DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 16 [By Renima]
Hello ishqies, I have come up with a bit fast but a short update as I get time now……Hope all are liking the plot of this story……..Sorry work kills and hence am not able 2 portray other characters much in recent episodes of ff……Sorry for that…….@ Shraddha, hope u are fine….wil read ur work when I will get time……Want 2 say that only 7 more episodes are awaiting after that I will end this ff……Links for previous ones if u have missed it….
Pls read all of them and kindly drop ur views if possible, probably after the likes and dislikes option , I find some are not liking my ff…….Criticisms are accepted as far as it guides a person…..So if u find any dislike, then pls express it what u are disliking, so that I will try 2 rectify mistake…….Thanks 2 Tu for providing these new option…….
Scene – 28 { @ Entrance of Sharma nivas}[continuation from last one]
Omkara : WHEN U TOOK THE PAIN 2 HEAL MY PAIN, THEN WHAT I NEED EXCEPT U ONLY ??? IN DARKNESS, U CAME AS THE LIGHT AND IN MY LONLINESS U CAME AS THE SHADOW…..AND NOW I FEELS THAT U HAVE COME FOR ME ONLY……..I WANT 2 LIE DOWN ON UR SHOULDER WHOLE NIGHT SINCE I FIND IT AS THE OPENNESS WHERE AM ABLE 2 SHATTER TEARS WITHOUT ANY FAIL…….WHEN I FINDS UR HAND ON MY CHEST,IT GIVES ME A COURAGE THAT NOTHING CAN STOP MY GAURI FOR LISTENING MY HEART BEAT……. Gauri…….[Om stares gauri with teary eyes]
Gauri : MY HEART, MY LIFE …..IT’S FOR U OMKARAJI…….. [Gauri slowly holds om’s left hand and placed it on her forehead……She started crying literally, om gently touched her cheek and lifted her chin……..]
Omkara : Gauri!!!! I can’t see u in tears, it hurts me a lot…….[Om gently wiped her tears and stares her eyes ……..]
Gauri : [breaking eyelock] Mmm…..Omkaraji……Now I can’t wait any more……
Omkara : What ?? [ Om stares gauri’s eyes keenly with excitement]
Gauri : Wooh……Wooh…….Rat has started running in my stomach…….I couldn’t control myself…… I want 2 have gol gappas soon…….[ gauri makes her face like a small kid and turns her eyes here and there]
Omkara stares gauri’s face and laughs……
Gauri : Omkaraji……U are laughing, am telling the truth only…….I feel hungry……..
Omkara : [slowly touches her cheek] Gauri u are just incredible……. So sweet……. [Gauri stares om’s face and smiles……]
Gauri : Shall we move ??
Omkara : Yeah…… [Om lifts gauri in his arms……Gauri gets surprised as it happened all of a sudden…..] Let’s go…..
Gauri : Omkaraji!!! ! Are u mad ?? We will go like these ??
Omkara : Of course, gauri…….Do u have any problem ??
Gauri : Omkaraji…….Gol gappa waale chaacha’s stall is on next street…….Pls omkaraji……Just look urself, u don’t have any muscles like salman khan……How long u will keep me like these in ur arms ??
Omkara : Until I believe that I can breath, U will stay in arms like these……..And I know my breath will never go when u are with me……
Gauri : Why ??
Omkara : Because u are my trust who made me 2 believe in life and I know u will never allow me 2 get down ……..
Gauri : Omkaraji, I can face anything now because u are with me…….I am not bothered abt pain because u are with me 2 give a shoulder for me…… U are my strength , my world and my soul……. When I find myself in ur arms, it is making 2 feel that this is the moment of truth which is purely divine……..This is so special 2 me……..Omkaraji…… I JUST WANT TO LIVE WITH U FOREVER LIKE THESE…….[Gauri Stares Om with teary eyes……Om slowly kisses on her forehead………Gauri feels heavenly….]
BGM……” Baadalin mein gul naa jaaye yeh jo lamhein tehare-tehare
Do dilon mein jazb kar le, saare jazbein gehare gehare
Kal kyaa pata mile naa mile nazdeeqiyaan …..oh saathiya….. “plays……..
Scene – 29 { @ Oberoi Mansion, Rumya room}
Sowmya : Where this rudy has gone ?? He is not picking my calls…….I think I have 2 ask chubby….[sowmya makes a phone call 2 chubby]
Chubby : U don’t know it, sowmya ?? Rudy has gone for wrestling……He will reach home by 10 or 15 mnts
Sowmya ; What ?? He didn’t said anything 2 me, chubby…….
