Hiiiii my dear sisieeees & lovely frnds.. this is nivethaa & I come back with ts..hope u like this.. as usual it is only to entertain u… *warning* if u except gud story stay away from this story because this is too silly… regarding title..I hav no idea about the title.. don’t tak as a issue.. & if u feel like the title is very bad .. tell me ur suggestion too.. let’s get in to the story..!
In a bus:
A teenage gal in her school uniform with double plait hair & with chashma is shown .. she looks bubbly & lively.. but her face was filled with tension.. she is in the verge of cry.. she called out “conductor bhaiyya..!is ur work got over?”
Conductor: tell me pragya! Today wat u have done?..
Pragya: i had done nothing.. *sniff* but my teacher won’t allow me into the class if I didn’t get signature from my mom..*sniff*
Conductor smiled & asked: okay.. u didn’t done anything .. y she asked to get sign from ur mom?.
Pragya: that..*sniff* that.. my frnd asked me to help her with her puppy face.. *sniff*so I helped her.. but, my teacher blasted on me..
Conductor: wat help.. looks like it’s something wrong..?
Pragya: not a big wrong thing bhaiya.. I showed my answer sheet to her & she copied it.. & my teacher saw tat & told tat she will leave who has copied but she won’t forgive who showed their paper.. & asked me to get sign..*sniff*
Conductor laughed out loud & said: funny gal..& moved to do his work..
Again.. driver bhaiyya..!! pragya called & again she told the same story to him.. again she started to tell the same story to an aunty..
A pair of eyes watching her.. a pair of ears listening to her voice.. a pair of lips curved to give a smile by listening her chatting with driver conductor & some random persons… that mind things.. “thank God..no..no..thank my English prof. he blasted on me for copying in exams.. due to tat I came from college in this time& see this angel here.. i didn’t fall for her beauty.. but for her innocence.. looks like she is regular in this time..but, I can’t come this time daily na!.. wat can I do?..hmm..” wen he is thinking .. the bus stopped & his angel went from there.. he realized tat after few mins& the bus is moving now.. he stepped out from the bus & looked for her.. but she went away & he could not find where she went.. by stomping his feet he walked away with disappointment..
The next day same time in the same bus:
Conductor: pragya! Wat happened? Looks like u r too happiee..!!
Pragya: haan bhaiya… I’m escaped .. u know.. yesterday I was too worried & told my brother everything.. I was very afraid to tell my mom.. because mom will feel bad.. so he advised me not to do that again.. & we will tell ma.. he said like tat
Conductor: then u told ur mom?..
Pragya: no bhaiyya.. I didn’t got convinced &forced him to give some other idea.. so, he gave me an idea.. tat, he will sign in the apology letter.. that way mom could not find out tat.. wen he was going to put sign my mom came there..
Conductor(with a shocking reaction): then wat happened?
Pragya: as usual ..my brother got scolding for my actions.. mom asked us.. “wat u both r doing?..” & bhaiyya said nothing.. but I started to cry & blabbered everything .. my mom raised her hand ..& I closed my eyes tight.. then she patted my cheeks & told don’t do like this again okay.. she said & scolded bhaiyya for not being a gud brother..
Conductor: u know wat.. I feel pity on him..
He said while laughing..
Pragya: bhaiya scolded me that he was trying to help me but I was trapping him again & again..& I said he is a gud brother & asked sry for my actions.. he hugged me & said anything for my princess..i’m his little princess.. so,I’m happy..
& as usual she started to tell this to driver uncle & then an aunty..today also tat pair of eyes watching her happy mood.. & followed her until he was caught by his music teacher & this tym also he missed her in half way.. and next he could not escape from his class because he was caught by his Ria mam who would go crazy for him… she used to say “ABHI” for every now & then..
Then abhi got busy with his cultural program .. he tried to give his best as it is his first stage performance in his first year.. but he could not take his mind off from pragya also… & he wrote lyrics by himself for her.. he gave a rocking performance in that program.. after his culturals he looked for pragya in that same bus.. but he couldn’t find her.. & then he came to know about her school vacation..he didn’t know which std she is studying & all… so he decided to stay quite for this one month..
One day morning.. he saw her again .. she is in her salwar but she had her books in hand & she is going by bike that too with a guy.. Abhi don’t have bike.. so he could not follow her.. but wen she crossed abhi.. she ruffled tat guy’s hair & she was enjoying his company.. is he is her boy frnd?.. abhi is in his thoughts & she ran towards abhi.. he was rooted in tat place.. but, she crossed him & buy ice creams..
Pragya:purabbbb.. come here..(shouting.. because of distance)
Purab: wat u said?!! (with an anger tone)(shouting..)
