Fan Fiction

“A Deal!!!” TwiNj SS (Shot 3) ~By Tamanna

Hi friends! Thank you so much for ur comments! I really love you guys alot. And sorry sorry sorry sorry really sorry,guys! I was quite busy so couldn’t post this epi and even I m loosing interest in writing so I need ur support. Plz do comment.

IMPORTANT: And aajkal TU pe ffs bohot kam post horahein hain. 1 or 2 per day! Pehle tho 6 ya 7 tho hothe hi the! Dekho friends agar aisa hi chaltha raha na tho ek din Twinj ke ffs khatam ho jaayien ge. Jo mai bilkul bi nahi chahthi, I guess koi nahi,chahtha kyunke hum Ffs ke dwara twinj ko dekh sakthe hain aur I can’t imagine my life without Twinj stories isliye pls friends plz do comment and encourage a writer bcuz bohot se writers comments kam milne ke kaaran ff likhna chod diye hain!

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PREVIOUS OS: Happy ending

Jiya_Ani: I m sorry ke tujhe accha nahi laga! And I m glad ke tune sach kaha kyunke mujhe bhi yeh story utna khass pasand nahi aaya! Lekin haan to be frank thoda hurt thi I mean pehla comment hi negative mila tho dusre kya kahenge but dusron ke comment ne fir se happy kar diya!

Ramya: Haha yaar! When I read ur comment I was laughing like hell. Tune sacchi kaha ke iss baar maine rulane wali aur one sided love wali kahani nahi likhi (isliye mujhe wo khaas pasand nahi thi! Hehe!) But ur comment made me really happy.

Jisha: Jisha di welcome back di. U know after seeing ur comment I was like yippee my di is back:-) I m so happy!
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Note: Thank you for commenting and Sorry for posting late.

LINK:
Prologue: http://www.tellyupdates.com/deal-twinj-ss-tamanna-intro/
Shot 1: http://www.tellyupdates.com/deal-twinj-ss-shot-1-tamanna/
Shot 2: http://www.tellyupdates.com/deal-twinj-ss-shot-2-tamanna/

Disclaimer: This article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and I unknowingly do so I sincerely apologize! No proof reading! Ignore mistakes.

Lets Begin!

Flashback continues:

“U need to make her fall in love. She doesn’t trust a person easily, so first u need to be her friend, gain her trust and then make her fall for you! Go meet her now! She must be in her NGO or in a cafe where she works” This sentence kept ringing as soon as Kunj reached his destination, a “Hill_Top” cafe, where Twinkle works. He had already visited the NGO but he couldn’t find her there so here he is, in front of “Hill_Top” cafe.

Before Kunj could enter the cafe, He hears a girly voice singing beautifully. He stands there listening to the sweet voice. He was mesmerized by that voice. Moving In, he looks towards the owner of that sweet voice. He was Lost. Lost in the beauty of the girl standing before. “Beautiful” he heard his heart singing. “She is the same, The Blind Girl, Twinkle”, His Brain said bringing him back to senses. “Twinkle…hmmn… Just like her eyes!” His heart said still lost. “God why did u do injustice with this beauty!” He became sad thinking this. The song had stopped by now. Only his heart was singing. Hehe. Kunj comes in his senses and sits on a chair. “Anything sir?” The same sweet voice asked him flashing her 440 volt smile. He again looked at her, lost. “No.. No… I mean yeah! A cup of cappuccino with marshmallow cream… And another cup of anything u prefer ” he utters. “Sir another, A latte! Actually its my favorite!” She chirps. He smiles saying “yeah that would be best!”. She flashes a big smile before leaving to the kitchen. He was waiting impatiently for her.

“Here is your cappuccino and latte, sir” Twinkle said keeping the cappuccino and latte on the Table. She was about to go when kunj held her wrist. Twinkle surprised, turns and asks, “sir? Anything else?”. Kunj nodes in yes and replies, ” Yes! You!”.
“Ummm… How do know my name is Twinkle?”
” ummm…,your… your… Your name plate!” He said stammering pointing Towards the Name plate written ‘Twinkle Taneja!’ Pinned on her left.
“Oh okay!” Twinkle says smiling satisfied by the Answer.
“Okay so where were we? Yeah! So I want you Miss. Twinkle! I wanna date you!” Kunj says looking here and there.
“Every boy says that but they back off when they get to know my Reality! And same goes to you Mr. Kunj, you wouldn’t like to date after hearing my Reality! And that reality is I m blind! I can’t see! And you cannot date a blind girl!” Says Twinkle smiles, hiding her pain. Saying that she releases her wrist from his grip. Even kunj felt bad for her! “But Twinkle, what if I say I would love you the way u are!” Says Kunj again grabbing her wrist and making her sit on the chair, infront of him.
“Say directly what you want, Body or money!” Says Twinkle.
“Why do u think so that I want money or body!” Said kunj looking here and there, thinking, what if his lie got caught!
“Because anyone who is ready to accept a blind girl must be because of my body or money!”
” Twinkle don’t think I m of that type! I want you because of ur heart not bcuz of ur Money or body!” Says Kunj getting up from his seat and cupping her face. Even he was guilty but he was helpless.
“And tell me at least one reason that I should believe you!” Said Twinkle making kunj tensed. Kunj looks here and there thinking what should be done to make her believe him! He grabs her hand and makes it keep upon his chest where the heart is placed. Twinkle could feel his heart beating really fast. Listening that Twinkle’s heart skips a beat. Tears form in her eyes but she wipes it before anyone could notice. And about Kunj, The heartbeat thing was not his plan. It was beating like that since he have seen her. Reason? He himself didn’t know why!
“Okay, lets have A deal! I’ll be with you for one month! You have to make me fall for you in this period of time! If u fail in it then you should forget me! Deal?” Says Twinkle forwarding her hand.
“Deal!” Says Kunj shaking hands with Twinkle.
“Now lets start our this new relationship with a cappuccino and a latte. Hehe!”
“Hehe. Means this latte was for me from the beginning!” Twinkle asks with questioning face.
“Hehe! Yeah!” Kunj said rubbing back of his head.
“Awww… You are so cute!” Says Twinkle pulling his cheeks. She realizes what she did and blushes. Kunj looks at her and both share a sweet and cute eye lock!

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How is it? Okay so let me clear you all one thing, that is: Kunj was acting but when he made Twinkle listen his heartbeat, that was true! His heart was beating really fast since he saw her.

Drop ur comments whether positive or negative. Suggestions are always welcomed. Any confusion do ask me! Ignore mistakes!

See you!

With love,
Urs Tamanna

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