Let’s begin….
San hv reached near to complete the challenge its day 6…
Before going to RagSan lets see wat hpnd to other?
Dasi:bcs of your over confidence everything hv slipped out from our hands
Monali:wat i hv to do dadi..i hv tried provoke Sahil na…and why me you hv tried with swara
Dasi: that swara hvnt reacted anything…
Monali:now its a hard time..and i will do wat i hv thought..ek theer pe do nishana…revenge on Sahil and i will get Sanskar easily
Dasi:wat you thought? Wat you r going to do?
Monali:hmm…u vl know wn the bang hpns..
She goes…
Here suji in room was tensed..her son is going to take a wrong step..and she cant even stop him…
Suji:mujhe maasiji ke baat sunn ni hi nai chahiye thi!
She sees dasi there
Dasi: don’t worry suji…still we hv time!
Suji: stop it…i hv believed you.. Could you do something to separate madness of my son…no ryte…Ab jo karna hai..woh mein khud karungi
Dasi:wat you r going to do?
Suji:i will directly talk with shekar ji…i would beg him to leave my son
She goes….
Here Monali was outside the gadodia house
She was waiting that wn vl Ragsan comes out…
She sees sahil coming out..she bends…inside her car
His car passes…
And within moments….
Ragsan comes out…
San drives with Ragini..
Monali slowly follows them…
San was talking in the phn…
San:mahi…mail the presentation to clients..and any other thing…?
San:ok then…
He disconnects the call..
At the time he again gets the call…
He smiles widely..he picks the call: shahveer!!!
Shah(played by harshad arora): guess wat?
San:wat…?
Shah:m in your place!
San: wat a great surprise!
Rag imitates:wat great sur(coughs).. surprise laado!
San smiles…
Shah: with whom you r?
San:Ragini
Rag:(coughs)laado
San smiles..Rag coughs…san pats her back lil worried
Shah:oh then i want to meet her!
San:meet me at xxx place
Shah:ok bro!
San parks the car near a medical
San:laado…i m going to get you a cough syrup..and stay here..dont go anywhere!laado don’t go anywhere!
Rag:laado nai jayegi
San goes!
Monali smirks seeing sanskar entering a shop..wr he gets someone and he talks with him..san was seeing ragini…
He then goes with him that’s shahveer
She goes to car
Mon:Ragini… let’s go to Sanskar
Monali was abt to hold her hand..
Rag moves her hand back!
Mona:sanskar is calling you na! don’t you want to go to Sanskar
Shah:so wr is your Ragini?
San:she is in the car?
Shah:then i wanna meet her
San:first tell me du cough is best for cough na..Ragini is hvng cough!
Shah:ha.. that’s fine…
San buys
Here
Rag:sansii..calling laado?
Mona:ha….
Rag gets down the car!
Monali sees sanskar whose back was faced to him….she smirks
Mon herself:sanskar!u shouldn’t left her alone!for a sec too
Monali leaves Ragini’s hand!rag starts to moves… Rag was in the middle of the road..the voice of horns and vehicles disturbs her ….she covers her ears….
She starts to cry!
San who has come with shahveer looks for Rag..he finds none …he immediately comes out..to his shock he finds Ragini on the mid road
Car with full speed comes!
San:Ragini…
Shah sees him worried
San runs immediately…..without wasting a min
He couldn’t reach her …..shahveer sees a girl in the mid road..he follows Sanskar….
San:Raaaaaaaaginiiiiiiiiiiii
He falls!
Monali smirks seeing broken sanskar….
To be continued……
23 Comments
awesome. Ragsan are cute.
Kill that witch monali. Nice
Cuteeeeeee update
Amazinggggggg. Ik nothing bad happened to laddo.
Superb. This girl monali should die.
Lovely update
Amazing. What happened to laddo??
Awesome
Such a cute part. Update arrange marriage ke siyappa.
Awesomeeeeeeee. So cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ragsan scenes. Monali chipkali what a rhyming??????????
Amazing!!! I’m really proud of you aliya. You are updating your stories regularly. You are not expecting anything from readers if you got low comments are also you are writing continously . Hats off to you. After RagSan I’m huge fan of you and lahari. But now a days she’s not updating regularly.
Awesome di..
Shocking update yaar. Can’t wait to read .
Firstly thank you so much for giving us 3 updates. Superb dear. Plzzzzzz update arrange marriage ke siyappa.
I too agree with manu. Because of my sister insistence I came here but after reading your’s story I’m great fan of RAGSAN and I too want to write stories but don’t have time. I’m blessed with twins. They are 8 months old. So can’t write. But in future I will write ragsan story.
Superb dear, hey suspense. Can’t wait for next part
Ossssssssssoooooooooooommmmmmmmmm . Plsssssssssss update next part soon.
Superb
Awesome ragsan scenes are wonderful.
Awesome
Awesome
Amazing. Feeling bad sanskar more than laddo.
Amazing sissy. Sanky don’t worry nothing happened to your laddo.