Hay, doing the next update also today.
Shall discuss colour suggestions in next update.
Previous chappies and new os in
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Try to guess the colour ,dunno whether u will like these twists..??
Recap:- Anika and gouri r part of royal family of Jodhpur. But Om is not ready to accept gouri due to her past. Both confronts each other.
” ENOUGH OM, JUST STOP THIS!!”
Rikara trembled hearing that voice.
“Just stop saying all these about my chutki” said anika. She came to the room with gouri’s aayi.
O : woh…bhabhi… she might be ur sister. But I can’t believe how u have such a cheap girl as ur sis…
He couldn’t complete the sentence as anika had slapped him. All were shocked.
A: not a word against MERI chutki. Om,u don’t deserve her. I have been fed up seeing all this for months. U r not trying to understand her U have been messing up with her life too
Aao na chutki mere Saath, abhi
Anika took away a crying gouri to her room.She didn’t even look back at gouri.
Om was totally disturbed. He was sad that bhabhi also misunderstood that girl. Suddenly he felt a touch in his shoulder.
” Beta!!!” he turned back and saw gouri’s aayi.
“I need to talk to you….”
It was night.Gouri was gloomy the whole day.Only anika,aayi and shivay knew what had happened b/w rikara.
As usual , she took ice water for Om. But she wasn’t ready to go to him now. She was sad that she made him hurt by her words; she didn’t want to but his insulting was crossing the limit.
She asked servant to give water to om and went to sleep with aayi in another room.
Whereas , om was totally broken that day. Aayi had told him all the truth; about kali’s torture and gouri’s sacrifice to save her mom. He had cried a lot. ; he didn’t know how to face her. She had ignored him today. He was confused on how to approach her.He was also sad that bhabhi too hated him now. He thought to see gouri but then he thought not to.
All their memories from 3 months back were coming to his mind.
When gouri was his student, his chulbul and then his wife.He was having feelings for her but then wasn’t ready to accept it, because now he thought that he is not the right match for her as he had deeply hurt her.Somehow he killed that night time.
Gouri was totally blank. She loved him and has also felt that he is also affected by her. But she was very much broken by their last encounter such that she decided to ignore him now. She couldn’t trust him anymore, her feelings were made a mockery. Her love and sincerity was questioned many times. She couldn’t bear anyone pointing a finger in her character; Om was doing the same thing for all these months. She couldn’t forgive him; this fact made her even more desp. She wanted Sankarji to help her.
2 days had passed, rikara were avoiding each other as they had created a shell of ego by themselves. They even avoided each other’s glances; but both of them really yearned for each other’s presence.
3rd day, was a special day for oberois.The Jodhpur family had come there to invite all of them to the palace for 1 week stay. They wanted to welcome their betis sasural.
And all of them were off to Jodhpur. They had a pleasurable trip. Anika noticed rikara’s ignorance; she knew what was cooking up. She felt bad for her behavior towards om all these days. She had made up her mind to solve all problems.
They reached the palace and had a grand and royal welcome by from the family.
Aniri were asked to introduce their sasural.When om’s turn came anika said,
” dadaji, this is gouri’s…”
” my jiju’s cousin brother!!!”
Oberois were shocked, aniri’s choti ma and chachu knew the truth ; they were also shocked.
Om was literally stunned, his eyes were teary; he never expected this.
There was total silence, but later they continued to chat. Finally all dispersed into their allotted rooms.
Rikara were in separate rooms.
Anika had first gone to meet om.She could see a totally broken om.
A: Om!!!!
O: ( hiding tears) bhabhi!!!
A: I’m sorry om, I had…
O: no bhabhi, I have to say sorry. I had hurt ur chutki.
A: y do u say ur chutki. She is ur patni!!
O: no bhabhi, I’m no more her pati. I have not done any duties of a pati. More than that I was always accusing that poor girl. I don’t deserve to be her pati.She is such a good girl. She beared a lot for me, even I hurt her she cared and helped me.Im such a bad person.
Anika consoled him.
” u had an mu about her, it is cleared now. u should patch up now om she will definitely forgive u. I know both of u love each other a lot.But situations separated u. U should be desp.U r a very nice pati. U have to prove that now.
