DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 12 [By Renima]
I am absolutely sorry for making lateee updatesss and I don’t know whether I can portray things well in ff as I am feeling much low due 2 some personal issues and hectic workload……. If u guys want me 2 stop this ff, then certainly u can tell it frankly as I don’t want any of my reader should feel he/she should feel disappointment …So after reading this one pls try 2 give honest reviews through comments ……Links for previous part is here, in case u have missed or forgotten last part…..
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Scene – 20 { @ Rudy’s room, Oberoi mansion }
It’s morning and rumya were still lying on each other’s shoulder only……Suddenly they get up as they find some one has started knocking the door…….
Rudra : Sumo……..
Sowmya : Mmmmm……Rudy, Let me see…….
Rudra : Yeah….[rudy nodes his head and goes 2 wash room, mean while sumo opens the door and finds pinky]
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!! Sowmya , why u opened the door so?? [ In the midst, pinky finds rudy coming out from wash room …..He has removed the sherwani suit and has tied a bath towel on his body……]
Sowmya : Choti maa, what happened ?? U were saying something…..right ??
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! Hot Singh Oberois……U looks supercoolss……
Sowmya : What ???
Pinky : Mrs. Sowmya Singh Oberois, Just have a looks in ur hot husband……..
Sowmya turns back and finds rudy searching for something….For a while she couldn’t take her eyes from rudra as it was tempting her much…..But soon sowmya gained her senses back and she took a deep breath……She rushed near rudy and holds his hand……Rumya share an eyelock…..BGM……”Dil vil chahat vahat mein ho jaati tension full….
Acche khaase bande ki batti ho jaati hein gul
Yeh shikwah shakh tumhara bematlab hein bilkul
Kabhi banke to dekho tum kisi simran ka rahul
Yeh risk kyun mein lun bhalah, fande mein kyun daalun galah…..aaah…aah……” plays
Pinky : I think I disturbed them @ wrong timings…..Let these lovebirds enjoys their moments…..Oh My Maata….[pinky smiles and leaves]
Sowmya : Rudra, what are u doing ?
Rudra : I am going 2 take a fresh bath……
Sowmya : I can understand it, but rudy why are u revealing so much?? [sumo covers rudy’s body with her chunari]
Rudra : What’s wrong with u, sumo??? Let me tell u one thing, no one takes bath in full dress….
Sowmya : Very funny!!! I am not joking, rudra can’t u see choti maa is staring u…….
Rudra : Is it?? Where is she ??
Sowmya : Near door, rudra…..
Rudra : No one is there, sumo…..I think she has left……
Sowmya : Really, [sumo turns back and again stares rudy] Whatever it be rudy, this is nit right…..
Rudra : What ??
Sowmya : I mean u are standing like ….I mean……2 say…….
Rudra : I got it, sumo…..U feels embarrassed 2 see me like these…..right ?? Trust me, sumo I don’t have any intention 2 reveal my body……Actually I forgot 2 take shampoo, so I was just checking where I have kept it……
Sowmya : I see, rudra….i will help you……
Rudra ; No, sumo…..I will find it…….Actually my room is not less than a garbage and things are not kept properly…..
Sowmya : Don’t worry, rudy…….From now onwards, this will turn as a room, but u have 2 give me a promise……
Rudra : What ??
Sowmya : Nothing big, just promise me that u won’t keep things in disorder once I makes them in order……[sumo extends her hand 2 rudy]
Rudra : Done!!! [rudy keeps his hand over sumo’s hand and rumya stare each other’s again]
Sowmya : Rudra……Shampoo, we have 2 find shampoo……
Rudra : Yeah……. Ok sumo u go there and I will search here……[rumya released their hands and started searching for shampoo]
Sowmya : I find it, rudy…….
Rudra ; Where , sumo ??
Sowmya : Rudy, it’s on the top of shelf….. [rudy finds sumo standing on the stool and she was stretching her arms hard 2 pick the shampoo as it was kept on the basket]
Rudra rushed near her and stared her with much tension…..
