Hey guys Maria here with an os!!
Frst toh m sorry that I didn’t really to some comments as I was ill…..n didn’t have so much tym….but nor m thanking here….
Thank u so much ishana ???? m really glad u liked it
Thank u so much stainable API Fatima API Ruksar API sriyooooo darling and Ariana my Twinie!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️yr u all are love I fell so overhelmed by ur comments such sweet words….itni tareef to mom mene bhi Nai ki?????
Well thank u thank u thank u so much yr!!!!! Seriously m really obliged!!!!!! Love u all so much my cutiepies!!!!!!????????????
N abt my health it’s still the same means still m in a not good state so pla pray all…..I also took leave from school…..hope I will be fyn soon…….
Ok ok enough of my talks now let’s start the OS
Name: “dark days and bright future”
STORY STARTS WITH:
A gal around 20 is searching for books in library….see sees a book….named “LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL” she gets treaty eyed…….
FB:
Two young gals age OS 10 were playing garden…..they saw a boy around 12 was reading the same book……
They both shout SHR!!!
Yes he is the hero of the story ‘SHRAVAN’
Shr looks au to both….
Shr: hey gals wat r u doing here….??
One gal: we r here to play….
2nd gal: with u….. *blushes*
Shr: Hanna with me…??? He smiles at second gal…n lovingly looks at her….
While frst gal interrupts….
Frst gal: sumo Shr lets go……
S: ok Stella
They both go along with Shr…..n play so much…..
Present:
The gal goes to towards the book n picks it up…..
G: this book….this story…..
She directly opens page 55……n smiles….
FB
sumo goes towards the book n starts to read it…
Shr comes to her….
Shr: hahah can u understand this…??? It’s a love story…
S: of corse I can…!! But why do u love this book so much
Shr opens page 55
Shr: see it explained that friendship is such a strong bond…..
Sumo reads the whole page n smiles….
S: wow……
Stella was standing there feels hurt ……..
PRESENT:
A tear flows from gal eye…..
Suddenly a book fell on her head…
G: oww
A boy comes to her from behind:
Omg I…i m so sorry…..apko lagi toh Nai…???
G: yes Ofcourse oww,…
B: really m so sorry…..
G: it’s it’s ok….. (She didn’t see the boy face nor did the boy)
Boy picks up the book…..
B: again sorry…..
Gal while rubbing her head: it’s ok……
She turns back but finds that the boy is already gone….
G: pagal ladka…..
She goes towards the table…n sits…..
She starts reading the book…..
FB:
Sumo Shr n Stella were playing n enjoying…..
Suddenly sumo fells n gets hurts…Shr rushes to her…n cares for her……
PRESENT:
The gal is reading…..
FB:
It’s tym for Shr to go back to Paris…..
Both Stella n sumo fells hurt…..
Shr: don’t worry gals……I will be back…..someday….
He take sumo hand….n takes her out…..
Shr: sumo plzz letters likhti rehna…n emails bhi….I can’t live without them….
S: I will…..
He goes……
PRESENT:
The gal is reading n tears rolls down from her face……
FB:
From that day sumo daily used to send him emails n letter….
It’s been 8 years…..now both the gals are of 18 n Shr he is of 20…..
Stella always use to say that she is happy for SHRAMAN……
But she was not……
One day…..
Sumo was chatting with Shr…..
Shr: yr it’s been 8 years come on I don’t even know how do u look…..send me a pic atleast…..
S: no way….I also didn’t saw u….so I also never asked for a pic…why so hurry….frst send rishta at my house then….
Shr: hahah ok I will send soon…….
Both chats…..
One day:
Sumo enters in her room…..
And finds Stella packing her bags…
S: Stella where r u going….
St: wo actually I have some work in newyork so that’s why….
S: r u ok…?? U r so tensed…..
St: yes I m…..
S: yr u didn’t told me abt this trip…
St: it happened in hurrily…..
S: ok but when will u come back….
Stella Luks at sumo n says “soon”
S hugs Stella
S: m going to miss u my best Friend kum sis….
