his every details like this.
G: waise omkaraji, I ..I was in bareilly!!
Om was amazed; it was true that he hadn’t checked bareilly alone since aayi was here.
O: but why gouri???
G: I had gone to an orphanage & old age home of bareilly.I stayed there also for one day.Because on my and my aayi’s birthday,we will go there & spend time with all of them.I do give food & gifts for them with whatever little money I have in my hand.So since it was your birthday, I wanted to go there with you but…u were not talking to me for few days…so I thought not to tell you and go by my own.
Om’s eyes were filled; so she considers him as her own.After all she is gouri, she can never hate him.Till now she had forgiven all his mistakes which he had committed; he was her bhagvan.He thought, never in his life he would hurt her in future.Om hugged her from back; he wanted to wash off all his sins by his tears.
Gouri was smiling, she could feel his warmth; the warmth of his love & guilt.She turned back & wiped off his tears; she cupped his face.
” y is birthday boy crying, no.. u r not supposed to cry ok? oh..may b because I didn’t forgive u, that’s y u r crying ..”
O: yes that’s y I’m crying.Please gouri…can’t u forgive this nandi
G: hmm…let me think, I want to check u for few more days.
O: but I want to check u now!!!
Gouri didn’t understand about what checking he was saying.Om took hold of her; he was moving close to her…close to her face.
G: yeh..yeh…yeh sab kya hai..
O: I’m checking u gouri…Y…what happened?
Gouri gasped; she understood his intentions.As Om was about to reach her lips, she turned her face & he kissed on her cheek.
G: chi…ye kya Kare tum.. Omkaraji…I’m feeling michmichi..I’ve to go…
O: no way gouri, if I leave u now, u will again go somewhere.
G: nahi nahi…pakka…I won’t go…Chodiye humhe..( tensed)
O: what about my punishment ( strictly)
G: tum bohot …sweet hu…cute bhi hu…who can punish u….leave me na…
O: hmmm….no need, I can’t believe u…so I’m not leaving u; now I will be punishing u for being angry on ur pati.( he pulled her more closer)
G: nahi…nahi..omkaraji…I won’t , never ever leave u in my life…sure…( hugged him with closed eyes)
Om was laughing, hearing her confession.Someone knocked the door.Gouri suddenly opened her eyes & looked a smiling Om.She pretended fake anger, pushed him and opened the door.It was jhanvi & anika.
A: haan… finally…all compromised? could hear someone screaming, I won’t leave u ,from this room.Who was that gouri?
Gouri was blushing.She didn’t know what to say.
Suddenly Om came to the door
” woh bhabhi, kya hai na..It was the meowing sound of a tiger , who became a cat!!!”
Jhanika were laughing hard, gouri was rolling her eyes at Om.
J: fine gouri,come with us na.We have to do some arrangements for tomorrow.
A: y hurry anty, let them take their own time, hain na Om..
G: ( scared) nahi…didi…I will come with u now itself…abhi bhi..
Jhanika went & gouri was about to follow them.Suddenly she was pulled back by Om.
O: ( whispered to her) pagli chiraiyya, jaldi aa jao na!!! Some more punishment is left,ok???
Gouri slipped from his hold & just ran away.Both had a hearty laugh, thinking about all their moments.
Precap:- special surprise on Om’s birthday party!!!!
Hope u guys liked this, next chappy coming behind, today itself.Stay tuned??