Fan Fiction

Complicated (ragsan ss) shot 14

Thankyou all for your valuable and inspirational comments… Thankyou so much again by sharing my own self i dont want to say its my weakness or anything..weakness tho tab hoti hai hum jab kuch nai kar paate ya hum hamare talents logon se darr ke chupate hai! By he i got a new family wr i can share my prblm too? i got encouragement from you…. This part has the lot of efforts which till now I didn’t experienced i hv become a mini philosopher for this part?…i don’t know you vl like it or not..bt plz give your reviews…?
Let’s begin….

Sahil was shocked
Sw looks at laksh who was already looking at her… Sw had the lots of questions… She didn’t knew how to react in this situation

Sahil:uncle..yeh aap kya keh rahe hai(wat r u saying uncle)?

Dp didn’t wanted this to hpn it’s abt their reputation afterall they are MAHESHWARI’S… Bt recent hpngs were made him to be quite…

Rp:i understand sahil…bt… Don’t think it’s going fast…

San:sahil! Trust me i vl keep your sister happy!
Sahil looks Shocked at sanskar

Sahil: its not abt trust Sanskar! Its not…i m…i don’t how to react! Bt sanskar..i need to leave…

Rp:bt beta!

Sahil:let me think and discuss eith mom dad…other that I can’t do anything…

Rag was holding swara’s hand

He goes to Rag…
Rag holds swara’s hand tightly… As she doesn’t wanted to leave her and go

Lak:Swara…u go with sahil and Ragini.. i vl pick u in the night…
Sw nods…

Swaraghil goes

Sahil and rag were sitting in front..
Sw was sitting in the back

Sahil was tensed worried and somewhere happy too…

Sw: bhaiyyu…
Sahil:shona…i m confused…u know na wat i m feeling right now
Sw: wat do you think abt sanskar bhaai
Sahil:shona.. He is a nice guy.. There is nothing to reject him…. He can’t
Sw interrupted:bt bhaiyyu
Sahil: let’s talk to mom dad..i feel it’s not right!

After sometime

Shejan stands shocked to know abt sanskar’s proposal for Ragini…

Sahil: wat to do dad?
Sw:bt bhaiyyu.. Did you see laado has bonded well with sanskar…he also saved her on our engagement wn she got missing..she made handmade envelope to Sanskar..and on wedding she has spent most of her time with sanskar bhaai…
Sahil:i m not denying that… Swara you r not understanding wat i m trying to say
Shekar tries to stop them as rag was in….
Sw:bhaiyyu..even laado wants that life..you know wat she used to say “laado husband loves laado”
Sahil:i know that…you r not understanding
Sw:i m understanding…
Sahil:u know ragini’s condition ryte
Sw:so.. now even you started to tell that..good bhaiyyu i never you vl say this
Sahil:for god sake swara…..

Rag who was in gets irritated by their arguments

She shouts and cries: no… Shout no..

All runs to the room
Sahil and sw was abt to go to her.. She pushes him both…

Rag:no..shout…no…ahh…..
Her condition was getting worse….

Jan:laado..see..beta…see mumma is here na…see…nobody will shout..
Shek glares both swahil: both go out.. Will talk
Swahil they were just looking at rag
Shek:i said go..
They goes….

Rag hugs Jan tightly…and crying…

Jan caresses her hairs….

Jan:see there’s silence…nobody is shouting…
Rag calms….
Jan makes Ragini sleep

Shekhar comes out
And glares both swahil
Shek angily: i think now you both must be happy…tum dono kya lagte ho?ha kya lagte ho? Ragini tum donon ko kya lagti hai
Sah:da..
Shek shows his palm
Shek:let me complete… SISTER? Yes or no?
Sw:dad..aap yeh
Jan comes
Shekar points jan and himself;who are we to Ragini?mom and dad..today i m telling that in our 3 kids..Ragini is the most understanding one for us.. Wat you both were doing few mins back??explain..now explain me
Both were silent
Shek: Ragini is not a thing… She is a world for us…today u r there with ragini.. tomorrow u vl follow ur future..ur family.. Then u vl not remember us Niether Ragini…u vl be in verge of setting your own life..our pain you wont understand…u vl understand this once wn you vl became parent..wat you told sahil abt Ragini’s condition! And you swara tum tho baath ko bathanghad bana rahi thi..who is affected in this ??our daughter she is not any thing that you vl do arguements regarding her…

Sahil:dad..i never vl say that…she is my sister she vl be my first priority even if i hv a family tomorrow… I was just… confused

Sw:dad..i m really very sorry..my anger took over me…

Shek: anger!!! Why didn’t you think that ragini can’t tolerate…
Swahil interrupts:we r sorry dad
Shek:i won’t bare this next time…

At the time bell rings
Sw opens the door and sees sanlak
Sanlak could see her pale face

She welcomes them in..
They comes

Sanlak sees shejan and Sahil

Shekar sees Sanskar….
Shekar finds best in Sanskar…he even had a thought if Ragini was same like swara..he would want a guy like sanskar for Ragini..bt he dont know this is a coincidence.. destiny or any other…

Sanlak takes blessings from shejan
San:uncle aunty…i guess ….
Shek interrupts:sanskar!wat made you …
San smiles:the only thing i know is i love your daughter uncle..if you ask me why?may be i wont hv a specific answer…telling this as simple as COMPLICATED as that….you will think that i m saying a cheesy lines…bt no this wat i answered myself wn this question raised in me…loving Ragini is COMPLICATED i agree that….bt i vl choose a COMPLICATED life rather than loosing Ragini…still u think that i m not perfect for your daughter..i vl not come on her way too…i vl hv the guilt of loosing the precious person..

Everyone are just silent… his eyes showed the truth in his words..His way of talking his way of not to explain bt still explained a lot made everyone astonished to believe him…. Bt still there was something made not to speak a word
Few mins of silence

Shekar breaks it
Shek: sanskar… don’t take me wrong…bt we hv grown Ragini like princess… agreeing all her wishes..can you do that!she is very fond of us!marrying you means she will be your responsibility…!will you be able to look after her!will you be able to manage your professional life with Ragini..?

San smiles a bit: it would be tough for me!bt still i vl manage…

Shek: you vl say this now.. Wat abt in future??

San smiles: i mentioned COMPLICATED life… My life will be Ragini…

Shek:would you mind to proove me…

Jan: shekar….

Shek:i don’t know sanskar…i m sounding rude to you or not… Bt i want satisfaction….

San:i m ready uncle…

Shek:in 7 days you hv to look after Ragini..she will be like a kid sometimes..she will be impossible to manage sometimes..is it ok with you..i want to see that how you vl manage your both life’s

San: thankyou uncle for giving me a chance…

Shek smiles and goes

Jan smiles at sanskar: u hv arised a new hope in me Sanskar which every mother wants her daughter’s life to be

San:aunty can i meet Ragini??

Jan nods:she is sleeping…

San sees sahil
Sahil:i really wish that you win this…
He hugs sanskar and goes

Sw just gives a smile…
Lak:all the best bhaai..

San:sw will you show me Ragini’s room..?
Sw nods…

She shows him the room…

He enters and sees Ragini sleeping

He sits next to her
San:i hope i get a chance to look after you angel… He smiles….
He caresses her hairs
San:i hope..i vl be …he smiles…laado best friend…

He gets up and leaves….

To be continued…..

Howz this?? Hope this is not bad??

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