Pragya: sry bhaiyyyyyaaaa!! Come na..
Purab: I won’t.. u come..(with a smirk)
Pragya: (stomping her feet) fine I’l.. but I won’t give u this ice cream..
Saying this she tasted both the ice creams..& he beats his head slightly..
purab:funny gal..
“I have saw him already.. but where!!” abhi thought & purab & pragya went from there… the next day.. abhi met purab in his college itself..
Abhi smiled at him not knowing wat to do with him.. purab also smiled at him..
Purab: u sung well in our culturals..
Abhi: u knew me?..
Purab: whole college knew .. who u r..
Abhi: that’s not a matter .. u know me..
Purab(with a shock): ya I know u..
Abhi :then frnds?.
Purab: (without knowing wat to tell) ya frnds..
Abhi smiled at him & started to share about him .. they both were first year but different department.. due to this they didn’t meet in that whole year .. but now they became frnds.. abhi started to like him for pragya.. but then purab managed to get a sweet place in abhi’s heart.. & without knowing the intensions of abhi, Purab cared for abhi & loved him whole heartedly as there is no one to tak care of abhi unlike him..abhi is rich .. his father is a business man & he has no time to spent with abhi..
Days passed..
Purab:hey abhi.. ! wat’s up dude?.
Abhi: nothing..planning to go to my frnd’s home..
Purab: which frnd?(with a frown)
Abhi: purab… u only.. who else..& u know wat.. u have a sweet little sister na.. & I’m going to flirt with her..
Purab:idiot.. I won’t tak u..(with a frown)
Abhi: thanx dude.. u r pleading me like this.. how could I reject it.. I’l come.. don’t worry..
Purab: (with a helpless tone) :I didn’t invite u..
Abhi: ho.. come on purab.. don’t say please to me.. I’m here for u & ur sister..
Purab could not help but smiled: drama king.. come..
Poor Purab didn’t know how abhi is serious in his statement..
In home:
Pragya: ma.. bhaiyya came..
she said happily & looked at abhi.. abhi looked at her.. she is wearing a skirt with pink color tee..her hair is tied up to a pony tail..simple yet beauty.. purab patted his shoulder & pushed him to his home..
sarala ma: purab.. u came.. this pragya is taking on my nerve.. pls buy her whatever she want..
that’s wen she noticed abhi ..
purab:ma.. he is abhi..
abhi bend his head to take blessings from ma..
sarala ma: god bless u beta.. come here.. wen u like to come.. okay..
abhi: sure ma..
sarala ma: okay I’l prepare any snacks.. u carry on..
she said & went from there..
abhi: u told about me right?.
Purab nodded his head : & she wants to see u..
Abhi: & u didn’t told me..??
Purab: today I was going to invite u.. but u urself said tat u will come.. (said with a smile)
Abhi: u….!! u r crazy purab..
Purab: like u..
They had their tea with snacks.. abhi is happy to see this family.. purab’s home has double bed room.. & tv is in main hall.. wen the clock strikes 7’o clock.. pragya ran to the hall hurriedly & switched on the tv.. while abhi & purab were chatting in the hall..
Purab: don’t say me .. u r going to watch serial..
Pragya:yes ..i’m..
Purab: ma.. here.. ur daughter is going to watch tv serial..
Sarala ma: leave her purab.. she had studied till now..
Pragya giggled & Make her tongue out like u won’t do anything..
Purab: (making faces..) u & ur silly daughter.. hmm..!ma.. u r advising me to be a responsible brother & wen I’m responsible.. u r supporting her.. not fair ma..
Sarala ma: (giggled): I know.. u r responsible.. wen I’m strict u r supporting her na.. !
Purab: & wen I’m strict u r supporting her.. uff!!
Pragya: both keep quiet.. I can’t hear the dialogues..
Abhi giggled & shushed purab.. & started to admire her..
Purab: abhi beta.. r u really trying to flirt with my sister?..
Abhi: haan..
Purab: then .. even God can’t help u..
Abhi: from u?..
Purab: no.. from her..
Abhi giggled:I’l tak care..
Purab:don’t dare to do it.. I will kill u..
Abhi: (sheepish smile) : I know.. I love u too..
Purab: I hate u..
Abhi: u know purab.. if u r a gal .. I’l propose u here itself & I don’t know.. how many time I would have kissed u by now.. (with a wink.)
Purab(placing his hands on his two cheeks..): am not that type of guy..
Abhi: I didn’t told u tat.. I will kiss u in ur cheeks.. did I?..
Purab: o my God.. u r the most dangerous guy..
Abhi smiled.. don’t worry.. am also not tat type of guy.. so..
