Hello friends…. We r back with the first chapter of this most awaited ff….. Most awaited….coz those who ever r playing roles in this were very excited for long….. We were planning for this long back…..but due to my exams it got delayed……and finally…. I KEHKASHA….along with my partner in storyline B_ISHAA is gonna to start up with the first part….
Thank you all for ur encouragement and support….. Keep supporting…..
A note…. The story contains digressions in form of NARRATIVE VOICE….i.e. beech beech mein narrator description dega….
******************************************************************************************
CHAPTER 1
SCENE CONTINUES AT THE AUDITORIUM HALL WHERE IS THE INAUGURATION OF DIL DOSTI DARD BY BHAVISHA….
Bhavisha was waiting…..restlessly for her friends……but the fact was…that there was no traces of their arrival…..she had admired her watch for countless time……in the gap of nano seconds……but of no use…. She asked her PA whether they r coming or not…..to which he replied….. “Ma’am they said they r on their way”….
There media again started their series of questions…..and now Bhavisha got up…..reached the stage…..and got hold of the dice….
And started…
Bhavisha- I know….. I am doing unjust with u all for my friends…..but what to do…. I have already explained u what friendship means to me….. But also….ur love and affection….is my priority…… So I Bhavisha Bhargava…..is going to tell u what is D3….or u can say…that the summary of D3….. How I think the story is….. And how I want the audience to perceive it…..
The hall again thundered with round of applauses….
And she continued…
Bhavisha- It all started with…..
FLASHBACK
(NOTE- The whole D3 is in form of flashback…..that Bhavisha is narrating to the audiences…..so plz don’t get confused….)
SCENE @DUBAI
A house is shown….its not so big…..and not so small….a perfect accommodation for a big family…..yet not so lavish….. Simple interiors…..simple setup….with cute family members…… A bit tensed….a bit relaxed….a bit matured were the people who lived there…….
Lets go in and peep into who lives there…..in this house….. Oh wait a minute…..how can we miss this proud name plate…..which had properly carved name…… “OBEROI(S) HEAVEN”….
Yes this is house where oberoi(s) lives….now after their past…..the dark past…..
As soon as we rushed inside to see what’s happening…..we found everyone sitting there in one hall…..having a light chit-chat…….
Lady1- (laughing and saying as if she can’t believe) O my mata…..see this has become routine…..of both our sons……they always remains lost in their wives….
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Meet her…..she is none other than Miss. OMM….i.e. Mrs. Shakti Singh oberoi……uff our pinky….
SCENE RESUMED..
Lady 2- Pinky u are saying as if this is for the first time u have seen ShivOm lost in other worlds….
Boy 1- See I used to say…..after marriage both my brothers will become PARAYA DHAN….. And look seems like my prophecy has turned right…
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Look how Janvi is supporting her sons…..and look at our dumbell…..he will never grow up in case of his brothers……
SCENE RESUMES
Dadi- Well say anything…..that won’t bring these four out of their world….. Rudra did u remember I used to talk about KUMBHKARAN who used to sleep continuously……and nothing can wake him up……
Rudra- Yes Dadi…..Woh RAVANA’S BRO…..Right…
Dadi- Right…. Now do one thing….
Rudra- What Dadi…. Replace KUMBHKARAN with ur brothers names……..coz they behave so…..when they r with their wifes…..
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
O my god….wait…what happened to dadi……what did she said…… REPLACE KUMBHKARAN WITH UR BROTHERS NAMES……hahaha…. I feel like…. RISHTA WAHI SOCH NAYI has changed to…. HARKAT WAHI LOG NAYE…..
SCENE RESUMES..
After a long silence…..of digesting dadi’s talk….the hall thundered with the fits of laughter……and I guess this was what was necessary for bringing KUMBHKARAN back to the world……… Uff….i mean Shivika and Gaurika…..
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Look at their faces…..as if their big crime has been caught…..no basically…..it was a session of postmortem of the crime that had already been caught…..