Rudra : Sumo…..[before he could tell her some thing, sumo’s feet slips and she was abt 2 fell down]
Sowmya : Aah!!!! [sumo screams and before she could fell down, rudy picks her in his arms… While sowmya had kept her eyes shut due 2 fear……]
Rudra : Sumo……nothing has happened, u can open ur eyes…….
Sowmya slowly opened her eyes and stares rudra……She finds rudy’s smiling face before her and his caring arms which have lifted her safely …….They share an eyelock………
BGM……”Maana ke hum yaar nahi…lo tay hein ke pyaar nahi….
Phi bhi nazrein naa tum milaana…..dil kaa aitebaar nahi……” [film-meri pyari bindu] plays
Rudra : Sumo, what was u doing?? If u would have fell down, then……
Sowmya : I will never fell down , rudra…..
Rudra : Why ??
Sowmya : Because u promised me that u will never makes me 2 feel down and now I can feel it……[ rumya smiles and stare each other’s eyes]
Scene – 21 { @ Hospital, Barely}
Om slowly wakes up and finds gauri was trying 2 get up from bed……..
Omkara : Gauri!!! Just lie down on bed……[omkara holds gauri’s hand and makes her 2 lean on bed again]
Gauri : But omkaraji…….It’s time for me 2 do puja ……..My day starts with having darshan of bagwanji……
Omkara : Gauri, Be serious…..U are not able 2 move from bed and until and unless doctor comes u are not doing anything and it’s final…….
Gauri : But, omkaraji…….I have 2 see my sankarji……..
Omkara : Ur sankarji knows that now u are not feeling well….Trust me he will never feel bad….
Gauri : May be, but omkaraji…….I want 2 thank him for sending u 2 save me…..Pls…..
Omkara : Will u just keep quiet, gauri ?? [om stares her]
Gauri : But….
Omkara : Just shut ur mouth…..[ gauri finds om’s eyes went sharp and before that gaze she was not able 2 tell anything as if it was like a command for her]
Gauri’s mind voice : He is staring me like nandi bull only….Only thing is he is not having horns in his head…….Hey sankarji……[gauri shut her eyes for a while] Pls forgive this chirayaa for not doing ur puja today….[gauri folds her hands , in the midst om comes closer 2 her and stares her]
Omkara : Gauri, this is for u…..
Gauri slowly opened her eyes and finds a piece of paper before her eyes ……She find a pencil sketch of lord shiva on that paper……Gauri’s eyes went teary , she fold her hands before that pic and gently touched it……Om handovers the paper 2 her and before he could take his hand down, gauri pressed her face on om’s palm and starts crying literally…….Om waved his another hand through her head and lifted her chin…….
Omkara : What happened, now?? Seems in my sketch ur sankarji is not beautiful……
Gauri : It’s purely divine, just like ur heart…….Omkaraji……..Thank oooooo…… [gaurikara share an emotional eyelock]
BGM….”Jo naa keha sake tum, jo naa keha sake hum
Kehane lagi donon se who, khamoshiyaan….oh saathiya……
Saathiya….Saathiya……Saathiya…” plays……
They couldn’t lose themselves in that eyelock as some one interrupted them by telling “Excuse me……”
Omkara : Yeah…. doctor……[ om gets up and stands besides gauri]
Doctor checks gauri and gives a prescription 2 omkara……
Doctor : She is better now…….But u have 2 arrange these medicines fast……Within 2 days, u can take her home…..
Omkara : Thank u doctor……[ doctor leaves, gaurikara stares each other’s eyes again and smiles] Gauri…….I have 2 get these medicines…..
Gauri : [holds om’s hand] Pls come soon…..omkaraji…..
Omkara : Don’t worry……..I will be back in 2 mnts…..Till then ur sankarji is with u…….
Gauri : Yeah…….But don’t know why whenever my eyes are not able 2 see u before me,I find much fear, omkaraji…..I feel I am alone…….
