Hey guys , its kashvi a new member to tell updates family , a idea was popping in my mind ….last days so here I am to produce
I am studying 9th only and would like to make many new friends too ……hope u all shake hands with me
Here is the story ,
A COMPLETE LIFE
a girl is seen packing her bags hurriedly …..she was wearing red top and black shorts above knee made her hair free ….
Girl : oh god its already time ….I need to leave now …..
She enters washroom and washes her make up completely …..still she was flowing white
Girl : all done ….sorry dad and mom …
Saying this she keeps a letter beside the night stand ….a drop of tear falls from her eyes !
The girl takes a Saree and ties in her balcony and slowly goes down .
After she runs away with her bag hiding from the people
Soon after she left , a lady opens the door of the room
Lady : Shona , Shona …..
(Yes the girl was oir pretty Shona aka Swara)
(The lady is mishti aka sharmishta )
Lady : Shona ma …r u ready ….where are u ?
She was searching everywhere and finally saw the Saree which was tied in the balcony …
Mishti shouts : Shekar (tensed and worried)
Shekar comes up
Shekar : what happened mishti ?
Mishti : Shona ….Shona ….(trembling)
Shekar sees the Saree and gets angry ….he looks around and finds the letter
Shekar reads it
“Hi papa and mom ….I know u must be angry right now , but I don’t have any other option ….I want study more explore more ……but u all didn’t send me as I am girl , but now I have taken this decision to live my life as I like…….I am not interested in marrying someone and being with him whom I don’t know …….plz don’t stop me or search for me ….wherever I am , I will be safe ………
Love u mom and dad , your Shona ”
Shekar throws the paper …mishti cries ….
Shekar : this girl have gone mad ….I shouldn’t have let her stay alone again …this is the third time ….(he said angrily)
Mishti : now what we will do …guest are there …..what will they talk about us ….and what about my Shona (she cries)
Shekar (angry) : from now no one will take Shona name here OK …..I don’t have a daughter…..she died already….
Mishti was shocked !
In auto
Swara : bhai plz go to railway station …
The auto driver nods and rides ……
Railway station ..
Some boys and mens were standing near the TV …as India Pakistan match was going ….
In that group we can see a handsome and dashing boy …he was wearing a normal T-shirt and half trouser with a big back pack (travel type)
Boy : array array dhoni ….bang a six na …plz plz ….
He was literally begging the TV …..
Dhoni was about to hit a six …but the ball was caught and he was out ..
The boys sits down and cries …
Boy : oh my god ….dhoni is out …no no (he cries like a child)
A boy from behind …..lucky lucky he shouts …
Yes our child boy is lucky aka Laksh
Boy : oh oh again …ur dhoni is out huh ? So bad na
Laksh : shut up sanky , already I am sad ….now don’t make me angry (he said with a fake anger)
The boy starts to laugh
Yes the boy who hugged Laksh is our dashing hero …..sanskar maheshwari ……aka sanky
Who was wearing red T-shirt and black half trouser with a big back pack !
Sanskar : did u bring the ticket receipt ….
Laksh : haan ..here …where is this buddi Amma …..
Sanskar : still u r calling the same ….
Laksh : she is always my buddi Amma …
Sanskar and Laksh laughs …
At that time , Swara comes
Swara runs and hugs sanlak …
Swara (happily) : omg …is that u both …..finally I met u both after a long time …
Laksh : welcome back buddi amma …
Swara makes angry face ….sanskar laughs …
Sanskar hugs Swara while Laksh also ..
Sanskar : meeting after 12th huh !
Swara : anyways sanskar ….how many girlfriends huh ….
Laksh keeps a hand on Swara shoulder
Laksh (teasing) : Swara what typical question is this …..there is a infinite number to say na ….
Swalak bursts out laughing …..sanskar stands in embarressment ….
Sanskar : enough of u both ..rest I will see in manali OK ….
Swalak nods …
Sanskar : OK OK OK come …we will be late ….
Swara : haan correct come …..
Laksh : wait na ..let’s see who wins the match
Swara (teasing) : of course that stupid donkey is out na …then India will lose …
Swasan gives HiFi ….
Laksh (angry) : hey u both stop teasing my dhoni ….
Swara (innocently) : OK come sanskar ….at least we will go manali and enjoy the trip …let him come whenever he wishes too ….
Sanskar also nods and was about to leave …
Laksh (hits Swara head) : both r big dramebazz …..
Swasan : yes we are …..
Trio laugh …..
They head towards the train …
Trip manager comes ..
Manager : have everyone came …..
Everyone nods ..
Manager : OK guys ….here is the booklet of what we r gonna to in manali …hope u all read it properly …
Everyone nods ….
Manager : now get in to train ….as we need to rock the world out ..
All shouts : manali ….here we r coming to torture u …..
All gets in ..swasanlak takes a compartment ….
