DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 3 [By Renima]
Hello dil-e-ishqies…… Sorry for updating too late……Am busy with hectic workload and also facing certain complications in life and I was not able 2 update this one in time…..Pls forgive me…..guys…. shraddha.,….sorry for making 2 late….as this one is exclusively written for u and I have 2 appologoize u specially…..Pls forgive ur di for this short update…..And readers….kindly read this one and express ur views on it……links 4 previous ones are here :
Scene – 2 [@ Omkara’s room] [continuation from last part]
Omkara slowly released his hand from gauri’s mouth and stared her for a while…..Gauri’s heart was beating fast……
Omkara : Gauri……go and sleep……
Gauri : But….omkara ji…..
Omkara : [interrupts] I am telling u 2 go and sleep ……I can’t argue with u whole night,…..Do u get it ? [omkara pointed out his finger towards her]
Gauri simply shook her head and stared omkara….She felt omkara’s words as sweet caring command only and without any offense she moved towards the bed…….
Omkara : One minute!!! How can we sleep …..i mean…..In bed…..
Gauri : I have an idea…..
Omkara : What ??
Gauri : Just wait….omkara ji….[gauri placed some pillows in the midst of bed one by one and stared omkara] Now…u can sleep here and I will sleep there……
Omkara : U mean this pillows will remain as the …..the…..
Gauri : Laxman Rekha…….
Omkara : Laxman rekha!!!
Gauri : Omkaraji…just like in ramayan laxman ji told siyaa mayaa 2….
Omkara : {interrupts} I got it……gauri……Pls shall we…..sleep ?
Gauri : Yes….
Gaurika lie down on respective places and stare each other……
Gauri : Omkaraji!!!
Omkara : What ??
Gauri : Gud night…..[gauri gives a pleasant smile]
Omkara : Gud night……[omkara turned his face against gauri and close his eyes…..gauri smiles with wet eyes only and closed her eyes]
{Omkara was not able 2 sleep well…..Ishana’s thought were revolving in his mind only. He stood up from the bed and opened the draw of his table and took ishana’s anklet…..Gauri was just pretending a sleep only, she stared omkara with wet eyes…..Omkara keeps the anklet in his shirt’s pocket and leaves the room…..Without making noise, gauri also silently walked behind omkara}
Scene – 3 { @ Tejvi’s room}
Tej : I don’t understand what’s wrong with omkara, he behaves too weird only…..
Jhanvi : Tej, pls give some time for omkara……Whatever occurred in his life, he is ……
Tej : [interrupts] Enough, jhanvi…..Am just fed up with this word “time”. Ur son has become a burden for me……He is good for nothing
Jhanvi : Tej, omkara is our son……How can u blame our own son like these ?
Tej : Am not blaming omkara, am just telling the fact only……My two sons omkara and rudra both are irresponsible….And all these happened because of u only, jhanvi……The mother who has 2 hold her children in her arms right from childhood has kept the bottles of whisky only, then how can I expect my children 2 be fair with me ? Just like mother , her sons are addicted, one is addicted 2 drugs and other one is addicted 2 flirt with girls only…..They are simply wasting their life and time…..Especially omkara has become completely a looser…..only……
Jhanvi : Tej!!! [shocked] U don’t have any rights 2 blame om and rudra…..Before firing them just look @ urself……Don’t u feel shame 2 keep an affair with swethlana ?
Tej : Jhanvi….u are crossing limits……
Jhanvi : No tej, it’s not me….but u have crossed all limits……If omkara became a drug addict, it’s because of u and me only…….Especially u tej…Have u ever spoke 2 him properly ? Have u ever hugged ur son ? Have u ever blessed him ? Have u ever called him as ‘beta’ ? For rudra and prinku when they were born shivaay and om became almost big…..Shivaay took care off them…..Om was living in his own world only….A world of colors, a world of brushes only….. He witnessed big fights between u and me……He witnessed his father as a man who use 2 involve in business dealings, who knows 2 betray and who keeps 2 discriminate his own son with shivaay only…..For om shivaay stood as the great wall….If he wouldn’t have supported our om then we would have almost lost him…….My son has sung the agony of pain only…… When ishana came 2 his life, I saw my son has started enjoying the small happiness of life, but before he could confess it, he lost ishana also…..And u tej……still u have not changed….. U used 2 hurt ur beloved one’s feelings, u never miss a chance 2 humiliate me and that swethalana…..In ur life, her place is not less than that of a pr*stitute ……
Tej : Jhanvi !!! [tej raised his hand 2 slap jhanvi, but before that some one stopped him by holding his hand]
[ Tejvi are shocked 2 see as it was none other than Omkara……..Gauri also came behind omkara and gets shocked ……She stood outside in a corner of the room …..]