St: ok m going by …..love u….
S: love u too….!!!!
PRESENT:
Librarian comes to gal….
L: hey it’s time for close….
G: Ooohhh sorry….here is the book….
She rubs her tears n goes……
On the way back to home….
The gal collides with the same boy….she was abt to fall when he holds her….
They share an eyelock……
G: ohh m m sorry…..
B: no no it’s it’s alright…..
She starts to go….
B: hey miss…….
Turns back : yes……
B: ummm sorry….
G: fr wat….
B: actually the book fell on u….
G: wait…how do u…?? It was….??
B: it was me I said sorry but fouls r clearly saw ur face….
G: Ooohhh it’s ok….
B: SE how’s ur head now….??
G: hahah it’s fyn now….
B: I m feeling bad….
G: no it’s alright….
B: no it’s not….
G: wat u want to do then….??
B: a coffee….???
G smiles: so say straight na…that u want to take me on a coffee…..
B: Han u can say that….. 😉
G: u r Indian na..??
B: Hahahah u can say well m also Indian….
G: Indian ho kar bhi ye Sab??
B: Hahahahahha flirting no no…!! That’s not called flirting that’s actually……umm…
G: ha Han apology…..
B laughs: yes…..that’s…..apology….
B: so shall we go…??
G: yeah why not…..
They both goes….
Effiel tower is shown at the background which reveals that the gal n boy are in Paris….
They enters in a cafeteria ….
He pulls a chair for gal…..she sits he too sits…
Boy orders two cup of coffee
B: so miss…..???
G: ohh Hahahah my name…yes it’s suman……
B: wow beautiful name just like u….
G: Uffff again flirting Han….??
B: Nai Nai no flirting…..just praising….acha so miss suman umm can I call u sumo..??
Suman suddenly goes in a FB
Shr: sumo!!!!!!!!!
S: wat the hell my name is suman….
Shr: no but I will call u sumo only…!!!!
S: whatever…..!!
PRESENT:
B: hey….!!
S: Han Han…??
B: where have u lost…??
S: no…nothing actually my friends…friend used to call me sumo…
B: so m not ur friend?
S: Hahahah not like that u r!
B: ok so miss sumo ways ur hobby…??
S: hmm shopping Reading cycling gardening n many more…wat abt u…!?
B: hmm it’s listening music….playing instruments….reading Ofcourse…!!
S: wow!!! Looks like u love music..!!
B: music is life!!
S: Hahahah wow….,!!!
B: so any bf..??
S: Hahahah no no….any gf…??
B: Han thi ek….
S: Hahahha chor kar bhaag gai ??
B smiles……
S: ok so u live here…???
B: Han I live here u…??
S: yep sifted 2 years ago….,
B: woah nice…..!!! Studies ke liay….???
S: Nai kisi ko dhoondne ke liay…..
B: so mile wo…???
S: Nai abhi tak Nai….
B: hahaha mil Jain gai……don’t worry…..
S: hope so…..
They chit chat…..
After that they both exchange num n goes to their respective houses
S comes her home….She sits on a sofa…
S: hah wat a busy day it was…..hahah he was such a cutie….omg I forgot to ask his name hahahahaha bewaqoof me?
It’s the frst tym ever I spoke to a boy in a friendly manner after Shr….he was so attractive….so charming…!!omg besharam don’t think like dat….
She goes to her room…laughing….
Suddenly she sees a letter…n gets emotional….
She sits on a sofa……
FB:
SUMO POV:
After Stella went….I felt so alone….she was my bestie but I always give her a place of my sis cause I was an only child…I started making plans of mine n Shr future….
Cause he loved me….wat will be my reaction when I see him…..when he will see me….Awww
But……..
My beautiful imagination beaks into pieces…when I find a letter….after two days….
It was Shr letter he sent me…..
He wrote:
“Sumo m in paris….my father fixed my alliance with some other gal…..I never want this…so I run away from my home…we will live in Paris…just u n me….don’t worry…agar mom AAJ zindagi hoti toh Yahoo kartin…..plzz come to me…there is also n envelop I sent tickets…..plzz come to me I m dying to see u once only….plz come back…I blocked all my contacts…..just come I will be there at Paris airport to pick u …..just u n me…….