Swara throws her bag at Laksh and sleeps in the seat …..sanskar laughs …
Laksh : hey buddi Amma ….even I need a seat u move ur legs and y did u throw ur bag at me
Swara : then where should I throw PA ….
Laksh shows angry face ….
Sanskar : adjust Karlo na …..lucky boy ….even in school days , she was blackmailing u …and again ..
Laksh : that’s y I call her …..miss blackmailer also …
Swara : now both of stop ur nonsense talk ….both go and bring water I forgot to bring …
Sanlak nods and leaves ….
Swara looks through the window …
Swara (tears) : I missing u so much mom and dad …but sorry there is no other way to enjoy my life to the fullest ….
She wipes it and is really happy to see her friends …
Sanlak both comes …
Laksh throws water bottle at Swara ,which opens and her dress get wet ….
Sanskar laughs ..
Swara (angry) : u !!!! Sanlak runs inside the train (the train has not started yet)
Swara also takes a water bottle and starts to pour on them …
Laksh : ahhh ….Swara I am getting wet ..
Swara : u did for me also na …now bear …
Sanskar : buddi Amma leave me …na …plz …
Swara : u r not less than him ….
After some time …
Trio burst laughing , looking at each other …
Laksh whipsers into sanskar ears
Laksh : sanskar carry and go to compartment ..before she starts again ..
Sanskar : correct ….
Sanskar goes towards Swara ..
Swara gives a questioning look to sanskar ….immediately he picks her in his arms …
Swara (angry) : what the hell u stupid put me down ….
Sanskar : no way darling form let’s go ….
Swara : Laksh ke baache ….I will kill u …
Laksh : first kill sanky than me …ha ha ha (he laughs)
Sanskar takes Swara to his compartment
Laksh was standing near the door and was watching cricket on the TV , the train started to move
A girl shouts : sir old help me ….
Laksh : whose beautiful voice is this …….
Saying this he turns around and finds …a girl wearing specs ….and a simple pink chudidhar ….with a book in a hand and a trolley bag
Laksh was lost in own thoughts
Girl : sir plz help me ….plz ……
Laksh comes out of his thought and lends a hand …..in which the girl catches and enters the train ….
Both Laksh and that girl fall …..girl top of the Laksh ….
Girl : oh I am sorry and thank u ….
Laksh : OK chasmish ….first get up na ….
Girl : OK OK …
Saying this she gets up and so as Laksh …
Laksh : so what’s ur name ..
Girl : ragini , ragini sen Gupta ….
Laksh (shocked ) : omg ! Ragini u r same ….u didn’t even change a bit yaar
Ragini (innocently) : how ….how ….u know me ….
Laksh : stupid , loyala school , back bencher , me , Swara and sanskar …
Ragini (shocked) : Laksh ….
Laksh : haan chamish at last ….amyways what r u doing here ?
Ragini : I came for manali trip …
Laksh laughs …
Laksh : u and trip (pointing her book)
Ragini looks on …
Laksh : I mean its for those who r adventurous ….there is tracking , hunting etc etc …..what will u do
Ragini (innocently) : I don’t know ….but surely want to come …
Laksh gives an impoosible look
Laksh : OK come join …
@compartment ..
Swara was seeing phone rested on sanskar lap
Laksh : hey u both dramebazz …see who is here …
Swara sits and both look at the compartment door …..ragini enters
Swasan (shocked) : ragini ?
Ragini (innocently) : hi …….
Sanskar : what r u doing here ….
Laksh : even I asked the same question bro
Ragini : I …I ….just came for manali trip …..
Sanlak burst out laughing …..Swara gets angry
Swara (angry) : u both shut ur mouth and sit !!!
Sanlak gulps seeing her anger
Swara (smiling) : welcome ragini …come have a seat ….make urself comfortable
Sanlak : why r being good with her ..
Swara (winks) : only girls can understand girls things ….
Ragini chuckles
Sanlak shock , Swara rocks
The screen freezes ….
Hope u all like …..plz tell me whether I should continue or not …..it depends on ur comments ….
And whom do u want as a pair …I have already decided …still want ur opinion …..so that I could make a good friendship between them
Plz decide and tell so that I can show a good friendship between them ….choose wisely …the pairs are chosen already
Thanks for reading and plz do ….and comment !
10 Comments
Nice
Plz make swasan & raglak
SwaSan n RagLak plz
Awsm..
Swasan plzzzz
It is copy of yeh jawani hai dewaane film.
Hi kashvi… this is shloka here… i am too in class 9th … would love to b ur frnd…. …
Doesnt this story similar wid yjhd…. but plz yaar dont just copy everything… rest is ur wish… i m quite impressed by ur way of writing…. keep doing the good work… i am waiting for ur reply
awsome…continue this..
Nice..
Awesome dear…. Hope for swasan