SCENE RESUMES…
A girl in her beautiful 20’s entered in this laughing session with a worried face….
Girl- Maa….bhaiya…. PAPA…
Om- (shocked and tensed) Prinku….what happened to him…..is he alright…?!
SCENE SHIFTS…
@ GURGAON, INDIA
In a beautiful and lavish mansion a lady is seen struggling with her daughters…….no actually she is scolding them…..no no she is warning them…..wait she is doing actually what all moms do…….
Lady- Yashu…..Shreyu……final warning…..if u both didn’t came down for the breakfast……for which I had called u almost ten times……. Then see what will I do……
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Look at a proud mother…..MRS. AVANTIKA DHIRAJ MITTAL…….. Yes….proud coz she is so happy and proud because of her two daughters……and mother wali quality…..that is world famous and common for all moms…… They can’t rest without caring about……their children….
SCENE RESUMES
Avantika- Fine….don’t come…. I am myself coming to pick u up….and throw u both out of ur bed…..
And she climbed the stairs…….reached the door…..knocked and again shouted….
Avantika- Are u both coming……or shall I seriously enter……
After getting no response…..she opened the door with a bang….and angry face……but as soon as she saw the view in front of her…….her anger flew away…….and a sweet smile crept on her face…….
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
She saw her two daughters Yashu and Shreyu……still sleeping peacefully…….cuddling into each other’s arms……and having a beautiful smile on their cute faces…… Shreyu was almost upon Yashu……but no problem……Yashu can handle her lil sis…..even if she sleeps upon her……
SCENE RESUMES….
Avantika- (talking to herself) See them…..who will think to scold them……well I gave up…. These two have talent of blowing away my anger even in their sleeps…..
Saying so she steps forward……and dragging away the duvet she shouted at the top of voice….
Avantika- Yashu Shreyu get up….. There’s a lizard on ur bed….
And as soon as these words registered their ears…..the two jumped up from the bed…….as if someone fitted spring in them…..
Yashu- Where is it…..where is it…
Shreyu- (understanding her mother’s prank….) Yashu di there…..there beneath ur feet…..see its really very dark in color…….ek dum eewwww types….
Yashu jumped all the way…..and finally she realized….that it was all just a prank…. When she noticed her mother and sis laughing terribly at her…..
She took a pillow and throwed it on Shreyu…..
After a cute small pillow fight….all three lay down on the bed…..with Avantika at center and Yashu Shreyu at either sides of her…..
Yashu- Fine Shreyu….. Now u will get punishment…… And wait this is ur punishment….
She got up and took out an envelope from her drawer…… And handed her over…
Shreyanvi…..with a bit shivering hands took it…..thinking what it must be…. She opened it….and as soon as she read what’s inside……she started jumping in happiness…..
And tightly hugged her mom…..saying…
Shreyu- Momma see what is it…… Di has arranged everything…..for my dream course….. I mean I am going to Dubai for pursuing my post graduation in interior decor…..and di has arranged…….flight tickets…..visa….accommodation….everything….. Wow….di..
And like a bunny she hopped and hugged Yashu saying…
Shreyu- Thank you so much for such a sweet punishment….
Avantika- So when is ur flight…
Yashu- Mom its tonight……and dad don’t know anything about this…..and he shouldn’t get to know…..as….well…
All sighed….and hugged each other…
SCENE SHIFTS…
@Dubai…
A huge and flashy mansion….with a number of cars cleanly parked in a row…….with a number of servants serving…..all over the way…. And the nameplate state “JUNEJA(S) EMPIRE”…
Inside was a lady talking with someone on call…..or should I say conference call….. She explained something to the persons on call…..and as soon as she hang up the call she in a loud tone called…… RANVEER….
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Yes u guessed it right…..she is none other than Ranveer’s mother…… Mrs. Kritika Juneja….. And she called out RV for discussing…..about the new venture….that they are gonna to start up here in Dubai itself….and here comes RV….
