hi guys this is Soundari back with the first part of I Crave For You. thank you so much for all your valuable comments for the prologue. hope you like this..
At the middle of a night a girl is standing all alone in a heavy rain all alone in a road. She is wearing a black crop top and black Jean with a high heels. Later her face is shown which is emitting a large amount of pain.. Her eyes are shedding silent Qtears.. The salt tears are mixed with the pure rain water.. It’s none other than our ragini.. Those words kept ringing in her ears “I craved only for your body and nothing else.. I just wanted your body and used the name of love..”
She fell down on her knees crying… I loved you.. I loved you truly.. But you.. You just craved for my body? What is there in that so called body pleasure? I WANNA KNOW.. I WAAANNNA KNOWWW..
Few hours later :
The same girl is seen drinking in a bar thinking about the past events of her life.. Rishi.. The name itself is enough for her to go weak on her knees.. Her childhood crush.. Her teenage friend turned lover.. Right now the most hated person of her life.. She remainds of all the silly things she has done to gain his attention in her childhood.. Being a bully in school Rishi always bullied the school fatso ragini who was a chubby girl back days.. These teasings by Rishi made ragini to turn to a complete wreck while having food but her blind crush for him made her to ignore his bully nature. After years of hectic diet ragini now became so slender and thin with s*xy curves that any girl would die for.. She became the apple of college boys eyes but ragini being ragini is stuck with only one person which is Rishi.. Soon with course of time Rishi became friends with ragini and she was on cloud nine. After lots of funny, happy and sad moments they became thickest of friends and there comes that day which ragini was devoting her whole life for.. Rishi proposed ragini in front of whole college which she gladly accepted without any hesitation.. Ragini felt that as if she was happiest girl alive..
Years passes by :
Both RagShi where known for their boundless love for each other among their circle… Though they were in live for more than 4 years they never crossed their limits which is mainly due to ragini as for her Marraige is only key permission to consummate any relationship.. They were enjoying their love life with healthy flirting and some stolen kisses..
Then came the dreadful night.. It was both RagShi ‘s common friend party.. Both are dressed in black which is the color code for the party.. Everyone were having fun when ragini felt a little uneasy due to the over crowd in the hall. So Rishi took her to one of the rooms in the party hall and made her feel comfortable.. After feeling a little bit OK ragini started to get up from the bed when she felt a hand at her back strap of her dress. She turned around to find Rishi who was smiling smugly at her.. Ragini felt a bit weird at this and tried to move away from him from but he held the strap tight and tried to pull it down her shoulder..
Rag in anger, “Rishu what are you doing?”
Rishi with an evil smirk ” whaaaatttt doooo youuuu thiiiiiinnnkk I’m doooooingg raaaaagiiinii?”
Saying so he started placing his lips in her shoulder and collar bone.
Ragini tried pushing him saying “Rishu stop you are gonna regret it later.. You are drunk now. Come let’s go from this place”..
Ragini struggled under his hold but the more she struggles the more it gets tighter. Had enough of it ragini pulled him away as much as she could and he fell on the floor hitting on his head..
Ragini tried to help him and started moving towards him when his cold words striked her hard..
“You b*t*h.. How dare you?”
Ragini couldn’t believe her own years. Is this is the same rishi whom I love more than my life? No it can’t be.. She stands numb without uttering a word drowned in thoughts when his slurry voice interrupted her thoughts..
Yo b*t*h, what did you think that I really love you? If so you are a fool. A very big fool.. Do you think I would have even spared a glance at you if you are the same moti girl? Not only me even a simple boy of our college wouldn’t have look at you.. All of a sudden you became so hot and s*xy that everyone wanted you to be their girlfriend.. That’s when I got to know that you had a crush on me.. That’s why I became friends with you.. I first thought to seduce you but you didn’t budge.. So I played my next card in the name of love and you believed me too.. But then also you didn’t allow me to touch you sighting the reason of marriage? Uh Marraige.. As if I’ll ever marry you.. You middle class witch.. I know you wanted to trap me in your Marraige drama and become rich but sorry baby I’m much clever than you.. I have millionaires daughters waiting for me in queue to marry you.. I can’t lose that opportunity just because I craved for your body.. YES I CRAVED FOR YOUR BODY.. I CRAVED ONLY FOR YOUR BODY.. DO YOU KNOW WHAT IS BODILY PLEASURE IS YOU WITCH.. I’M FED UP OF THIS DRAMA.. I WAITED FOR FREAKING FIVE YEARS.. NOT ANYMORE.. EITHER YOU SLEEP WITH ME R GET LOST YOU b*t*h ”
saying so he falls unconscious due to alcoholic effect..
