Hey guys ridhima here…once again to torcher u all…actually after writing changes nd getting good response for it….i wss nt able to stop myself…so prepared another torcher for u al??
Here we go
The scene starts wid showing a long line…
Many ppl were standing nd w8ing…as the ppl in line were moving very slowly slowly….
A girl is shown standing in a line totally exhausted due to heat nd dust… she is sweating nd cursing the people….bt wat is she doing here…
A boy which is standing in front of her turns around nd
Boy- madam these auditions will nt happen fst of u keep cursing them nd boiling ur blood…
Girl- excuse me…
Boy- ya i mean…save ur energy as it will be needed wen u will sing…
Girl- oh plz…swara bose needs nt to save energy for singing as singing cmes from heart not muscles…
Boy- ya bt miss.bose bt ur throat will be tired na…nd.
Swara- see mr…..watever u are…
Boy- i m nt mr.watever… my name is sanskar….sanskar maheshwari..naam toh suna hi hoga…( must have heard my name)
Swara- no…nahi suna( not heard)
While fighting they reach forward nd nxt wss sanskar’s performance…
Swara- ok now…go otherwise i will go..m
Sanskar- going bye…thanks…
Swara-????
Sanskar- yaar mera tym pass ho gya..i was getting bored so thought to talk to smeone( nd winks )….nd goes inside to give auditions….leaving swara all shocked…??…..
Then swara’s turn came nd she sung nd left from other side ( as tat was the exit..?)… their to her surprise sanky was standing nd w8ing for her……
Sanky- hey hw wss ur performance???
Swara- good…i m selected…yipeee!!!??nd u???
Sanky- me too…
Swara- thank u..
Sanky- ?????
Swara- i know i wss nt doing tym pass bt was removing my tensions…nd sry as i behaved a bit rudely…bt tum itne bure nhi ho jitne dikhte ho….( u r nt tat bad as much u look)…
Sanky raises his one eyebrow….
Sanky- nd u r nt tat much dumb as much u look…nd highs his hand for giving high 5
Bt swara didnt raised so he held her hand nd done it himself….( lol)…
Swara- u r total crack….
Sanky- hehe…i know… so as we r selected lets enjoy wid a coffee wat say???
Swara- sry i dont go wid strangers….
Sanky- like really strangers…
Swara- yes strangers…
Sanky- he forwards his hand- so lets be friends….?? Wat say???
Swara gives her hand for handshake nd say friends…
After this they both left for having coffee…
Then both left to home respectively d slept….
After few days…
They meet each other on the round 1 of singing competition…
They met and spend some quality tym together, done masti, exchanged numbers … nd finally qualified for first round…??…
@ night
Sanskar was roaming in his room up and down thinking whether to call or nt..???
At last he called her dont know why…
Phone rings…rings…and rings…he wass abt to cut the call bt swara picks at the nick of the tym..
Sanky- where r u???
Swara- sry ws in the washroom…
Sanky- hmmm.
Swara- why havee u called me nd work????
Sanky- no…( bites his tongue)..vo..i mean yes..
Swara- hmm..tell then???
Sanky- wo …will u join me to mall tomorow as my moms bday is near nd i want ur hlp as u r alady so …..hhis)…u can understand better nd help me…( he was expecting a no)..
Swara- okk.. then i will ready by 10 is tat ok…
sanky- too much okkk…bie good ngt…
swara- bie…gd ngt…
they felt very happy after talking to each other nd slept smiling….
next day they went for shopping…enjoyed a lot…done lot of pranks on ppl…atlast came back total exhausted….
like this only they started spending tym nd enjoying each others company….they came very close nd started to feel for each other….nd qualified various rounds..
Then a day comes of semi finals….
Host- now as we all know we r having semi finals today so to make it more interesting…our judges gave our singers to perform as pairs…as it is very easy to handle oneself bt to co ordinate wid other is the toughest job….so lets begin our semi finals….
**** now every couple started coming nd showing their talent…now last bt nt the least our swasan’s turn arrived….****
Swasan came on the stage very tensed bt assuring the other as if everything is gonna be fine…
They were looking like a perfect couple…they came and stand in the mid of the center…nd started to sing…
Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraz tha dil
Tu milla hai toh hai keh raha
Main toh tere rang mein rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch nahi
Sab tera…
Main toh tere thang mein dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch nahi
Sab tera.. Sab tera.. Sab tera..
Sab tera..
Phir dil ke raaston pe
Teri aahat jo hue
Har dhadkan jashan mein hai
Ye inaayat jo hue (x2)
Main toh tujhe milke jee uthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chupi hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch nahi
Sab tera.. Sab tera.. Sab tera..
Sab tera..
Jis pal tu saath mere
Us pal mein zindagi hain
Tujhe paake paaya sab kuch
Koi khwaishein ab nahi hain (x2)
Main toh bas tujh se hi bana hoon
Tere dil mein bewajah hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch bhi nahi
Sab tera.. Sab tera.. Sab tera..
Sab tera….
Whie singing they keep on looking each other nd wss lost in each others eyes…
Bt they came back to senses due to sounds of claps…
They left the stage nd came back stage…bt sanky was abt to say smthng bt widout saying any thing left the place nd go towards his green room..