SCENE RESUMES….
RV- Yes mom u called…
Kritika- Yes… I want to tell u….that I have called two of ur best friends here…..for helping u with the setup of our new venture….. I hope u will get some help…
RV- Thank you mom…. I seriously needed help…..and Mru and saha are the best for this…
Kritika- My son has grew smarter….. I didn’t even mentioned their names…..and u guessed it right…..
RV- Yes coz I know my mom very well……and I know whatever she think for me is for my best….
Kritika- (a bit emotional) maybe RV….but the fact is I can’t help u in one thing……ur career…..ur choices and ur preferences……. I have failed in giving u the right to choose all that on ur own…..
RV- (cupping her face in his hands) Mom….plz…. I really don’t like this sentimental side of urs…… I like my mom as a strong and effective personality……who has taught me and made me……this who am I today…… And I am happy with it…….
Kritika ruffles Rv’s hairs….with utmost love and care…..and both hugged each other……
RV- Mom when r they coming…
Kritika- Tonight they have a flight from Mumbai….
Rv- Oh…so both are coming together….great…
Kritika- It depends…. I mean maybe….coz both are gonna to board separately…..
RV- ok…i will send soumya to pick them up….
Kritika- as u wish..
RV calls Soumya…..and ask her to pick Mrunal and Sahana as soon as they arrive….
Soumya too works with Juneja’s…in their company….
SCENE SHIFTS
@MUMBAI, INDIA
And
@PUNE, INDIA
Simultaneous scenes….
@Mumbai
Amidst the classes….and final lecture…..she sat down taking…..out some time from her busy schedule…… Looked at her….watch…..thought something for few minutes…….then smiled brightly…… She kept her books…..and pens….and lecture notes aside…..on the table….. Freed her students…..saying that this was their last class for the session…… She packed her bags…..and moved out towards her scooty….. After placing her stuffs in the scooty……she sat on it…..relaxing…..took out her phone…..and made a call…..
@Pune
In a hustle bustle of an office……a silent…..calm and…peaceful cabin cum workstation…..is shown……it seems as if either…..there is no one out there……or maybe…..the rest of the world has freezed for the person…… But suddenly a tune broke this silence……and the peacefully working girl……jumped out of her seat out of shock…….and the result was the cold coffee lying there on the table…….spilled on her……completely ruining her dress…….while the phone rang louder in its vibrating mode…..
Simultaneous scenes…
@mumbai…
She waits for the call to be picked up by the owner…
@pune…
Recollecting herself from the stupidity….she picked up the call…
Together
@mumbai & @pune…
(at the same time)
At call- Hello
At call- Tum…
@pune…
Girl- I could have guessed this…..that no one else than u Miss. Sahana can have such a wonderful timing…..of spoiling my peaceful work…..
@mumbai…
Girl2- Shukriya….shukriya….hamari tareef mein kaseede padhne ke liye shukriya….shukriya….
(thank you….thank you…..for praising me in such a wonderful lines…….thank you…..thank you….) And she smiled…
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
So the girl at Mumbai who called….was none other than Sahana…..well how good is her timing…..this u all will get to know soon…. But this naughty smile on her face is saying something else…… Let’s hear the convo first….
SCENE RESUMES…
Sahana- So… Miss. Mrunal…aka Miss. Late lateef…. I have called to inform u that….we have a flight tonight…..from Mumbai……to Dubai….and for that u should reach here…..at Mumbai by 4:00 pm itself…. So basically….u have to leave….now itself….
SCENE PAUSE
DIAGRESSION
By narrator…
Well Mrunal….inke late lateefi ke charche poore TU par hain…… And I hope u all agreed….. Waise….for now she is busy….so she is late….but let me tell u….the next part of trust me is far away……do wait for her…..
SCENE RESUMES..