Chubby : He told that he have 2 win these competition @ any cost…….. Because he need money……..
Sowmya : Money,but why ??
Chubby : I don’t know sowmya……Better u ask him directly…..Sorry, but I have some work…..
Sowmya : Okay…..I will call u later….Bye……
Somwya cuts the call and finds rudy standing near the door……He was much tired and was finding hard 2 walk…..Sowmya rushed beside him and placed his hand on her shoulder…..Later she made rudy 2 sat on the bed……..Sowmya finds rudy’s leg got injured…… Rudy was staring her without saying anything….. She picks the first aid box and applies medicine on rudy’s wound…….
Rudy : Aah!!!! Sumo….[rudy screams in pain]
Sowmya : Duffer, Now u are becoming cry baby……Before going wrestling u didn’t thought of this ??
Rudy : Who told u abt this ?
Sowmya ; Chubby, who else ??
Rudy : I am sorry, sumo……
Sowmya : Why u did it, rudra ??
Rudy : I did it for this…..[rudy slowly takes a small box from his pant’s pocket…..] This is for u……sumo….
Sowmya takes the box and opens it….She finds a pretty finger ring on it……Rumya stare each other’s eyes…
Rudy : Wooh……Sowmya u are my wife and as a husband I haven’t did anything for u…… Earlier I use 2 ask shivay bhaiya for pocket money……But now I felt it is not right…… Because I am married now and I have 2 be responsible and I thought 2 gift something 2 u with my own money……. That’s why I went for wrestling……And u know what I became the winner because my whole heart was just focused 2 bring a smile on ur face……….[rudy finds sumo’s eyes wet in tears] What happened, u didn’t liked it ?? I know it’s not a diamond ring ,but I have tried yaar……
Sowmya : Rudra…..This is so precious because it’s given by u…….[sowmya holds rudy’s hand and touches his palm….She finds his injured hand….sowmya stares it with teary eyes and her tears fells on rudy’s palm]
Rudra : I won’t felt that much sad when I fell down on floor…..But now seeing tears in ur eyes is making me 2 feel much sad……. [rudy stares sumo with wet eyes]
Sowmya quickly hugs rudy and starts crying……….Rudy gently waved his hand on her back……
Rudra : Sumo…….Pls don’t cry…..Ur husband is a body builder, nothing will happen 2 him……Okay ??[ sumo releases herself from hug and stares rudy] Be a gud girl and smile…….Else I will ….I will not talk 2 u…….
Sowmya rubs her tears and kisses on rudy’s left cheek…….Rudy stares her with surprising eyes……Rudra, u are so cute…….[ Sowmya gets up from the bed 2 turn,but soon rudy holds her hand and pushed her 2 himself…..]
Rudra : So u are planning 2 leave ur cute husband , won’t u ??
Sowmya : Wooh, wooh……..[sumo tries 2 release herself from rudy’s arms, rumya share a romantic eye lock]
BGM…..” Humko humise chura lo, dil mein kahin tum chhupa lo
Hum akele kho naa jaaye, door tumse ho naa jaaye
Paas aao gale se lagaa lo…..” [film- mohabattein] plays……
Scene – 30 { @ Streets, Barely }
Om buys gol gappa for gauri…….Gauri starts having them with much fun……After that om makes gauri 2 wear goggles and handovers a packet of candy……She shows her style by throwing one of them on air and having it in mouth by making a jump……Om smiles seeing gauri with much enthusiasm …….
Gauri : Omkaraji…U also try these…..[gauri holds om’s hand ]
Omkara : Gauri, I can’t do these kind of things…..
Gauri : Omkaraji…….It’s so simple…..Pljjjj……Pljj….
Omkara : Okay, I will try once, if it fails don’t ask me 2 do it again…..
Gauri : Ji…..All the best, omkaraji……
[Omkara throws one candy on air and quickly catches it with his mouth ……Gauri gives a big clap for omkara …….] See , I told u omkaraji, u can do it…….
Omkara : Gauri, Today u have also made me 2 feel much special……It’s really sweet just like u……[Om holds gauri’s hand……Rikara stare each other’s eyes……Gauri shyly bows her face down because she was not able 2 stare om’s sparkling eyes…….Om slowly lifts her chin and stares her eyes…….He slowly passed his fingers through the scattered hair which was fallen on her cheeks ……]
Gauri : Omkaraji!!!!