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi !!! How dare u raised hand on my mom ???
Tej : Jhanvi ur son doesn’t have any manners……When a husband and w
zife are in personal talk, u are not supposed 2 enter in between us….
Omkara : As a son my eyes are always on my mom only……By telling ur mistake as a personal matter, u can’t justify ur deed…….A man who raise his hands 2 slap his wife shows how much he is weak only…….He don’t have the courage 2 face bitter truth, all ur sins will tell u how much u have degraded yourself only…..Mark my words Mr. Oberoi…..One day u will feel regret for ur sins….That day u will be alone only…….No body will be with you…..And from now onwards u will not stay in this room……
Jhanvi : Om, what are u telling…..Om please ……leave tej’s hand……Pls….{omkara releases tej’s hand}
Tej : Disgusting!!! now omkara will tell me where I have 2 sleep, where I have 2 go……U are forgetting the fact this is my home…..Omkara!!!
Omkara : U have prblms with my mom , then why are u staying with her in the same room only……Go and sleep with ur fiancee cum future wife swethlana…..
Jhanvi : Omkara!!! [jhanvi pressed omkara’s shirt’s collar and stared him ]
Gauri finds the matter is getting serious, all of a sudden she rushed 2 the room and stood near omkara……
Gauri : Omkaraji….pls…..lets go…….Maaji…..sorry ……whatever….
[Jhanvi get back in normal after a while and she released her hands from omkara’s shirt]
Jhanvi : Gauri…..beta….pls take omkara from here…..pls…..
Tej : I can’t tolerate all these drama…….{tej leaves the room in anger}
Jhanvi : Pls gauri, omkara….u guys go and sleep……Pls for some time leave me alone……
Omkara : Mom!!!!
Jhanvi : Leave rightnow…..omkara……
[Omkara hugs jhanvi tightly and gets emotional]
Omkara : I can’t see u like these……Mom…..It hurts me……
Jhanvi also gets emotional…..She released omkara from her arms and kisses on his forehead…
Jhanvi : I am used with these things…..Omkara…….Before I could break down in tears, pls leave me alone…….
Omkara : But mom…..
Jhanvi : Gauri…..pls convince om and take him…..Pls…..
Gauri : Ji maaji….Omkaraji……{ gauri hold omkara’s hand}
Omkara : Mom…….
Jhanvi : I said…..Leave…..right now……[jahnvi turned her face against omkara]
Gauri : Chaliye……[omkara stared gauri with teary eyes]
{Gaurika left the spot……When they left jahnvi bend @ her own knees and burst into tears}
Scene shifts 2 omkara’s room……
Omkara and gauri are sitting in bed….Both of them are feeling sad for jhanvi…..
Omkara : Gauri…..u just sleep….I have 2 leave…..
Gauri : But, where are u going ? It’s late night and…..
Omkara : It’s none of ur business….
Gauri : I know omkaraji….u are upset with whatever occurred ……But keep trust in god……Everything will be alright…..
Omkara : Really…..U think god has power, then why god is not able 2 kick out swethlana from Mr.Oberoi’s life……Why god is not ready 2 fullfil my mom’s desires, why he brought ishana in my life and why he took her from me ? If he is really powerful, then tell him 2 bring back my ishana……Will he do it ??
