So guys atlast chapter 1
Episode 1- the misunderstanding
A- listen to me shivaye.. plz for once. I haven’t done anything. Plz trust me.
S- smirks- Anika you proved me wrong today. I thought you always wanted my good but today u finished it all.
A- shi…
P- OH MY MATA.. sharam ni aati. U are speaking lies.. get outs.
O- BHABHI how could you do this? U shouldn’t do this..
Anika glared at o and he realized what he was saying..
O- I mean.. how can u push choti maa frm stairs? Why do u wanna kill her?
A- yes I want to kill her so that shivaye is only mine. I want his whole property. I just want everything.
S- Anika I never thought u would fall this low..
R- I hate you bh.. Anika. I hate u.
Just get out of my house and never come back.
Rudy pushes Anika out.
Anika walks aimlessly on the road while a car arrived..
A- u?
Man- yeah sweetheart me. Sit in the car fast.
Anika sat in the car and they drove off.
@OM
Shivika’s room
Shivaye pov
Why u did this Anika? U wanted money u could have told me. Why did u play with my feelings? Why? Don’t u luv me Anika? Today I was gonna propose u but u . U ruined it all.. I can’t hate u Anika but I can’t luv u too.
He hit his hand on the glass table and roared ANIKAAA!!
Rudy came to his room
R- bhaiyya y r u even remembering that evil money digger? Move on!
And rudy does his first aid.
R- Bhaiyya she wanted that u should fall weak so she did this and now if u fall weak she will be successful u shouldn’t let that happen. Jusy move on.
S- yeah I should move on. I Will move on. Even I’ll show her I am shivaye singh oberoi. Not any chui mui types girl
R- chui mui??
Shivaye remembered his and Anika moments.. nothing. Just wait Anika I’ll show u now??
He does his signature step.
Anika is taken to a huge mansion.
The man pulls her out of the car.
He drags her into the hall.
Man- baby! Get ready for tonight so just don’t work a lot and have enough food. Today u’ll feel me in you!!
A- u!!! Control ur tongue.. I am only and only his. I will never be URS. Get that into ur head u dumbass.
M- ohh poor baby!! But u have to pay for ur husband’s and brother in law’s deeds..
He takes her into a room..
M- stay here and don’t try to escape remember I’ll ruin the oberois.
He leaves.
Anika starts crying.
Anika pov
I am sorry shivaye I can’t tell u anything. I am really sry. I just wish u don’t hate me shivaye but plz take care of yourself..
I love you shivaye I luv u sooo much. I’ll be back soon..
@night
@dk mansion( the mansion where anika is being forced to stay)
The man enters the room with a glass of hot milk. Anika sees him And starts shivering
M- baby!! Milk for you..
Anika was hungry so she just forwarded her hand to take themilk but alas.. splash.. the man threw the milk on anikas body.
M- aww my baby!!
Anika shouts in pain!!
A- ahh!!
M- aww my baby. Did it hurt? Aww… U look so hot while u r hurt. I think I should hurt u more often.
A- u will pay for it.shivaaye won’t leave u when he gets to know.
M- heyy u.. u b*t*h stop it. And yeah u r only mine. Not anyone else. Remember that.
A- shouted on top of her lungs- I am mrs.anika Shivaye Singh oberoi. Dare u touch me. I’ll scare the shit out of u.
Seeing this the man was scared and shocked so he left the room and handcuffed Anika.
After he left another guy came into the room..
Man2- Anika!!
A- u!!
And they hugged each other while anika started sobbing clenching him and he calmed her..
Sorry for a short update..
Till that guess both the guys??
And comment and vote plzzzz..
And yeah tell me that shall i post this weekly or on alternate days.
Cuz on alternate days u will get short chapters and if weekly ull get one long chappie.
So do tell me
22 Comments
hey dear
u know as I read the title i remembered a carol we used to sing in primary
“Deep in my heart , I do believe we shall overcome some day”
U know till now I was crying after reading a painful ff
but ur ff made me remember the song and yes my smile also came back
anyways it was awesome
I am still singing
“We shall overcome, we shall overcome , we shall overcome someday”
It was my fav. song from my melody book
Ohhh m really happy that my ff made u smile??. Keep commenting ??
Superb update
Thanks
Whoa suspence in first chappy itself… do post alternate days…. it was amazing… post nxt asap…. looking forward to it… n nyc plot
Thanksa lot dear?? ill look forward towards posting
Fantastic
Thank you so much ?????
It is awesome
Thanks a lot ????
AWESOME INTERSTING NICE SUPERB ??????
Dear Silverfish
Main Iss FF Ka Character Sketch Read Karke Bahuth Happy Tha.But Ab Ye Part Read Kiya Tho Main Bahuth Sad Ho Gayi.I Really Don’t Like Rudy Behave For Anika.Wo Tho Ek Best Devar Tha.So Please Jaldhi Se Rudy Ko Anika Ki Sacrifice Ki Baare Main Patha Lagne Dho.Aur Wo Anika Ko Aise Hate Karthe Hua Bad Baath Bolthe Hua Bilkul Acha Nahi Lag Raha.Pinky Tho Okay.Waise Bhi Usko Serial Pe Aise Dekh Kar Habbit Hua.But Please Change Rudy Bad Behave For Anika.
Take Care And Stay Safe ?
Thanks a lot dear ur comment made my day really ??? see ya.. and tc
Awesome yaar…
Thanks yrr
Awesome Intersting start dr……
Pinky positive here bt u made rudy against anika…..
Thank you so much..yeah for now rudy hates her.. but stay tuned kya pta kya hojaye?
Its awesome…really looking forward??..plz post soon…
Yeahh sure I’ll post ittoday… And thank for commenting.. hope u keep liking my ff??
who is that man2. please post soon. its realy realy awesome
I’ll update by today.. till that keep guessing
Nice one…post on ur convenience…
Thanks..
Ill update as I get time.. but thenext one is today ??