Ur Shr”
I sat down in shock……I search for the envelop it was empty….all the memories were just hitting my mind all abt Stella…….she….she…betrayed me….
Then I read somthing behind the letter:
It was from Stella
She wrote:
“M sorry suman but I have to do that…I Always loved Shr…he will love me..I know I hurt u…I will never see u again…..I won’t ask for forgiveness…cause I know u will never…..”
I was crying so badly…..she she loved Shr…always nut she ne ear told me….
I went to Paris…..in search of them….
I never saw Shr…after 12 but I can recognize….Stella…..
N now here I m after two years still empty hand…….,don’t know when will I able to find them….
It’s morning……
Sumo wakes up……she calls her n she picks
S: hello??
Shr: hy!!
S: who??
Shr: lo bhee u forgot…???
S: wait…?? The boy..??? Aray yr what’s ur name???!!!
Shr: Hahahah Han ur friend!! Come to xyz place m waiting….!! N u can call me prince
Shr: Hain ye Kaisa name hai!!??
Shr: cause I m prince
S: uffff misunderstanding Hain kuch logon ko????
Shr: ooohooooo bs bs come now
S: ok 15 min
After 15 min….
She goes to xyz place!
Shr was already sitting on a chair with breakfast waiting for her…
Shr: so madam….ur 1 min 15 sec late. ?
S: ufff. ?
She sits
S: so what was the reason behind calling me so early….!!
Shr: yr actually m going to Delhi at night due to some work……
S: ohhhh
Shr: hmm…..
S: so where do u live here….???
Shr tells her the address
S: wow….great I will come
Shr: Hahahah Han aajana I will be waiting
S: hahah m not coming abhi….just eat ur breakfast….
Shr: Ofcourse yr m so hungry btw….
He starts eating…..
Sumo sees him eating like kids n get mezerized……
S thinks: why m I so attracts to him……
Shr: hah finally this is done…..
Let’s go to some other place…..let’s visit Effiel tower….
Sumo: ok…..lets go…..
They visit the Effiel tower….
Shr accidentally pour all the coffee on himself
S: ohh god give me this….just take it off….
He does so…..
S: wow u look nice in just shirt…..
Shr: hmm flirting ???
S: no way!! Just complimenting!!
Shr: Hahahha then thank u
S: mention it… ?
It’s evening
SHRAMAN are outside Shr house
Shr: so that is my house…..
S: hmm nice
Shr: hah so we enjoyed whole day yr wow!!!
S: yes it was so fun!!!
Shr: but now I have to pack for Delhi also….
S: need some help!?!
Shr: Nop I will manage
S: ok u go then…..
Shr: byyy c u soon!!
S: byyyy
She goes to her home……
Sumo sits on sofa takes a deep breath…..
Huh sumo wat a nice day it was…..prince Hahahha wat a name…..
She remembers some voices…..
Young sumo calling young Shr a prince
S: u are my prince!!!!!
Shr: Hahahah ok then from now on I m prince!!!
PRESNET:
She opens her eyes widely……..
S: prince…………………..Nai wat m I thinking….????no no no that can’t happen…..
She thoughts why she is so attaches to him…..
She remembers he said that “ke mile wo”
S: why did he said wo……I only mentioned a person !
She remembers when she asked him abt his gf……he just smiled……
S: he didn’t answered……
Her eyes grew wide n wide due to shock….
She remembers him eating with left hand……
S: Shr is also a left handy……..
S: no no no that can’t happen
A thing gets in her mind…….
She goes to her car opened the door n took his coat….
She searches……she finds a childhood pic of her Stella n Shr…..
She sits on the surface in shock……
S: Shr……
Tears rolls down from her innocent face……..
She was continuously saying just one word…. “Shr”
S: why didn’t u tell me……
No I….I have to meet him…….
See sees tym…..
It’s tym for his flight……
Omg no no no
She sits in her car n drives…..