Gauri remains silent for a while……
Omkara : What happened, gauri…….U keeps 2 talk always, gives lectures about devotion, trust and all……Now u don’t have any explanation 2 give ?? Before life’s reality, we are nothing……gauri……Nothing……But am not ready 2 break myself because I can bear biggest pain for my maa and brothers, but can’t see them in pain…..But things are not in my hand…. When ishana was breathing her last breath, her hand was on my hand she told me that “I trust u omkara”,but unfortunately I couldn’t saved her in time.…….[omkara literally cries] U know gauri…..whenever I finds anklet of ishana …..{om takes ishana’s anklet form his pocket} I believe that she is with me and it gives me a blind hope and…….{gauri sits close 2 omkara and placed her hand on his shoulder}
Gauri : Omkaraji!!!!
[Om stared gauri’s eyes for a second and hugged her and burst into tears. Gauri waved her hands through omkara’s body…Omkara’s tears made gauri’s eyes also 2 drench in tears only]
BGM…….” Pal Bhar Thahar Jaao Dil Ye Sambhal Jaaye
Kaise Tumhe Roka Karun Meri Taraf Aata Har
Gham Phisal Jaaye
Aankhon Mein Tum Ko Bharun
Bin Bole Baatein Tumse Karun
‘Agar Tum Saath Ho……” [Agar Tum Saath Ho- movie-tamasha] plays…….
PRECAP : In the journey of life, we met certain people……some are close 2 our heart, some stay as beloved ones, some stay as well wishers, some will just look us only……The journey couldn’t be stopped in any station, as life has 2 move on…..
23 Comments
Who is actually the partner of Omkara in this drama?
Roshni….Gauri is omkara’s wife and she is his partner….Ishana is actually omkara’s past and she is dead….Omkara is not able 2 forget ishana and still living with a depressed heart due 2 ishana’s unexpected death and other prblms in between his parents……How gauri will console om and how she will stand with him and will omkara fall in love with gauri…….this is the theme and in upcoming episodes u can find it…..dear……Thanks for commenting
Thanks reni. But is that the plot of your story or the actual drama? I wanted to know his partner in dil bole oberoi and ishqbaaz?
This is the plot of my story only…..In serial dbo only gauri is the partner of omkara….. before 6 months in ib the cv’s show ishkara track and it ended so soon without any notification and the actress who played the role of ishana was vrushika mehta , she quit the show because of certain reasons……So currrently in ib there is no ishkara track which is for shivika only and dbo is focused on omkara’s story only…..and his love interest is gauri….
I brought ishu in my ff because being an ishkara fan i am unable 2 relate myself with the unexpected end of ishkara……But i love gaurika also …..so i just focussed on gaurika but also giving space 2 ishana in this part and that’s what i told u in comment……Hope now it’s clear 4 u…..
It is awesome dii…. Rikara conversation is heart touching..
Thank u nikita
Thanks a lot for this emotional post, I had been waiting for your post since your last update.
You don’t have to say sorry di, excitement of waiting is also enjoyable.
Anyways thank you for remembering me in your every post??
Shraddha…thanks a lot…hope u liked it…..actually it was really hard 4 me 2 write something because of certain things……hope u understand my view….that’s why the update was 2 short yaa…next episode i will show some scenes of gaurika and will try 2 write and update as early as possible….Thanks a lot ……
HEART TOUCHING AWESOME MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
Uf…..thank u so much…….
Nice emotional episode
Thanks a lot rasika
Emotional epi…??…amazing..post nxt part asap..
Thank u saku ….and don’t be a cry baby ok……
Superrrrrrrrrrr didi… I loved it…. Sry for late comments….
Arrey no need 2 say sorry…….actually i have 2 say sorry because am not regularly following ur ff due 2 work load and lack of time……Thanks 4 commenting
No problem didi…. When u get time u can read it and also commented it didi….
Loved it diiii ??…I didn’t knew till nw u were writing an ff on gaurika….tysm 4 sending me the link….it was really fab…n ya u added ishana looks lyk sum1 is a die hard ishkara lover…it stole my heart yaar….
Yashu,…u asked me abt links…..that’s why i send it…..so right now u can read three articles from me, rumyaand ishkara ff, passion ff and this gaurika ff……And true being an ishkara fan whatever i will write certainly ishana will come on it…..Thanks
Very nice
Thanks yaara
Hey..it’s awesome..can u add the past story of ishkara like how they met n how she died.?!
Haa…..of course i will show ishkara story……it will take time…..so have patience…..and certainly without ishkara past the story will not move,….thanks 4 commenting