Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
I’m going to start a major big track from the next one.Hope u would like this.part.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this.
Colour 31
Rikara were on an outing with aayi.She had been staying in OM for more than one week; she had come to visit Aniket & Anika.Today she was going back; b4 going rikara wanted to spend some Time with her.Om had took a leave that day.
They had gone for big shopping, it was Om who was selecting sarees for her.Aayi was so happy; she was overjoyed.He had even selected some high heel shoes for her; aayi was very hesitant.But in his insistence she wore it.
Later they had lunch from outside. Gouri was teaching Om to eat gol gappas in her unique style; Om managed to eat one but the other fell on his face.
They had even gone to park; it was gouri who was running & playing in all the rides.She was damn tired.She was gasping & came & sat near Om- aayi.Aayi was sitting in between rikara.
O: oh gouri, aren’t u tired.
G: ya….
A: she’s like this only beta, will never sit peacefully anywhere; always running around.
Is it difficult to manage her?
O: hm….not really, if she is , then I do scold her.
A: that is good beta, just give her a pinch if she is naughty.
G: aayi it’s not fair, u r my aayi not his ok?
A: who told u that? he is my pyaara beta.Janviji has given him to me also hai na??
O: of course ma ( hugged her)
Gouri’s eyes were tearful; because in past aayi & papa had a son who was dead in childhood itself. She is giving the same love to Om now….
They sent off aayi back to bareilly & were returning to OM.They had dinner from a restaurant; they were happy as they got some time together after few days of hectic schedules.They even went to the beach & sat for half an hour.The cool wind was very relaxing; they were enjoying each other’s presence in absolute silence.
After reaching home, Om was indulged in his office work whereas gouri was in his studio working on the canvas.
It was past 11 pm.Om wondered y gouri is not in room till now.He went to his studio.
There she was standing with many scattered pieces of pages here & there on floor, with a brush in her hand & an incomplete drawing.He went & stood in front of her.
O: what r u doing Raniji?
G: woh …. Omkaraji…I told u about a national level contest na? I have to submit this drawing within 2 days, but I’m not getting any Idea, can u help me?
Her confused innocent face was so beautiful, he thought….
He kept his specs back on the table, took her brush & kept it back too.
O: fine we will make it 2morrow, but now…
G: now ….I want to do it now…
O: don’t b ziddy gouri, it is almost 11:30
G: it’s ok, u can go, I will come later.
Om grabbed her closer & began taking her hair strands.
G: ka kar rahe tum……
O: for last one week u were sleeping with aayi na?
G: ha…toh…
O: so aaj raat…..he was rolling his eyes.
G: aaj raat kya….teasing him..
He whispered in her ears.
O: aaj raat, tum mere Saath……samjha?
G: besaram hai tu…
O:it’s sharam
G: vahi toh…
O: whatever, come with me..
G: omkaraji……mein….
He lifted her in her arms; her protests were not working with him.She simply snapped her hands around him.
She was surprised to see all the lighted candles arranged there.When did he do all these; she smiled.
He kept her on the bed like a precious flower.They could see each other’s face in the faint candle light; Om smiled seeing her pouting face.They were enjoying the beauty of the whole night together; even the moon & the breeze…..
Om & shivay were in deep discussion.
Sh: Om Mr.Lal is again throwing tantrums against us.
O: r v gonna back out from the case filed against from him?U know v r the major ones who have complained against them
Sh: No Om, I would never say that.I believe that business is something divine; it should b done in a right manner.Small amount of lies or tricks can b allowed; but innocent people r not to b harmed.
O: I know shivay u supportsupp me.
S: it’s fine Om.But v have to take care.Mr.Lal is nit a good person.He would simply remove all obstacles in his way by hook or crook.
O: as long as we r together, v don’t have to fear them.Only the truth will win shivay.
S: fine Om, u don’t have to worry more.I will manage it.But I’m sorry Om, u will have to go to Chennai once again for Lavanya industries deal.Im sorry, I have few .ore meetings to attend.
O: y sorry shivay?
S:it’s difficult for u to manage everything.U r not like me.U have ur artworks too.
O: it’s fine shivay.I am now very comfortable in carrying both.U don’t have to take the whole load upon you.I will b always there with u.
S: of course Om, from the time u have joined me I think my half stress is reduced.Want some American?
O: oh no thanks yaar, I will have some glucose chai.
S: Seriously Om, u r daily having it?
O: of course, my day starts only with it shivay.( laughing)
When should I go shivay?
S: hmm….by noon.Take all documents too.Anything extra u need, I will mail it..
O: done shivay….
As Om entered his room, he saw a gloomy gouri.
O: subah subah kya hua?hm….
G: woh….meri friend archisha ki behen kis shaadi hai able din.
O: where is it?
G: mm…here only….but…
O: kya?
G: she has asked me to stay with her for 2/3 days.
O: fine…go…
Gouri looked amazed; she was sad on thinking how to go away from him & he has no problem.Oh may b because I stayed with didi for a long time, he might b ok with 2/3 days.She simply walked away.
Om could read her mind.He stopped her & made her sit on the bed.
