Hey guys how r u all pata h mujhe bht dino baad ayi hun yrr exams chal rahe mere phir maine socha is looser writer ko kon yaad rakhega isliye episode 1 de rhi hun nd twinj fans srry but after 27 February only i will
post my ff “MY HEART IS WID U” nd guys
last time i had got only 11 comments guys but nxt part i will post in one condition that is if i will get 15+ comments bcoz 20+
mujhe kabhi nhi milenge….guys in previous part i had
just given the intro no prologue or promo…..
so lets begin…
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A college is shown where a grp of boys were insulting a girl nd the girl was looking
simple yet beautiful wid a yellow colour one
piece her hair was tied in a ponytail nd was carrying some books nd finally her face was shown but wait her eyes was having
tears nd she is twinkle…..
Than a boy enters with his bike nd parked the bike nd came to the grp of boys he was wearing green t-shirt wid black jeans nd his
face is shown he is sanskaar….he speaks..
sans– kunj yrrr tu aisa kyun krta h tere yeh aadat nhi jayegi na…
kunj face is shown he was wearing a black t-shirt wid blue jeans nd speaks…
ku- sanky yrr tu jab dekho mujhe bolta rehta hai…iss twinkle ko kyun kuch nhi bolta…
sans- oyee maine kitna baar bola h we
should respect girls but tere is khali dimaag
kuch ghusta nhi h kya…but suddenly he cuts by a girl who was wearing peach colour one piece her hair was open…nd
speaks…
swa- achaa sanskar maheswari girls ki respect ki baat kr rha h oye twinkle ajj suraj kaha se nikla h…
sans- swara tum hamesha beach mein
poke Q krti ho…
ku- yrr sanky ab toh tu khud ek ladki ki respect nhi kr rha….
sans- ek din main pagal hojaunga kunj tu
mera bestie h ki iss swara ka….
swa- sanskar tum toh already pagal ho…chal twinkle…nd both left…
Nxt seen…
swara nd twinkle were in canteen…
swa- twinkle maine tujhse kitni baar bola h mat le panga kunj se…
tw- oyee wo jo mujhe hamesha insult krta h..
swa- sunn tu bhi koi kam nhi h bhul gaye kal teri vajah se kunj ko class se bahar
rehna pada..
tw- main kuch nhi jantu usse toh main apna revenge leke rahungi at any cost…vo mujhe insult kiya twinkle taneja ko…huhh…huh…
swa- acha meri baat sun ajj raat ko fest mein arahi h na…
tw- offo us pagal ke chakar mein..main fest ke bare mein toh bhul gayi thi lekin main
ayungi….nd they chit chat for a while nd left
to their class…
Nxt seen…
The professor was teaching the class nd
sanky nd kunj were in last bench using
there phone nd giggling…twinkle noticed them nd something stuck in her mind nd told to swara which was muted…
swa- twinkle pagal h kya?? aisa vaisa mat
kr…
tw-shhh….she took a paper nd made a paper ball nd thrown to professor’s
head…the professor turn around nd his
eyes caught kunj nd sanky who were giggling….
professor shouted- kunj nd sanskaar get
out of the class….while twinkle laughed
which was noticed by kunj….
ku- sir wat we have done??
professor- don’t u have shame nd thrown
the paper ball to them…
sanskar softly speaks to kunj- lagta hai buddha ko cricket khelna h….
professor- out pf the class…
sans- sir we have not done…
professor- i don’t want to listen anything suddenly swara speaks
swa- sir i had done this…nd twinkle
widened her eyes…
professor- u also get out..than suddenly twinkle speaks
tw- sir i had done this…
professor- u four out of the class just now…
ku softly speaks- lagta h buddha pagal hogaya hai..
professor- did u said something kunj
sarna…
ku&sans- noo. sir…nd they stands outside the class…
tw- swara Q tune apna naam bola…
sans- yeh harkat kiski h..
ku- main jaantu yeh iss siyyapa queen..
tw- chal hat…han maine kiya h kya kr lega tu aur siyyapa queen kisi kaha…
swa- yrr tumlog kitna larte ho kabhi shaant
bhi raha karo…..
nd twinj pouts..
sans- u r intelligent swara..
swa- maine tumse pucha jo beach mein
agaye tang ladane keliye..
sans- yrr tarif bhi karo toh sunne padti hai bhalayi ka toh zamana bhi nhi rha….the
professor were irritated wid their talks nd
after the bell rings he comes nd speaks..
professor- i will suspende u four..than kunj nd swara giggles…the professor looks at
them nd left saying- incredible students
brainless….
precap- fest in college nd some cute nok jhok
Guys did u liked it plz comment guys in my exams i m posting this ss..nd nxt episode
after 27 February….nd r u guys fine wid
hindi dialogues or should i write in English plz give ur opinions…nd if i will 15+ comments than only i will continue
otherwise i will not continue…..
bye guys
adeeba
22 Comments
Addy…. 🙂
Hindi jamta hai bt kuch ko english fit baithta hai hehe….
N I dont hv problem wid bth sooo kuch bhi chalega…..
Loved it sooo mch it was too good hehehe swara ko kya bolna tha sir mene kia hai bechaari twinkle hahaa…
N loved d first episode. ..
All d best fr ur exams addy….
Love u….☆★♡♥☆★♡♥☆★♡♥☆★♡♥☆★♡♥☆★♡♥☆★♡
It was nice and twinj ?
hey adeeba its awesome just loved it
Awesome
It’s interesting
Amazing awesome funny epi
Jaan U know what my checks are aching….while reading in was smiling like mad…I really loved it…it was amazing…love u lots
It was good
Awesome ? Swasan and twinj both are my favorite
Heyy adeeba….
It was really cute dear…..
And i m comfortable wid both the languages….u can write as per ur wish…
And again wish u all the very best for ur exams….?????
Post soon….
Love uh❤❤❤❤??
good
Hi adeeba it’s awesome and plz post soon
nyc
Awesome dear….
….Hindi n English..Jo tumko ho pasand wo language chalega……?
i don’t understand hindiii…..
Chocopie,this was amazing . Twinj not jhok was ???????????????
I just loved the epi. PoSt the next part soon after ur exams. Nd all the best for ur last paper ie. Maths. PoSt my heart is wid u also soon coz m eagerly waiting for it. Sorry for late nd shrt cmmnt. Hope u understand. ..m too busy with my exams. ….Take care nd keep smiling?? ? ?
All my love,
Aashiya ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Awesome nd plzz continue
Lovely…
Ur welcome dear???☺?
Awesome aduuu
N u r back after long time
Missed u
For get about dat bashers they r just so stupid n brainless
But u r writing inspite of having exams great dear
N u an write in any language u want I have no prblm
Love u keep smiling
Adeeba meri jaan☺☺
Chor iss basher ko ??Don’t concentrate on her bl**dy talks… They just know how to bash??dunya mein aur koi kaam jo nahi hai inko???
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N meri jaan episode was excellent ????can’t stop laughing??uff their tashan ??loved them 4❤❤❤N BEST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMS???concentrate on that… not this silly basher??
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Love u dear???
Take care☺
Keep Smiling ??n writing☺
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Ohho chutki…
Sry 4 cmnting late…N tui nijeke keno looser bolechis hm..?? khobor dar abar bolle khotha bolbo na tor sathe bujhli…?? R ai kalo jadu korni der kotu kotha theke dure thak OK…?? or kisne bola tuje ki kavi 20 cmnts nai milega bhttt sochti hai ajkal tu,,?? but this epi I jus loved it Yarr,,??????? Post soon OK..☺☺
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Love you so much..❤❤
Muaah..??