O: I don’t know bhabhi. I feel even my sight would hurt her. So I’m not going to her from now on. I won’t destroy her life. She would b happy if I’m not there with her. Bhabhi just leave me alone now…
A heavy hearted anika decided to call a meeting of oberois in palace garden.
All were worried with rikara problem.
D: I don’t know y god is testing my children.
J: don’t worry mummyji, they cannot sit for long time without each other.
By: yep u r right jhanvi. They will surely open up.
Ru: par bua maa,for that we should create some situations which will clear the problems.
Pi: lekin Rudy, they r not even willing to see each other’s. An hum kya karthe?
Sh: I can make gouri understand. She will not ignore her bade bhaiyya.
A: lekin shivay, baat to sahi hain. But if we simply ask them to talk, they will only obey our orders, they wouldn’t open up. It should come from their heart. They should feel the pain of losing each other.( logic sign)
R: got a khidkitod idea bhabhi.
He discussed the plan with others and they all liked his idea.
A: arrey wah rudra… change hai… u r an expert yaar.
Ru: bhabhi, any doubt regarded with love just come to Rudy.
A: so all of u get ready, mission om-gouri is going to start from tomorrow. Just wait & watch!!!!!
Precap : – Will oberoi familie’s plan to make rikara unite be successful??
Waiting by biting nails for ur responses??
36 Comments
Amazing shraddha… ….. Om shld b punished for wht he has done… But not for long pls.. ?….. Eagerly waiting for the next update… .. Abb rudy ka plan hai toh jhakkas hi hoga…. …. Update soon dear!!
Yes, both r gonna unite very soon.
Yes bhabhi devar plan will b khidkitod?
Next chappy coming soon
Awesome part
Thank you for following?
Awesome….
Awesome
Thank you niriha?
Love it ? waiting patiently for the next part.
I hope u r commenting for first time,if I’m not wrong?
Next chappy coming soon
I am commenting for the first time ?
Awesome yaar.. waiting for the next one
Thanks sagi
Next chappy coming soon?
Fabulous, write more pls
awesome. now waiting for rudra’s khidkitod plan.
Thank you rasika,
U will get to know the plan soon?
Loving Tashkara a lot??
Wow wow wow awesome. Firstly i want to thank you for sending me previous parts. Secondly thank for giving three chppies for a day. I really really love this ff. Waiting to see the plan of oberoi family .
Thank you Shashi for reading my ff.
Ya I thought to give a bonanza to all?
Next chappy coming soon
AWESOME AMAZING FANTASTIC WONDERFULL SUPERB???
Dear shraddha
I know ye RiKara ff hai.but iss main ShivIka hai but RuMya nahi dikh raha hai.soumya iss main nahi hai kya.nahi hai tho usse add karona.mission om gauri main wo bhi rudy ki saath ho tho acha hotha.
I will b bringing rumya, after RIKARA union probably??
Oh wow.. such a cute part..
Colour
Guilty Om
Attitude Gauri and
Encouraging family
Thank you Verna
Green- guilty om
Orange- gouri’s attitude
Blue – understanding family
locvely ff shraddha.. i dont have words to praise ur thoughts nd writing skill…amazing dear
Hey thanks deepu for commenting.
I hope this is the first time ur commenting
Please keep following?
Yes this is my first comment. will comment now on-wards frequently..
I can get Rudy or Anika, one of them will make d plan..it was great..but y did your OS competition entry get disqualified??
No, it is not disqualified dear, it is published
Awesome
Thank u
Keep following?
Awesome….it was superb….read both the parts….precap seems interesting……post nxt asap…..
Next chappy coming soon
Thank you yashu?
Amazing episode dear ?? plzz do post the next update ASAP
Hey dhar, thanks yaar
Next chappy coming soon
Waiting for ur update too?
Fabulous episode.
keep writing dear. I have already commented yesterday,but it didn’t show yet.But4ur lovely ff i can write it again.
But i am not able to understand their introduction.Why Anika introduced Om as her jiju’ cousin brother.
Gauri can introduce him like this. But this was done by Anika.
Secondly,if want to indroduce someone,we use cousin not cousin brother/cousin sister.
I hope u don’t mind it.
Hey sanyu, sorry just see, it is the next line.
I.e. It is gouri who introduced him
Awsomee episode fantastic..om actually deserves this…well portrayed
It is superbbbbbb dear