Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m here with a new chappy?
Sorry for not posting yesterday, & not giving a double DHAMAKA .
Thanks a lot for all ur comments guys; I’m happy that u all loved previous chappies.
The track is gonna move differently, hoping u all would like this.
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Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attacked Gouri but was saved by Om & rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.She goes missing & came back to OM after one day.Finally, both have united.
Hope u will like this part.
Sorry for typo errors.
Colour 24
Life was going smooth for the oberois.The family began spending good times together; they were having get togethers in every week.Slowly Om’s attitude to Tej was changing; even though he hadn’t whole heartedly accepted Tej still his interaction with him was being better.This was all due to gouri’s presence.Om was slowly coming over all his negative past; he has regained his old self now.Life has become lighter for him with gouri; he was finding a good amount of time to enjoy with gouri.Both of them remained happy & cozy in their married life.
It was night, almost 11 pm.Om was tensedly preparing documents sitting in his ottoman.Gouri brought ice water for him & was wondering seeing him like this; she knew he was workaholic but hadn’t seen him like this.
G: omkaraji,aap kyun pareshan lag reh hai?
O: gouri , tomorrow there is an important deal taking place.Usually these r done by shivay.But as he is in delhi, I will have to crack this deal.& u know gouri, this is the first time I’m doing this.I’m so tensed…
He was anxious like a small kid.
Gouri who was standing behind him hugged him from back.Om felt sort of relief when her warmth comforted him.
G: there is no need to be tensed omkaraji, u r very talented.U can surely do it; Sankarji is surely going to help u.
O: I know gouri as long as ur prayers r with me, I will b able to do it…
He stood up & faced gouri.She gently brushed his cheek& both were just intensely lost in each other.Gouri suddenly remembered something.
G: omkaraji, it’s already 11:00 .U should sleep now, only then u can freshly attend the meeting tomorrow .
He simply smiled & went to the couch for sleeping.
” Omkaraji, won’t u sleep on the bed?”
He was surprised hearing this,as he turned back he was treated by the red rose face of gouri.He didn’t want to ask anything more.He was happy that she had asked this.
O: kyun gouri, y do u have a naughty face today.
G: ( tensed) nahi..nahi..I just…I just wanted to ..
O: hmmm….I got it( laughing)
It was a totally blissful sight to watch gouri , peacefully sleeping in Om’s protective arms.He had his hands wrapped around her , as if assuring that he is always there to hold her.
Om was in a hurry in the morning; he was tensed thinking about the deal today.It was a perfect chance for him to prove himself in front of the world as a multi tasked person;that he could manage sculptures & business skillfully @ the same time.He had kept everything right, discussed everything with shivay & was completely prepared just like an artist being prepared with all his tools.
As he finished breakfast, he took blessings of all the ladies in his home; but his eyes were searching for his lucky charm.
& yes there she was coming with an aarti plate; she had done special aarti for Sankarji.She had kept all his files in front of Sankarji & had prayed with all her heart to the Lord to bless those files& her pati.Om wouldn’t have believed in all these if it was few months b4; but now he believed her & her viswas the most in this world.
He took blessings from aarti & also hugged Gouri too in front of his family; though she was shy on this.
She wished him all the best & bid him farewell.
Gouri was very much tensed; she couldn’t concentrate on any thing.She knew that he would do it;but was still worried as he hadn’t called till now.Suddenly she got a spark.
She did video call to shivay.
G: hi bade bhaiyya, r u free?
S: ha bolo gouri dear, kuch khaas hai?
G: woh bhaiyya, I want to study cooking, videsi food
Sh:oh gouri, how will I teach u within one day dear?
G: darsal bhaiyya, now u teach me just one item & it’s name.After u come back, I will study one dish daily.
S: Fine gouri , u r asking me something for the first time na, sure.So keep this phone near that slab so I can see everything.We will start right now.
G: thanku bhaiyya, love u….