Mrunal- O really…. Am I Late lateef…… Are u sure Miss. Fitness Freak….. Leave this… I know…and i remember….. I was about to leave for Mumbai…..but u delayed me…. And yes one more thing….. I will reach in time…..
Sahana- Well that time will tell….
Mrunal- Bet…
Sahana- Bet… U won’t be able to reach here in time….
Mrunal- See u at Dubai… Bye…
And she cuts the call…
Sahana smiles….
Sahana to herself… I wish u win the bet….
TO BE CONTINUED…
******************************************************************************************
PRECAP- Why Oberoi(s) are in Dubai..? What happened to Tej..? And oberoi(s) in a simple house..?? What will happen when Dhiraj will get to know that Shreyanvi had gone to Dubai for her studies….that too hiding all this from him..?? Mru and saha at Dubai…
******************************************************************************************
So friends….. This was the first chapter of D3….. Hope u all will like this….. Plz do shower ur love and affection on this one too….
As u used to do…. And yes I have a note for all my readers….. I will post the next part of AMOUR EST FINDING FAÇON very soon…. And the epilogue of O SAATHIYA too is under construction….. Will try to post both very soon….
Happy reading…
KEHKASHA and B_ISHAA…
30 Comments
It is awesome dear… Eagerly waiting for the next updates
Thank you so much dear…and if I am not wrong then u r same nikitajai na….
Well Congo for being a registered member….. Now I am waiting for ur posts and updates…
Nice
Thanks Alekhika…
Sixer…….!!!!!!!!!!that’s what I can say….Imagining sweety (yashu) jumping on prank…rofl ???yash and saku’s convo was awesome and mru???miss late lateef ?????and ofcourse our fitness freak?????omg I can’t it fits Ian sorry saha and mru????????but this is soooopeerrrrrrerr why are oberois living in small house???okay anyways I will get the answer soon….saku is going to have a tough day when dhiraj comes to know…heheeehee….I love you kuhu and di….sooper dooper update……waiting eagerly for the next?????????
Did u imagined…
Yashu must be looking like a hopping bunny….
And thank you so much for your appreciation…
We love u too…..
First of all a bigggggg sorry di as didnt comment before actually i was very upset as my exa s are going very bad but today when saw your post i was jumping like a mad person i was missing you so badly di but know your back with full army i mean with all tu writers as ur characters i loved the story di it is a unique concept and the title remainded me d3(dil dosthi dance) serial
And you are right di mrunal di is a late lateef i am waiting for from soòoooooo long if she can ask her to come back soon
Bye di
Take care and keep smiling
Love loads and loads???????????????
Firstly…..sravanthi….stop saying sorry for every single thing…. Secondly….why aren’t ur exams going well…..study properly na….and do good in exams….
Thirdly even I was missing my special reader…..but what to do….there is no other way to talk to u rather than this comment section….
And I conveyed ur message to mru di….and let me inform u….she has an interview tomorrow…..so maybe she will be bit more late…
And finally thank you so much….ur compliments always made me feel better…
Luv u too dear
Firstly, I will applaud two of you for your amazing work on vocabulary. It really a job well done.
Secondly, the epi was a perfect mash up of comedy, love, friendship and sadness well felt at point.
Thirdly, Kumbhkaran, fitness freak, saku and me as sleepy heads and the lizard part was a complete rofl ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?.
Fourthly, ShiVika and GauKara scene was short yet cute and sweet a complete aww scene.
Fifthly, I am excited for the revelations and story to unfold soon.
Sixthly, Bhavi di as a writer it is a dream come true ????.
I really wish to see Bhavi di take over the dice as a writer.
Seventhly, RV’s new avatar seems to be really nice and you portrayed the perfect shade of sadness in him.
Eighthly, I am waiting to see whether Mru will be able to complete the bet.
(P.S.:Please make her loose ??????)
Ninthly, Putting all the scenes of every character together in one epi is really worth appreciation.
Tenthly, Guys keep up with the good work, you have done amazing job so far so you guys are at fault to raise our expectations and take it to another level.
