Many shared your opinions abt wat would you do if your closed one is in the place of sanskar… Many said they would be against of it.. And many said they support them….
Now i m sharing my opinion….i would really against of it… f someone closed to me will be in sanskar’s place…bt i would hv agreed seeing his love for the girl.
And REALLY i would feel great seeing the person like sanskar…and if he proves by taking care of her..and i would definitely feel proud my decision of supporting him and wn he succeeds in taking care of her..
And today i want to tell something abt me.. That i am physically challenged from one of my body part…i hv listened a lots of taunts from the ppl bt my parents and my brother sister and i would also credit some of my friends and cousins they took a stand for me in every step of my life…recently i heard a taunting behind me by one of my closed one i didn’t thought that he Vl taunt me.. and now i made those weakness as a strong so it wont affect me…now i smile wn ppl taunt me abt my hands.. before i used to ask my parents..that why it hpnd to me bt now i m happy that god makes everything for a reason and if he had took ability from one thing he returns it by some or the other…i don’t know why i said this may be becs we didnt see eachother or know eachotherβΊ….sorry for my bak bak and wasting ur time……so lets get in to the story..
Let’s begin…
Next day…
Rag was crying and sahil was consoling her
Sahil:jayenge na.. pakka..ab shona busy hogi
She was holding the gift which she didn’t open… Which is given by sanskar
Sahil: let’s open the gift
He was abt to take.. Rag takes it a back
Rag:open..no..she continues to cry
Sahil:arey..lets see.. Wat is in it?
Rag still crying: no..no..no…di…di…
Sahil: ok.. Let us go to eat pastries… laado loves pastry ryte?
Rag was still crying…
Shejan comes
Jan: look… Wat we brought for Ragini
She shows the pastry
Rag was crying..she nods in no
Shekar:so my princess wants to meet her di
Rag nods in yes…
Shekar: ok chalo
Jan: its not nice Shekhar.. if we go like this..
Shekar:laado chalo…
Sahil and jan tries to stop him but he takes Ragini with him..
They moves to door
Shekar: my princess will only open the door..
Rag gives the gift to shekar to hold..
Rag wears her shoes and takes back the gift from Shekhar…and runs to open the door..
Shekar smiles
Rag opens the door and sees swara
Rag hugs her tightly..
Swara smiles…
Lak sees this.. He smiles
Here sanskar wanted to go with swalak badly…bt suji said him to take monali for the shopping
She was seeing the dresses
Monali: Sanskar…
He was lost Actually sad…he wanted to meet Ragini
She pats him
Monali:wr r u lost?i m calling u from last 5 mins…
San:oh m really sorry!
Monali:will u plz help me to select the dress
San:no..i m very bad at the selections..and you choose by yourself…
Monali: ok atleast come with me…
She held his hand.. He felt uncomfortable… She leaves his hand seeing his expressions
San:monali you go and watever you want buy it..
Monali smiles and goes…
He sees a doll which has wore long black skirt and white full sleeve top
And a black scarf around neck..and a white hair band on the hair and few bangles in the hand
He just remembered the first meet with Ragini..she has a wore a similar dress..
The moment he held her from falling from the escalator..and the way she was scared
sun mere humsafar
kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
ki teri saansein chalti jidhar
rahunga bas wahin umr bhar
(Listen, O my co-traveller,
do you have even a little bit of idea,
that the way your breath moves,
I’ll be there, all my life.)
He remembers wn he met her in swalak engagement.. wn felt she is ignoring him… He smiles biting his lips.. Then wn he saved her from the goons and brother moment? wn the Goon wanted to create the unwanted relation how his blood boiled ??
When she called him as stranger
And the moment he realised she made a special place in his heart..and Ragini’s gift and the moments in swalak wedding..her mischiefs..and her way of showing mehendi and she saying “laado husband loves laado”
And the song was in the back ground
jitni haseen ye mulaakaatein hain
unse bhi pyaari teri baatein hain
baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hain
aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye
(as beautiful these meetings are,
more beautiful than them are your talks.
once I’m lost in your talks,
I’d never want to come back to consciousness.
my life is in your arms.)