Omkara : Gauri, ur trust made me 2 fight with circumstances and I was able 2 find u and that has saved u…….[omkara touches gauri;s cheek] Never lose ur trust , if u lose it then that day will be my failure…….Ur trust keeps me alive gauri……Trust me, I am with u……[ rikara stare each others with wet eyes] I will come back……[gauri nods her head with wet eyes, om smiles with wet eyes and release his hands from her cheek and hold ……He stared her for a while and leaves]
Gauir holds the pic close 2 her chest and folds her hands…..” Hey sankarji, pls take care of my omkaraji……Save him from all obstacles and shower ur blessings on him….Relieve him from his pains and spread his life with colors…..Just like his beautiful paintings, make everything as beautiful in his life…….Give him all happiness, sankarji……”
Scene – 22 { @ Hospital Reception, Barely}
Omkara : I missed my mobile in home itself. I have 2 inform gauri’s maa that gauri is with me……I have 2 call maaji….. [Om makes a phone call through landline of hospital, phone rings, but no one picks the call] Why maaji is not attending the call ? May be she has went for some work…..[om cuts the call and leaves]
Scene shifts 2 the ward
Om finds gauri lost in thoughts…….He moves closer 2 her and keeps medicines in table……..
Omkara : Gauri…….Have this tablet……
Gauri : I have 2 swallow this, omkaraji ??
Omkara : Of course, gauri…this is ur medicine……
Gauri : Omkaraji…..I am okay now……And these medicines……It’s making gauri kumara sarma 2 weak only…….Instead of having medicines, u just give me gol-gappas, then u can see my isstyle ……I will run from this bed and will dance in dabang song……
Omkara : Fine…..But as for now, gauri kumara chirayya has 2 take rest and she should take medicines in time…….Be a gud girl and have it……[om handovers tablet , gauri swallows it and om makes her 2 drink water……]
Gauri : Omkaraji…….U are too good…….
Omkara : And u are so sweet…..[om pats gauri’s cheek and smiles]
Scene – 23 { @ Oberoi Guest House}
Swethlana : Tej, just because of ur stupidity, omkara and gauri escaped from my custody……
Tej : Swethlana, the matter is getting serious…..Do u know what my stupid elder son has done ??
Swethlana : What ??
Tej : Just see this….[tej handovers a file, swethlana gets shocked 2 see the papers]
Swethlana : No….this is not possible…….Ur son is mad, tej…..
Tej : I thought his idealism is limited 2 his artistic world only, but now om has crossed all limits…..Without discussing me he has taken this decision…..
Swethlana : Tej, Now we have 2 do some thing big, before om could do this, we have 2 stop him……..
Tej : U are right, swethlana…..
Swethlana : Omkara, the game begins now…….[swethlana gives a daring gaze and crooked smile]
PRECAP : CIRCLES OF FATE DOESN’T STOPS HURTING ME, HOW I SHOULD FIND A WAY TO GET RID OFF THIS ???
10 Comments
Wonderful epi dr.u r saying dis is not ur best? Then imagine how will be ur best. Really dr dis is amazing. I loved dis epi.specially rikara scene.curious about d precap.plz don’t discontinue dis ff dr.dis is really gd.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi.plz post soon.hope whatever problems u hv will solved soon.god bless u dr.tc
Thanks for showering these much motivations and expectations on me …i don’t know whether i can depict things well in ff, but still am glad that i got comments where every one tells me 2 continue which means a lot 2 me….Will post next one when i will get time….Thanks a lot
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Renima Di
RuMya Scene…OmRi Scene….All Is Awesome And Heart Touching??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanks a lot uf for regularly commenting on my works
Amazing
Oh God am so glad 2 see ur comment after a long gap…thanks a lot
Awesome fabulous part?????loved it to the core…rumya and Rikara scenes was????…plz don’t discontinue this ff dear..I loved this ff.waiting for next part…
Love you ??Take care..stay safe
Thanks a lot nirha……I will continue this ff and will post next one when i feel better……thanks a lot and luv u 2
It is nice one dii… I am glad that you pen is going on…. Stay happy and blessed dii… Love you…
Thanks a lot nikki darling and yeah my pen will continue for rikara and rumya ….love u 2