Purab: so.. ?
Abhi: u can do that operation..
Purab: (with a spark in his eyes..) : u love me that much?..
Abhi: ya.. ya.. u have any doubt in tat..??
Purab: (with a frown): then u do that operation for urself..idiot… shameless fellow..
Abhi laughed out loud & pulling purab cheeks: love u bhaii..
Pragya turned wen abhi said love u bhai& smiled at their bond .. abhi looked at her & due to embrassment he closed his eyes tight..
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I know this update is small.. but I can’t type now because of my work.. give ur feed backs.. whether is it okay or not.. thank u for reading.. keep smiling & keep commenting.. tak care.. love u all.. forgive me for the mistakes.. expecting ur valuable comments..
35 Comments
superbb yarr i loved it…………………………..eargely waiting for next shot
than q dear… 🙂 🙂 glad u loved it.. & i will try to update the next shot soon..
super n nice
than q soooo much diiiii 🙂 🙂
Interestinggggggggg!
than q reshu sis…… 🙂 🙂
Supper.I love all your stories
Supper I love all your stories
than q dear.. than x for reading all my stories… 🙂 🙂
It’s really funny and adorable of purab and Abhi conversation ???and pls continue your shots…
than q dear…!! i’l continue it soon.. 🙂 🙂
As usual I was in splits reading this 😀 😀 Purab beta, so sorry!!
than q dear prathiiii… 🙂 🙂 as usual ur comment made me to smile..
Super…amazing…
than q dear… 🙂 🙂
akka why r u killing me with ur updates.. man it was awesome… ur stories is like my reflection.????? ur pragya alwys resembles me akka i am also the same… ???and abhiii man he is always cute cuter cutest love him a lot..???????. abhi purab friendship and his bromance is always the best..??? abhi rocks purab shocks..✊✊???. open flirting with purab’s sis not fair abhi bhai purab will beat u but dont worry i will come for ur rescure oke?????????i am always there for u and last part operation… hahaha…?????? cant stop myself i was laughing like a maniac akka .??????? I’l propose u here itself & I don’t know.. how many time I would have kissed u by now.. (with a wink.)…. this ws the best akka no words to say hats off..????✊??? and the last love u bhai and pragya’s smile abhi embarassed… it was like all happening infornt of me.???. when i was imagining the scenes i cant stop myself from laughing imagining abhi’s reactions… here cute boy? funny gal..? akka only u can write like this..??? love u take care and keep up our sangam of ilichavays…????
awwwwww 🙂 🙂 than q da….!! 🙂 🙂 ha ha …! tat’s y ur cute gal… !!& s!! s!! abhi rocks.. & purab shocks.. !!! than q dear… glad u enjoyed this much… !! & the last part was my fav tooo 😉 😉 than q for ur compliment dear cutie..! &love u tooooooooo … tak care… study well & do ur xams well… & s!! always ilichavays rocks!!!!! 🙂 😛 😛
Super dear….
than q sugan… 🙂 🙂
Superb..??? I loved it slot,I have all ur TS ,FF ,sometimes commented too.. I love all ur stories.. ????pls update the next part soon..??
aww!!! than q dear… i’m glad tat u loved it.. ya.. i know.. u gave ur comment & thanx for tat dear.. 🙂 🙂 soon.. i’l update the next shot.. !!!
I am happy to see u….. I really loved u lot. I am big fan of u nivethaa…… This story is amazing….. Thank u for giving such a wonderful story…..
than q sooooo mmuch for ur love dear…. !! 🙂 🙂
Oh nivi sis….asusual you rocked it….superb update…. how cute they are….waiting for the next one…
sry for not giving long comment….I really want to give long one bt tomorrow I have xam sis….I am seriously preparing for it….so my next comment for the next update will be long….take care sis…love you sis bye….
than q da….!! 🙂 🙂 no prblm da… study well & do ur xams well..love u always.. take care dear.. keep smiling.. 🙂 :)i’l update the next shot soon…
I love it
thanq dear:) 🙂
U rocked it akka.. sooooooooo cute update.. cuteness overloaded??… bus scene was funny
Purab and abhis frienship so cute.?. and last part was very funny… oh purab! ???..title semma. overall awesome update akka.. take care akka.. keep rocking nd smiling ??
thanq little sweet…!!! 🙂 🙂 tak care da… love u loads… keep smiling…. always….:) 🙂 hugs & kisses to my little sweet…!!!
its simply fantastic and fanny as well,nice update
than q soooo much dear..
Love the story line
than q smile 🙂 🙂
nice shot waiting for the nxt one
thanq dear.. will update the next shot soon.. 🙂 🙂