Om reached home by almost 7.He had already informed the family that he had successfully cracked the deal; all were very happy.Om was welcomed warmly by all the ladies; jhanvi was so proud of him.She had informed this to Tej earlier itself.Om had brought chocolates for cherry too.
He didn’t see gouri downstairs; he just wanted to give her a hug & tell her that all her puja was successful.So he didn’t wait for dinner, when mom asked; he right away went to the room.
As he reached there, he saw gouri finishing some painting.He slowly closed the door , tiptoed & went to her ; stood right back to her.As he was about to hug her, she turned & hugged him tight.
O: how did u know that I was behind u?
G: tumhe kya lagtha, I’m always thinking of u & so I will know @ the moment when u r near me.
Om felt joy that she felt free to hug him like this without his initiation; their relation has been raised to such a high level.
G: omkaraji, u didn’t have dinner na. Go, have a shower & we will have dinner….
Om slipped in to his most favourite black kurta and came with open hair.Gouri was amazed.
G: hey, what is this omkaraji? you have loosened the hair?
O: haan…today is my very special day, I have achieved something big today…So…
G: waise…u look so nice ….
O: oho… chulbul bhabhi is becoming Romantic..wow….nice….
He moved closer to her.
G: omkaraji..dinner!!!! we will have it now..
O: oh, that means, we will have some special time later…fine..
G: no, I didn’t mean that… smiled shyly.
O: fine let’s go down.
G: no…I have brought our dinner here.
O: oh, is it.
G: actually this is made by me.
A small table, 2 chairs & food was arranged in the table.He was amazed, as she did all this alone.
He went & switched off all lights, and switched on just the dim lights.
As gouri opened the plates, he was totally surprised to see his favorite dish; pasta with white sauce.
O: how did u do this gouri?
G: bade bhaiyya taught me thru video call.
Om was literally flabbergasted; he never thought she would do this.He was seeing her as she perfectly arranged the dinner.
G: kya Dekh rehe omkaraji, kha lijiye.
O: woh…I can’t believe this.
G: I can do anything ( signature dabbang style)….
G: waise omkaraji….this videsi food is nice…this safed saas also.
O: sauce gouri.
G: ha…vahi toh…
O: thanks for everything gouri.
G: kyu…?
O: because u r the first one who gave me a gift on my biggest achievement.Im very lucky to have you
He was being emotional.She wanted to make the moment light.
G: lekin omkaraji…to say the truth, I enjoy eating our desi items like pav baji from small shops in road…just like out old days.
O: of course gouri, we will go one day for that.
As they finished the dinner , Om took her outside the room.
G: where r v going omkaraji?
O: I’m going to give u a surprise!!
He took her to his studio in the home; she hadnt entered it after their marriage.As he opened it , gouri was overjoyed.
The whole room was filled with portraits of all their moments; the days of their classes, their bareilly tashan meeting, marriage, chulbul days, all their rasams, 2nd marriage, all their post marriage moments etc.
But it was the picture at the corner which caught her attention; there was Om, gouri & a beautiful kid in between them.
Her eyes were widened at seeing it; she turned to see Om.He had a naughty smirk on his face.
G: omkaraji..yeh..
O: kya? didn’t u like it?
G: wo…
O: may b u want a boy child na?
G: oho….tum bhi na
She moved towards him to beat him but he extended his arms, pulled her closer.
She nearly gasped ; she hadnt experienced this for many days.
Om’s mind was asking him to take her more closer; they haven’t had this much proximity for such a long duration till new.This was new for them.
They even forgot to blink.He slowly kissed her on the forehead She closed her eyes due to the heat.Om slowly took her in his arms.She felt bliss on his arms; she slowly covered his neck with her hands.
He kept her slowly on the bed & moved closer to her.She removed the hair strands from her face , by slowly brushing her cheeks & lips.He moved
close to her lips; she wanted to stop it but by now all her senses were lost.
As she felt his lips touch hers, he moved away.She looked at him amazed.
O: sorry gouri, I know u r not ready.Until u r not, I wouldn’t force u.Every decisions r up to u.
