DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 15 [By Renima]
Hi ishqies, so am back with a slow update, …..Sorry for not replying on ur valuable comments, due 2 workload am not getting time 2 visit tu on regular basis……And it’s been so long that I didn’t took the effort 2 update this one……Sorry guys….. This short episode is for rikara only…..Since am not getting time the episode ie damn short……. Hope u will enjoy it,guys…….Pls give ur feedbacks as comments….links for previous one is here, if u guys missed it….
Scene – 28 { @ Entrance of Sharma Nivas, Barely }
Omkara blindfolds gauri’s eyes and takes her near the gate……
Gauri : Omkaraji,where we are going ?? Say something…..
Omkara : Relax, gauri…….[om moves behind her and slowly removes the cloth piece from her eyes…….] Now u can open ur eyes, Gauri kumariSharma…..
Gauri gently opened her eyes and finds a bicycle before her…….
Omkara : So, how’s the surprise ??[ om touched her shoulder from behind]
Gauri : It’s nice……Omkaraji……[gauri makes a fake smile and turns her eyes from cycle]
Omkara : Just nice, only ??? I thought u will jump out of joy…….
Gauri : I am happy, omkaraji…….In fact this surprise was unexpected and I don’t know what 2 tell now…..
Omkara : Did I made any mistake ???
Gauri : No…Omkaraji…..U are so gud……..I am happy…..[ gauri smiles with wet eyes]
Omkara : Are u sure ?? Or just u said it for making me happy only ??
Gauri : Not @ all……I am feeling much happy 2 see this cycle…..
Omkara : U know what, gauri……It’s been so long that I went for a ride in cycle…….I have found mostly in villages people prefer cycles rather than big vehicles which makes irritating sounds in rush…..U are from this barely, a simple village where I can see a straight forward, bold and a sweet caring person whose world is not so big, but it’s broad and it’s just beautiful also…… u have faith in ur Shankar ji who is the path finder for u and makes u 2 go ahead in life……………..
U just know 2 keep loving those people who are close 2 u without keeping any sort of demands and priorities as ur heart is so pure………..[om holds gauri’s hand and lifts her chin……He finds gauri’s eyes drenched in tears ….]Gauri!!![ before om could say anything, gauri tightly hugged omkara and started weeping like a kid in his chest]
Gauri : I am sorry, omkaraji……..I told a lie before u…..I am not happy with this surprise…..
Omkara : Oh!!! So that’s why u are crying…..It’s okay….[om release gauri from his chest and touches her cheeks] This can happen…..U not need 2 cry any more……
Gauri : It’s not like that……Omkaraji…….This cycle , whenever I find cycle before me, it will make me 2 remember my paapa…….My paapa use 2 ride cycle mrng and evng when I was a kid…….He makes me 2 sit on the cycle and we use 2 travel the whole village in cycle……In fact, he drops me 2 school in this cycle only and when my classes gets over he comes and picks me…….One day I was waiting near the school for paapa’s arrival……..My eyes were on the road whether 2 see paapa ……Time went like that and I was much scared……I was just 10 yrs child only…….I was small and I was not wearing any dabbang glasses also……I folded my hands with much fear and closed my eyes…Suddenly I find some one has touched me and it was my chaacha only…….He picked my hand and took me 2 government hospital…. On the entire way, he didn’t utter a single word and even I didn’t had the guts 2 ask him any thing…… As we reached hospital, chaacha pointed out his finger 2 a bed and I saw my paapa covered in white cloth and……the broken pedal of bicycle which was drowned in blood……Doctor said that it was an accident and…….[gauri burst into tears]
Omkara : Gauri!!!! I am really sorry…….I have hurt u by making u 2 remind all those things……[om gets emotional ] I am sorry………Pls forgive me if possible…….
Gauri : Omkaraji……..U don’t need 2 do these all things……I am able 2 see ur heart’s truth in ur eyes….. That makes me 2 trust u always……And this surprise……I know u just made it 2 make me happy only, but outcome came as reverse……. I haven’t shared that how much I miss my paapa because I never get time 2 tell it 2 any one…..After paapa’s sudden death, maa was completely depressed and my chaacha and chaachi ‘s eyes was not upbringing me and taking care of maa……They were money minded and we lost our land also…….After that I never went school properly because chaachi used 2 beat me and made me 2 clean floor, wash clothes and the worst thing is they illtreated my mom also…….When I find it was beyond of my tolerance I decided 2 leave chaacha’s home with maa and one night we ran from that house……We made a small hut here which became Sharma nivas later because of my maa’s effort…… She is a trained singer and she started giving classes 2 students …….But later mom’s health condition got worse and I was forced 2 end my studies in midst of school……..I keep singing bhajans, making vastra for bagwanji and made it as my job…..Gauri kumari Sarma’s life is like that…….