O: do u think, I will say not to go?She is ur best friend after all it’s because of her u came here & we met.How can I forget her , it was she who gave me my most prized gem in my life.So u should go , stay with her, enjoy the wedding & come back.It will b a change for u.
G: lekin omkaraji…mein..
O: don’t worry, coz I’m going to chennai for 2/ 3 days too …
Gouri’s face was brightened; so she wouldn’t really miss him.
G: y didn’t u say that earlier? then I would have told her ok b4itself.
O: (pouting) see how happy she is to stay away from her pyare hubby.
She kissed him on cheeks.
G: oh…then u do one thing, cancel ur trip, ok?
O: you…..he twisted her ears.
She stood up to go but he pulled her back & she fell on the bed.He leaned over her, seeing her face.He was moving his fingers thru her face.
G: ka hua meri pati ko?
He was silent , he kissed her softly…She was smiling.She locked her fingers with his.She heard jhanvi calling her; she suddenly stood up to go.But Om pulled her back:-
O: I will miss u pagli, so let me give something in advance…
G: omkaraji, keep some reserved , u can give me after v come back….ok?
She rolled her eyes & hugged him.Then she ran downstairs.
Om was smiling & went to pack his bags.
Precap:- what is Om’s old painting doing in his room??
Guys hope u liked this, I will b busy from tomorrow so don’t know of I will b able to update daily…..Sorry guys…Love u all lotzzzzz…….Do miss me a little ok!!!!!
41 Comments
Awesome update
Thank you alekhi for reading?
a good episode…building up mystery …waiting for the next episode…and hats off to your patience for posting two episodes almost every other day…good job…
Thank u didi….
Happy that u love this ff?
AMAZING BEAUTIFULL CUTE FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING SUPERB???
Thank you uf?
Awesome
Thanks niriha?
Yeh mystery timer!!!! Lovely episode ???? plzz do post the next update ASAP
Hi dhar…..
Please do follow the upcoming parts too,?
Hai shraddha…..such a nice epic….really loved it….I am sorry ? I couldn’t get time to comment as I am busy with my studies….but I try to read your ff as I get time…..and the most I liked in the ff is that Om calling Gauri”pagali”…..awww such a cute name…
Hi San, no need of sorry …
Thank u a lot for commenting….
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Awesome,amazing!!Hope you will post as soon as possible,whenever you get time.
Thank you for this double dhamaka.
Colour-yellow.
Hi Anu, thank you for enjoying this ff.
I shall post the next soon?
It was really nyc….read all parts just nw….too good man….n ur mystery time yaar…..awesome…..waiting 4 nxt…..
Hi yashu missed ur comments….
Keep following the coming parts too?
I m really sry dear…bcoz of Tutions n studies I can’t comment….n u r writing awesome….keep going ??
What is this Shraddha.. u r going to give main track from next part.. wow.. I’m already excited
Hi Verna, yes…do follow the next updates too dear?
Amazing…. loved it…. Excited for the new mystery…
Hi sagi,thanks a lot for regularly commenting?
As usual Awesome dear….
#NAUGHTYKARA…
I like the flow of ur story and the positivism in or story…..
PRECAP is intersting…. But plz don’t separate then……
Today’s episode colour is grey for different shades of life…
Thank you mahi, no there wouldn’t be a seperation for them…
Do follow this ?
It is awesome dear… Lovely update
Hi Niki thank u for continuously following my ff?
It was great and nice
Thank u dear Palak ?
Amazing..post soon
Hi aarti, thank u.
Yep shall post the next soon?
Hey dear I am so sorry I wasn’t able to comment on previous chapters. They were awesome and lovely. And hey don’t stop writing this ff. It’s a great story. Take your time to write. Will be waiting….
Oh no need of sorry radhika, thank u for encouraging me…
Love ur Tashkara story a lot?
Awesome episode.Keep writing dear.
Sorry,for not commenting on previous chappies.I was suffering from fever from last 4/5 days.
I want to give them bronze color for their positive relationship.
Plz don’t end this ff soo soon.????????????
I can’t leave without this ff.I know it’s thoda filmy.But that’s the fact.I loved it.
Keep writing dear.Eagerly waitimg for next episode.
Hi sanyu, this comment really made me cry yaar??
I shall surely continue this
What was that? ‘They were enjoying the beauty of the whole night together; even the moon & the breeze…..’ and then Shivaay and Om discussing business?! ? as if that wasn’t enough, you just had to tease us with that last part! It was good, and I’m waiting for more, in every sense of the word. ? post next soon
Hey samm, missed ur comments???
Y u felt that it was short?
Let’s give them some privacy like Om said in some episode to svety?
Keep waiting yaar, hope u read the previous ones too?
Yo ??
Awesome update shraffs.I give sky blue colour for peace.The full episode was calm
going & superb.
Thank u sakash, love ur ff too?
Ur welcome.Thank u shraffs for my FF.Love u & ur FF dear.Bye???
Amazing chappy shraddha!!!! ? ? ?
Congrats for completing 31 successful chapters… Hope this no. Grows till…… Till u want!!!!!!
Will be missing u.. Come back soon!!! ? ?
Hey Richa…. thank you dear….?