And this is the third time I am typing a comment so I deserve a reply ???.
Plus I hope so this much of evaluation would be enough if no then do tell me next time I will surely add up.
Love ❤ you both ??.
Thanks a lot such an appreciation and for a long comment well as author Cum your friends we have known you all well so our guesses upon everyone reactions n dialogues were bang on .
Well we didn’t know that we are almost writing our real life happenings I guess our Dostipaty worked (dosti ki telepathy )
Fingers crossed that you keep on liking the upcoming track.
Love you ….tc…..
Hiii yashu…kaisa laga mera prank???…nd sote hua jyada laate toh nahi maari naa maine??????…..this was trailer aage aage dekho tumhe kitna tang karungi???
Hehehe it was awesome one kuhu tune to muru di ki yaha PE bhi vat laga Dali????..I m still laughing when I recalled late latif ??…Saha di perfect timing hmm waiting to see more perfect timing…And ya Yar kese dosto ko rakha he kabhi time PE Nahi pochte bichari hamari Isha di wait Kar Kar ke intro Dena bhi start Kar Diya???…In an all awesome one.. Looking forward to it…See u soon tata??…
Mahee… Jaldi aao.. misding u??
Oh my god…
What was this??!!!!!
It was just fabulous,,,,loved it….
U both r reallly wonderful at this work..
The way wrting is just mindblowing,..
Eagerly waiting for next part
Phew ! You know you just scared me with that what was this!I
But thank you for the lovely compliment the credits obviously goes to kuhu and she deserves it.
Well mostly we are trying our best to not make every one that wait so mostly u could see the chapter :2 soon
Love you …tc
Kya bolu???.. mujhe fitness freak bol diya??… Utni bhi nahi hun… Well mru toh late lateef hai???… Aur accha hai tum logo ne mera badla le liya yashu se??.. aaj subah hi mujhe daanta usne.. saku toh bohot cute hai as shreyanvi?.. kuhu n bhavi u both r fabulous writers… Waiting for the day when u vil actually write about us.. n v vil surely reach on time.. actually previous day itself???
Eagerly waiting for next epi??
Saha di wht do u mean by I m cute as shreyanvi???…nd u r really a fitness freak jab dekhi tab yoga krte rehte????….baaki aap dekhlo ??..
Ha aap hai fitness freak mahutrama I am sure that u don’t want me to open up ur schedule here and as far as mru concerns woh toh abhi abhi late lateef hui hai……and yashasvi ke kya kehne yaar. …Woh laughter category ki omm karti hain so iss baar humari turn dekhna aage. …and Shreyanvi toh hai hi overloaded cuteness ki train. …..and Yaa I will surely write something on u guys n tab dekhege kab aate ho because as far as I know 2019 me humari sissy ki shaadi me puhachu then we will see. ….
Love you and stay tuned
Take care and smile don’t be udaas nahi toh main ho jaogi naaraaz Joh na aayega kisiko bhi raas
Theek hai maate..? aur mein kaha ki fitness freak.. ek hafte se junk hi khaaya hai… Nw m getting tensed as to how to burn those calories..???? aur saku tu chup ho jaa.. mera dukh nahi jaanti tu???
Sahana di…saku ko chup karana mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai????
It was mindblowing….
My nd yashu di’s scenes were hilarious..???…pata nahi ab mera kya hoga(precap)
Mru di toh hai hi lateef aur saha di fitness freak..??..really looking forward for nxt part…precap seems intresting …..post next one soon..nd haan comment padhne k baad apni ungliyon ko kasht krke reply zaroor krna??????
Le meri Jaan karli kasrat thank you for your review and wait kar milega padne tujhe glad u all are liking ur respective roles yaar …..