She felt happy that he do respect her & her decisions.She suddenly gave him a teddy bear hug.She silently send prayers to Sankarji for giving him to her.Whereas, he was slowly being lost in her warmth…
Precap:- a surprise guest for oberois!!!
Hope u r liking this guys.
Shall post the next tomorrow!!
32 Comments
Mind blowing episode
Loved it
Precap ???
Hi Sairan, yes precap is a suspense…
Wait for it dear??
Oh my god. Shraddha it was awesome. Gauri- an ideal wife and om- an ideal husband. Loved their chemistry. It was perfect. Wishing to see this naughty om in serial too. Waiting for your next chapter..
Hey radhika, thanks yes we will surely see this om in show too.
Btw, I’m in love with Tasha & om …
Seriously, I’m eagerly waiting for each& every episode.
Wanna see how they will confess?
Lovely update
Hi yaar, happy to see ur comment once again?
@shraddha sooo swwweeetttt episode….
Today’s episode was full of Romantickara…
Just loved it …??????????…
But today no double dhamaka….
Par koi baat nahi I understand….
But tomorrow I want double dhamaka ( if possible plzzzzzzzzz)….
BY THE WAY CONGRATULATIONS IN ADVANCE FOR UR FF IS GOING TO COMPLETE SILVER JUBLEE i.e 25 chappy….
(DON’T WORRY I WILL WISH U TOMORROW AS WELL FOR THE SAME)….
Today’s episode colour is light green for fresh start in love…..
@shraddha sooo swwweeetttt episode….
Today’s episode was full of Romantickara…
Just loved it …??????????…
But today no double dhamaka….
Par koi baat nahi I understand….
But tomorrow I want double dhamaka ( if
possible plzzzzzzzzz)….
BY THE WAY CONGRATULATIONS IN ADVANCE FOR UR FF IS GOING TO COMPLETE SILVER JUBLEE i.e 25 chappy….
(DON’T WORRY I WILL WISH U TOMORROW AS WELL FOR THE SAME)….
Today’s episode colour is light green for fresh start in love…..
Awesome part….. Excited for the next part.. post it soon ..
Of course sagi, I’m happy that u comment on my ff regularly?
Beautiful episode Di….missed the double dhamaka but it is fine.
Oh no, I think u will miss it today too.
Don’t worry will come up with a DHAMAKA very soon.
Superb dp too?
wow!!..just loved it….eagerly waiting for your next chappy…
Lovely couple… dear u r very good in writing romantic scenes btwn gouri and om. I think our cvs should learn something from u
Oh, thanks deepu for the comment.
I’m sure CVS in future will come up with this type of scenes??
I hope so.. the new promo of shivika is damn good. annika smile tho uff very lovely.
It was so so romantic today chappy. Can’t wait for next write soon.
AWESOME AMAZING BEAUTIFULL CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS MIND BLOWING ROMANTIC SWEET SUPERB?????????????????
Awesome….fabulous loved it
Thank u niriha?
AWESOME one….luv the multi talented Om…Its romantic didi..Pink for romance nd REd for love
Hi bubblu, I think in show too they should show him as a good businessman.
Anyways thank a lot dear, for colour suggestion too
Loved it dear…..it was awesome…..gaurika moments were fantastic…..it was so good…waiting for nxt
Thanks yashu, for following my ff regularly?
Hey Shraddha.. don’t know what will happen on Monday.. but I really loved this romantic part.. Gauri’s dinner surprise, Om art surprise their feelings towards each other is portrayed well in this part.. Wow.. fantastic part yr
It is awesome dear…
Awesome one..naughty Omkara ?
Awww om is so understanding!!! Loved it so much shraddha.. Waiting for the next part!! Take care…
Awesome di . Are va. How romantic colur it is . I suggest light green for thier begi of new love life abd light pink for thier romance . Update next color asap
Superrrrrrrrrrr….
Fabulous update
Amazing and Awesome!
Loveddddd itt!
Nice portrait description.