S: plzzz god no no no……
She was sure that he is gone now….
But she stops n looks that his house was opended….
S: he didn’t go….???
She gets off….n enters in house
She find Shr standing in his garden…….staring a tree…..
She goes behind him….
He felt her presence……
Shr: I knew u will come…….
He turns back….
She was crying
Sumo slapped him so hard……
Shr: hey why…!??
S: y didn’t u tell me in all these days!!!!!!!!!!
Shr was looking down…
S: I want an answer don’t look down..!!!!!
Shr: m sorry….I thought u will recognize me
S: wat the hell !!! I never saw u!!!
Shr: but I did…….
Sumo looks at him….
U r so beautiful like Stella told……
S: where is She…..
Shr: u still care…..
S: she is my friend…….
Shr: she was…….
He moves sideways revealing a grave……
Sumo gets a shock seeing Stella name on it……
Sumo sits in shock……….she was just so shocked…..
Shr: yes she died 2 years back….
When she came to Paris…..
I noticed her change behaviour she couldn’t bear this so she told me all truth……
I was shocked…..she was guilty……she decides to do everything right again so we went to India to take u……
It was too late….we saw that ur house was locked
We asked people they said u have gone one day ago……
Stella was so guilty…..we tried to find u but failed……
We come to Paris again…..we….were crossing the road n…….
Sumo looks at him in shock….
Shr crying…..
She got hit by a car……. Said Shr
The accident was major…..we didn’t have much time
She was in a bad state….she told me that it’s karma….
SHRAMAN cries…..
Shr: she said that apologize to sumo in my behalf when u will meet her…….. She believed that we will meet one day…….
He sits too……
She was gone…….
Sumo hugs the grave??
S: I forgive u Stella……..i forgive u….she shouts I forgive u!!!!!!
Shr: today was uncontrollable day for me…I feel toh tell u but then I saw ur smile face…I wanted to see it more n more….so I didn’t tell u…n I was not going to Delhi it was just n excuse I wanted somtym….I knew that u will find one day n u do…..
S was crying…..
I hate u Shr……..
Shr: n I always loved u…..n lived u…….
They touch their forehead………
Shr: still is so happy I can feel…..
S: may her soul rest in piece……
Cries’
Shr: “our dark days are over…..now the future will be bright” I promise……
S: I love u Shr……..
Shr: I love u too……
SHRAMAN: n we love u Stella……..
Both look towards the grave……..
Story ends……
Hah so guys finally over how was it???
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25 Comments
Haye maro nikaal di na meri jaan kush hai pai gyi tasaali.
Mere ko yeh itni aachi lgi ki dil kr RHA hai ki tujhe hug kro but u r away from me.
It was so beautifully prescribed.
My girl u rocked.
I loved it.
Give me some more.
Lots of luv
Hey my Preeto!! Uffffff itni tareef Hahahahha nai kar yr m blushing n mum is like ye Kya horaha hai bhe ye Kya ho raha hai??? awwwww me too want to hug u darling chal koi Nai lots of hugs!!!!!! ? thank u so much
Hahahah will definitely give u more darling!!
Love u too muahhhhhhh❤️❤️❤️❤️
It was amazinggg..dear…
I wana..clap hard for you..for this ff..????????????????
I loved it???
Awwww thank u so much for such a nice compliment DI!!!!!! Reall thank u so much
!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This was just so cute. Loved it. You described it so well MA ?
How are you? I asked you on the last episode of your ff I guess you didn’t see that. Anyway hope you get well soon. Take care of yourself. Love you ?
Hey API thank u so so much ?????? ooh sorry actually I didn’t reply to some comments so that’s why no I m not ok now hence need ur prayers cause m on bed right now
Thank y
U API u too take care
Love u tooooooo??❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️??❤️?❤️
That’s totally not a problem sweetie.
Praying for you already.
May you get well soon (Ameen) ?
Hi maria
how r u now?
Os was simply perfect
best part was shraman convo at cafe
bcs of all ur ffs i hardly get time to miss ekdv
get well soon
love u???