Omkara : Sh!!!!! [om keeps his finger on gauri’s lips and stares her….
“ DEKHNE THE HUMEIN AAJ INHEEN AANKHON KI ASHKON PAR
IJAZAT DE HUMEIN TERI DIL KI DHADKANON MEIN SAANS LENE KI
MUSEEBATON KE PAHADON KO, DARD KE TEERON KO AUR ZAKHM KE NISHAANON KO
ALWIDA KEHNA BHALE HI MUSHKIL HEIN, TERE –MERE SAATH UNHEIN PAAR KARENGE
AAJ MEHASUS KAR NE DE USS JAZB KO JOH INN KHAMOSHIYON MEIN KAHIN CHIPA HEIN”…… ..
I……Really…….Love U a Lot,Gauri……I Love U…….[ Rikara share an emotional eyelock]
BGM…… “Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo
Roshini Se Noor Ke
Sharma Gai To
Aagosh Mein Lo
Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi
Rahi Meri Saasein
Bol naa halke….bol naa halke…hoth se halke…..[film –jhoom barabar jhoom]plays
PRECAP : SOME EXPECTATIONS OFTEN COMES AS UNEXPECTATIONS …..SOME UNEXPECATIONS HURTS EXPECTATIONS ALSO……SO HOW COULD ONE CAN MOVE IN QUEST ?
22 Comments
awesome
Thanks a lot charitha
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT ROMANTIC SUPERB ???????????????
Dear Renima Di
OmRi Conv Moments??? Om Shayari And Love Confession?? RuMya Conv And Moment?? It’s Awesome Part??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanks a lot for emoji comment,uf
Fabulous
Thank u
Awesome update di just loved rikara scene finally so cute rumya scene post ASAP waiting
Oh My Maata, I feel so nice 2 see u tharu in my ff…Will post next one when i gets time dear….thanks a lot
Hi Di,I ?? this…..
The main thing is you’ve used my favorite song bol Na halke, I was hearing that song just now….
I really loved this part… Please do pm the link for upcoming episodes too Di….
? You?
Thanks a lot shraddha will pm links when i will get time 2 give update……luv u 2 dear
Blush blush????????????….i m literally in my dream world….amazing chappy…short n sweet.. ..nd thank u so much for posting this one in spite of ur hectic schedule….i m thankfull to u diii.. ..waitingbfor nxt part eagerly…..if possible post soon…lots of love…????
Finally, find my chotu here……BLUSHY BABY….I really want 2 see these kind of a scene in IB… Don’t know why they are dragging rikara track…….Thanks a lot for commenting dear
Hii di …. how are u….. I am really happy that u posted this chapter….. was badly missing RiKara scenes like this….
This was such a sweet episode…..
Also I am sorry for not reply to ur previous comment…..
I know that I am can’t comment regularly on ur FF… but I do read…. and Just love it…. Also this is the most loved FF by me from u …. All ur FF are just wonderful….. SPECIALLY THE DIALOUGES… THEY ARE JUST WOW …. MINDBLOWING….
TAKE CARE ….. DO VISIT TU WHEN U ARE FREE….
#KEEP WRITING …..
#LOADS OF LOVE……..
Awww…..I am gud dear, just busy with work and sucked with certain issues only…..Hey no need 2 say sorry 2 me dear,see even am not a regular updater and comer here , so no need of any apology and all….. Thanks for giving such a lovely compliment , am glad that u like dialogues which means a lot…….Will visit IB WU when i will get time, recently am not getting time 2 watch ib and am not following show on hotstar also, because i felt the track is fitting for shivika only, others are totally sidelined , also not able 2 see any new villains in IB….
It is lovely dii… Loveeee you…. Lines are superb… Made me crazy…… Stay happy and blessed
Thanks a lot nikki darling
Awesome fabulous?????loved it to the core waiting for next
Love you??Take care and stay safe
Thanks a lot niriha
Wow wow wowwwww.. how did I miss such wonderful epis. Its really great my dr.. I regret for not being able to find this on time.. I.love this growing love between Rikara and this Omkara is soooo sweet and I love him to the core loved it amd love u too.. come back with another great work ASAP
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dbo-gaurika-ff-unexpected-quest-life-part-17-renima/
I have updated it, its bit short still hope u will likeit…thanks a lot
I loved it!!!! That’s all i can say….awesome di….keep going……
Thanks a lot yashu