He reaches his room nd went to washroom nd opened the water tap..nd look in the mirror…
Sanky( to himself in mirror)..- wat r u doing sanskar..u r not able to tell ur feelings to her…why…ya i love her…nt from nw or a few days back bt from the very first tym i saw her…bt wenevr i go close to her…i jst looses my voice to tell her truth tat i love u i love u swara bt always keeps on irritating hr….Arghhhh me …i m such an idiot…i came in this stupid competition bcz of her nd now i m nervous…hell of me…
***** flashback******
Sanky ws sitting in his car nd was stuck on lights…he wss feeling frustated as was getting late for his meeting bt his eyes fell on an angel eating ice cream wid he friends on the side of the road…he was bold on seeing her for the first tym then bd their only…??…
He forget about the meeting nd went towards her nd parked his car on the side..??…..
He goes near them so he can ckearly see her nd their he was able to hear their talks also…
friend- swara wen are ur auditions.??
Swara- nxt thursday…
friend 2- yaar wat u will do…leave it na..we will have fun…nd u will get bored in this stupid audition nd all…
Swara- plz mahi…i told u a hundred of tyms tat music is my life nd this compertition is my dream so u dare to speak anything against this…
mahi- sry yaar bt….
sanky ws more amazed to see the spark in her eyes for music so he decided to take part in music competition to stay near her nd to know her….leaving all his important office work….
***** flashback ends******
@ next night…
Their was a party for all the finalists nd performers….all were enjoying in a full swing….
Bt sanky nd sahil ??… were w8ing for a person….( sahil is also a finalist nd had a crush on swara…nd swa___hil have good equation as friends…..)… nd the person was none other then swara…. their w8 cane to an end wen they see an angel entering the party hall in a black gown wid her hair tied into a bun…
Sanhil’s heart started raising fast seeing her…
Sahil first goes to her nd greets her..nd asked for dance…swara agrees nd they both were dancing romantically or i say closely which was seen by sanky nd he was burning in anger nd jealousy….
He was nt able to see this and was going towards them bt he stopped wen he saw sahil on his knees proposing swara in front of all….( heartbreak for sanky…??)
… he was nt able to see further nd left the party hall nd reached the road( it was an empty road)….nd started crying nd fell on his knees… bt he stopped wen he feel a hand on his shoulder…..he turned around and to his surprose it was swara….
Swara- wat r u doing here sanskar??? Why u left the party like this????
Sanky standing up- no nothing actually i got an important call so… waise congrats…( smiles fakely)…
Swara-??????
Sanky–as i saw sahil proposed u nd u must have accepted na…???( he was expecting her to say no nd thinks like god heard him bt for sme tym)
Swara- ya he proposed me..bt i rejected him( sanky face turned happy).
Sanky- by why he is…he is a go..od guy…???
Swara- ya he is good bt i love smeone else…
Now the floor escaped from under sanky’s feet…
Sanky- ( very hardly)..- wh…who???
Swara- you….( happily)…
Sanky – hmmm….(.then suddenly he realises wat she said nd ) what????
Swara- r u having a hearing problem…
Sanky- nodes in no….
Swara- i love u too….i love u too sanskar..
Sanky was happy was feeling out of the world…he wanted to dance nd song bt ge controlled himself nd
Sanky- bt i never said i love u then hw i love u too…???
Swara- actually mr.sanskar maheshwari… i have heard ur confession in washroom…nd giggles..
While sanky was shocked nd embarassed…
Sanky- ( hugs her) i love u..
Swara- i love u too..( while hugging him back)…
They stood their for sme tym feeling protective nd secured nd also assuring tat they r meant for each other nd no one can separate them….
Next day…
Grand finale…
Theor were many performances…
Nd now the result tym…
( any guesses who won…???)
No….then…
host – so the one who win the competition is ..
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SWARA BOSE…..
Swara jumps in excitement nd hugs sanky…
Sanky congratulates her…nd after getting awards nd cheques they voth came to swara’s room..
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As swasan entered the room… swara was amazed to see the room full of chocolates, roses nd a cake was present in the middle of the room lying on a table…
Swara turns towards sanky nd hugs him nd said- thanks…bt r u okkk???
Sanky-?????
Swara- as i win competition bt u…
Sanky cuts him off -my life wins wat else i win vaise i already win seeing this happiness on ur face… nd nw plz stop wasting tym in talks nd lets cut the cake..
They cut the cake together nd ws feeding each other..bt suddenly sanky turns swara such tat her back was facing his front nd make her wear a SS platinum pendant…
Swara touched tat slowly nd turns towards sanskar having tears of happiness in her eyes…
Sanky wipes her tears wid his thumb..
Sanky- i dont want to see tears in ur eyes..i did all this to make u feel happy bt here u r crying…
Swara- these r tears of happiness…
Snky- bt instead of this i was expecting smthng else in return..( pointing towards his lips)…( nd smiles naughtily)…
Swara understands nd shys bt she closed her eyes nd leans towards him nd seeing her coming sanky to leans towards him nd wid in fraction of seconds their lips meet…after 2 minutes they depart themselves…it was a short yet lovely kiss showing their love towards each other nd not need or hunger….
Aftr the kiss they keep on looking in each others eyes lovingly…
THE END….
thanks guys for reading this..i know it might be boring nd my english must have torchered u bt still was nt able to stop myself from writing this…