Hy Sami!!! Nop yr m not fyn on bed right now due to injury……
Woahhh thank u so much really glad that u liked it!!
That’s so sweet I felt really happy to know that u r liking my ffs this much ??????
Thanks alot?????
Love u too!!!
Hey Maria !!!!! First of all toh why u don’t take care of urself han ?? Take care of urself dear …. else … ummmmmm .. hahaha m not able to find any excuse ?? .. forget it ..
Coming to the OS .. ahhhh !!!! Mind blowing ???? … amazing fantabulous one ..
In love with this one .. really great ?????????
Nd again ¶¶¶TAKE GOOD CARE OF URSELF¶¶¶
STAY BLESSED??
Hey api !!!!!!!!!
Ooohhhhhhh sp soryyyyyyyyyyyy???????but api m trying n resting also this injury needs time na
Woahhhhhh hahah that’s such a cute n lovely compliment u gave me!!!!! Thank u so much!!!!!!????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????
Awww thank u so much I will surely take care of me
U too API
Keep smiling?????????
Marie di its awesome !!!??
Hope u remember me, right !! The story was so amazing ! Loved it !! ??
Hey Sonai thank u so much fr such a sweet compliment dear!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Of course I Remember u dear!!!! ? how can I forget a sweet friend like u !
this os was just rocking
no words to say
you are the best ,di
keep writing
love
balamirra
Awwww my dear Mirra thank u sp much yr
That’s so sweet
Hahah ok I will always be writing !??❤️❤️❤️
Love u too
Maria
I can’t explain in words so ?❤️❤️?And u have to save one os for my birthday too ?Jaan love u to the uncountable ??????
Awwww thank u so much darling !!
Ahhh why not sure sure!!! I can’t deny u my darling I will post on that day especially for u jaan! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Love u too wo bhi infinite jaan!!!
Amazingggggg maria…
Too good..
It was a bit similar to bodyguard’s plot..
But I loved it..
Love u loads..
Get well soon..
Take care..
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Hey niya thank u so much dear!!
Hahahah yeah it is actually when I was writing it so bodyguard was continuously coming in my mind??????
Hahha thank u glad that u love d it darling
Love u too jaan
Thank u I will be !
U too god bless u dear❤️❤️
Oh Mario I’m sooooooooooooooo sry for a late comment. Sry yaar…ok fine I’ll pull my own ears… happy?
so now as for the os then I have no words…. u r so talent, with such extraordinary quick mind, I really can’t do much more than admiring u. Such a wonderful, emotional os. Brilliant. keep making more shots nd carry on with ur amazing ff.
Pls take care of ur health. Btw how r u? Is ur health improving?
All the best for ur minor exams
love u sooooooooooooooooooooo much
Awwww hey do t u dare to say sorry my Twinie I will beat u warna!
Omg thank u so much for appreciating this much yr I m too overhelmed but I must say that u r also n amazing n fab writer unlike me!! Hahahah I don’t know that u people like my work this much that’s so sweet of u darling
Hahahah why not I wil surely write more and abt my OS yes i will post it very soon dear!
Umm my health still not good yr bs plz keep praying I also take one more week leave from school will continue from next month….. .
Hahah thank u so much dear
Love u toooo much SE bhi bht ziada!!?!
Muahhhhhhh❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Marie!!Superb…The way of travelling Story Lines…Hw R U??What happen??R U alright now??
Hey bro!!!! Yr I was badly missing ur comments thank god u commented!!!! Thank u u so much for praising so much !
Ahhh this actually I fell from stairs 2 weeks ago n still didn’t recover yet…..I hope I will get fyn soon…… ???????
But thank u so much fr commenting bro !!! It made me so happy!!!!
Oh?Sissy..Take Care of Urs n Urself..Take Full rest..Dont stress..Damn Sure Ull recover soon..Ya..Long Past!!
Awww thank h so much I m sure with these sweet wishes I will be able to recover very very soon 🙂 ooohhhhhhh long past hope everything is alright and u will be regular now 🙂