DEEP LOVE- a swaragini ff

Guys I am writing a small ff.pls comment positive or negative.

Scene 1
Raglak arrange candle light dinner for swasan.Swasan come there and swara asks if arrangements are done by him. Sanskar says yes. Swara says I hate lies.Sanskar says ok baba Raglak have done it.

Swara says really, wow and dances here and there. She is about to fall when Sanskar catches her. He caress her hair.Swara get shy and leaves his hand.

Scene 2
Ragini says Swasan must be enjoying their candle light dinner.Laksh says we can also enjoy our romance here.Ragini says oh is it and runs. Laksh follows and catches her. Ragini says that they will enjoy their romance some other day.
Swasan enjoy their candle light dinner. Swasan feed each.they dance on song mohabbat barsa dena tu sawan aaya…
They finally come home. Swasan and raglak go to their room.

Scene 3
Laksh says Swasan have enjoyed a lot,let us enjoy a bit.laksh drags ragini in his laps.ragini gets shy.they have an eyelock.Ragini then remembers that Laksh did not eat anything and asks Aap ne kuch khaya nahi abhi lati hu.
Ragini leaves and and goes to kitchen.she gets the food in the room.
She sees laksh very sleepy.she goes to laksh and feeds him and says you wanted some romance na.they have an eyelock.

Precap-sanskar says sorry to swara.

Credit to: Tanu