Hi guys Shivu here with first part of cute love I know I’m late but plzz sorry as u know its a three shot story so guys read it & yes plzz do comment but not one word comment I want little long comments then only I post next part yar we write for u this much can’t u do this much for us so plzz share ur views & must tell which part u like most & which part u don’t like ok now start
Part-1
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A big mansion is shown inside that a room is shown where a boy is sleeping at that a beautiful lady wearing pink saree enters and sit beside that boy and start creasing his hair
Lady:laku get up
(Yes the boy is laksh)
Lak:plzz bhabhi 5 min
And he placed his head in her lap
Lady(smiles):laku you r getting late for ur college
He didn’t reply
At that a man enter in the room in track suit
Man:leave na shona let him sleep
(The lady is swara)
Swa(confused):u also shanky
(And the man is sanskar)
San(smirking):ha swara u know m laku ki fav ice cream laya hu but he is sleeping so come I’ll get fresh & we eat let him sleep
Listening ice cream name he fastly get up & sit on bed like a kid swasan smile deeply after watching him
Lak(like a small kid):Bhai bhabhi if u eat ice cream without me na then u’ll catch cold
San:ooo really
Swa:its ok laksh
San:come swara don’t waste time he take 1hour for getting ready till then we finish that
Laksh listing this jump from the bed kisses swasans cheeks & run toward washroom swasan laughed seeing his antics
At Kolkata
a flat is shown inside a flat in one room a girl is shown getting ready she is wearing blue top & white short skirt at that time a lady enter her room
Lady:ragu beta come fast have breakfast
(Yes guys the girl is our princess ragini)
Rag(with bright smile):coming mom 2 min
And she went down and sit in dinning table
Rag:good morning papa,mom,dadi,dadu
All:good morning laado
Sumi bring breakfast for all at that time a courier man come and give courier which is for ragini she open that and become happy
Shek:what happen beta what’s on this and y r u smiling
Rag(happily):papa its my admit card for my exam and u know my centre is Mumbai
Sumi(smiles):are wah
Rag:mom I’ll inform Di
Sumi:OK but after breakfast
Rag:ok mom
At mm
Laksh came down and watch swasan still not arrive he went in kitchen open fridge & takeout ice cream & eat whole bowl then realize what he did
Lak:oh shit
At that time swasan reached there laksh hide the bowl behind him swasan watch him & started laughing loudly
Lak(confused):wh..what happen
San(controlling his laugh): nothing
Swara went from there & bring mirror
Laksh watch his face on mirror his mouth is smudged with ice cream he bend down his head
Swa:ok go & wash ur face & come for breakfast
At breakfast table swara is serving sandwich to laksh at that time her phone ring she pickup the phone it’s ragini
Swa(happily):good morning ragu
Rag:good morning di
Swa:u seems happy what’s the matter
Rag told her all the thing
Swa(exited):so when r u coming
Rag:tomorrow Di
Swa:ok ragu & safe journey
At that time laksh start coughing while eating
Swa(worried):laku
She run toward him and make him drink water & tap his back
Swa(teary):are u ok now
Lak:bhabhi I’m alright y r u crying
Swa(wiping her tears):nothing laku
Ragini is hearing all this she become jealous & cut the call in anger
Next day
