Hello kanchians, here i m with teaser of new story.thanx for ur likes and comments on my previous os..i m not giving character sketch,as u will know it in entire story.
Kabir was watching at her murmuring to herself since 1 hour and now he was highly fed up.
“Come on ,speak up now!” He said seeping his black tea.
“I have blood cancer!!” She said passing him the reports.
“Its fake!find another reason” he said giving it back to her!!
“urhhhh,i dont want to marry u!” She said with disgust.
“But i NEED to u marry” he said calmly.
“But i love ur brother,did u get that??” She said furiously.
” he is already married to someone else,sanchi” he passed popcorns to her.
She throw it back on him furiously.
“Tum mar q nahi jaate????” She said with rage.
“Mar jaaunga!pehle tum to jinda ho jao!” He said looking straight into her hazel brown orbs.
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“Veer,pls. U cant do this to me .pls” she cried her heart out in bathroom!!
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“I will take care of u with whole of my heart!” Kabir promised her while doing seventh phera with her..
“And i will ruin u like nothing!!!” She was determined.!!
And he filled her partings with vermilion powder!!
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So pls tell me to continue or not!!! I will post 1st part after a week when my exam will end!!
9 Comments
Wow yaar amazing…please continue kar…me khup eager hot aahe hey vaachnya sathi…..loved the story a lot ani papers sathi all the best….sorry os la comment kele nahi pan os khup hatke hota yaar….khup mast…serial madhe pan ashich story asli asti tar me tar havyathch udale aste!!! Pan me zingaat sathi pan vaat bhagat aahe….
amazing….all the best for ur exams
Different yaar
Eagely waiting for part one dear
Really amazing dear hope ur exams go well and my best wishes r always with u
superb teaser update next one soon and all the best for exam but i’m sorry in advance because i was not able to comment on your ff because on 2/11/2017 my will start and end will after 20/12/2017 so i was not able to comment on any ff/os/fs so sorry for that……….i hope you and other writer will understand me……………..love you………tc…………..keep writing……………..bye………………
Very different concept shivi….hope u don’t mind if I call u shivi….Looking forward….eagerly waiting for next part….do uodate soon…lots of love & a very big hug from ur friend…
Wow wow wow shivanii this is an amazing mindblowing outstanding teaser.. totally different story plot…. Plzz start it soon after ur exams … All the best for ur exams.. Bye tc gud ni8
WOW yaar………too good………of course tujhe ye likhna hai……but, after ur exams….ache se apna paper likh, phir exams khatam hone par, without any delay, jaldi se post karna…ok…..luv u dear……gud nt….tc…….
Amazing