Omkara : And then a looser jatadhari hippy man made an entry in her life who doesn’t knows what is right and what is wrong…….[om stares gauri with wet eyes]
Gauri : But when he filled sindoor in this mad chirayya’s maang, it made her 2 believe that now he is her world , her soul and her courage…….When he feels pain, she will also feel pain……When he will cry , gauri will also cry…….[gauri starts crying literally]
Omkara : And when he will smile…..Gauri will also smile[ om wipes out her tears and smiles with wet eyes] Won’t u ??
Gauri nods her head and smiles with wet eyes……..
Omkara : MILA THAA HUMEIN HAWA MEIN EK UDTI PHIRTI NAADAN PARINDA
JISKE PANKHUDIYON MEIN JAADU KI TAWEEZEN BAANDHKAR KISI NE BHEJA HOGA
KABHI MEETHI SI GUNGUNATI HEIN TOH KABHI KHAMOSHI MEIN HUMEIN NIHARTI HEIN
AAJ USKI MITHAS MEIN BHI EK KARAH HEIN, ANMANI MUSKAN MEIN BHI EK DARD HEIN
HUM KHUD DARD SE JUDE HEIN , AAJ PHIR EK RISHTA JODA EK DARD BHARI SAHQKS SE
ISS DARD KI DAASTAN MEIN BHI MILE HUM TUM EK DUSRE KE SAHARE KE LIYE
PARINDA TOH NAHI BAN PAWUNGA, PAR ISS PARINDE KO DIL KI GHOSLON MEIN SAMHAL LUNGA…….
Gauri : Why ??
Omkara : Because, I can’t live without u gauri …….This jatadhari hippy omkara is nothing without dabbang chirayya gauri kumari Sharma……..
Gauri : I am also incomplete without u…..omkaraji……
Omkara : Why, gauri ??
Gauri : U knows it omkaraji, because u listens what heart says…….[gauri keeps her hand n om’s chest] Now tell me what ur heart is saying…….
Omkara : WHEN U TOOK THE PAIN 2 HEAL MY PAIN, THEN WHAT I NEED EXCEPT U ONLY ??? IN DARKNESS, U CAME AS THE LIGHT AND IN MY LONLINESS U CAME AS THE SHADOW…..AND NOW I FEELS THAT U HAVE COME FOR ME ONLY……..
Precap : BEAUTY AND BITTERNESS MAY OFTEN CLASH, IT’S HARD 2 MAKE A CHOICE……BUT BE READY 2 ACCEPT WHAT LIFE HAS PLANNED……
17 Comments
Wowwww??? wht a epi.I loved it 2 d coreeee dr????? n dat shayariiiii??????? I loved it.u r an amazing writer dr.u portrayed both of their feelings beautifully?? don’t know why bt reading dis epi I feel sad☹☹ maybe it’s becoz of gauri’s past I tnk.it made me emotional? u rocked it even it was a short epi.these days even a short epi also a treat 4 us (rikara fans) missing so much them onscreen?????? tysm dr 4 dis wonderful epi.waiting 4 nxt epi.byee dr stay safe??
Oh mY God, thanks a lot dinu…U always encourages me even after bearing my ff’s faults, which means a lot….Sorry, right now am hell busy so that’s why updates are becoming damn late and episodes are short…..upto x-mas i don’t have any leave from office…..so it’s bit hard 2 give updates punctually….. I haven’t watched Ib right from last 3 weeks, so don’t know what happened 2 shivika, rikara….. Thanks a lot……..and sorry u have 2 wait
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dbo-gaurika-ff-unexpected-quest-life-part-16-renima/
And this is the link 4 next one, pls read when u gets break..will try 2 update next one by tonight or tmrw
awesome
Thanks charitha
It is awesome dii.. Lovely lines.. Happy durga puja and dusheraa dii
Thanks nikki……Same 2 u dear
Back wd bang!!!!!!…..
Amazing epi….i was waiting for it frm long tym….post nxt part soon….
Hey finally i find u chotu…….Yipee…….Just kidding only…..Oh u have 2 wait bit more dear……..am not getting time….work kills yaar……thanks a lot
Awesome…. fabulous
Thanks niriha
Renima diiii………..I’m just speechless after reading this……It’s marvellous how you beautifully you use words to portray such a lovely scenes??????…….
Your writings never fail to leave a lovely impression on my heart……..And that shayari???????
Thank you so much for this lovely update…………….Take care????
That’s really a huge compliment isha……Thanks a lot dear, shayari was just an attempt 2 show om’s actual feelings as currently in show they are not giving such kind of scenes, i guess it has become very less
awsmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.post asap
How sweeettt, sweety…..Thanks a lot
AWESOME FANTASTIC HEART TOUCHING INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Renuka Di
OmRi Convo Gauri Past Story??ShayriKara? It’s Awesome Part???
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanks a lot, uf…wow shayrikara…..He..he….. i like whenever om says shayri in Ib….recently i am finding very less scenes for his shayris….so it was just an attempt 2 highlight it……am glad u liked it….