San was in beautiful memories…
Monali: Sanskar
He composes and sees her she was wearing a salwar
Monali:how i m looking
San smiles:good.. Is your shopping completed?
Monali nods..
Here rag was not leaving swara for a second too..bcs she is scared that she vl go leaving her…
Sw:ok open the gift now atleast
Rag nods in no…
Lak:u should open the gift and see wat it hv?
Rag nods in no…
Sahil:she is having a special attachment towards Sanskar… She didn’t bod with anyone this soon.. this is wat shocking me…
Lak smiles…
Sahil: seriously…
After sharing some time..swalak decides to leave
Rag held swara’s hand tightly… As she doesn’t want to let her go
Sahil:laado…shona has to leave hai na..leave her hand
Rag with a crying face nods in no
Lak:laado…will you come with us?
Sw smiles:laado…u vl come with us?
Rag smiles and immediately held Sahil’s hand
Sahil smiles:no…laado
Rag:yes..laado
Sw:chalo na bhaiyyu
Sahil then nods…
They goes to mm
Here sanskar and monali reaches…
At the same time swalak raghil reaches
San sees Ragini….he smiles widely…
Rag:lak…laado tough
Lak smiles
Lak:laksh
Rag:crying boy..
San laughs a bit
San moves towards them:still u are calling me crying boy… That’s not fair.. Even you were crying yesterday
Sahil: sanskar…(he dragged his name a bit)
Rag smiles and imitates sahil:sansii…
All laughs
Monali gets frustrated bcs she was left alone
San:sansii… sanskar
Rag smiles:sansii
Later they goes in
Monali angrily hits the car…
Monali:i hv to do something with this girl.. Sanskar acts like blind whenever he sees this mad girl.. Huh..!
Rag was sitting in the hall and seeing some file
Rp was sitting there…
They were sitting in the corners of sofa
Rp sees the gift in her hand
Rp:beta..who gave you gift?
Rag smiles..she seeing the floor
Rag:laado friend
Rp:who is that?
He closes his file
Rag: crying boy
Rp laughs lil:crying boy?
Rag:laado friend sansii
Rp:sansii
Lak who was seeing this:chaachu..she is telling sanskar
Rp:good name.. Ragini
Rag:laado
Rp smiles:laado…! actually you should call him sanki
Rag giggles:sanki…good name laado chaachu
Laksh laughs
Rp:chaachu?
Lak:she is calling you bcs i called you that
Rp smiles:why didn’t you open the gift?
Lak:she will not? Everyone has tried
Sahil and sanskar comes
San:you still opened the gift
Rag nods in no
San:why?
Rag just smiles
Sahil: its her habit.. Whether she wish to open she vl!
San sits next to ragini
Rag:laado friend..sanki.. crying..boy..sansii..sanki..(she tells giving a gaps in-between the words)
San: waaattt??
While rp and laksh burst into laughter
Sahil:laado..we should not call like that?
San: who told you this?
Rag:laado chaachu
Rp and laksh hifies
San:chaachu?!dad
Rp laughs
He sees them…lak points towards rp
Dp comes: Wats hpng here??
Rp smiles:talking with Ragini
He sees Ragini..
San:look laado…i m not sanki
Sahil:he is sanskar..call him sanskar..ok
Rag:sansii
Rp:why r u telling her strictly…she is calling him ryte…sanki…
Dp smiles a bit
Rp:sahil..very soon we were going to come to your House
Lak:laado..di ke laas chale..
He takes her in..
Sahil smilingly: anything important uncle??
Dasi listens this.. She stops and listens
Rp : Actually i wanted to talk shekar..bt i think it will be best if i tell you now..u can discuss the matter wirh your family..and then i vl talk to shekar!
Sahil gets confused bt smiles:abt which matter?
Rp smiles: Actually..we wanted Ragini’s hand for sanskar
Sahil’s smile vanishes.and he was shocked..he stands:wat??