I love you
Cu ….take care
Hoo….what a story……And really so many shocking twists…..also…..Oh god…..I am getting more and excitement only….mrunal ki lateefen…….awww…i like it lott…..what 2 say…..kuhu and bshama….u guys are simply rocking…….and narrations were really unique and i enjoyed it a lot…… fitness freak…sahana…i was laughing while reading that…..it’s too nice 2 read an ff filled with our favorite show’s characters and a team of tu members also…U both have managed 2 relate it in right way and i really appreciate u guys for this new concept…Ur effort is well seen in this work…Keep writing more….bshama and kuhu……Am sure this is gonna be a mega successful ff which will stay in reader’s hearts forever…love u guys…
Such a huge compliment di ….
i really appreciate u guys for this new concept…Ur effort is well seen in this work…Keep writing more….bshama and kuhu……Am sure this is gonna be a mega successful ff which will stay in reader’s hearts forever….
Spellbound ….what to say …..first of all a biggggggg thank you for this wishes which clearly reflects your expectations from our collaboration seriously we two don’t really focus on it we just write. ….and it’s all u audience who loves it ……
We will be try our best to maintain torturous atmosphere and cope up to all expectations thank you sooooooo much for this comments it just made my day …..actually our day….
Love you too more than you know
Stay tuned
Take care cu. …
Ab na mai bada thak chuki hu…
ab ye last baar varna mai comment hi nahi karungi…???
super…. damakedar…. khidkitod… mind blowing… fantastic…. amazing… awesome…. fabulous…. Marvelous update….
kya dhasu opening hai boss…
sabase pehale starting mai hi itna bada suspense… then dadi & rudy ki masti… pinky ka omm.. and janhavi ka support… and shivika & omri ka romance…????
usake baad do cute dosto ki entry… aur kya sahi dikhaya hai boss.. dono sach mai kumbhkaran hai… and saku toh hai hi prankster… that was expected… how sweet of rockstar.. saku ko apane dream course ke liye dubai bhej rahi hai wo bhi papa se chupa ke… hope ki koi raita na phaile…
and ab hui hero ki entry… i loved this version of RV… and bahot chantomine ho gaya hai wo mummy ne bina bataye guess kar liya… waise hum hai hi aise…
itane unique hai ki koi aur piece nahi milega…
lo aa gayi meri dushman kum friend.. meri omm karne ka toh patent liya hai madam ne… miss. fitness freak… ekdam sahi naam diya hai… aur kya mast portray kiya hai mere office ko..
i wish this comes true… and u have portrayed me perfectly in this scene…
and i really love cold coffee….. mujh se bada late latif kahi nahi milega… ye baat toh sach hai… aur kuhu tune accha chance maar liya bacchu… kya jam ke tarif ki hai meri late latifi ki… and yeah meri aadat bet lagane ki… ab ye jo bet lagi hai… i know ki mai ye wali haranewali hu… I’m damn sure… eagerly waiting for next episode.. my curiosity is increasing like hell…
post ASAP…
just loved this update to the core…
u both nailed it yaar…
lajabab… u both r best…
love u both…
tight LDH…??????
thank u so much for this ff….???
Hai na di…mara na Maine chance….
Mujhe maza aata hai aapki khichayi karne mein…..
Aap ho hi itni flexible ?
And mujhe pata tha….ki hum Jo bhi likhenge…..aap sabko pasand aayega….
So humne bhi poore dil se likh diya…
And result mein humne top kiya hai….hai na…
Thank you so much….for ur lovely words…and a detailed analysis of this part….
Keep commenting….even if Tu don’t allow u….
Keep analyzing….even if ur net don’t allow u…
Luv u too…
LDH ekdum bone crushing…
Woh baat aur hai ki Mai ekdum zero figure hun….aaap crush nahi hoge…
Hey Didi’s awesome work. Loved it !! I am eagerly waiting for the rumya ff. Post soon❤
Thanks Jerry…
And yes rumya wala is under construction….
Hope we will post it soon…
And what’s ur real name….
Keep reading dear…
Vedika❤
Amazing update…