Ragini felt as if the world came crashing down.. She couldn’t believe what she has heard just now.. Her love.. Her life just needed her for her body.. This thought killed her.. She feels disgusted to even be in the same room with him. She ran off from that place as soon as possible.. It was raining heavily
(first scene repeats)
At present :
Ragini who was gulping her nth drink was totally out of her senses.. She hold the glass in her hands and started talking with it..
“You man whore what did you think of yourself? Even after your betrayal you have the guts to ask me whether I’m interested to sleep with you.. Haan? How dare you? I’ll kill myself before something like that happens? What did you say? I didn’t know anything about s*xual pleasure? Yeah I didn’t know.. Bcoz I wanted to experience it only with you after our marriage “a small drop of tear left her eye but she immediately wipes it. “no I won’t shed a single drop of my tear for that idiot anymore.. What did he say? He craved for my body? Like in million years I’m gonna give in to his demands? Huh.. But Haan I wanna know about that pleasure that he was talking about.. I certainly want to know what’s so great in it that he threw away my pure love for him for this pleasure.. But I’ll never ever go to him for that.. Any random guy but not him.. No not any random guy.. A guy who is much hot and handsome than him. I’ll find him and I’ll experience the so called pleasure. Missing don’t want to be a two goody shoes anymore.. ”
Determining she booked a room in the same hotel and started leaving to her room. She couldn’t it find what room number is written in her card due to alcohol effect so she asked a water for help. He says that the room number is 11 and a room service person is already in her room. So she can get in the room without the key itself..
Another side :
A hot and dashing person dressed in a royal black and white suit enters the hotel and all the employees turn stiff on his arrival.. He has a deadly look on his face that could make anyone’s heart jump out their throat.. Everyone was confused about why their sweet and friendly boss is now looking to be on so much anger..
The manager immediately rushed to him to greet him “Sir..”
“is my room ready?”
” yes sir” says his manager timidly and confused about his behavior..
” Don’t allow anyone to my room.. If someone calls say that I’m not here.. NO ONE SHOULD DISTURB ME” he said in a deadly voice which sent shivers run down the managers spine..
He nodded like a small child while he left for his room.
Once reaching his room he gets call from his friend omi..
” omi don’t say a word. I don’t want your pity or consoling words.. Just leave me alone and stop searching me you fool” he barked on his phone without letting him say something..
On the other side came a cool voice “Chill bro.. I already said these things won’t work out for millionaire’s like you.. Why are you not like other millionaire’s? Who asked you to be a good and kind hearted person? Anyways let it go.. Atleast now loosen up a bit. I very well know where are you? Don’t ask how as you very well know that I’m your best friend you a*sh*le.. Don’t worry I have sent someone to hook up with you for the night.. Enjoy your night man” saying so he cut the phone without letting him speak another word..
Sighing he drops the phone and goes to washroom.. He comes back wearing only a towel and us shocked to find a girl on his bed while ragini ogled at his well toned muscles down his wais and all over his body.. She was still ogling at him stunned by his hot look and hot body while laksh rolled his eyes at her saying “HOOKER”
RECAP : FUNNY REVELATIONS
So guys how’s it.. This is my first time I’m trying to write something like this.. I dont know how is it.. So please leave your comments below
46 Comments
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Sorry for late comment and my internal exams are going on, that’s why. It’s very interesting episode dear and Raglak meeting is also interesting. What happened next??? Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care
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