Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
Didn’t get time so giving u a small chap.
I really don’t know if u would like this part.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this chap.
Colour 34
Om was driving silently, engrossed in thoughts.He wouldn’t b this silent with her, she thought.So something is there.She didn’t want to poke her nose in that problem because if it was to b shared, he would’ve definitely told her.So she was thinking of ways to cheer him up.
G: hey Sankarji….
O; kya…did u forget to take something?
G: han… bilkul…
O: come on gouri, when will u be responsible?U r going to b a mom & still now u r just like this? Acch what is it that I forgot, we will buy from some shop
G: woh…I forgot to take my kambakht…( toffee)
He stared her….
O: gouri u r just impossible….U r still like a child…
Gouri became silent & she was looking out.
O: kya hua mera pagli ko?? Ha…Don’t be silent….I want to hear something from you…
G: u were silent all this time , right?So I’m going to b in moun vrath.Im always blabbering, so I will keep quiet.
O: come on gouri, nowadays u r becoming short tempered.Did u see this honey?What ur mommy is doing?So after u come out u should b always be with papa, b a papa’s girl done?
Gouri was giggling.
G: so u r planning to take her in ur team ha?I will show u ok? Nandi….
It was just few more kilometers from the temple.They had stopped at a dhaba for having some light food.
G: After our honey’s arrival, v should come with her to this dhaba, such a beautiful ambience.
O: r u alright gouri?U told that u were feeling fatigued.R u fine now?
G: ha…par I’m having slight headache now.
O: y don’t v go back then?
G: nahi…it’s maataji ki puja.She will.give us all prosperity if v pray to her in spite of all our health issues.Just see I will b alright as soon as I reach the Mandir.
O: fine have it now.
G: I don’t want omkaraji….I might vomit …
O: no , u will b further more tired.See I will feed u.Open ur mouth.
He feeded her with small pieces of roti.She was showing faces but he kept on feeding her.An old couple sitting opposite to them were smiling seeing this.Gouri was embarrassed seeing them looking at this.
G: bus karo na , see they r looking us.
O: so what?meri patni, meriarxi.What is wrong if I feed you?
G: I’m not a kid …to do this…
O: of course, I’m feeding both my pyaara sa bacchom.
Gouri was moved; she couldn’t control her tears hearing this.She was having goosebumps.
O: kya hua is it spicy?
G:mm…..she didn’t want to make it emotional.
He made her drink water.As the food finished, he slowly pecked her in the cheek.She smiled innocently as he went to wash off….
After almost 1 hour, shivay was on his way to home.He thought about gouri & Om; he took his phone to do a call to them.But as he was about to dial, he received a call from an unknown number.
Person: Mr.shivay Singh oberoi?
S: Yes what is it?
P: ur brother & his wife had met with an accident and is now admitted in Bhatia General Hospital.Please do come immediately, the situation is a bit worse.
The phone fell down from Shivay as he did a sudden break; his heart was aching & eyes were being blurry.He rushed to the hospital.
Meanwhile he called anika & asked her to take Rudy to come to the hospital.He asked her not to inform anyone else about this.A shattered anika , took rudra & went off to the hospital immediately.
As they reached the ICU, aniru saw shivay standing all broken in front of it.
A: kya hua, shivay what happened to both (crying)
S: woh…relax anika it’s ok both r in ICU.Doctors didn’t tell anything till now.Dont worry they will get the best treatment itself; if not in this hospital then any other best one .I will take them; nothing will happen…
R: bhaiyya, I’m feeling tensed.I want to see both of them.Please bhaiyya ( crying)
Shivay was hugging both & consoling them while the doctors came out….
Precap:- why did Om had to call shivay at midnight??
Expecting tomatoes, chamelis from all of you.Dont kill me for giving such a track.After all life is not always smooth , right??Soon everything is gonna b normal….
Until we see with next chap,
Bye, take care & love u lotzzzz
23 Comments
plz don’t let gauri lose the baby xx
nice episode …black is the color…as you gave tragedy at the end…..awaiting for the next mystery to kick off
I won’t give u chameli and tomato but plz don’t ruin their happiness…..
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.please ….
PRECAP:- I KNOW ITS MY SUGGESTION…
THANK YOU DEAR FOR CONSIDERING MY SUGGESTION…..
Awesome
AWESOME BEAUTIFULL CUTE HEART TOUCHING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
Nice
Pecap I didn’t understand . do tnx for double dhamakka . and I couldn’t comment for last chappys as I was busy.nice epi. I hope hamari chotti omkie or gauri doesn’t die. Kambkat part was super. And feeding portion was so romantic. I too suggest blackblack like vhm. I wish I could see this in screen. Do u r right life is full of hurdles I hope they overcome this soon . last chappy was awesome with that asthma shlok part saree . I loved it . hoping next color soon. Iand all the best for rumya ff
Superrr epidode.
why dis heart attack didi…mausam kitna pyaara tha..aur thu ne isko bigad diya…waise Om saying both of them as kids was too cute….grey colour for the sad news
Superb??and I suggest black colour…and Shraddha today I read all the parts in one go….story line is just awesome….
Y diii yyyyyy????…?????????….i hope their baby is fine….plzzz make everything fine soon….
Beautifully written??( wish this omRi Romance would happen in DBO for real)..I will go with white because of The purity of I’d love for Gauri as seen the the first half..
And of course the Obros love too..
Both chapters r very good.. but accident and precap making me restless.. waiting for next.. by the way.. pls do consider our FF too Shraddha
Oh god…!! Dont make Gauri to lose her child…hope they will be fyn…black colour
Nice one… Don’t Make them to lose their happiness… waiting for the next part.. post it soon
It is true that a real life can’t be so smooth all time and this track is really making the story so real and twists are really good.Hope their life will be normal soon.Thank you for today’s double dhamaka.
colour-Black and white for the sad moments.
This track is thunderstorm.haha !! Waiting for next epi.
This track is thunderstorm.haha !! But i like it. There should be happiness and sadness too. If not story will be boring. I love the change. Waiting for next epi.
Awesome..I hope Rikara and baby will be fine waiting for next part
Lovely read both the parts……but dear pls pls don’t make them lose their child…..pls pls…..n loved ur double dhamaka…..waiting 4 nxt…..
It is nice pr shock de diya
Amazing update… But achanak se aisa jhatka kyun??? Pls.. I hope they r fine… .. Pls post soon…
OMG!! Accident ho gya, rabba rabba!!