Dasi was shocked bcs she didnt knew this vl move this soon…
Swara who came there with Raglak was also shocked..she looks at laksh
To be continued….
Stopped at the right time!!
So which story i hv to post next??
26 Comments
Both parts are awesome
Amazing dr
Just awesome sissy. We are blessed to have you in our life. Lots of love and hug for you sissy?????
Ossssooommmmmmmmmm. You are indeed writer and I’m proud of you yaar.
Hats off to aliya. Nyc
Awesome. Really proud of you and always keep smiling???
Superb dear. I would like read all your stories???
Nice
Awesome
I seen it before but reply late to ur comment because I’m 12th lots of work busy.ur r a amazing writer.. It is really rare for us to meet a truth and loyal person in our life.. If we meet we should look at their appearance r problem.that too in this modern science world….my mom too have some problem but i can’t hate her i love her because she is one who feel sad some thing happen to me …
I had always admired u sis?? ur stories ,ur way of mingling wid us,ur nature everythng is jst perfect? I rarely found such people who r so talented still don’t have ny sort of ego or something..N I have found d dat kinda frnd in u….U were always being special for me..Bt today u earned my respect yaar!! Hatts off to u grl litterelyy!!! U r my INSPIRATION! N about people who backbite or spread negativity or taunts…den don’t give a damn to dem….dey don’t have nythng good to do,ask dem to concentrate on dere life orelse I”ll extract all dere teeth ?*dentist_power!!
U r a blessed grl ali??? n nobody can deny it!! U have dat spark dat magic in u?? n v r so fortunate to have u wid us…
N about d story??? ufff!!! Ufff!! Ufff!!! Hehehe sanki? lol!!! Hahahahahah ragini….ya Allah ye ladki???? loved d episode to d core …..??? Teri story na ek aise world me leke chale jate hai meko ki kya bolu…vaha se aane ka mann he nai krta? love u for everythng???? waitng eagerly for nxt episode….Sahil swara ka reaction kya hoga???!!!
I”ll VOte for STORY OF A GRL,SELFISH LOVERS,ARRAMGE MAARIGE or COMPLICATED!!
I wish to meet u someday in my life???? love u always forever ….my brave superstar??? u”ll keep on rocking n shinning my grl??? umaaah!!!much love?????
Super episode …… Next part soon
Superb
Awesome
Fantastic. Hope they agree sanskar’s proposal. You are very brave yeah I agree with fairy don’t give damn important to persons like them. Hats off to you uuuuuuuuuuu
I don’t want to say cheezy lines buddy….but I can say we two r always connected by heart….and yeah my vote is fr complicated part 14….love you….u r perfect in my heart…keep smilin lovely
Superb
awesome
Awesome
Amazing omg ragini blushing. This one and story of a girl pyaar ki daastan.
Awesome dear
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awesome dear….loved it alot….
am really proud to be ur friend dear…u r really great writer dear…Don’t feel bad for others dear…u r really blessed dear…and also ur mom and dad are so blessed have a daughter like u…now onwards u r my inspiration dear….u r really soo strong alu dear…loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr alu dear…
Aliya di I love all of your stories be it Rashke qamar , selfish lovers , ashiqui …… or my personal fav. ek nayi kahani …… I love them all but this story just always makes me smile due to it’s soooo very good storyline . I just love this laado , the way ragu speaks is soo cute and the way she preeceds every word with her name i.e laado is so sweet . I always imagine ragu saying this whenever I read this . I love this story aliya di so please update i first , then selfish lovers as I love that story also . Eagerly waiting …..update soon di
Love you and your stories:) π π π π π π π π π π π π π
You know what? Don’t call that a disability. It’s just that you have something which is different from others. But then, you also have a power in you that many don’t possess- the gift of making people laugh, cry, smile and feel love through your stories. Move like you always do, with a smile and your head held high. Because in no way are you less. In fact, you are more and more.
And you know how much I love this story. I love Ragini. I agree, it is never easy to accept that a close one will be marrying such a person but then, if the person himself doesn’t have a problem, we can just pray that God gives them the strength to fulfill their vows β€