ragini reached Mumbai sanskar pick her from airport she reached home with him where swara is waiting for her &laksh is in college she enters in home & hug swara they gossip sometimes & after sometimes laksh reached home he was busy in his phone he didn’t watch ragini
Lak(while using phone): bhabhi
Swaragini turn toward him swara went near him & ragini is just watching him
Rag(in mind):oh god this monkey become too hot yar
Swara went in kitchen for bring water for laksh & he notice ragini
Lak(in mind):oho this wild cat become too beautiful
Both divert their mind
Raglak(in mind):what nonsense r u thinking laksh/ragini
Laksh come near ragini
Lak(smirking):hi miss wild cat
Rag(fake smile): hello Mr. Monkey
Lak:welcome to Mumbai
Rag:thanks
She meshed his hair and leave from there smirking
Lak(angrily): youu how dare u to touch my hair miss wild cat
But she left & he was hell angry
Lak:now wait & watch
Next day
After coming back from college laksh passes from ragini’s room he watch she was sleeping in couch at that time an idea strike in his mind he went inside & pick one marker &went near ragini he gets mesmerized watching sleeping beauty after a while he realized his position
Lak(in mind):what r u thinking laksh huhh
And he draw mustache on her face & leave smirking to his room
After sometime ragini wake up & went near mirror & scream loudly after listening that swasanlak reached at her room
Swa(worriedly):what happen ragu y r u shouting
She turned & swasanlak watch her they try to stop their laugh
Lak(acting):wow wild cat nice makeup who did this
Rag(angrily):listen monkey I don’t spare u how dare u to do this
Swasan glare him angrily
Lak(stammering):wh..what I didn’t do this
Rag(angrily): then who did this Di or jiju ha tell
Lak:I don’t know
San:laku y u did this
Lak(complaining):she also meshed my hair yesterday
San:this is bad laksh
Lak:ok Bhai
Swa:wash ur face ragu he didn’t do again ok
Swasan leave ragini come near laksh
Rag(angrily):u Mr monkey I won’t spare u
She stamp her feet angrily & went inside the washroom & laksh stand there with winning smile
Next morning
All r having breakfast
Lak:bhabhi plzz do fast I’m getting late leave na I don’t need tiffin
Swa(angrily):no laku u can’t eat outside wait
Here ragini have idea for her revenge of yesterday she went near his bike & punchers it
Rag(smirking):now let’s see Mr monkey how u reached on time
After sometimes laksh came near his bike & he was about to start it at that time he watch that his bike’s tires r puncher
Lak:oh shit
Then he remembered yesterday incident
Lak(screams):raginiiii
Swasanrag reached there
San(worried):laku what happen r u alright
Lak(angrily):yes bhai(he points toward his bike)see what this wild cat did
San:laku u don’t blame anyone
Lak:Bhai I’m sure this wild cat did this
San:u watched her
Lak:no
San:then…ok leave I’ll drop u wait
Swasan went inside & laksh come near ragini
Lak(pointing his finger):now u watch miss wild cat
Rag:oo really don’t show me ur finger ok
Lak:y…u scared!
Rag(with attitude):no not at all
Lak:let’s see
Rag:I’m waiting
& ragini leave inside and laksh went college with sanskar
Next day
Ragini is watering the plant at that tym laksh was passing from there he watch her & again his naughty brain think an idea he come & put his leg on the pipe by which water stop ragini get confused and she take pipe near her face watch it carefully at that tym laksh removed his leg by which water come with force & ragini get wet watching her like this laksh start laughing she look him angrily
Rag(angrily):you..
And she shower water on him through pipe & start running &she start chasing him by this both get wet fully they keep running & chasing each other like kids in this process ragini’s leg slip and she was about to fall but laksh caught her through her waist both look each other passionately & have beautiful eyelock
BG
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
(Both lost in each other)
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
(Hairs coming on ragini’s face laksh slowly remove it)
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Both realized their position & stand properly
Lak:u ok
Rag:hmm
Lak(smirking):u enjoyed right
Rag(angrily):I don’t leave u monkey because u of u I’m fully wet
Lak:u don’t leave me really first catch then talk about leave hehe
And he run from there
Days r passing like this both r fighting like this only on silly topics swasan also enjoys their cute silly fights
One day @10 pm
Laksh is sitting on floor at drawing room & doing his project very seriously whereas ragini is doing dinner & swara is convincing laksh to eat but he is busy ragini is watching this & get irritated
Rag:di if he doesn’t want to eat so don’t force him na
Swa(glares her):shut up ragini & continue ur dinner & finish ur whole food u have to study also if u don’t eat well then u became I’ll na
Rag(uninterested):ok
Swa(kissing her head):that’s like my good girl
Swara went near laksh again with plate
Swa:laku it’s 10 now come & eat
Lak(busy in his work):bhabhi tommorow is last day of submitting my project plzz bhabhi keep the plate on table I’ll eat later
San:laku enough now first eat then write
Lak:Bhai plzz
Swa:ok ok u continue I’ll feed u come on open ur mouth
Sanlak look at her lovingly laksh open his mouth she feed
San(cutely):me 2 swara
Swara feed him also trio share beautiful moment ragini watched them & leave from there angrily
Lak:bhabhi I’m full now
Swa:ok ok last
She make him eat & swasan also did dinner
Next day
After coming back from college laksh enters in the hall & call swara he is very tired coz of the project & late night study
Lak(loudly):bhabhi bhabhi plzz bring water
He came down from stairs & watch ragini lying on the sofa surfing her phone
Lak(casually):oo miss wild cat where is Bhai & bhabhi
Ragini look him & remembered yesterday incident
Rag(rudely):shopping
Lak:ok ok so miss wild cat u don’t have any work
Rag:y
Lak:u r lying without any tension
(He is saying casually he doesn’t want to hurt her)
Rag(angrily):y u have any problem
Lak:no I’m just asking
She come near him
Rag(sarcastically):look who is talking about work the boy who never did his work himself (intimates like him) bhabhi give me water,bhabhi I don’t want to eat plzz feed me,Bhai plzz drop me and all that
Lak:hehe ragini y r u getting jealous they r my Bhai & bhabhi
Rag(angrily):exactly laksh they r ur Bhai bhabhi not ur parents
Laksh gets shocked listening this
Rag:but coz of u they have to do this & ur tantrum o god u don’t think that coz of u they have to suffer a lot they can’t even enjoy their life fully coz they have their 21 year child
Laksh get freezed after listening this
Rag:laksh don’t forget that they r not ur parents ur parents r dead
Laksh gets teary listening this ragini bite her tounge she realize what she said swasan also listen all the words which ragini says they also get shocked & teary both come near laksh sanskar placed his hand on his shoulder laksh come in reality and run toward his room & closed the door
Here swasan get tensed watching him like this swara angrily turn toward ragini
Swa(angrily):ragini this is too much if anything happen to my laksh na I don’t talk u ever in my life
& she run toward laksh room
Ragini also gets teary listening this sanskar turn toward her
San(teary):y u hurt him this much ragini
And he also leave ragini stand there teary
Recap:laksh is in pain, ragini is guilty & swasan r sad for laksh some cute moment also
Guys plzz tell u like or not & remember big comment ha
46 Comments
Wow….that was really awesome.., all the characters and dialogues are worth reading and mind blowing…., Give cute little baby to swasan …so that it become more cute… finally overall perfect…
Thank uuuu for this awesome comment sis
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Awesome dear, Ragu should not have hurted him by her words
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Nice
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superb…feeling bad for laksh
Thanks all become well soon
oh god shivu di full on awesome episode
loved it too much
thier fights were super cute except the last one!
raglak moments were really lovely
love love shona so much for her care towards lucky
waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing
lots of love
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Thank uuuuuu soooo much for ur this lovely comment & love u 2 bye I’m coming soon
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Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
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Superb di…post next soon
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Awesome episode
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It’s interesting episode dear ??? eagerly waiting for more Raglak scenes and please post next part ASAP ?????
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amazinggg loved it but feeling bad for ragini too bcz of jealousy all are angry on her
Thanks sis all get well soon☺
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Awesome shivu diiiiiiiiiii
Fully amazing ???
Omg… my ragu ?
Post next one fastttt!!!!! I am waiting for the next one eagerly ❤????
Take care, keep smiling
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Thank u I’ll try to post soon siso love u 2????
Awesome episode
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Interesting episode and can’t wait for next
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Awesome yaar.
Wow…
The dialogues are Cute..
Feeling bad for Raglak…
Loved Laksh Tantrums/Pranks….